TS : Roman Candles (Completed - 09/04)

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Krupy
LOVED IT are small words for this story Maithu.
Read first time when you posted it but decided to reread it tonight and to continue with second part.

Amazing. Awesome. Wonderful.

Thank u for this sweet and beautiful story.

Thank you to you all buddies for giving motivation through likes and comments!

Without you all, I don't think I would be writing this!

No words are small or big!

Loved it is like me floating in air with a big grin!

So happy you loved it!

Thank you

Thank you dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: meshmesh
That was amazing Maithu 👏
This part is one of my all time favorites.

Thank you so much Mai

Awww dear!

Saying all time fav is making me feel... I don't 😳

Thank you Thank you dear

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: HayaZehra313
I m speechless yr...u and ur stories are just...ahhh i have no words...❤️❤️very beautiful update...and the kiss...❤️i loved the name MR. HULK vivu is so cute...😳looking forward for your more stories maithu...😳

Seeing all your speechless word, I feel like there is nothing to say

LOL

I'm just kidding dear!

I always wanted to use the name Hulk for Suraj, so took the chance now! Heee

Thank you so much dear!

Happy you liked it!

Thank you!

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sumsukor

@sumsukor

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#64

Maithu lots of lots of 🤗 firstly,

You know why?... not for my adories realisation

Not for this lovely story...

but for what I wanted terribly in the show you satisfied me here that bonding of Vivu with Bro and his best friend turned bhabiji Loved it to the core... I felt so so lovely within myself. thanks Maithu

ha ha coming back to my adories,,,, my dude is always perfect gentleman you see!!! he did not want to go ahead untill he was sure it was her, her and dude wanted more otherwise he would have slapped!! I just loved it...

loved the way you made him talk to Vivaan and also understand her but not to hurt her feelings... 👏👏

destiny never parts, but challenges and sukor are winners they won

hmmm good questions... the best part is do you say hate to him ... Yes... then you are in love...

yes true the Roman Candles indeed would have melted not that they were lighted to sparkle but ignited with my adories sparkles 😉

thats a beautiful one. i never felt it was ending as it was a beginning and with my antennas up as they explore more

thanks Maithu

Keep writing more and more

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Maithu lots of lots of 🤗 firstly,
You know why?... not for my adories realisation

Not for this lovely story...

but for what I wanted terribly in the show you satisfied me here that bonding of Vivu with Bro and his best friend turned bhabiji Loved it to the core... I felt so so lovely within myself. thanks Maithu

ha ha coming back to my adories,,,, my dude is always perfect gentleman you see!!! he did not want to go ahead untill he was sure it was her, her and dude wanted more otherwise he would have slapped!! I just loved it...

loved the way you made him talk to Vivaan and also understand her but not to hurt her feelings... 👏👏

destiny never parts, but challenges and sukor are winners they won

hmmm good questions... the best part is do you say hate to him ... Yes... then you are in love...

yes true the Roman Candles indeed would have melted not that they were lighted to sparkle but ignited with my adories sparkles 😉

thats a beautiful one. i never felt it was ending as it was a beginning and with my antennas up as they explore more

thanks Maithu

Keep writing more and more

Aww Sumi!

I'm so happy that your wish came true here!

Well that was one of my wishes too but didn't see that I have fulfilled here until I read your comment

Ouf I don't see anything nowadays!

I'm happy that your adories made you love them even more here!

I like when people look at relationship as a cool thing instead of making it complicated.

Only we human make things look complicated with all the stress and tensions!

Loved this line of yours!

You just combined title, and the words related to it together :

"yes true the Roman Candles indeed would have melted not that they were lighted to sparkle but ignited with my adories sparkles"

Hahahaha

Sumi's antennas are always up so no need to say anything LOL

Thank you so much dear for this lovely message to stat the day happily!

A very big smile on my face now!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 7 years ago

#66

Beautiful Chapter

I liked Chakor's cuteness but Suraj too is not less he is just so awesome

it was surprising to see how Chakor had accepted him so easily though but I guess

been friends earlier played its part too

wow Suraj certainly does not waste time asking for his kiss after his proposal now that was fantastic

it has ended though beautiful but why so quick

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: taahir004
Beautiful Chapter

I liked Chakor's cuteness but Suraj too is not less he is just so awesome
it was surprising to see how Chakor had accepted him so easily though but I guess
been friends earlier played its part too
wow Suraj certainly does not waste time asking for his kiss after his proposal now that was fantastic
it has ended though beautiful but why so quick

Thank you so much buddy for these lovely words

Happy you liked Sukor's cuteness

Well, all the questions she had got an answer: jealous, don't want to share him...

Heee He just wanted to confirm if she was saying the truth or just asking for a crime to happen LOL

Ended quick! Oh nooo It was the longest part I wrote in a long time ;-)

Thank you so much once again dear!

Thank you!

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Divya

@ndivyateja

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#68

Love your Titles, Love the way you retain the original flavor of characters, Love the screenplay

Another soothing story..Again Suraj in white..ImVaan playing the cupid..Not to forget the Chocolate fudge 😛

Sweet, bewwwtifull & thrilling..Enjoyed reading it..

Going into my favo reads list..🤗

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: ndivyateja
Love your Titles, Love the way you retain the original flavor of characters, Love the screenplay
Another soothing story..Again Suraj in white..ImVaan playing the cupid..Not to forget the Chocolate fudge 😛

Sweet, bewwwtifull & thrilling..Enjoyed reading it..

Going into my favo reads list..🤗

So happy that the titles had an impact!

Thanks to you all, I do all my effort to keep the story as closer as possible!

Suraj in white is something I love!

I love when men are in shirt and especially white as that goes well for every shades of human skin when it fits perfectly. ;-)

Glad you liked this story and the ppl in it!

Thank you for all the lovely words dear!

Thanks a ton!