Possessed - (pt 15 climax on pg 10) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Aniash

Trp 2.5

Stagnant

Looks like fatejo also didn't help despite the conspiracy with voot

Latest episodes were moga scenes fatejo and family drama. Kvg less scenes.

Earlier he was blamed that trp didn't increase becoz Fatejo were trp fetchers and loved by many

So how come now even when they are shown as endgame and kvg negative with moga in return , yet trp didn't increase.

I don't blame the ship but the writers who can't write them well. They need to insert jasmin everywhere.

Before fatejo can sail again lo ji ageya phir aek surprisr from jasmin

Secondly the tracks are not well executed. Horrible editing.

Quality of show dropped.

I personally feel not everyone out there favours fatejo now. There are viewers who wanted her to move on.

Sathiya cannot be the main reason. UD was ahead of them in trps earlier so they have better Audience loyalty.

If viewers are shifting to sathiya that means they have better content.

Fatejo virks and sandhus alone cannot help the ratings if the writing is messy and jasmin glorified.

They need to replace Isha. Get a better villain.

I agree Isha is not suitable for villainish type of roles. I think the og storyline was different from what they are showing. This show has little to no story left.

All important positive tracks are rushed. They don't even give you time to think they just finish it in one or two episodes hardly. But look at the negative tracks Jasmine's suprise is being promoted as if everyone are dying to watch her drama.

I think a new show is being at this time slot. I haven't watched it yet. Looks like the show is about joint family and all drama that happens in it. I might give it a try after KVG'S exit.

College trip was done and dusted in two days, simi and Buzo's wedding will be handled in same way I guess. I am suprised how easily Buzo's parents said yes. I don't understand why KSV will say no to Buzo, he is the only gentleman left in UD world and he wants to marry your daughter and simply loves your grandson as his own son. what more could you ask for KSV?🤪

OMG😲 how do you come up with such brilliant ideas👏. I am eagerly waiting to know what happened to Jasmine. If she is alive it will be funny when finds a photo of her with garland in Sandhus house.😆🤣

Let Fateh feel bad that Tejo didn't visit him😡I enjoyed reading that. Hehe I think I hate EMA wala Fateh way too much😆

I can't wait for next part. Mihika and sati ka kya connection hai?

Part 14

Tejo couldn't believe her eyes when she read the third and last page of the letter. Mihika revealed a shocking past that involved her mother, Sati.

Flashback of 21 years ago

5 pm , Hoshiarpur

She was four years and two months when she was playing with her favorite doll near the crop fields while her father who did a lot of charity programs for the farmers was in a meeting with the village headmen in a guest house not far away. Some farmers were still working in their fields while the rest took off to their homes.

Then she ran behind a colourful butterfly clutching her doll in her hands and didn't realize that she was moving far away from the guest house. Suddenly a little mischievous boy who was also trying to catch the same insect came from nowhere and snatched her doll, flung it into a small shallow well nearby.

She screamed at him and ran to rescue her doll . She was too desperate as that was a special birthday gift from her grandpa that she jumped into the well and almost drown just to get her doll back.

At that time Sati who was delivering tea with snacks for her father and brother who were working at their crop fields , witnessed the incident and rushed forward to her rescue. She threw the empty bucket entangled to a rope above the well down towards Mihika and instructed her to cling to it. She obeyed and Sati instantly pulled her up .

Mihika struggled to breath and Sati patted her back and turned her over to release the water from her lungs. Just then her aunt (mother's sister) who came looking for her took her away from Sati rushing her to a hospital.

Mihika couldn't recall Sati's face as her vision was blurr at that time of the incident due to panic attack but remembered her touch and voice. Throughout the years she wanted to find out her identity but no one was present at that time of the tragedy. Even her aunt couldn't exactly recall Sati's looks. She told the little girl that the lady was fair and chubby.

So Mihika named her

' Fair , round , fairy godmother'.

Apparently Sati's background was from Hoshiarpur and she used to visit her parents and siblings on and off after her marriage. At the time of the incident she was pregnant with Jasmin and was being taken care by her mother till she delivered the baby.

Tejo was in Moga with her father and grandma. She refused to tag along as she was more closer to her dad It was the month of harvesting and Rupi couldn't accompany his wife to Hoshiarpur . A lot of work at their crop fields and Harman wasn't able to handle all alone.

In the letter , Mihika stated that the nite she possessed tejo at the lonely road was the same nite she discovered her rescuer's identity. The moment Sati opened the front entrance and greeted her with a hug , she recognized her voice and touch. This was the same fairy godmother who saved her many years back

The next afternoon after lunch , Sati stated she wanted to call her parents in Hoshiarpur . It's been a long time since she had spoken with them. Mihika took the opportunity to confirm her doubt enquiring her .

" Mummy apko yaad hain na apney aek choti bachi ko bechaya tha?".

Sati nodded , " haan vo bichari apni gudiya ko bechane legi hui thi. Ab to bedhi bhi ho geyi".

Tears rolled down her cheeks. Her fairy godmother was right in front of her after so many years yet she couldn't even tell her that she was the little girl.

How she wished she knew her when she was still alive.

It was never too late. Mihika decided to gift the kind woman her bungalow as a gratitude for her(Sati) past actions.

She also finally understood the reason she possessed tejo after her death. It was a past debt that she owed her( tejo's) mother. It was karma that brought her to Sandhus to meet her fairy godmother. That's the main reason the Almighty granted her wish for four days extension to save tejo. She owed Sati. Her past connections with tejo's mother was the reason she saved the daughter.

After reading the letter,

There was a box resting at the study table and tejo removed it's lid. She gasped.

It was the doll that she(Mihika)rescued from the well. She kept it throughout the years to present it to her fairy godmother whenever she met her. Unfortunately it was destined only after her death

Tejo couldn't control her tears as she hugged the doll

I am so sorry Mihika. Babaji was really unfair to u.

Just then ,

Mr. Ashok walked into the room and handed to her a tissue box .

" God has really been unfair to my princess. She wanted to live her life to the fullest. She was a kind and generous woman . Her sister destroyed everything. She just wanted to warn u Tejo. Do not repeat the mistake she did. Take a good care of urself " .

Tejo nodded while wiping off her tears.

He stated calmly

" One surprise for u as well" .

Tejo was confused

He took out a document from the desk drawer and passed it to her.

Tejo was shocked

Mihika gifted her the condominium in Ambala that belonged to her sister , Risha Chauhan .

The latter has been charged for her(Mihika's) death and was serving a full life imprisonment in the Central jail. Mihika's husband Dev went through the same punishment. Both cheaters and murderers were behind bars finally.

The property worth 80 crocre and tejo will return again with her mother to sign the transfer papers.

She finally took a leave as her parents would be worried . She promised to be home by evening.

At Sandhus residence 5 pm

After tea time, she ran up to her bedroom and decided to show her mother the biggest surprise of her life time.

Mihika's doll

It was time her family knew the truth

( To be continued)

(Part 15 climax below)

So by Part 14 , chalo Satti mom Tejo ke kuch to kaam aayi😆

Part 15 ( climax)

In the living room

Sandhus were in total silence. Too many surprises lately. Too much to digest in one go. Didn't know how to respond to the news shared by Tejo. Sati was still staring hard at the doll in her hand in disbelief contrrolling her tears with biji consoling her.

Mihika was the little girl she rescued many years back and few weeks ago she came to visit through Tejo. The property was a gift of appreciation.

A stranger lived with them for four days and they weren't aware. Thank god she came for a good purpose.

The following week tejo and her family left for Hoshiarpur to obtain the property transfer. They put up at Ashok Chabra's place till the work was completed and then proceeded to meet up with Sati's parents who resided nearby.

They decided to rent out the both properties for the time being and settle off their taxes and debts. The bungalow was offered to a tv serial producer with a rental of nine lakhs per month and the condominium was offered to a rich Arabian family who settled the agreement with a rent of 2 lakhs monthly. Mihika's uncle helped to get the tenants. He had contacts.

Sandhus received lucrative amounts in deposits from both parties , approx 25 lakhs .They settled their financial issues and at the same time tejo helped virks to obtain their property. The court returned their residence and academy.

Both families mend their relations enjoying the Vaisakhi celebrations with all people in Moga. Fateh recovered fully and was back to work at the college , still trying to woo tejo.

During that time Sati missed Jasmin. She would defo be happy if she was alive to see the fortune they received from Mihika. Now they even purchased two luxurious cars and renovated their home.

Little did she realise that her daughter was still alive and going through horrible punishment from the same woman

Jasmin was kept as a captive in Madya Pradesh( the land of forest in India) the past one month in a deserted cabin deep inside the woods surrounded by wild animals. Goons kept a guard during the day so that she doesn't escape and leaves before dark to allow her to be a prey to any of the wildlife roaming in the area.

Mihika punished her with a slow torturous death. She was given food and clothings but there was no one. She was all alone.

At nite hours she had to safeguard herself from the grizzly bears, Cheetahs and other dangerous blood thirsty monsters by locking her cabin door . Anytime any intruder could barge in.

The goons were paid lucrative amounts by Mihika's uncle using the funds in her accounts as per her instructions in the first letter. She had tons and could feed the men for their whole lives.

Only Ashok knew Jasmin's whereabouts and no one else..

Will she be able to escape?? Only time will tell. Perhaps a hunter or a forest ranger might find her.

As time passed, she was losing her mind. It was a mental torture being trapped in middle of nowhere and listening to growling as well as howling sounds of the wild life day and nite. She couldn't run anywhere. She lived in hell.

The dead body was of a 21 yr old woman who was an orphan murdered by her boyfriend. She was burnt alive. No one claimed the body from the hospital mortuary and Ashok offered the management that he was willing to perform her cremation. He was famous for his charity work. The hospital handed over the body to him.

A plan of Mihika's to trick the family so they won't search for Jasmin They would assume she was dead. The orphan would also obtain a proper last journey rituals by a family that she never had and her soul would be blessed. Aek sey bheley do.

Mihika was after all a very kind woman who thought about everyone else but unfortunately the lord was unfair to her . She wanted to live yet she was spared with a short life.

But

As they say that ur past deeds decides the journey of ur rebirth, the same happened to Mihika.

The Almighty decided to give her a new blessed life. A second chance. The fruit of her good karma.

She wanted to live to the fullest and she would have it her way. She returned on an auspicious moment

On the day of Vaisakhi

10 am at Sandhus residence

Their neighbour, Mr. Inder walked in with a box of traditional sweets. His wife delivered their fourth child A baby girl. He was excited. Sandhus congratulated him

Two weeks later

They joined the baby's naamkaran ceremony and was surprised when her parents decided the name in front of all guests. Even virks were present .

Mihika singh Chauhan

Apparently , mr. Inder's surname was Chauhan but sandhus weren't aware throughout the years. Everyone in moga only knew him as inder Singh.

Sandhus hid Mihika's details from the villagers including virks as well. When anyone enquired about the fortune they received , rupi gave excuses that he won a lottery. Jackpot price Ten crocres.

The first person to recognise her was her own uncle. Sandhus invited mr Ashok for Vaisakhi celebrations. When he reached their home, no one was around and tejo texted him that they were at their neighbour's place celebrating his daughter's arrival. Ashok was shocked to see the little one sleeping in her cradle. The exact carbon copy of his niece. He had seen Mihika since birth.

He closed his eyes and thanked the lord for blessing her with a new life. Tejo approached him and understood immediately. " Ur princess is back. God was still fair to her after all".

He decided to move to Moga so he could start spending more time with her by being friends with her parents first. He was a well known person and had so many contacts everywhere that the whole village wanted to know him.

Fateh was still in his mission to pursue tejo but this time he faced another challenge. A new investor in the academy was fond of his ex. A new triangle.

Jasmin was far away still struggling to escape . Full on revenge but little did she realise that tejo was more wiser now. Thanks to the old Mihika for bringing a turnaround in her personality.

The new Mihika would be a challenge ahead for jasmin as Ashok was determined to teach her martial arts in near future He already started off with her three brothers. He bought a property in the same neighborhood.

Little Mihika was fond of three person in particular. Sati, tejo and ashok. She disliked one individual the most.

Fateh Singh virk

She tend to pass urine on his clothes whenever he tried holding her. Well, some past connection. Looks like she hasn't forgiven him for betraying tejo. She would defo send him to a roller coaster ride as she grew Jasmin won't be spared either if she ever returned.

To all cheaters in Moga,

Face the wrath of the karate kid , Mihika singh Chauhan!!

Tejo Sandhu's new bodyguard .

A gift from heaven

The end

Reason for this fiction

Haunted tracks brings fresh vibes to storyline especially when trp soars. Fictions like Tarak Mehta and Yeh hain Mohabatein did wonders with their ratings with such tracks in forms of suspense thrillers.

Perhaps UD makers should try this trick in future when they require better ratings.

I hope those who read enjoyed the story.

U can leave ur reviews after reading.

Originally posted by: ElizaDarcy

OMG😲 how do you come up with such brilliant ideas👏. I am eagerly waiting to know what happened to Jasmine. If she is alive it will be funny when finds a photo of her with garland in Sandhus house.😆🤣

Let Fateh feel bad that Tejo didn't visit him😡I enjoyed reading that. Hehe I think I hate EMA wala Fateh way too much😆

I can't wait for next part. Mihika and sati ka kya connection hai?

I completed the fiction part 15 climax.

It was weekend. So thought of completing it.

U can give ur reviews after reading

Fiction completed with part 15 as climax.

U can give ur reviews after reading

Amazing plot , Ani.

Great effort and I loved how you carried the story forward giving importance to all small details. Writing style is so good!

I thoroughly enjoyed this plot , Tejo learnt her value, J being punished , Fateh sowing seeds and Virks deserved this for letting jasfatejo stay under same roof. Sandhus too needed a round but ya it's Satti's good deeds that saved the family.

It was a complete package👍🏼

Thank you for this fiction❤️

It was totally unique and a lovely plot.

🙌😄

Awesome story Ani...I just loved it. I loved the way how Mihika was reborn and last line new bodygaurd of Tejo. She used to soil Fateh's cloths... hilarious.

Sandhu's celebrating with dhol om 14th day due to the windfall they received 🤣

It was full on entertainment