hi guys, last week i posted the first part of my story, now as promised i've posted the next part at the bottom. I have also put the introduction and a recap on what happened last time in the fan fic, so plz tell me what i can do to improve my story. All criticism is good criticism! đ
KALYUG
A mysterious girl washes up on the shores of Goa, where she is rescued by a big shot doctor named Druv. When she wakes up in the hospital, she doesn't remember anything about whom she is or where she came from. Both of them later decide to name her Radhika. Druv's loneliness after his wife saloni leaves him disappears as he starts to develop a special bond with Radhika, and she is able to trust him more than anyone else. Four years pass by and Radhika and Druv fall in love and become engaged to each other. Before their marriage, Druv decides to surprise Radhika by taking her to Mumbai for a special concert with her favorite singers. While in Mumbai, Druv and Radhika's world all of a sudden crashes down as Radhika meets Rajeev who claims he is her husband. Rajeev tells Radhika that she had fallen off of a boat that Rajeev had rented for their anniversary, and had been missing since. Radhika's real name was Mohini, and she had two kids with Rajeev. Mohini tries to restart her relationship with Rajeev, and both Mohini and Druv try to forget each other. But somehow Mohini realizes that something isn't right with Rajeev, and starts finding out the truth behind what really happened between her and Rajeev as her memory slowly returns...
What was the real reason she ended up nearly half dead on the shores of Goa? And what will happen to her relationship with Druv?
Find out only on the fan fiction "Kalyug"
DRUV- NEIL
RADHIKA/MOHINI- VAIDEHI
RAJEEV- ARYAN
DRUV'S MOM- AROONA IRANI (SITA DEVI)
RECAP: A woman is brought to the hospital in very bad shape, all other doctors refuse to operate on her. Druv operates, but she goes into a coma. 6 months go by and Druv talks to her as a friend (even though she is in a coma), he becomes very close to her. The woman wakes up and doesnt remember who she is. They decide to call her Radhika.
PART 2
After countless months searching for Radhika's relatives and posting numerous ads in the newspaper, Radhika finally decides to move on with her life. She starts her own music store, and Druv and Radhika become the best of friendsâŚ.
2 years laterâŚ
Using his key Druv enters Radhika's apartment with a huge grin on his face; He couldn't wait to give her the good news that he found out late last night. Druv carefully makes his way around the mess in the living room â
Druv (thinking to himself)- Radhika bhi na, kabhi bhi ek bhi saman ko sahi jaga par nahi raksakti.
Finally he reaches Radhika's bedroom door and knocks on the door. Five minutes pass and Radhika still doesn't open the door.
Druv- aacha, to memsaab abhi tak so rahi hogi, abhi maaza chaka tha hu
He opens the door and sticks his head inside just to make sure she's sleeping. He tiptoes in to the side of her bed and kneels down so that he faces Radhika. He gazes at her beautiful face as she slumbers..
Druv- neend me bhi tum bohat khoobsoorat hoâŚ
Druv reaches for her face, but then stops his hand. He gets a naughty idea. He runs over to Radhika's bathroom and opens the cabinet. He searches around for some shaving cream but instead finds shaving gel. Druv grabs it and reads the bottle.
Druv- ladies bhi na, sada shaving cream nahi use karsakti. Par ye bhi chalta hai.
He runs back over to Radhika's bed. Carefully he takes her hand and puts tons of shaving gel on it. Then he puts her hand back. He looks around for a feather or something he could use to tickle her nose, but then instead uses a piece of string. He comes close to her face and dangles the string across her nose. Radhika groans and frowns. Druv again brings the piece of string across her nose. Radhika raises her hand and goes to scratch her nose but before her hand reaches her nose she slaps Druv by accident. Druv falls back in shock and Radhika all of a sudden wakes up and sits up in surprise. She sees that Druv has his hand on his cheek which is covered in shaving gel.
Radhika- Druv, ye kya hua tumhe?
She reaches her hand out to help him when she sees the shaving gel on her hand.
Radhika- aacha, aab samji. Tum kab ye shararat karna chod doge? Dekha, mein hamesha nahin kehti thi? Ise kehte hai karma!
Druv- aacha, tho ise kya kehte hai?
Radhika- kya?
Druv grabs the shaving gel bottle and sprays Radhika with it. Radhika is shocked and screams Druv's name. She gets up in anger.
Radhika- aaj me tumhe nahin chodoongi!!!
Radhika chases Druv out into the living room, Druv dashes behind the sofa as Radhika tries to catch him. Radhika jumps on the sofa as Druv dodges her, but she manages to get his sleeve and Druv falls back on top of Radhika.
They both start laughing uncontrollably, with tears streaming down both of their faces. Finally Radhika stops laughing while Druv still can't stop laughing. She looks at Druv in an embarrassed way, and finally Druv notices how uncomfortable and stops laughing.
Druv- (chuckles) kyun kya hua?
Radhika (angry)- mere upar se abhi utho ge?
Druv blushes. He tries getting up off of Radhika but sees that his shirt button is caught on her pajama top. He stops.
Radhika- aab kya hua?
Druv- kuch nahin, mein comfortable hogaya hu na isi liye utne ki icha nahi horahi.
Radhika hits him on the arm in annoyance.
Druv- aacha baba mein to mazak kar raha tha, darsal meri shirt ki button tumhari pajama top par atki hui hai.
Radhika looks at her shirt.
Radhika- arre ha, ab kya kare?
Druv- kya kar sakte hai, tumhe tumari shirt utarni hogi
Radhika- par mein ek ladki hu!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!! (slaps his arm again) mein kaise shirt utar sakti hu, meri izzat ka kya hoga? Tum shirt utaro!
Druv- arre, to meri izzat ka koi kyal nahin, parayi ladki ke samne mein nahin shirt utarta!
Druv pretends to be upset. They both carefully sit up. Radhika hits him again.
Radhika- Druv! Shirt Utaro!!
Druv- teek hai, tumhari izzat bachane ke liye mujhe aapni khoni pad rahi hai. Chalo ye bhi manzoor.
Druv takes his shirt off. Radhika hits him again and Druv winces in pain and grabs his arm.
Druv- aab ye kisliye??!!!
Radhika (unhooking Druv's shirt from hers)- ye sab shuru karne ke liye. Dheka, abhi sab jaga shaving gel ho chuka hai.
Druv- kya farak padtha hai? Waise bhi ye apartment aur ganda to nahin hosakta.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- ooowww, dekho tum aaj kal mujhe bohat marne lagi ho.
Radhika grins and goes toward her bedroom as Druv follows her. She turns around and looks at him.
Radhika- tum kaha aarahe ho?
Druv- jaha tum ja rahi ho
Radhika (annoyed)- mujhe kapde badal ne hai!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!!!!
Druv- aacha to mein us taraf face karta hu, tum kapde badalo.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- (laughing), aacha baba mein living room mein wait karta hu!
Druv walks towards the living room when he stops and turns around.
Radhika- aab kya!
Druv- meri shirt?
Radhika throws his shirt at him playfully and pushes him out of her bedroom and shuts the door. Druv walks over to the couch and sits down.
2 hours laterâŚ
Druv is watching T.V. when Radhika comes out in a beautiful sky blue salwar. She walks towards Druv smiling who is purposely ignoring her. She stands beside him impatiently for a couple of minutes for Druv to say something about how she looks. Druv stares at the cricket match on the T.V. Radhika walks in front of the T.V when Druv finally looks at her. He gets up in awe, and Radhika smiles and blushes. He walks towards her and smiles at her.
Radhika- (all bubbly) kya hua Druv?
Druv- Radhika, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Radhika (blushes) â kya??
Druv's expression all of a sudden changes to anger.
Druv- tum mere match ke samne khadi ho!!
Radhika gets mad and hits him again. Druv starts laughing.
Radhika- aab ye to batao ke hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Druv- humara final destination to surprise hai, par abhi ke liye humhe mere ghar jaana hai thaki mein shirt badal sakta hu.
Radhika- teek hai, chalo
Radhika heads for the door when Druv grabs her hand. Radhika turns around.
Druv- waise aaj tum bohat aachi lag rahi hoâŚ
Radhika- really?
Druv- sach
Radhika- aacha, aab mujhe ghoorna band karo warna tumhe mujse pyar ho jayega.
Druv- ho chuka hai
Radhika looks at him in surprise and then hits him again.
Radhika- tum bhi na!
They both laugh and head out the door.
Some time LaterâŚ
Druv pulls up at his house. He turns and looks at Radhika.
Druv- tum andar nahi arahi?
Radhika- uh, nahin, par tum ma ko zaroor kehna ke meine unko yaad kiya.
Druv- teek hai, tumhari marzi.
Druv gets out of his car and enters his house. Meanwhile Radhika gazes out of the passenger side window when she sees a fight between a man and a woman. The woman tries to protect her child in her arms as the man tries to snag her purse. Radhika gets out of the car and runs to their aid.
Radhika- kya kar rahe ho tum! Use chod do!!! Chodo!
She pushes the man away from the woman. The man pulls out a knife and threatens to kill her.
Thief- mein is aurat ko chod doonga, par tum tumara purse nikalo.
He points the knife at her. Druv walks out of his house and sees Radhika in trouble. He runs at full force towards Radhika and suddenly stops. The thief sees Druv and grabs Radhika's hand pulls her towards him and holds the knife to her throat.
Thief- eh, aage mat badna, warna ye ladki marjaye gi!
After countless months searching for Radhika's relatives and posting numerous ads in the newspaper, Radhika finally decides to move on with her life. She starts her own music store, and Druv and Radhika become the best of friendsâŚ.
2 years laterâŚ
Using his key Druv enters Radhika's apartment with a huge grin on his face; He couldn't wait to give her the good news that he found out late last night. Druv carefully makes his way around the mess in the living room â
Druv (thinking to himself)- Radhika bhi na, kabhi bhi ek bhi saman ko sahi jaga par nahi raksakti.
Finally he reaches Radhika's bedroom door and knocks on the door. Five minutes pass and Radhika still doesn't open the door.
Druv- aacha, to memsaab abhi tak so rahi hogi, abhi maaza chaka tha hu
He opens the door and sticks his head inside just to make sure she's sleeping. He tiptoes in to the side of her bed and kneels down so that he faces Radhika. He gazes at her beautiful face as she slumbers..
Druv- neend me bhi tum bohat khoobsoorat hoâŚ
Druv reaches for her face, but then stops his hand. He gets a naughty idea. He runs over to Radhika's bathroom and opens the cabinet. He searches around for some shaving cream but instead finds shaving gel. Druv grabs it and reads the bottle.
Druv- ladies bhi na, sada shaving cream nahi use karsakti. Par ye bhi chalta hai.
He runs back over to Radhika's bed. Carefully he takes her hand and puts tons of shaving gel on it. Then he puts her hand back. He looks around for a feather or something he could use to tickle her nose, but then instead uses a piece of string. He comes close to her face and dangles the string across her nose. Radhika groans and frowns. Druv again brings the piece of string across her nose. Radhika raises her hand and goes to scratch her nose but before her hand reaches her nose she slaps Druv by accident. Druv falls back in shock and Radhika all of a sudden wakes up and sits up in surprise. She sees that Druv has his hand on his cheek which is covered in shaving gel.
Radhika- Druv, ye kya hua tumhe?
She reaches her hand out to help him when she sees the shaving gel on her hand.
Radhika- aacha, aab samji. Tum kab ye shararat karna chod doge? Dekha, mein hamesha nahin kehti thi? Ise kehte hai karma!
Druv- aacha, tho ise kya kehte hai?
Radhika- kya?
Druv grabs the shaving gel bottle and sprays Radhika with it. Radhika is shocked and screams Druv's name. She gets up in anger.
Radhika- aaj me tumhe nahin chodoongi!!!
Radhika chases Druv out into the living room, Druv dashes behind the sofa as Radhika tries to catch him. Radhika jumps on the sofa as Druv dodges her, but she manages to get his sleeve and Druv falls back on top of Radhika.
They both start laughing uncontrollably, with tears streaming down both of their faces. Finally Radhika stops laughing while Druv still can't stop laughing. She looks at Druv in an embarrassed way, and finally Druv notices how uncomfortable and stops laughing.
Druv- (chuckles) kyun kya hua?
Radhika (angry)- mere upar se abhi utho ge?
Druv blushes. He tries getting up off of Radhika but sees that his shirt button is caught on her pajama top. He stops.
Radhika- aab kya hua?
Druv- kuch nahin, mein comfortable hogaya hu na isi liye utne ki icha nahi horahi.
Radhika hits him on the arm in annoyance.
Druv- aacha baba mein to mazak kar raha tha, darsal meri shirt ki button tumhari pajama top par atki hui hai.
Radhika looks at her shirt.
Radhika- arre ha, ab kya kare?
Druv- kya kar sakte hai, tumhe tumari shirt utarni hogi
Radhika- par mein ek ladki hu!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!! (slaps his arm again) mein kaise shirt utar sakti hu, meri izzat ka kya hoga? Tum shirt utaro!
Druv- arre, to meri izzat ka koi kyal nahin, parayi ladki ke samne mein nahin shirt utarta!
Druv pretends to be upset. They both carefully sit up. Radhika hits him again.
Radhika- Druv! Shirt Utaro!!
Druv- teek hai, tumhari izzat bachane ke liye mujhe aapni khoni pad rahi hai. Chalo ye bhi manzoor.
Druv takes his shirt off. Radhika hits him again and Druv winces in pain and grabs his arm.
Druv- aab ye kisliye??!!!
Radhika (unhooking Druv's shirt from hers)- ye sab shuru karne ke liye. Dheka, abhi sab jaga shaving gel ho chuka hai.
Druv- kya farak padtha hai? Waise bhi ye apartment aur ganda to nahin hosakta.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- ooowww, dekho tum aaj kal mujhe bohat marne lagi ho.
Radhika grins and goes toward her bedroom as Druv follows her. She turns around and looks at him.
Radhika- tum kaha aarahe ho?
Druv- jaha tum ja rahi ho
Radhika (annoyed)- mujhe kapde badal ne hai!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!!!!
Druv- aacha to mein us taraf face karta hu, tum kapde badalo.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- (laughing), aacha baba mein living room mein wait karta hu!
Druv walks towards the living room when he stops and turns around.
Radhika- aab kya!
Druv- meri shirt?
Radhika throws his shirt at him playfully and pushes him out of her bedroom and shuts the door. Druv walks over to the couch and sits down.
2 hours laterâŚ
Druv is watching T.V. when Radhika comes out in a beautiful sky blue salwar. She walks towards Druv smiling who is purposely ignoring her. She stands beside him impatiently for a couple of minutes for Druv to say something about how she looks. Druv stares at the cricket match on the T.V. Radhika walks in front of the T.V when Druv finally looks at her. He gets up in awe, and Radhika smiles and blushes. He walks towards her and smiles at her.
Radhika- (all bubbly) kya hua Druv?
Druv- Radhika, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Radhika (blushes) â kya??
Druv's expression all of a sudden changes to anger.
Druv- tum mere match ke samne khadi ho!!
Radhika gets mad and hits him again. Druv starts laughing.
Radhika- aab ye to batao ke hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Druv- humara final destination to surprise hai, par abhi ke liye humhe mere ghar jaana hai thaki mein shirt badal sakta hu.
Radhika- teek hai, chalo
Radhika heads for the door when Druv grabs her hand. Radhika turns around.
Druv- waise aaj tum bohat aachi lag rahi hoâŚ
Radhika- really?
Druv- sach
Radhika- aacha, aab mujhe ghoorna band karo warna tumhe mujse pyar ho jayega.
Druv- ho chuka hai
Radhika looks at him in surprise and then hits him again.
Radhika- tum bhi na!
They both laugh and head out the door.
Some time LaterâŚ
Druv pulls up at his house. He turns and looks at Radhika.
Druv- tum andar nahi arahi?
Radhika- uh, nahin, par tum ma ko zaroor kehna ke meine unko yaad kiya.
Druv- teek hai, tumhari marzi.
Druv gets out of his car and enters his house. Meanwhile Radhika gazes out of the passenger side window when she sees a fight between a man and a woman. The woman tries to protect her child in her arms as the man tries to snag her purse. Radhika gets out of the car and runs to their aid.
Radhika- kya kar rahe ho tum! Use chod do!!! Chodo!
She pushes the man away from the woman. The man pulls out a knife and threatens to kill her.
Thief- mein is aurat ko chod doonga, par tum tumara purse nikalo.
He points the knife at her. Druv walks out of his house and sees Radhika in trouble. He runs at full force towards Radhika and suddenly stops. The thief sees Druv and grabs Radhika's hand pulls her towards him and holds the knife to her throat.
Thief- eh, aage mat badna, warna ye ladki marjaye gi!
After countless months searching for Radhika's relatives and posting numerous ads in the newspaper, Radhika finally decides to move on with her life. She starts her own music store, and Druv and Radhika become the best of friendsâŚ.
2 years laterâŚ
Using his key Druv enters Radhika's apartment with a huge grin on his face; He couldn't wait to give her the good news that he found out late last night. Druv carefully makes his way around the mess in the living room â
Druv (thinking to himself)- Radhika bhi na, kabhi bhi ek bhi saman ko sahi jaga par nahi raksakti.
Finally he reaches Radhika's bedroom door and knocks on the door. Five minutes pass and Radhika still doesn't open the door.
Druv- aacha, to memsaab abhi tak so rahi hogi, abhi maaza chaka tha hu
He opens the door and sticks his head inside just to make sure she's sleeping. He tiptoes in to the side of her bed and kneels down so that he faces Radhika. He gazes at her beautiful face as she slumbers..
Druv- neend me bhi tum bohat khoobsoorat hoâŚ
Druv reaches for her face, but then stops his hand. He gets a naughty idea. He runs over to Radhika's bathroom and opens the cabinet. He searches around for some shaving cream but instead finds shaving gel. Druv grabs it and reads the bottle.
Druv- ladies bhi na, sada shaving cream nahi use karsakti. Par ye bhi chalta hai.
He runs back over to Radhika's bed. Carefully he takes her hand and puts tons of shaving gel on it. Then he puts her hand back. He looks around for a feather or something he could use to tickle her nose, but then instead uses a piece of string. He comes close to her face and dangles the string across her nose. Radhika groans and frowns. Druv again brings the piece of string across her nose. Radhika raises her hand and goes to scratch her nose but before her hand reaches her nose she slaps Druv by accident. Druv falls back in shock and Radhika all of a sudden wakes up and sits up in surprise. She sees that Druv has his hand on his cheek which is covered in shaving gel.
Radhika- Druv, ye kya hua tumhe?
She reaches her hand out to help him when she sees the shaving gel on her hand.
Radhika- aacha, aab samji. Tum kab ye shararat karna chod doge? Dekha, mein hamesha nahin kehti thi? Ise kehte hai karma!
Druv- aacha, tho ise kya kehte hai?
Radhika- kya?
Druv grabs the shaving gel bottle and sprays Radhika with it. Radhika is shocked and screams Druv's name. She gets up in anger.
Radhika- aaj me tumhe nahin chodoongi!!!
Radhika chases Druv out into the living room, Druv dashes behind the sofa as Radhika tries to catch him. Radhika jumps on the sofa as Druv dodges her, but she manages to get his sleeve and Druv falls back on top of Radhika.
They both start laughing uncontrollably, with tears streaming down both of their faces. Finally Radhika stops laughing while Druv still can't stop laughing. She looks at Druv in an embarrassed way, and finally Druv notices how uncomfortable and stops laughing.
Druv- (chuckles) kyun kya hua?
Radhika (angry)- mere upar se abhi utho ge?
Druv blushes. He tries getting up off of Radhika but sees that his shirt button is caught on her pajama top. He stops.
Radhika- aab kya hua?
Druv- kuch nahin, mein comfortable hogaya hu na isi liye utne ki icha nahi horahi.
Radhika hits him on the arm in annoyance.
Druv- aacha baba mein to mazak kar raha tha, darsal meri shirt ki button tumhari pajama top par atki hui hai.
Radhika looks at her shirt.
Radhika- arre ha, ab kya kare?
Druv- kya kar sakte hai, tumhe tumari shirt utarni hogi
Radhika- par mein ek ladki hu!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!! (slaps his arm again) mein kaise shirt utar sakti hu, meri izzat ka kya hoga? Tum shirt utaro!
Druv- arre, to meri izzat ka koi kyal nahin, parayi ladki ke samne mein nahin shirt utarta!
Druv pretends to be upset. They both carefully sit up. Radhika hits him again.
Radhika- Druv! Shirt Utaro!!
Druv- teek hai, tumhari izzat bachane ke liye mujhe aapni khoni pad rahi hai. Chalo ye bhi manzoor.
Druv takes his shirt off. Radhika hits him again and Druv winces in pain and grabs his arm.
Druv- aab ye kisliye??!!!
Radhika (unhooking Druv's shirt from hers)- ye sab shuru karne ke liye. Dheka, abhi sab jaga shaving gel ho chuka hai.
Druv- kya farak padtha hai? Waise bhi ye apartment aur ganda to nahin hosakta.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- ooowww, dekho tum aaj kal mujhe bohat marne lagi ho.
Radhika grins and goes toward her bedroom as Druv follows her. She turns around and looks at him.
Radhika- tum kaha aarahe ho?
Druv- jaha tum ja rahi ho
Radhika (annoyed)- mujhe kapde badal ne hai!
Druv- to meine kab na kaha?
Radhika- Druv!!!!
Druv- aacha to mein us taraf face karta hu, tum kapde badalo.
Radhika hits him again.
Druv- (laughing), aacha baba mein living room mein wait karta hu!
Druv walks towards the living room when he stops and turns around.
Radhika- aab kya!
Druv- meri shirt?
Radhika throws his shirt at him playfully and pushes him out of her bedroom and shuts the door. Druv walks over to the couch and sits down.
2 hours laterâŚ
Druv is watching T.V. when Radhika comes out in a beautiful sky blue salwar. She walks towards Druv smiling who is purposely ignoring her. She stands beside him impatiently for a couple of minutes for Druv to say something about how she looks. Druv stares at the cricket match on the T.V. Radhika walks in front of the T.V when Druv finally looks at her. He gets up in awe, and Radhika smiles and blushes. He walks towards her and smiles at her.
Radhika- (all bubbly) kya hua Druv?
Druv- Radhika, mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Radhika (blushes) â kya??
Druv's expression all of a sudden changes to anger.
Druv- tum mere match ke samne khadi ho!!
Radhika gets mad and hits him again. Druv starts laughing.
Radhika- aab ye to batao ke hum kaha ja rahe hai?
Druv- humara final destination to surprise hai, par abhi ke liye humhe mere ghar jaana hai thaki mein shirt badal sakta hu.
Radhika- teek hai, chalo
Radhika heads for the door when Druv grabs her hand. Radhika turns around.
Druv- waise aaj tum bohat aachi lag rahi hoâŚ
Radhika- really?
Druv- sach
Radhika- aacha, aab mujhe ghoorna band karo warna tumhe mujse pyar ho jayega.
Druv- ho chuka hai
Radhika looks at him in surprise and then hits him again.
Radhika- tum bhi na!
They both laugh and head out the door.
Some time LaterâŚ
Druv pulls up at his house. He turns and looks at Radhika.
Druv- tum andar nahi arahi?
Radhika- uh, nahin, par tum ma ko zaroor kehna ke meine unko yaad kiya.
Druv- teek hai, tumhari marzi.
Druv gets out of his car and enters his house. Meanwhile Radhika gazes out of the passenger side window when she sees a fight between a man and a woman. The woman tries to protect her child in her arms as the man tries to snag her purse. Radhika gets out of the car and runs to their aid.
Radhika- kya kar rahe ho tum! Use chod do!!! Chodo!
She pushes the man away from the woman. The man pulls out a knife and threatens to kill her.
Thief- mein is aurat ko chod doonga, par tum tumara purse nikalo.
He points the knife at her. Druv walks out of his house and sees Radhika in trouble. He runs at full force towards Radhika and suddenly stops. The thief sees Druv and grabs Radhika's hand pulls her towards him and holds the knife to her throat.
Thief- eh, aage mat badna, warna ye ladki marjaye gi!
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