Sukor ff loving the love part 3 on 11 dec

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Posted: 6 years ago
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part 1:-

at darjeeling station,
a BMW car enters in there.
its a quite silent place. a man around 35 come out of car and went to counter.
man:excuse me,yeh shimla wale train kab aaye gye.
counter:3 hours late hoga.
man:kya 3 hours late hoga,okey..
the man go and sit on a bench.
a coli is sitting there.
coli:kisi lene aaye hai aap ji.
man:aapne patni ko.

at train,
a women is seen enjoying the view if mountain. she asked the tc.
women:bhai shahab aur kitna waqt lage gya.
man:3 ghanta aur.
women:thik hai..
at station,

coli:aapko newspaper mein dekha hai sayad.
man:haan,dekha hoga sayd india ke top lawyers justice suraj rajvanshi..
coli:haan..aapka yahan kya kaam.
suraj:tea garden buy kiya hai yahan toh isse ke kaam se aaya hai yahan.

waise aapka koi kaam hai kya ab.
coli:na ji .
suraj:toh baat kar lete hai.
akela kya karinga station mein.
kahani sunnen gye.
coli:sunaye..
magar kiske
suraj : mere.
17 years ago,
suraj pov,
i am suraj rajvanshi,studying at university. i just fall for a girl of my class.
but unfortunately i never ever get a interaction with her.
1st me and her subject are different. we just a only one class together that also in a week.
an the girl also don't serious about study and bunk the class.
the university is ending soon.
and i want to propose her but how,
my friend ansh give me idea to write a love letter to the girl.
and i take his opinion.

whole night i write only one love letter .
and finally its done.
i describe myself, my background, my love for her in the letter. i could any girl will fall for me after reading this letter. and this happens.

next day,
i don't get chance to talk her so i went to her driver and asked for her address so that i had so scope for myself. i can't meet her after all today was last day of college.
next day,
i went to her house which i get address. its an apartment which look rich and classy people lives.
will she accept my love.
i asked for help from the watchman.
who was a nice man.
suraj:kya aap humare madat karenge.
watch:thik hai,paar kis ghar mein jaake dena hai.
suraj:3c flat ke ladki ko.
watchman:acha tum chakor betiya ke pyaar mein par gaye ho.
waise woh hai bihat ache.
suraj:haan jante hai hum abhi aap jaye aur dejeye uss ye letter.
watchman:thik hai..
the watchman leaves.
i can see the home through windowd.bit i only can see their shadow.
precap:don't know.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting start
Suraj is very successful.
I wonder if his wife is his first love.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome plPleaseee update soon
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thanks
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Originally posted by: Shar456

Awesome plPleaseee update soon

will do soon
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Originally posted by: meshmesh

Interesting start

Suraj is very successful.
I wonder if his wife is his first love.

Eagerly waiting for next.

thanks,will knw soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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part
suraj see under the tree shelter and wait for his lady love.
at apartment,
a girl is dancing heart on the music.

Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Mora Har Man Sukh Paayo Ri
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Albela Albela Albela
Albela Albela Albela
Albela Sajan Aayo Ri
Dhir Naa Naa..
Dhir Naa Naa..
Dhir Naa Naa Naa Naa
Chauki Puraao Magal Gaavo

door bell ring she stop her dancing and went to open the door and see the watchman.
watchman:chakor betiya.
chakor:ji uncle koi kaam hai.
watchman:kaam nahi hai ye letter ek ladke ne tumhe dene ko bola hai.
kyun ladka.
watchman:neche betha hai.
watchman leaves.
chakor went near the window and secretly seen him,before he can see her she moved away and breathing heavily.
don't believing.
chakor start reading the letter.
and get amused reading the letter how good the guy is.
and most important thing is that she already likes him but never have the courage to talk to him like she.
she see him waiting for her answers. he will wait for her answers thorough its yes or no.
chakor:i can't believe suraj bhi mujse pyaar karte hai.
main bhi usse bohat pyaar karte hoon.
magar ab main kya karo bohat nervous feeling ho rahe hai.
haan maho ya naa.
ma papa woh kya sochenge.
main kaise kya karu.
aur itne jaldi itna bada faisla lena sahi nahi hoga.
main ma papa se baat karunge.
its a bright sunny day.
suraj is sitting on hot sun.chakor see him secretly as she dont want him to realise that she is seeing him but suraj understand all this and smile at her childish nature.
chakor feel bad.
she took lunch and call watchman.
chakor:kaka aap uss yeh khana de doon aur haan ho sakte toh uss samjhu ke woh yeh na rahe.
watchman:humne toh samjhaya betiya.
magar woh nahi samjhta hai.
magar suna hai ladka bohat a ha hai mera beta arvind bhi toh same college main parta hai.
chakor:mujhe pata hai woh kaisa hai humesha sabk madat karne wala sabki izzat karne wala.
aap abhi jaaye

watchman brings lunch for suraj.
suraj:yeh sab kis ke liye.
watchman:aapke liye betiya ne bejhe hai.
suraj:Hume toh usska haan kya intezar hai.
khir choro yeh lunch he le lete hai. bukh lage hai bohat.

suraj have the lunch. chakor see this from window and smiles.
day passed.itz evening.
suraj is sitll sitting on there.heavy rain is happening.
she feel tensed for suraj.
her mother come to her.
sunaina:sorry beta late ho gaye ho.
waise dekho k9n aaya hai karan ke maa.
karan ke saath hum tumhare rishta karna chate hai.
chakor get shocked.
precap:ends.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Cute update but shocking end
Chakor sending food for Suraj was sweet.
Hope the marriage proposal is refused.

Eagerly waiting for next.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting update👏
So Chakor also loves Suraj😊
Loved the way Chakor took care of Suraj😊
Chakor's marriage is going to be fixed😲
Waiting for next
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part 3
chakor get shocked to hear about her marriage alliance. she leaves her mother hand shockingly.
mother:kya hua beta.
chakor:maa hum ye shaadi nahi kar sakte.
mother:paar kyu beta karan acha ladka hai aur London settles ho raha hai tum agar aapne career settle kar sakte hoon
chakor:maa,wajah yeh hai ke hum kidi see pyaar karte hai aur woh bhi humse bohat pyaar karte hai.
mother get shocked.
arun,her father also hear her.
chakor and her mother see him and get silent.
at outside,
suraj is denching in rain.watchman come to him.
watchman:beta abhi tum chale jao.
suraj:kaka aaj agar hum chale gaye naa toh woh phir himmat nahi kar payege.
at room,
arun:kon hai woh ladka.
chakor:woh mere university se hai.
Maine kab uss baat nahi ki hai
naa woh mujse.
aaj us ne letter lekha hai aur wait kar rahe hai humare liye.
arun read the letter..
at ground,
suraj is sitting on rain.suddenly he can see some one coming holding umbrella in her hand. he can't see her face but he realise who is the person.

chakor come close to him and forward her hand to him.
chakor:hum bhi aapse pyaar karte hai. humne aapne family se baat ki hai aur woh haan hai.
suraj get happy he hold her hand and stand up.
suraj see chakor who stare jim lovingly but suraj is shocked.
flashback ends.
tc:tum shock kyu ho gaye the usse dekh ke.
suraj:kyu ki chakor woh ladki he nahi the jis se main pyaar karta tha.
uss ladki ki driver ne mujhe janbucki galat address deya.
aur coincidently, chakor mere university ke ek student the jisi main kabhi nahi dyan diya.
tc:aur tumhare biwi.
suraj:chakor rajvanshi hai.
humare sacha pyaar..
uss din jo Maine uska haath pakra woh aaj tak nahi chora.
uss din maine uss chehre ki masumiyat mein kuch nahi bol paya.woh dukh nahi dena chata tha maine usee aur aaj tak kabhi pata nahi chalne dia ke woh letter uske liye nahi kisi aur ke liye tha woh bardas nahi kar payege aur na main usse kho sakta hoon.

train come.suraj stand up and search for chakor.
chakor come out from train. suraj see her and smiles.chakor come to him smiling .
chakor:kaise hoo aap.
suraj:tumhare bina kaise ho sakta hoon.
chakor:rohan kaha hai.
suraj:aapka ladla so raha hai.
chakor:jaldi chale ghar aaj uska 13th birthday hai
suraj:haan chalo.
they leaves the station .tc see them leaving and blessed them for future.

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