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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Wow..it was a lovely start sis..

Sukor r ex friends tat s something new sis..

But i hate the fact tat chakor loves vivan..

Loved sukor cute nok jhoks..

A kiss in the 1st part itself sis..lol

Overall just loved tis update sis..

Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

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Shar456

@Shar456

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Awesome update maithu pleaseee update soon as eagerly waiting for next update

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Kg823748
It's amazing!!!!!!👏
I can't even put it in words how much I liked this update😃
When are you updating next part?
Waiting eagerly for it.

Thank you so much dear!

So happy you liked it!

Next update will be when I'm back from my trip of 2 weeks!

Will try to make it as big as this one to compensate the wait

Thank you

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
OMG "WW3 would have happened.."🤣
Me too find it cute
Fireworks-roman candles...😳
And the last part that vivu was present there...😲she kissed SR...☺️❤️
Just fab...waiting for the next update...plzzz update soon...

Hehehehe YES WW3! Just imagine what would they throw at each other in this WW3

Happy you liked this 1st part and fireworks!

Heee let's see how she is going to react LOL

Thank you so so much dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: katheriene
Amazing update, no words for it 👏
So Sukor were friends but circumstances drifted them apart😕
Sukor are still the same but thinks other changed😉
I think Chakor kissed Suraj😊
Waiting for next

Thanks a ton dear!

Yup dear! Ex-friends they were!

Heee you got the point with "Sukor are still the same but thinks other changed" ;-)

Let's see in the next and last part what happens!

Thank you so much

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Wow..it was a lovely start sis..
Sukor r ex friends tat s something new sis..
But i hate the fact tat chakor loves vivan..
Loved sukor cute nok jhoks..
A kiss in the 1st part itself sis..lol
Overall just loved tis update sis..
Eagerly waiting 4 next update sis..

Thank you so much Sis!

It's been long time no seen here, in forum!

I didn't really think anything dear, it just came with flow! And the word EX-FRIEND was written 2 or 3 months back :-|

Well dear! She is not sure of her facts! That's y testing!

It's just a kiss which will turn everything upside down dear!

So happy you liked this update dear!

Have to wait for more than 15 days as I will be posting it once I'm return from my trip!

Thank you so much dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Shar456
Awesome update maithu pleaseee update soon as eagerly waiting for next update

Thank you so much dear!

Sorry dear!

Have to wait as it will not be soon!

Hope you understand!

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nemo316

@nemo316

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Amazing start

I blame Imli for Chakor thinking she's in love with Vivaan.

Chakor's anger towards Suraj shows how much he means to her but she isn't ready to admit it.

The kiss was amazing, under the fireworks. Sukor are destined for each other. Waiting to see her reaction when she realizes that she kissed Suraj.

Eagerly waiting for next.

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: maithu_

Thank you so much Sis!
It's been long time no seen here, in forum!
I didn't really think anything dear, it just came with flow! And the word EX-FRIEND was written 2 or 3 months back :-|
Well dear! She is not sure of her facts! That's y testing!
It's just a kiss which will turn everything upside down dear!
So happy you liked this update dear!
Have to wait for more than 15 days as I will be posting it once I'm return from my trip!
Thank you so much dear!

Yeah sis..due to work i was not able to visit forum often..

But i ll read all ur updates though i was not able to reply to it..

Enjoy ur trip sis..happy journey

Edited by Sania_suraj - 7 years ago

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Maithu

I took time to read this through, re read and read and finally

i am 😃😃😃

just loved it

i have opened the story on my lappy and typing the comment on my desky (he he has to remember na.. so easy to refer side by side 😉)

After reading whole thanks for making my belief more stronger that my adories are just for each other, destined for each other.

Ex BEST Friend... new term!!! never heard a best friend to be ex 😆

but Maithu sorry just that name **** i know she is friendly here but just puts me off... hmmm but okay in a way she was instrumental for the last blissful moment!!! (so chalo)

Felt his stares at back... 😉

and thanks with those lines that she is in love with Vivan confirmed she is not in love with Vivaan!!!

snap at each other he he how can they not!!!

just loved how you brought out their tastes, their hang out and yes

she is now gorgeous and dude in white

and that moment of bliss and she wanted more neither he denied... (but did he knew, sensed something) the bracelet... hope he picks it!!!!

Wow... so interesting years may part them but not destiny!!!

and then the ghost comes!!!!😆😆

thats super duper...

waiting but enjoy your trip...

oops long comment but cant help when it comes to my adories😛

lovely maithu loved it!!!!!