FaTejo OS - Snippets from His Life (Part 2 has been updated on page 3)

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hello guys! I hope you all are well. I wasn't too positive about this fic because well, I don't know what to write for the sequel and IF I will write a sequel 😓

Regardless, I hope you all like it! This has a cliffhanger 👀



He stared into the space with the phone in his hands. The card he bought for her laid on the floor. He was too late.

The irony is that just this morning, Fateh had entered his home excitedly, a bouquet of flowers and a card in his hands. The man was about to confess to his wife and best friend Tejo, tell her how much she means to him. He wanted to tell her that she was the love of his life that he wanted to spend the rest of his life with her. While his heart was at peace knowing that he found the one that was meant for him, somewhere in the depths of his mind, a tiny fear lurked – would she believe him? After everything that happened? Did she love him back? He shook those thoughts away. He’d beg her if he had to.

He dreamt of her last night. She was dressed in red - he always thought that she looked beautiful in red. Tejo smiled at him, her eyes sparkling in joy. His bride and the love of his life.


He reached out to her, to pull her into his arms but then the smile from her face fell. He woke up.

The next morning, everyone was quitter than usual. Her absence saddened everyone. Fateh stared into nothingness. One time she had made him his favorite dish, he promises that he can still taste it.

He remembers her laugh, it reminded him of bells. Her eyes were very expressive, she could never hide how she felt. Fateh chuckled bitterly. Fate had blessed him with a gift and he unknowingly lost it.

All he has now are her memories. Will fate reunite them again? He doesn’t know. He has desperately looked for her and each time he has failed.

He sat on his bed and looked at his phone. Her photo was now his cell phone’s wallpaper. “Happy Birthday beautiful” he softly whispered, a sad smile drawing across his lips.

His father doesn't talk to him as much. Granted he isn't mean to him but something about the man had changed. He's distant. Fateh tried to strike up a conversation many times, and each time it ended due to his father's one worded answers.

The whole house had fallen asleep. The kind voice that always asked everyone about how they were doing was gone and Fateh blamed himself.

Maybe, if he had realized the truth sooner, reality would've been much different now. Fateh stared at the man in the mirror. He looked defeated. His mom says she misses her too. Despite it all, his heart says he’ll find her again. He promises himself that he’d find her and love her until his last breath.



I thought an open ending (for the first part at least) is better. Let me know if I should write a sequel 😅

Also, if there's anyone I forgot to tag, I apologize 😭


Part 2 - Hope

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Posted: 4 years ago
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yes please. write more :D

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I had to read it again - that’s how good it is!!♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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It’s morning and I’m officially heartbroken. Why have you done this to me? But I loved reading it and would love a part two with a happy ending even more XD. Hope you write one.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mandy_21

I had to read it again - that’s how good it is!!♥️


You’re the best 🥺❤️ Thank you!


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: hapc

It’s morning and I’m officially heartbroken. Why have you done this to me? But I loved reading it and would love a part two with a happy ending even more XD. Hope you write one.


Awww 🥺 hopefully I can write a solid sequel. Thank you for reading my story and for leaving this comment! ❤️❤️


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dee10

yes please. write more :D


Thank you! ❤️😄


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Plz write more....Tahiti ..want happy ending for them ,let him find her

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Happy to see you.back. Its marvellous.

Yes do write a sequel if possible🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omg how could you put me through this cliffhanger😭

I just got pulled in by this story and right when it was becoming interesting it ended.

Do write more!

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