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lifeisbeautiful

@Ruby7

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

The leap happened on Tuesday. I am not really disappointed about anything but they are things i want to point out

Baby sanvi is cute and sukor sanvi moments are adorable to watch

If feels great to see sukor back in haveli, sharing same room and happy together

They have started talking about the mansik bandhuagiri theme and it's promising concept and they is a lot they can explore

The feel good factor is there

Sukor look and dressing had been impressive

I do feel they need to make the episodes more interesting and entertaining.

the drama element has been absent expect for monday this week

Some scenes have been much longer than necessary

Some dialogues have been repeative

The Friday episode was not strong enough

Also the pre caps have been longer again

We need more sukor romantic moments too. I felt the mirror romance was cut short

They need to promote this new phase by airing gripping promos over the weekend.

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

I think they should cut down on Chakor's speeches about maansik bandhuas and give Suraj more scenes with Teju and Saanvi. Instead of repeating the same dialogue over and over they can show her talking to parents to convince them to let their girls study or play. They could've added a FB about how Imli ended in ashram.

I thought Friday's episode was better than Thursday, there was different scenes, it felt more dynamic. The momentum in Thursday's episode was affected by Chakor's lecture in front of Bolenath. Yes, the mirror scene was too short but overall I think the romance dose is good.

The precap needs to be shorter and they need to stop repeating it the following episode, the reason they add recaps is for continuity but this doesn't happen because of the repetition of precap. But I don't think the precap reveals too much which is good.

The feel of the episode has been good and different, hopefully they have planned well for next week.

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binivenugopal

@binivenugopal

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

I feel CVS has lot of ideas and it's good they start this leap with so much positivity.

But all is depends on how well they execute their ideas in episodes.

I think they need to improve writing a bit.

Last 5 year leap happened there is some suspense and curiosity factor that what had happened to everyone.

But this time not much.

I feel there is connection lacking in between scenes sometime.

I feel confusion regarding the time when Sukor mirror scene come first and it look like night and Saanvi sleeping.

And next scene,Gauri showing her work to Chakor and Pakhi scene and it look like evening to me.

And Sooraj having breakfast with Chakor in outside and again don't know he having food with Teju inside haveli not sure it's lunch but Sooraj in same clothes.

And they go to temple that day itself but look like afternoon but has to be evening or next morning.

Don't know at afternoon time, placing God's idol like auspicious things will do.

What I mean to say is that there is some disjointments between scenes.They need to plan better.

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lifeisbeautiful

@Ruby7

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Mesh I agree about the chakors scene on thursday, it was longest. Somehow suraj is not having to many scenes with sanvi as compared to chakor.

Even in the media scene suraj didn't speak. Somehow I feel his anger on imli has died out? That may be because of the fact he knows she is dead.

Even tejaswani dialogues were the same over 2 episodes.

The imli fb may come in later bec i think in the olv of imli escaping in car, they had shown a clip of her falling out of the car.

I to hope next week we get solid episodes.

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Yes, continuity is a problem, it wasn't clear if the meal inside haveli was lunch or another breakfast.

Gauri-Paakhi-Chakor scene seemed out of place, it looked like it was evening but Chakor was in the same clothes as the party, Gauri and Paakhi were in different clothes. It should've been for the next day with Sukor in different clothes or come before the mirror scene.

But I think the most important thing they need to do is to make the pace faster.

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lifeisbeautiful

@Ruby7

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

Bini yeah you have made some valid points about the connection lacking between the scenes. I don't know if the trp audience will pay much attention to that bit but yes rather than having 2 food scenes, they could have shown something else. I thought imli wanted to sell brides bec she wanted more money and even risked her position but if she had such expensive idols at home, which she stole, why she didn't sell those?

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

I think their focus is Saanvi's safety and that's why the ladies are given importance, Suraj has been neglected and given very little dialogue even in the scene when they found the idol, Chakor did most of the talking. I don't think it's about whether their anger has died or not, it's about Chakor's premonition, even the reason she gave for clearing out Imli's room was related to Saanvi.

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POOJA

@poojaprabha

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

I agree with you ruby improvements are necessary which will determine the position of UDAAN...I hope cvs will definitely do something interesting which will satisfy our wishes but our desires are limitless😉

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binivenugopal

@binivenugopal

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Imli gets consciousness hearing Chakor's name.

But not sure she came to know about idol returned to temple.

So if she is not aware of it,then chances are that she try to enter haveli on purpose of taking that Idol back so that she can sell it and earn money to survive.

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Krupy

@Krupy

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

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It was first week after leap and it was little slow but I don't mind it. The thing is audience who just watch show and is not in touch with articles, segments etc. should be cleared that the main theme of the show is still the same (to keep loyal audience) but with some changes (to attract new viewers) that's why there was not much drama and lot of similar dialogues by Chakor about psychological slavery. I think they just wanted to clear that before they start with tracks and with real story. And I hope it will turn out to be good move. Just think guys even fans were scared that after leap Udaan will turn out to be typical daily show tbh even I had some of that fear before psychological domination news.

I think from the next week we will get more drama in Udaan's style and everything will be more balanced. Improvements will surely come once they start with real tracks, but imo first week was really good and I can only imagine how will it be once they start to do something concretely.

Agree scenes continuation was confusing I think it's from the same reason why they repeated dialogues, they just didn't wanted to start with the drama this week before clearing what is main theme. Once they start with tracks in full sense the scenes continuation will become better also.

Agree about precaps and recaps It started to irritate me a little especially precap at the start of the episode and I'm just an online viewer, I think they really need to cut it or at least to shorten them. As for precap for next episode, I think they are good, because they didnt revealed everything, even tough scenes and dialogues were repeated previous week.

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