Vanshaj SS - The lost time - Page 2

Hey everyone , check this new SS that i just finished. It's on page 1

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Hey everyone , check this new SS that i just finished , starts from page 1

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Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Hey everyone , check this new SS that i just finished , starts from page 1

Forgot to tag you so , tagging you in this post

Hi ,i forgot to tag you , do read and review this SS

Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Hi ,i forgot to tag you , do read and review this SS

ill try....theres so many parts

Originally posted by: MochaQueen

ill try....theres so many parts

All those parts are really short

Finished first 2 parts , and it was so funny i couldn't stop my laugh 🤣🤣

Will read the other parts later 🙂

Aaj ka din Vanshaj forum ki history mein fanfictions ka din hai for sure!

Pete you've done such a great job. This was one of the most entertaining and heartwarming story I've read in quite some time. You started with such great humor. Just imagining DB speaking all those lines in a childish tone made me laugh out loud.

The anecdote of DB with DJ and Neil were really funny to read. But what really surprised me was how you explored Dhanraj and DB's relationship in the last 2 chapters. I teared up thinking of the possibility of SP's domestic abuse. It is very believable though considering the type of man SP was.

But it made my heart hurt thinking that DB had such a sad backstory in this SS. I really loved Dhanraj here. In the show too, his character is on the lighter side of grey. I loved Dhanraj and DB's bond. They both really needed it. So glad that in some universe this has happened.

Bohot pyaari story thi yaar. Jitna tareef karu kam hai!

Originally posted by: Spandan24

Finished first 2 parts , and it was so funny i couldn't stop my laugh 🤣🤣

Will read the other parts later 🙂

Do remember to review after reading the other parts

Originally posted by: Saumya2102

Aaj ka din Vanshaj forum ki history mein fanfictions ka din hai for sure!

Pete you've done such a great job. This was one of the most entertaining and heartwarming story I've read in quite some time. You started with such great humor. Just imagining DB speaking all those lines in a childish tone made me laugh out loud.

The anecdote of DB with DJ and Neil were really funny to read. But what really surprised me was how you explored Dhanraj and DB's relationship in the last 2 chapters. I teared up thinking of the possibility of SP's domestic abuse. It is very believable though considering the type of man SP was.

But it made my heart hurt thinking that DB had such a sad backstory in this SS. I really loved Dhanraj here. In the show too, his character is on the lighter side of grey. I loved Dhanraj and DB's bond. They both really needed it. So glad that in some universe this has happened.

Bohot pyaari story thi yaar. Jitna tareef karu kam hai!

Thank you for your review

The first scene i thought before writting this was. Neil and Dhanraj's scene....i wanted to post this fic on 3rd but didn't have the time so posted it today

Glad you liked the fic