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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

That was indeed Phenomenal

such a beautiful story that held pride , love , respect and most of all genuine feels for all

its true Suraj got the best job , the best mother , the best woman as his wife his Angel and the best Papa as his father in law

both got along very well from the very start they talked , danced , kissed and it was their first kiss

when Suraj found out Chakor is the bossses daughter he at first was baffled but then his love for her his sincerity came true and made him realize though she is the bosses daughter their love is much more precious

while his Angel tortures him with her passionate words and teasings 😆

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Amazing!
None of them is shy here 😆. All it took was the first kiss and then they couldn't stay away from each other.
Liked their bonding when they first met.
Thanks for the dance, I so wanted a Sukor dance during the party in the real series.
Loved Tejaswini playing tricks on Suraj.
It was a wise move that her father picked the early date 😊.

Thanks maithu! I enjoyed it so much.

Thans dear!

@bold I liked how you formulated their closeness! LOL

I too wanted to see a dance of Surkor and we got naughty Suraj dance with his ex in the soap, so fulfilled all our wish here and I'm glad you liked it!

I too think the same else I don't know what this could have done!

Thanks to you dear for these wonderful lovely words!

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Eatifi

@Eatifi

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

ZARAA ZARAA MEHEKTA HAI,BEHEKTA HAI...AAJ TOH MERA TANN BADAN,MAIN PYAASI HOON

MUJHE BHARLE APNI BAAHON MEIN...

MERE SANAM,YUJHKO KASAM...PAAS MERE AA JAA,

YEH DOORI KEHTI HAI,PAAS MERE AAJA...

feeling like writing the entire song here itself,coz this song had been playing on my mind since the train conversation...😳

it was amazing Maithili...LOVE AND LUST BLENDED TO PERFECTION FOR A DRINK THAT HAS PASSION OF LUST,AND FRUIT OF LOVE...[you know what I mean]😉

I just loved Sukor's effortless bonding,just like the original one...and wild Chakor and tame Suraj were real surprises...😳

I would love to read their honeymoon as well☺️

enjoyed it...well done👍🏼

Edited by KUTUR - 8 years ago

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: katheriene
Interesting story👏
Loved how sukor clicked from their first meet😉
Sukor were not saint😉
Loved their families & their drama😆
Waiting for more stories from you

Thanks a lot!

Glad you loved the Sukor and their dramas along with their family.

If this Sukor aren't saint, what about a Sukor who are both out of box? And not even a bit of saint in them. LOL

Will for sure come with new stories!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Nice update sis
Loved the sukor dance..
Here suraj s little shy..our chakor s bold enough..
I loved how teju played with his son..
In tis whole story i loved very very very much is imli called suraj bhaiya here...can't express how happy i m now..i m the happiest girl in the world now..
Thank u for making her suraj sis..
Luv u di..

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad you enjoyed it!

I really missed their dance in the college reunion party!

Wanted to do a different role for them and I think it clicked!

I don't remember whose wish was that 'Imli has to call Suraj Bhaiya!' and I got the golden opportunity to fulfill that LOL

It's fully my pleasure that you are enjoyed dear!

Thanks once again!

And Love you too!

Take care!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Very nice dance
Loved sukor instant chemistry... Wow What an instant attraction

Chakor boldness and suraj shyness is unexpected pleasant shock

Imli once am happy... You know why

Liked the bold content...

Waiting for the next update

Kudos how you handle it

Thanks a lot buddy!

Happy that you loved their chemistry!

I know why you are happy with Imli here LOL

Glad you liked it!

This story took a lot of time to write and I'm so so happy with the responses!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: amrutha131
Awesome👍🏼
Here I felt like Sukor are eternal lovers who can't help but fall in love with each other
Poor Suraj,after marriage he will be stuck between dramatic Saas-Bahu😆
And Thanks for making my dream come true by making Imli as Suraj's sis🤣

Aww! Thanks a ton dear for those beautiful words of appreciation!

LOL! That's going to be a big thing HEHEH Being stuck between MM & Wife and it's another thing to be stuck between dramatic Saas-Bahu ;-)

Oh dear! It's my pleasure and my dream too to make her his sis!

Thanks once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sailuja
Amazing story...loved the concept👍🏼Thanx for sharing 😃

Thanks a lot dear!

Happy that you loved it!

😃

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Wonderful story... Loved it

Thanks dear!

Glad you loved t!

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: arena99
amazing story
bold chakor with full of naughtiness ,shy suraj
pls maithu whenever u have time pls write its nxt part after marriage or honeymoon seen
it will be treat to read what will chakor do, before marriage she unble to control her feelings
pls create one part for their romantic wedding night ,i knw it was naughty demand pls try to write take ur time if u will post their wedding night sequence ,let me know😊❤️
thankyou for such cute ,simple story

Thank you dear!

I will try to have a track after this dear!

Hahaha Just imagining her with all worked on, it's funny! LOL

I will let you know for sure!