Sanvi OS : I'll be your support ❤️

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"Excuse me, please can you refer me to Dr. Singhania?" a young lady of about 20 requested at the help desk of Singhania clinic. "Why are we doing this sanju?" ela asked for the 20th time in 20 mins. "Ma'am you'll have to wait for 5 mins, plz take a seat" the receptionist replied. "thank you"
"ok ela, for the last time i want to know why he left...I'm know he didn't want and that he loved me i could see it. he wouldn't hurt me for anything in this world, whatever he did, he felt it was for my own good." sanju replied ela with tears streaming down her cheeks as she remembered his retreating figure walking away from her, taking her heart also alongside him. "Par he did hurt you na? By leaving you?" ela shot back. "Coz he had no choice...i guess...we'll find out pretty soon, thats why we're here" sanju replied.
Ms. Sanjana Roy? the nurse called..."the doctor is ready to see you now" "ok thanks a lot"
As she walked towards the doctor's room she mentally rehearsed on what she had to ask and say. She thought she was prepared to face the truth. She entered.
"Ms. Sanjana Roy?" the dr. enquired "yes I'm sanjana, call me sanju plz ...I'm from Westwood law college...and i need a few deatils about a patient...your patient in fact"
"And why do you require these deqtails?" "Because i need to know why he left me forever" she thought but she replied "Umm we have an assignment and its kind of like a case study, and he was my subject...but since he left i couldn't ask him anything much" " ok, i know this is a cover up story, but still shoot, i've heard a lot about you from prithvi"
"Prithvi visited this hospital often i think coz i found many papers with the hospital's name on it..."
"Yes he had to because he was a patient here, but we didn't have proper facilities to treat him so we referred him to another doctor Dr. Meghana who is a specialist and her hospital has proper facilities"
"Patient? What happened to him?!"
(*note* I'm a psychology student so since i dunno much about bio it might seem pretty stupid k? Bashing tomatoes are welcome)
"He has cancer, secondary stage...it had spread to quite a bit, and it is possible to cure it..."
"But why there? Why did he have to leave?"
"Ms. Roy please dont be upset, but although there are possibilities that one survives the chemo and radiation there are lesser chances of survival when we do surgery"
"And?" she asked dreading the answer.
"He requires surgery...and chemo...it will be quite difficult to cure him...so i referred him to the specialist and now I'm keeping a track on his well being"
"How is he now?!" she asked tears blurring her vision thinking about him undergoing all this.
"I'm sorry to say he is in a very critical position...the chemo has left him weak...he has almost lost his will to live"
'No prithvi you cant lose hope not now...why did you hide it from me...i wouldn't have left you for anything in the world...i could be your support' she mentally conversed with him.
"But why him doctor?"
"Well his dad had cancer, final stage we couldn't save him, in fact he passed away a few days back...just before holi i think...when his dad was diagnosed with cancer we did a check up for the entire family and unfortunately he had it...but he refused to leave then...and when he came to know about his survival chances...well he told me about you...he was afraid of hurting you...breaking your heart if he doesn't survive"
'Why prithvi why?! You could've told me this once...once and i wouldn't have left you...i would've fought with you...we would've overcome it all...hand in hand..we could've been together'
"I want to see him be with him NOW! where is he doctor...gimme the address i'll go to him"
"If you're going i need you to promise me that you'll not cry in front of him accuse him of anything...he's been through a lot of mental stress and more of it will only detoriate his health"
"i...i...i promise. I promise this on my love for him"
The doctor gives her the address and with tears streaming down her face she left the room and went to ela, told her everything and broke down bitterly into ela and vinni's arms.
"i haven't got anyone who loved me...my mom, prithvi all of them left me...but you guys are still there for me in every phase of my life...now i want prithvi back too i'll get him right? He'll come back no? I'll see to it that he survives. He will wont he?" she sobbed
"Sshh babe it'll be fine prithvi will be fine" "haan sanju dont cry please you've got to stay strong for his sake"
"Ela i think we should take her to the car" "Yup we should"
"Sanju come now...let's go to prithvi k? We'll pack inform your dad and our parents and we'll go...together, BFF we are we wont let you cope with troubles alone."
And they left for sanju's house where they'd been staying since the past few days...taking home a broken sanju.

Ok guys that's the end of part one...chapals tomatoes bricks are welcome...coz i know this is crap. However if you want me to continue...leave your views and i shall update part 2 soon :) <3
Loads of huggies and kissies to make up for the crap i've written <3😉
Loads of love,
Vadhana <3 :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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itna bura tha mera os??!! 😕
No comments 2 likes? Feeling hurt😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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No ways gal!! That was quite emotional OS!! Awesome one!!
I want a PART 2!!! Damn i miss my sanvi!! felt really good after reading ur OS. and don't worry about likes and comment. this forum is lil inactive so it will take time ;) Your story was really good!! waiting for part 2!!
Edited by 100littledevils - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow it was truelly an emotional one
update the next part sooon...
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Nagpur Cancer Institute

"San...mujhe bohot dard ho raha hai" prithvi murmered in his half consious state. "Dont worry prithvi, you'll be fine" "i shouldn't have left you, i hurt you, now I'm dying and all i care about is you" "Dr. What do we do now?" prithvi's mom asked meghana..."I think he can have a recovery he has lots of chances, but he is mentally affected...he is worried about someone...he cares deeply for..he is pinning away for her""Prithvi..." , Sanju entered with tears streaming down her cheeks..."Prithvi dont worry I'm here, yoir sanju is here...we'll fight this diesease out together...I'm always there by your side.""Who are you?" both sanju's mom and Dr asked together. "Aunty, Dr.meghana we'll tell you all about it, please don't ask her anything...she's completely broken, and please dont hurt her more by seperating them please" Ela and Vinni requested them. The four of them left tje room leaving the couple alone. While Ela and Vinni told them introduced themselves...A miracle had started to occurSanju kept consoling him. "Sanju...sach mein tum ho...I'm sorry for hurting you...i really didn't want you to know aboit it..." he mumbled in his state..."Ssh prithvi abhi mein yahan hoon...kuch nai hoga tumhe" "I didn't want to leave sanju, i didn't have a choice..and now i'm gonn di..." "ssh dont you dare say that! I'm here right by your side..we'll overcome this together" shesaid putting herfinger in his lips and holdingone of his hands. As his hands felt her touch, his heart instantly picked up its beats...his heart rate increased rapidly."Doctor...Doctor!!!" a panicked sanju screamed... Panicked by jer screams they rushed into the room. The doctoer saw the IV meter and smiled in relief. "Don't worry, its good news, he's responding to us finaaally...now we can do the surgery...but its still risky at this stage." "Do anything but save him! I want my prithvi back!" sanju yelled."Ok, but please dont cry around him, he'll get more depressed...be strong for him" doctor requested. Sanju wipex her tears and gulping down sobs said,"I will stay strong and positive for him...for our love.""ok then, ma'am please co.e with me, you need to sign a few papers for the surgery" saying that Meghana takes prithvi's mom away from the room.8 hours later...Precap: Dr.: I'm sorry...but prithvi didn't make it. Sanju ela vinni and mom shocked and mom faints while sanju slumps to the ground frozen in shoock.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice part!!
loved it!
Oh but the precap :(
Prithvi to die ? :'(
Cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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8 hours later,
The light in the operation theatre went of, while sanju ela and vinni stood in different corners of the hall praying for prithvi. As doctor emerged from the OT, ela and vinni rushed to ask about prithvi, while his mom and sanju waited for her answer, she looked directly at sanjana and said, "I'm sorry but, it didn't work, its bad news, prithvi is has succumbed to his diesease." Sanju crumpled to the floor broken while prithvi's mom fainted, ela vinni and meghana rushed to her aid while sanju sat down, broken, trying to digest the news. Tears started flowing down her cheeks and she didn't blink the world stood still, frozen with time. Her mind cried out loud for her lost love. When out of the blue she got a flare, a flame so bright so warm, that coursed through her veins. Her heart spoke, he can't do this, he has to be alive he can't leave you here, he would never ever do that. Her mind wept more harder asking her heart to shut up, no hope was left. Her heart replied strongly, I believe in my love, our love, if it was TRUE, he still will survive. As the battle got stronger, sanju ran into the OT where he lay, motionless. Still and quiet yet handsome as though he was in a beautiful slumber. There was a hush of silence, as sanju decided whom she wanted to listen to. "No..." she spoke the flame burned brighter. "You can't leave me here alone, I can't and I won't live without you. You hear me?! You get back here right this instant! I told you i'll be with you, by your side, you promised you'll fight! You broke your promise! You said you'll come back, you told me to keep my heart safe! How can I, when you took my heart away with you?! You gave me your heart, I gave you mine! You told me to keep it safe! I did, look prithvi! I did! You stole my heart leaving me lifeless!" she spoke like a mad person to the corpse of her lover, showing it the golden heart he'd given her. "I love you prithvi! Please come back!" she cried.

"Should we go in?" ela asked vinni, both heartbroken for their friend. "No i think she needs this, this is right, let her get her pain out of her system" vinni said.

Keeping her ear against his lifeless heart, entwininig their hands, she wept into his chest which was still warm. Her mind said,"Let go sajnu, he's no more, move on please" her heart whispered,"Give it one last try, all hope isn't lost" as the new flame of hope and love coursed through her, she felt a hand gently rubbing her back, a familiar hand holding her hand entwining their fingers properly, a weak voice gurgling her name.

"Ela look! Prithvi's alive!!" Vinni yelled. "What?! its not possible! he died! meghana tol us he didnt make it!" ela screamt back. Meaghana who'd come rushing at the noise took a look and whispered," This is indeed a miracle, a beautiful miracle in fact" "Doctor! did prithvi really die or what?" Ela asked suspicious. "His heart stopped beating, the operation was a success, but he didnt respond to the shock we gave so we thought he'd died...but i guess we were mistaken." she said. All three of them were looking at the couple. "I think we should leave them alone, shouldnt we?" vinni asked. "Yeah we should, we'll tease them later on" Ela said and winked. "Yup" meghana also nodded in agreement grinning. And the trio let for the cafe to celebrate the good news of prithvi and to celebrate the union of two completely in love souls.

Scared she looked up and saw his eyes open she kept her ear back on his chest, and heard his heart beat her name. The machines came alive indicating he hadn't broken his promise, and in between their palms rested their golden heart of love. She smiled a huge watery smile and he beamed back. "We made it through, we overcame it sanjana, I kept our promise, because I love you sanjana" he said his eyes shone with wonderment at first and then gently turned softer radiating pure love for the girl who bought him back to life. "I missed you so much, I hate you for leaving me, but I love you more for coming back to me prithvi" She said smiling a watery smile through her tears. "Come here" he called she went and kissed his forehead in relief and he kissed hers. "I love you" she said. "As I love you" he replied. As she drew closer towards him, the machine beeped louder, and his heart ran, making the machine go wild, and as her lips pressed onto his, gently and smoothly at first, it stopped for a minute before returning back to normally, as their kiss deepened so did their passion and love for each other.

THE END.
and completed :D hope u guys liked it...now bring on the chapals boquets and gifts and bricks, though bricks hurt a lot :P Loads of huggies and kissshies <3 xoxoxo :* ;* <3 ya'all
This is vadhana signing off for now. Buh bye <3 ;) :D :*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ah i was scared seeing the precap
But this was awesome
I loved how u ended it
Gosh u penned down sanju's hurt perfectly!!
And the Kiss in the end!!
Loved it!!
Do write more please :D

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