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souroj

@souroj

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero

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501272

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: vijayam
Chitra, both the storyline are wonderfully written...👏...though I like the 2nd one as it has a happy ending...

but you're right, nobody deserves happiness in this dumb serial, how about this:

Tappu & Iccha despite their new found puky friendship cant move a feather, Satya & Sanchi succeed in their plans...make bundela parivar a pauper, expose tappu, defame Veer by implicating him in a false rape case with Sanchi...Veer as expected gives in as he cant remember a thing and is very repentant. Veer divorces Iccha, gets married to Sanchi & leaves for US...as he hates both tappu & iccha now...and cant face people any more after the sanchi episode...so atleast he gets saved from these 2 good for nothing rotten ladies...meanwhile jogi does a favor to mai by giving her a cook's job in the same canteen managed by ammo, so mai reports to ammo...atleast she earns some money to feed daddaji at a hut they cud manage to rent somehow...baba become a sanyasi & goes away somewhere unknown...
both iccha & tappu are accepted by Rathod as maids in his house..post delivery tappu gets a paralytic stroke that make her immobile, seeing her friend's pathetic state...iccha loses her voice officially...
Rathod orders..iccha to take care of the baby & handicapped tappu...doctor prescribes a treatment of handing out 50 lashes everyday to tappu by iccha with nani & divya watching them...which cud cure her to some extent...and iccha does that dutifully every day...😊

none of them deserve Vansh to be reborn or with them again...😡

howzzthat...

Wonderful Vijaya..👏👏

@ Bold.. Veer gets saved from two rotten ladies to get tied to another rotten vengeful lady Sanchi who does not hesitate to plot and kill or has no shame..😆 A befitting punishment..😆

@ Blue.. Did Ichcha ever have a voice even unofficially?.. All the more easy for her as now nobody will get irritated or blame her because she can stand like a statue for ever and we will be saved from her stammers and stutters..😆

@ Red.. Hilarious.. Did you by any chance ever live in the middle east?...🤣 Anyway, I love this doctor.. Please make him prescribe some such nice treatment for the playboy senior and the 'Gun'lessWanti... 🤣🤣

Edited by hermoinee - 14 years ago

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501272

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: souroj

This is really a big question mark.
Tapu never had any respect for any relation but Iccha, even she doesn't care about Vansh😕, no respect for Vansh's memory😡.Veer baap hone ke chakkar mein forgets everything and is now getting positive vibes from TVSB😲😕

Very valid point souroj..👏👏 Vansh's life or suicide had no value for these morons.. Even when he was alive, they kept him locked up in a room and today this Mai speaks all the time about Vansh being reborn in the womb of the one who was responsible for his death and is being happy seeing her go out with her other son Veer.. She is pampering the girl who tortured him till death and ill treating the girl who married him in spite of everything and tried to love him and take care of him .. But Ichcha also did injustice to Vansh by marrying him to bring Veer and Tappu closer.. After his death, instead of being enraged towards Tappu, she readily forgave her and begged others also to forgive her, whereas she was quick to accuse Veer for his death.. 😕

All these three women will rest in peace only after Veer also commits suicide after Tappu's baby secret is exposed.. Then they can garland the big photo and keep on gazing it for ever..🥱🥱

Edited by hermoinee - 14 years ago

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501272

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: souroj
@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero

Wow, you all are coming up with wonderful ideas..👏👏..Keep it up..👍🏼

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501272

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: souroj

This is really a big question mark.
Tapu never had any respect for any relation but Iccha, even she doesn't care about Vansh😕, no respect for Vansh's memory😡.Veer baap hone ke chakkar mein forgets everything and is now getting positive vibes from TVSB😲😕

@ Red.. There is a saying in Sanskrit, 'Vinaasha kaale vipareetha buddhi:', which means 'At the time of destruction (of self), the mind goes in inverted or in reverse gear'.. That is why Veer is getting positive vibes from the girl who instigated his brother to suicide and who, after being pregnant with some other guy's kid due to her infidelity, is even now lying to get him and he is blissfully unaware of it.. His mental faculties have got destroyed..😆😆

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501272

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: souroj

Vijaya I am laughing like crazy 🤣🤣especially the bold parts but u have given a happy ending to Veer and finally oh finally he goes to US😆😆
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@ bold.. Happy ending?...Seems like punishment to me..🤣

Edited by hermoinee - 14 years ago

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Vijaya

@FunLyfe

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: souroj
@ Vijaya.
I am continuing ur story a bit more😊.
Now that the babies r growing up Iccha is not having enough time to lash Taps faithfully, so Rathod hires a guy for Tapu's treatment and guess who the guy is- Its Sid😳
Iccha looks after the babies and Sid continues lashing Taps.
I want justice for Sid-the unsung hero

yeah, sounds even better, poor guy, rotting in jail, while the queen of sins is having a whale of a time outside...😡

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jdfan

@jdfan

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

@ hermoinee... brilliant story 👏 with excellent ending 👏 i simply loved it ...very good👏

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Vijaya

@FunLyfe

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: hermoinee

Wonderful Vijaya..👏👏
@ Bold.. Veer gets saved from two rotten ladies to get tied to another rotten vengeful lady Sanchi who does not hesitate to plot and kill or has no shame..😆 A befitting punishment..😆

@ Blue.. Did Ichcha ever have a voice even unofficially?.. All the more easy for her as now nobody will get irritated or blame her because she can stand like a statue for ever and we will be saved from her stammers and stutters..😆

@ Red.. Hilarious.. Did you by any chance ever live in the middle east?...🤣 Anyway, I love this doctor.. Please make him prescribe some such nice treatment for the playboy senior and the 'Gun'lessWanti... 🤣🤣