THE GUN POINT ENCOUNTERS- two shots

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The mayank guy in his recent videos stated an accident will happen soon in UD. I got excited and wrote this.

The gun point encounters - two shots


" Papa, she is bleeding badly. We need to arrange the money for the surgery soonest possible!!", tejo exclaimed anxiously.

Rupi was adamant that his younger badly injured daughter due to a deadly accident should not be receiving any treatment.

" Let her die. I want her out of our lives".

She interrupted . Her head was still spinning. Her injuries were lighter and she received first aid. As selfless as she was, she was worried for her selfish sibling who was the main cause of the inevitable tragedy.

" How can u say that. She is ur daughter for God sake"

Rupi Sandhu walked away ignoring the sorrowful pleas of his older child.

She sank on the marble hard cold floor of the hospital. Angad Mann , the wealthy gentleman and a good friend was able to provide the financial aid for the surgery but his phone was switched off.

Fateh and Amrik were lying unconscious on their beds. They were in bad shape. Amrik was admitted in ICU. Jasmin was the worst injured among the four.

She sobbed silently.

" No matter what, she is my little sister. My very own blood. No, i've got to do something. Need to arrange the money".

Just then his call came in. She answered instantly with a shaky voice but relieved that he finally responded to her frantic calls

" Angadji where are u . I need u here badly". She cried loudly releasing the pressures embedded deep inside her heart.

He was shocked and advised her to calm herself. He was on the way back to Moga after attending a business conference in Chandigarh.

He assured her that he will inform his PA in Moga office to liaise with the hospital administration soonest possible so that jasmin could undergo the necessary surgeries spontaneously.

As he hung up, he smirked. "Time for revenge, jasmin, after all that u did to tejoji. I won't spare u this time".

He contacted his PA and instructed him to speak to the surgeon . He spilled his plan of vengeance. The doctor was bribed. The plan was to allow jasmin to slip into coma . At least she will be muted a while. Enough of her screeching voice.


After the surgery

Tejo was torn into pieces when she found out that her sister wouldn't be waking up for sometime. She was in a state of coma.

Everyone else except Sati , was relieved that finally the witch was muted.

Angad smirked. His plan worked. He further bribed the doctor to make sure jasmin could never recover. At least her sister will be in peace.

Rupi refused to bring her home and requested Angad to finance her expenses at the nursing home.

"Let her remain there. Pls spare us from her wrath. Even when she's muted she's dangerous. She might just wake up and ambush anyone"


As it is said that Saraswati mata resides on our tongue, the same occurred. What said comes true.

After two weeks of coma, jasmin regained consciousness and was confused at the same time that she almost strangled the nurse who was checking her blood pressure at that moment The lady screamed and the rest of the staffs barged into the room to save her.

Jasmin was chained to the hospital bed as the doctor waited for Angad's further instructions.

He sighed when he heard the news of her speedy recovery despite the efforts to mute her for a long time. What is she made of??

I am pretty much sure she must be the reincarnation of Tarakasura.( The rakhshas Tarka) and i have to take the form of Ramji to remove her from the life of her sister. An assistant would be required. His own hanumanji who was none other than Moga's national boxer, the muscular, fateh singh virk.

He smiled widely.

" Fateh doesn't like me but he will surely join hands to get rid of jasmin from tejo's life".

The gun point encounters.

The first which was to put her to sleep didn't really work.


The next would be , scare her to death that she goes crazy. A game of mind.

When Angad spilled his plan to fateh, the latter was taken by surprise but gave his consensus to tag along. Time to teach jasmin a lesson . Mahi joined the gang. Her talent to scare jasmin as a ghost was very much required.


Jasmin entered virks upon being discharged from the hospital. All were annoyed except tejo , As usual the goddess of selfless was overjoyed that her sister broke the spell of deep slumber.

Fateh''s grandma sighed deeply feeling upset

" Why is God unfair to us. Why can't she be muted for a little longer".


The next plan was executed the first nite itself .

2 am at her bedroom

Jasmin felt thirsty and wanted to drink some water but her jug which rested on a small table at the bed side was empty ( Mahi removed the water after jasmin fell asleep). Amrik who was on medication , still recovering from the wounds was fast asleep like he had been awake for a hundred years. Snoring loudly.


She staggered sleepily towards the kitchen to refill the glass jug when she heard a whisper in the dark in the hallway . Jasmin!! Someone calling out her name. She was puzzled.

Seconds later, she freaked out when she saw a shadow standing at the front entrance. The porch light was blinking. She dropped the glass jar and ran towards her room . She locked the door.

It was a prank played by Angad , fateh and Mahi.

The next night, she heard knocks on her room with Mahi's sweet voice requesting to use her hair dryer for the next morning. She wanted to keep it with her for the night itself. As jasmin opened the door, no one was in sight. She was puzzled.

" Where is Mahi".

Then she heard the whisper again calling out her name, Jasmin!!

She tried to step back into her room but the door shut instantly leaving her stranded outside. She knocked in vain for Amrik to open and allow her in but he was in a deep slumber due to drowsiness from medications.

Then someone tapped her back. The whisper again. Jasmin!!.

She turned slowly, perspiring, towards the person standing rite behind her.

She screamed in terror when she saw a lady in a white gown and a bleeding scary face pointing a finger at her. " U are dead, jasmin sandhu".


This went on for a few days and finally jasmin went crazy and ran away from virks. Plan successful. Angad ,fateh and mahi were delighted but their joy was short termed when they received a frantic call from rupi the very next day Apparently , jasmin ran away to Sandhus. They were puzzled. They thought she would leave Moga and go somewhere far away from their lives and never return. She landed in her own home.

Rupi was furious on the phone and screamed loudly that Angad had to keep it inches away from his ears.

" Which blady ghost scared my evil daughter. Make an appointment. Tell her to come to my hse tonight and chase this demon away from here. I just can't stand her for even a single second".

Angad then had no choice but to reveal the truth. Rupi was shocked but excited at the same time. He asked impatiently. " What is the next gun point encounter since the earlier two techniques didn't work??



To be continued

( Pt two updated below)


Those tagged can read at their leisure. No hurries.

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Tagging.

For jasmin haters. U can read during ur leisure. No hurries.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Deepika, how are u

If get the time , can read this

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This is Angad trying to get rid of jasmin after the accident. U can read when u get the time

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Wow This Was Just Too Funny.

I Just Loved It Reading It.

Jasmine Should Be Treated The Same Way On The Show.

Muted.

😂

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Part 2


11pm at virks roof top

It has become their secret place of plotting after dinner when rest of the family members were fast asleep ever since they decided to get rid of jasmin, the witch who took charge of their lives.

Angad, Fateh and Mahi sipped their coffee silently, thinking real hard of an idea of the next gun point encounter. A deadly plan to chase jasmin away from the village. If possible, to another planet.

Then Mahi blurted excitedly.

" Tejo bhabhi once told me that Jasmin is claustrophobic".

Fateh interrupted, annoyed.

" Why u didn't tell me earlier. We could have just trapped her in our storeroom long back and allow her to suffocate to her death"

Angad interrupted , upset.

" We can't do that, she could die. I am not a murderer. I don't know about both of u"

Fateh spoke angrily hearing Angad's remarks.

" We all are murderers in a way", to which the other two were shocked and replied " huh".

Fateh smirked. " What about all those mosquitoes , cockroaches and lizards that we killed daily in our houses. I think mummy had killed tons in the kitchen itself"

Mahi and Angad sighed while exchanging glances in disbelief. Fateh was too intelligent.

Mahi taunted her older brother sarcastically, " with that IQ level u have, no wonder u fell for jasmin instead of tejo. A dumb obsessed with the dumber" to which fateh replied angrily" she was more beautiful, that's why. I didn't test the brains. If only i had , i won't land in this mess in the first place".

Mahi interrupted furiously,

" Correction, we all won't land in this place if u had used ur tiny brains in ur large skull".

Angad spoke , irritated with fateh"s remarks on Jasmin's beauty.

" In which angle jasmin looks more appealing to u , fateh. I think tejo is more beautiful".

Mahi interrupted , annoyed as well.

" Yeah, tejo bhabhi is sweeter. I don't understand how u find her sister prettier. She's just fairer thats all" to which Angad stated smiling

" I bet she applies fair and lovely cream daily".

Mahi nodded sipping her coffee. " Yeah me too. I don't think it's natural".

Fateh was annoyed listening to their remarks.

" Can the both of u just cut it off. Let's concentrate on why we came here for".

They sat in silence enjoying their coffee and thinking real hard .

Mahi stated finally after the two minutes of silence.

" We trap her at sandhus store room and then we keep an eye. We don't allow her to die. As soon as she faints , we tie her up , put her in a train to another city. Problem solved".

The both men sighed while exchanging glances. Mahi is too intelligent as well. Fateh replied, smiling,

" U have proven that u are my blood related sister. We share the same genes. The dumb ones" to which his sibling was upset

" That's a good plan, ok".

Angad interrupted , annoyed with Mahi's plan

" Put her in the train then what Mahi. She will still return. She knows where she lives".

Fateh screamed in excitement. " Bingo!".

" She won't return if ". He stopped midway waiting for the other two partners in crime to finish his sentence assuming they understood what he intended to speak

His sister answered instantly ,

" Lay her on the railway track and allow the train to crush her into pieces. Antim sanskar expenses also saved. No one will find out. She won't be recognisable".

The both men sighed and then Angad replied smiling.

" She won't return if she loses her memory. We need to diffuse her brains ".

Fateh nodded in agreement. " Exactly, u got my point"

So it was decided the third and final gun point encounter was to get her kidnapped and memory loss through electric shocks. So she will forget herself and everyone else. She would remain far away and never return and they could all live in peace.

Just then , another voice interrupted. They were shocked when they saw fateh's grandma walking towards them. She heard their conversation and naratted that she already suspected that they were upto something after jasmin was discharged from the hospital. She spied them

Grandma turned out an intelligent woman.

Angad made a remark

" Dadi , ur genes are different from the rest of the family". The oldie laughed and did a high five. Fateh and Mahi were annoyed with the insult to their intelligency.

Grandma then explained that trapping jasmin in sandhu's storeroom was not a good idea. The family needs to be sent away . They will be suspicious as well. If jasmin dies there, she will haunt them in the form of a ghost and Rupi won't spare them and Virks. Authorities will easily figure out it was a foul play


The plan needed to be executed well that no one suspected anything fishy. It should look natural in the eyes of the public.

She stated excitedly to Angad and he nodded in agreement

" Organise a treasure hunt for five crocres. Jasmin is a greedy woman. She would be eager to participate to obtain the lucrative amount. Furthermore she is shrewd and over confident at times. That will be her trap"

Angad was willing to spend any amount to keep jasmin away from Tejo.

The third gun point encounter was a trasure hunt in a remote area at a far neighbouring village.

The next morning, angad made the announcement in a local press that he is donating five crocres in a treasure hunt campaign.

Tejo was irritated and taunted him at his office

" U think u have so much of money to waste like that", to which he didn't reply but just a little cute smile that annoyed her more and she walked away.

He thought to himself.

" I can donate my life to keep u away from ur sister. Five crocres are nothing".


Two days Later

The whole Moga took off to the neighbouring village for the treasure hunt. Hints were given by the organising committee. It was a rural area towards the jungle. Everyone was puzzled. Why did Angad Mann chose such a place for his treasure hunt event??Perhaps the forest could be more challenging. They were all excited.


Little did they realize that the hunt was a bait to trap the only one target, Jasmin Sandhu. The third gun point encounter.


As predicted, jasmin was among the very few who managed to get closer to the exact location of the treasure. Surprisingly, her grandma joined her as well. She was desperate for the money to fly off to Canada. Sati and Dolly were frustrated.

Dolly irritatingly to Sati,

" See this oldie over here , running around but at home this pain that pain expect us to do all hse chores ourselves. That time health issues. Now fit and fine after hearing the five crocre".

Sati sighed, " no wonder my jasmin is like that. She inherited her grandma's genes".

Only one individual who stayed back and didn't join the treasure hunt campaign was tejo Sandhu. College was closed as all participated the event. The principal pleaded her but she refused, still annoyed with Angad's decision. Little did she realise that it was for her own good.

Tejo was all alone in the village in Virks. Even the supermarkets and malls were closed. Angad's lucrative offer lured every single person to join the hunt. Even those oldies on the wheel chair didn't want to be left behind.

From the age of seven to ninety , all joined the event. Angad was amazed to see the crowd.


The third plan was successful. As jasmin approached near the location of the treasure which was deep in the forest, she was kidnapped by goons and taken to a mental hospital in another city.

The doctors were bribed to keep her on mental shocks until she lose her memory. After that she was placed in a spiritual ashram and became a religious devotee. She gave pravachan on the holy Bhagvad Gita forgetting her own bad karma and evilness.

No one knew her whereabouts. They assumed she was lost in the jungle. Tejo was devastated and requested for a search mission but the authorities failed to locate her. They pronounced her as dead. Perhaps ambushed by a wild animal.

Some intelligent villagers speculated for all the bad deeds she did to her sister, perhaps she was eaten by cannibals living in the jungle. Some stated Punjab ka Tarzan would have kidnapped her since she was Moga ki param sunderi , he got attracted to her beauty and took her away somewhere else. Too many theories made but no one knew the truth


The matter was solved and Angad finally decided to leave the country after ensuring tejo was safe from her evil sister.


Guess who won the treasure hunt???

Tejo's Grandma!!!





Ps

Did u enjoy reading the story. But it won't happen onscreen though. U can leave ur comments after reading.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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If i am not mistaken, u guys are jasmin haters. This one i wrote is on how Angad punishes jasmin to keep her away from tejo. U can read if u get the time. No hurries.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Yes Iam A Jasmine Hater.

Glad She Lost Her Memory And Turned Good.

At Least In Your Story.

The Writers Won't Ever Think Of Something Like This On The Show

Iam Not Interested In UD Anymore.

But I Still Come Here To Read Stories.

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Are u jasmin haters??

Whenever u get the time , can read this. No hurries

U can give ur reviews if u wish too

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Originally posted by: SilverBell

Yes Iam A Jasmine Hater.

Glad She Lost Her Memory And Turned Good.

At Least In Your Story.

The Writers Won't Ever Think Of Something Like This On The Show

Iam Not Interested In UD Anymore.

But I Still Come Here To Read Stories.


Tq dear one 🤩🤩

U are my loyal reader.

Two chummis for u 💋💋

UD writers and makers are facing writers block issues.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago

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