Fatejo OS - Shackles - Page 4

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Don't know about others but mera clear hain. Till I am not confident that it is Fatejo, I am not starting any multi piece. The moment they lean towards JasFa, I am Outta here😅

yeh same here i am also till they show fatejo and also tejo not going down to crying FL for now she is giving back to fateh if not family out of respect.

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Hi there!

Thanks a lot ❤️❤️❤️

The Fateh I envision is a pitiable creature. I know he is domineering and unapologetic but he is someone fraught with negative emotions. He has been unable to leave the toxic life behind and it has corroded his entire life.

Problem is Tejo kept him sane. She was an easy one to blame and the moment she goes away, the realisation sinks in that he is abandoned again. Not the toxicity hopefully but this abandonment issue is even there in the show the way he tells her not to leave her. I just upped the quota a notch.

He cannot function without her and that makes him even more angry. In fact, behind his anger is the desperation that made him hunt her down and make arrangements to get her previous job back.

It was your suggestion by the way that made me write 'A Cup of Coffee'. Felt like writing other dimension and give a glimpse into Tejo's head and a new Character.

- Niki

You are too kind! 🤗

I LOVE seeing/reading about Fateh from your lens. He's essentially acting on very basic human emotions. He fears abandonment by the one person who truly anchors him. He's angry at himself - more than he is at her - for being so dependent on her. He needs her with every fibre of his being and the way you put that in words blows my mind every time!

Hope you share a link to your blog soon, eager to read your other stories! ❤️

is this the end omg pls make another part of it loved what you wrote

Hello,

This is a first time I am reading your OS. But the angst, sexual tension between two entwined souls. You have done it describing them so perfectly. Take a bow girl. Its something I still want to master and admire your skill.

Keep writing more👍🏼

Tejo feeling for her. 😭

Your writing is superb. 👏

This was awesome🤗, can we have a part two😭