You are mine Sukor part 1

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Hello everyone. I am Liya author of you are mine sukor ff. I have posted the ff in telly updates and in wattpad.now I am posting it here because somebody named saiyem copied my work and posted here
It feels very bad when someone do this to you. She hurted me by doing this and also disrespected my hard work! What pleasure did she get by eating the fruit of my hard work. This was my first ff it is very close to my heart! This incident brought me down.but I won't give up.Thanks to my friend who is a member of telly updates and also India forums.she messeged me in telly updates about this .she even reported to India forums about this ...thankyou soo much sweetie... Guys I will post all the ten chapters that I have posted in telly along with the links to go to telly update site and view my ff in that site (you have to type the link I guess,it won't open if you click directly).

Link to my ff in telly updates:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part1/

Part -1

(The plot is same as that of serial,suraj giving money to KN from vivaan)

Kamal Narayan (KN ): Suraj!! You have done a great work by getting money from Vivaan!!
Suraj : its my duty to full fill your wishes!
KN :haahaa... then your duty is not over yet he said with a smrik
Suraj was confused and thought what is he up to now? His chain of thoughts was disturbed by Ragini! Who gave him some paper.
Suraj : what's this?
Ragini : chakor &your divorce paper...she said staring at him angryly and continued "get them signed soon!!"
kN : I need you to full fill this duty too!!
Suraj was shocked to hear the word "divorce" , even though he was behind her for divorce at this moment he felt very sad! With a heavy heart he nodded in yes and left from KN s room!
@chakor's house.
kasturi : you know chakoriya this is my 23rd kavarchaut! Kasturi said while preparing for karvachaut!
Chakor : wow maai it's a long journey!!
Kasturi : yaa! I still remember during our first karvachaut,your bappu also took fast for me and later he got gas trouble
Changan who entered the house with bhuvan and chakor started laughing hearing this and bhuvan was shying away...
Chakor : I never knew my baapu is soo romantic...chakor said while controlling her laughter.
Changan : Wait a sec!! This is chakors first karvachaut right?
Chakors face fade hearing this ,surajs face was coming on her mind! She rembered their cute njokh jhok...he calling her wild cat,their wedding night...she was missing him madly!!

Kasturi who found chakor lost, to change her mood asked her to go out for a walk!
Mean while Suraj was in his jeep going to chakors house with divorce papers.

Suraj's POV

Many things changed in my life ..!! Its like my life took a 360 turn...From an animal,I started living the life of a human!! I only cared for myself,my happiness,my problems!!! But when I saw chakor sacrificing her life to save three of us... I was shocked! How can someone put their life in stake.. But she did! She always showed the meaning of LOVE and LIFE to me ...but at those time I was blind...but now when I can see the truth around me ,she is going away!!...Its only a week since she left haveli but everything seemed to be so gloomy ,on top of that papa and ragini is back to trouble us...why are they in a hurry than us ,for our divorce...urghh I will kill that ragini devil one day!! She would have instigated papa for our divorce!! I don't know why I am feeling soo much pain!! And anger !!! As if I gonna loose ...her...I don't understand anything!! Now when I look at my life ... I think the girl who always irritates me! The girl whom I have hated once to core ! The girl whom I love to fight whole life...she is the only fun and happiness in it! ! I feel like I am going to be left alone!!

Chakor who was walking saw the village people preparing for karvachaut,which is tomorrow...chakor then remembers changans word...its my first karvachaut and I am...no!! Why should I think of fasting and for whom?? She said trying to coverup her thought and to console herself deep inside she wishes to take fast for suraj!!
Then she saw suraj jeep coming!! She was on cloud 9 .but she don't know the reason for her happiness!!her excitement!!Suraj step out of jeep and moved towards her...( Raabta song plays in bg) suraj &chakor both of them smile seeing each other.chakor is little bit blushing when she saw suraj staring @her!
Both of them came back to senses and started their tom&jerry show!
Chakor : So what is Mr.Rajvanshi doing here? She asked with raising eyebrow!
Suraj instantly shot " Just came to meet Mrs.Rajvanshi" suraj just realized what he said and bite his tongue!
Hearing this Chakor turn red ,but she control her self .
Chakor : So you started missing me huh?
Suraj : Me missing you...hahaa not even in dreams! I think its not me but its you who is missing me ...he said raising his eyebrows naughtily! And coming close to her!
Chakor : she playfully pushes him and said how can I miss a bore person like you she shot with a smrik!
Suraj : whom did you call bore? Me ?
Chakor : ya you are soo boring!!
Suraj : I am best in everything!
Chakor : Really ! Then prove it?
Suraj : hmmm...challenge accepted!! But on one condition if I am succesful in entertaining you ! Then you gotta do what I say...suraj said naughtly
Chakor then remembers the scene where suraj is asking a kiss from her! She was shocked and thought ,is he planning to ask it again!.ohh god what will I do now!!
Suraj from her silence realized what's she thinking and said "Not that one"
Chakor felt awkward and shy hearing his reply and noded to him accepting his challenge.
Suraj : So let's go!
Chakor : where?
Suraj : You only challenged me now ! So I thought to take you out!what do you say?
Chakor : that's cool! Let me inform maai &baapu
Suraj : Done !

Suraj is living his time with her, he forgot about the divorce and is much excited to go out with chakor! Let's see what destiny store for them!
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PRECAP : SUKOR DAYOUT#

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Part -2

Link to part 2 in tely( you can type it and see )
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-2/
Suraj was walking to and fro like a pendulum and is waiting for chakor about half an hour!! He was getting angry and was about to go to her house...when he saw Chakor moving towards him...He was awestruck seeing her beauty... She was wearing a yellow anarkali and some light jewel complimenting them .Her hair was left open and is dancing to the tunes of wind! Her deep brown eyes which is shying away without meeting his eyes is driving him crazy!! As she was moving Closer to him ,his heart beat was increasing.

A minute before I was angry at her for being late but now I think I would wait for a thousand year to see her like this ...I don't know why I took my jeeptoday, kakka told me to take bike ,as its longtime I had a ride on it...chakor calls me right ,I am a idiot...Suraj then dreamt of him going in bike with chakor!w now hakor came near to him and was standing in front of him,Suraj was looking at her lovingly.chakor also looked up to see him and their eyes meet...they were having a cute eyelock...their eyes were speaking to each other!!they were speaking about the unknown feeling in them for each other...both of them came back to senses and composed themselves ...there was an awkward silence between them which was broken by Suraj .

Suraj :get in fast!
Chakor : But where are we going?
Chakor said while sitting in jeep! They beginned their journey
Suraj : you will see when we reach,now no more questions ! Its already late. Don't know why ?girls take so much time to get ready...

Chakor :, you mean I took long time to get ready
Suraj : Wow chakor your tube light Glowed early today! He said while switching on headlight.
Chakor innocently said I only took 5 minutes ...
Suraj : 5 minutesmy foot!!you were getting ready as if you are going out with your bf...he said with a smrik
Chakor : you are complaining as if you are my bf ...she smriked back!

Suraj : I was stupid to wait for you!
Chakor : better late than ever...I came late... and you realized late that you're a stupid!! Chakor said while controlling his laughter!
Suraj : you are Impossible!!
Chakor : you tooo

Suraj was simultaneously driving and fighting with chakor!
The only word to describe suraj feeling is happiness ...the biggest asset in a persons life is to be loved,cared and Pamperd by someone.suraj has always carved for love in his life...he never showed it but deep inside he was longing for a happy life when it was denied or not given he became an animal! He forgets everything when she is around him!The time they spend their unending fights are the only reasons in his life to smile!
Back to sukor! ...chakor Is speaking like a nonstop radio and eating Suraj's brains..
Chakor : offo I am getting bored ...she said dramatically
Suraj looked at her with a question mark look and turned the jeep towards right ,they now entered a village close to aazadhghanch the time was about 7:00pm.mean while chakor continued her drama to irritate suraj.
Chakor's POV
Its time to have some fun!!! I will teach this idiot a lesson .He always irritates me now its my turn .see what I do to you Mr.Rajvanshi.

Chakor : come on Suraj ,Sing for me! She said cutely
Suraj : What ?
Chakor : I know your dumb!but deaf tooo

Suraj give her a death glare and she gives him a smrik...which he find little fishy!
Suraj in mind ...Ohh god what's she up to! I don't know when this wild cat get violent.What's cooking on her head! I am sure she is planning something to irritate me but.. why she asked me to sing
Suraj : Me & Singing. Are you gone mad!
Chakor : You have to sing!
Suraj :No way!
Chakor : So then admit that you loose the challenge!chakor asked while giving a evil smile
Suraj was dumbstruck to hear the word "Challenge"...he litrellaly forgot about that ...
Now suraj is Simultaneously driving the jeep,fighting with chakor,boiling his head to escape from challenge but he know he is trapped and is biting his nails also!!
Chakor was laughing inside, seeing his state .
She then started asking him to dance and sing ...etc. And is irritating him more and is having lot of fun! But after sometime suraj is giving no heed to her.He is ignoring her and is driving off silently. This irked chakor she cannot bear his silence . she is doing this much ,only to grab his attention! But instead he is ignoring her! She is hurt,she don't know the reason.She cannot bear his ignorance. She at least wanted him to try singing or anything to entertain! But his cold reaction make her feel that ,she is not important to him!
Chakor : you were saying that you are best in everything! What happens now?why are you ignoring me? If you cannot fullfill the challenge why did you aacept it? You are boring and will Remain boring...she said little angrly...Learn something from vivaan ..how he care for imli and look after her! ...
Suraj stopped the jeep.chakor was shocked by his sudden justure.Both of them are sitting in jeep . Suraj looked at her and said
Suraj : You are behaving like a typical wife's!! He said with a smile and raising his eyebrows...
Chakor was puzzled with his behaviour and later understood that he was acting to be ignorant
Chakor : you are a idiot! I won't talk to you!
Suraj starts laughing holding his stomach and mocked how she shouted "Learn something from vivaan". Chakor was embarassed. She felt shy and then started laughing with suraj.she hitted on his shoulder and he shouted cutely ouchh ouchhh
Chakor : stop your drama ...dramebaazz!you know how much I was hurt when...
She stopped realizing what she said and remained mum.Suraj was happy hearing this ,he was happy to know that his ignorance matters to her!that means he matters to her! Chakor was cursing herself for speaking her hear out!
Chakor who is sitting was facing away from suraj to avoid his eye contact. Suraj who is in the driver seat moved close to her,chakor could feel his hot breath on her neck ! Now chakor turned her face and both are facing each other!
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PRECAP : #SUKOR'S DANCE # ROMANCE


Edited by L_i_y_a - 8 years ago
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Part -3

http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-3/

The moon was smiling brightly seeing Sukor. Our lovely couple are now in a village named gavi,close to aazadhghanch. This place is known for its beauty, with grassy hills and mountains that freshen up the atmosphere. The Rivers that move down to infinity...each and everything are now brighten up by the dim moonlight!!
Sukor are in jeep facing each other, Suraj came more close to her,they were only millimeters !! Suraj was looking into her eyes with much love,affection and hope!!
Suraj : Do my ignorance matter to you? Do I matter to you?
He cupped her face ,tears were rolling down from her eyes and he cannot bear it...
Suraj : Once I used to be the reason for your tears but now its changed!
He slowly wiped her tears ,chakor is looking at him with much love and passion.She is melting on his sweet jestures

Suraj then continued I wanna know chakor,I I wanna know Why you care for me Why my ignorance hurt youWhy you trust me! Why you Saved me I need answers to these questions...
Chakor looked at him with mixed emotion,she don't know what to say or how to react...
Chakor : it's nothing like that Suraj ! I didn't meant like that...She said without looking at his eyes!
Suraj : If you couldn't answer me at least answer your self !
Suraj found chakor sad! He brought her here to make her happy &to have fun .But what had happens now..she is sad and its all because of him.He then thought of Something!!
Chakor was in deep thoughts . she asked her self! Does he matters to me? Do I care for him ? Why can't I tolerate his ignorance.Why did I cry ? ... I feel soo much happiness, exitement and madness when I am around him? Why my heart skip when he is close by... I don't know ...I think I am thinking too much,its all misundestandings due to situations .I should talk with Suraj and clear everything ...she came back to senses and found suraj no where ,luckily the jeep was close to a street light but rest things all around were darkness! She got scared and is worried about suraj!She then senses a person,little far away from the jeep...the person is standing under need a tree..she cannot see him due to darkness...
Many bad thoughts were cracking in her head ...With broken voice she yelled,!!
Chakor : S...U...R.A..J! Is it you?j
No response came from the person. Chakor got more scared... the person was standing ,with his back him is facing towards her...chakor looked at the person with fear,curiosity & anticipation...
Then the person starts whistling !! And he turned and is coming towards the jeep!! Chakor is trying hard to see his face...as she cannot due to darkness!! Then the person came to light and is smiling naughtily...Its our Suraj ,He then put the song MATARGASTI in speaker on his phone and started dancing to the tunes!!
Chakor's mouth was wide opened seeing suraj's this side.
The music plays!!!

Matargashti khuli sadak mein
Tagdi tadak bhadak mein
Aule girre sulagte se
Sulagte se sadak mein
Chatri na thi bagal mein
Aaya hi na akal mein
Ke bhage hum ya bheege hum
Akkad mein toh socha phir
( suraj pulled chakor out of the jeep...he cutely forward his hand for a dance ,chakor showed him fake anger for troubling her...he then kept his hands on ears and started dancing around her!!)
Geela hua hain wo sukhana ho ho ho..
Chahe janana ya mardana ho ho ho..
Attention!
Phenka naya paansa
Phir de gayi jhaansa
Ainveyi mujhe phaansa
Teri aisi ki ho taisi zindagi
( now suraj forcibly made her dance ,he twriled her and turn her around..chakor was happy deep inside but showed anger on her face...now suraj came closer to her and whisperd in her ears "Sorry"she was shivering by his closeness.. His voice made her heart to skip...and both were looking at each other and are having a cute eyelock)
Phenka naya paansa
Phir de gayi jhaansa
Ainveyi mujhe phaansa
Chirkut zindagi you know
Na na na..
ting ding ding ting ding da..
Tu hi hai wo
Jis se khela tha main kho kho khela thappo
Tu hai Laila, Shirin, Sohni, Juliet
Sunlo! mujhko dhundo na jungle mele mein
Whatsapp pe hoon ha ha ha..
Na tera na mera zamana ho ho
Na ye zanana na mardana ho
Pakad paana

( chakor who sensed their closennes pushed suraj and was composing her self but lately she realized that suraj was on ground blabbering "fatso wild cat"...she give him an angry look and forward her hand for help.Suraj hold her hand and give her a smrik...she was confused by his reaction...all her confusion got clear when he pulled her too on the ground!!She looked at him angrily but suraj started laughing holding his stomach.. ...Now suraj got up and forwarded his hand for her help!! She thought to do the same, pull him on the ground...but before she could hold, suraj took his hand and showed her his tongue!! ...)

Chakor : you idiot ,I will kill you? She yelled at suraj and started chasing him...
Suraj : Someone plzz save me from this Wild cat!!!
They were running ,then suddenly chakor was going to fall and suraj holder her in right time. Chakor hands were on suraj chest and suraj was holding her by waist ...chakor looked at him and both have an eyelock...he was completely lost in her beautiful eyes ,through which he could see himself...
After sometime Chakor came to sense & is trying to free herself from suraj, but he was in his own world thinking about their lovely moments...
Chakor : Suraj!! Suraaajj!!eyy helloo...
Suraj :No response
Chakor then shakes himm
Suraj : No response
Chakor finally stepped on his foot with her high heeled shoes...
Suraj: mummmyyy!!!!
Chakor was laughing seeing his state...suraj was standing in one leg , holding his other and is jumping in pain!!!
Suraj : hey you fat cat,I saved you from falling and you kept your elephant leg on my soft leg!!
Chakor : you idiot!! How dare you call me that!!
Suraj confused "what"
Chakor : angrily yelled Fat
Suraj : what ,when did I call you fat...fat no way ...fat huhh...fat really ..let me see you...you look little fat! But I won't call you fat! Becozzz faaatt...
Chakor : you monkey!donkey !fool!..stop it ..now you said it a 100 hundred time ...your impossible!! I don't wanna talk to you...
Saying this she walked angrily and suraj is calling her from behind
Suraj :hey fat cat...chakor turned back and glared at him..he said " I mean wild cat" he give her a idiotic smile and is walking behind her through the village...
Suraj : after walking behind this wild cat I became a hungry cat hey wild cat stop!! I am hungry...
Chakor : What? Really? Till now you were eating my brain and still hungry...she said aangrly
Suraj then saw a dhabha (hotel) near by..he pulled her and they made their way to dhabha...
Suraj whose stomach starts singing is at the peak of hungry he ordered mostly everything and raised his eyebrows to chakor to order...
Chakor : you have ordered for about 10 people , I don't think food is left ,for me too oder
Suraj : I was bearing you from evening ...so obviously I am hungry!!
Waiter was laughing seeing their njokh jhok
Suraj glared at her and signelled the waiter to get the food
When the food came suraj started gulping everything into his mouth and chakor was looking at him ...she was smiling seeing him eating like a kid !she remembered the old suraj...the arrogant, egoist and stone hearted man...whom she hated before and the person now sitting in front of her ,both have great difference... old suraj used to be the reason for her tears and this suraj leave no stone to make her smile! Chakors chain of thought was brokened by suraj who stuffed food into her mouth but her gaze was on him.They started chatting & eating.

After having food suraj took her to a hill top,the whole village could be viewed from there.such a pleasant sight to the eye,which is enhanced the moon light...the cold breeze touching their body is giving them goose bumps!! Chakors eyes were shining like a tiny star after seeing the view ,she looked at suraj said " its beautiful suraj,never seemed something like this,I feel like I can touch the sky and hold the moon who is smiling at me!"
Suraj looking at chakor and said " beautifull' and smiled!

Both of them sat their and spend whole night looking at the moon,where they could see each others face...
Morning:::
Moon has bid bye and now sun is waking up from his nap! Suraj worked up listening to the music of birds ,he found chakor sleeping peacefully on the ground close to him! He smiled at her and thought to bring coffee for her from the dhabha ...so he left to dhabha...chakor who was sleeping peacefully was disturbed my our Sun...she woke up and found suraj no where
Chakor : ohh god ! Not again!where did he go now ?
Saying this she also started walking,she thought may be he will be near the jeep!!soo she headed towards jeep!!
But to her badluck he was not their, in the mean time suraj with came to the hill with two glass of hot coffee...he was tensed as he didn't find chakor there!
Mean while chakor was near jeep...suddenly her eyes stuck to something inside the jeep.she took it from the jeep and tears were rolling down her cheek...it was like her world turned upside down!

PRECAP : Not decided.
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Hope everyone liked this chapter.

Edited by L_i_y_a - 8 years ago
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Part -4

Tears were rolling down her cheeks!!She was taken aback realizing the fact that, the beautiful memories that she gathered till a second ago was meaningless!
Chakor then broke down into the ground...she cannot bear it any more ...the pain of separating herself from him was killing her!! Every single moment that she spend with suraj was flashing on her mind and is blasting out in her heart as lava...
She remembered the scene when both of them were on hill top ,viewing the beautiful sight which she thought would be pleasant as their life,then she remembered suraj feeding her in dhabha, then she thought about their cute fights how he irritates her calling fat,their crazy dance ,their face off with kamal narayanan ,she remembered how he consoled her during vimli union and finally she remembered their marriage night...now she started crying more bitterly ...her eyes were swollen and face turned pale...chakor then saidChakor : why suraj?why? Why did you do this to mee . you gave me soo much happiness yesturday,that I wish for nothing more in my life but the pain you gave me now is severe than death!! How can you pluck me out of your life? How could you give me divorce?don't you love me? How will I live without you? I am incomplete without you! I need you badly , more than anything in my life! She started crying vigorsily!!

At hill top:
Suraj kept the hot coffee down and scanned the whole area!!
Suraj : offo ...this girl naa where she went now? he said while scratching his head ... heyy wild cat!! Your milk is ready, Come out, come out where ever you are!!
He started worrying ,when he found no response from her side and started searching for her...

Mean while chakor started walking like a lifeless body !! Her mind stops working and her heart stop responding ,she is numb & is lost and is moving in some directions...she stops when a throne entered her feet,she was feeling pain but its nothing compared to her heart's pain ... she sits under the shade of tree and attempts to remove the throne...and is also crying thinking about suraj!!
Meanwhile suraj is asking to people about chakor he is soo much worried about her ,many bad thoughts were coming to his mind! He cursed himself for leaving her alone! He was feeling that chakor is in pain and is preety much tensed about her and is also feeling guilty for leaving her alone and is in fear of loosing her!
( the song yeah dhooriyaan plays in BG)
Chakor then removed the throne and said " some thrones can't be removed"she cannot digest the fact that suraj doesn't love her.
She stood and angrily yelled at God for making her life hell

Chakor : why god? Why do you plan my life like this? Chakor who never loose to anyone is now loosing in front of her fate!! Are you happy now!!What wrong have I done?Why are you punishing me like this and making my life a hell? Why me ?Always me ? Why god?why do you always snatch my love from me?first vivaan and now suraj! Don't I have the right to be loved by someone. Am I born only to give happiness to others and gift myself with myseries and sorrows .(she started crying now) .my life once ended when I came to know that vivaan loves imli ,never ever thought I will taste the feeling of love again and that too for Suraj! And now my heart is aching again ,may be its not you god its my bad fate that only leads me to heart break! She started crying sitting there and is thinking of their beautiful moments...
Suraj was searching like mad ...he was so much worried for her
Suraj : I hope your alright chakor ...I will die if something happens to you ... where are you wildcat?
Suraj was passing by the same dhaba ,showing chakor pic to people over there and the same waiter notices him

Waiter : Bhaiyaa! You are looking for bhabhi?? I saw her sitting in bus about an hour ago!
Suraj was shocked to here this

Waiter : yes when I went to market ,I saw bhabhi sitting in bus ,I thought you will also be with her !
Suraj was angry and both sad that chakor went without informing him but he thought he is also at fault as he left her alone!...he remained mum!

Waiter : bhaiya is everything alright !
Suraj shook is head and said " yaa everything is fine"
And he went towards jeep!he sit on the driver seat and give a sigh of relief as she is safe and he gotta know from waiter that she took bus to aazadgangh he then rested his head on stearing

Mean while chakor is seen sitting on the window seat of the bus...she was looking outside ...she wan't to forget everything!she want to ran out from her pain which she can't hold on for long! She then turned to right side and was shocked to see a smiling face
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Part -5

She was shocked to see suraj there,by her side ...tears started flowing down her cheeks! Her eyes were reflecting her pain! Suraj with his hands ,gently wiped her tears ,feeling his touch she closed her eyes...When she opened her eyes,she found suraj know where... Chakor started crying badly realizing the fact that suraj would disaaper from her life like this forever!
Mean while Suraj was Resting his head on the steering ,he was thinking about the recent happenings in his life!
Surajs POV

I have no words to express ,what I am feeling now ...I am feeling soo much relieved! I became lifeless when you were lost ! I am soo sorry chakor for leaving you alone! I hope you reach home safely ! I promise you I won't leave you ever again ,I will always, be there for you as a shoulder for you to rest your pain and as a shadow to protect you from all bad eye he said determined ...
He started the jeep to aazadhgangh and also started thinking about each and every moment they spend together yesterday!He rembered their disasterous dance with steps including pushing and pulling, a big smile appeared on his face...he can't stop himself from laughing and blushing ... hitted his head ...then rembered their challenge and her nonstop bak-bak ,asking him to dance & sing!! Suraj in mind " I think I am missing your bak-bak wild cat"he said while taking a turn and driving swiftly,he was smiling all way thinking about her their unending fights,her irritated look, all things related to her was driving him more crazy...he became restless...he was having a fresh feeling in him. .. He speaks,think & see only chakor !

He stops the jeep aside and came out and sits on the front top of jeep
Suraj : urghhh !!! Now no more I can't hold it .. I can't tolerate this feeling anymore and I only know one thing all these feeling are happening because of you wildcat,he said while pouting cutely! What have you done to me !! ( the song pehla nasha plays in the BG). I can only see you ,feel you & think about you! You know you nearly killed me when you left without informing ...you know how much I was worried for you.For a moment I thought I lost my love again!...he was numb but he still repeated the word again...L...o..v..e!!

Suraj: what ?... my love?... Really !!...nahh he shook his head in disagreement ...but with a confused look he said yahhh...and shook his head in agreement.
He jumped from the jeep ...he can't believe it ...he is moving to and fro in tension ...for about half an hour he was moving like this...now he stopped and took a deep breath closing his eyes and he could see chakor face... suraj opened his eyes suddenly giving a 100V bulb smile showing all his teeth.. Like an idiot and said " MY LOVE"
Suraj : my love really ohh manh and that too for wild cat!!
He now sits on ground and said " hehee someone pinch me ,hit me because SURAJ RAJVASHI IS I N LOVE" he can't control his happiness his happiness...love was blossoming creating a volcano of emotions in him ...he has become crazy now...Crazy in love
He jumps and stood upon the jeep and yelled at top of his voice I LOVE YOU CHAKOR ... I LOVE YOU MY WILD CAT ...yipeee

He just wanted to see her.. Hug her ... make her his for ever ...he said in mind you are mine chakor ...he quickly get into the jeep and fled to village to meet his lady love
Suraj in jeep:
Suraj : its now 2hrs 63 minutes and 3sec that you are out of my sight , now no more he said while pouting cutely !! I am angry at you for leaving without informing but... in the mean time I love you for doing that !! If my wild cat didn't left me how will I realize my love for you...wish I could reduce this waiting...but I started enjoying this waiting ..

Mean while chakor step out of the bus and is walking lifelessly towards her house...her life came to a dead end with her dreams and hopes scattered ...she took each step with a heavy & teary eyes... her heart is filled with unbearable pain on the other hand suraj is going in jeep to meet chakor with his newly blossomed feelings for her ...with his heart filled with care,love and affection.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part-6

http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-6/

Note : imli loved suraj and tried to marry him by sitting in place of Tina with help of chakor but ended up marrying vivaan ! Same thing except that stupid pregnant wala track, I hate that part! Vimli later fall in love and suraj,vivaan & imli now share good bond after kn entry they become buddies!
So let's start!

Kasturi opened the door and was shocked to see the state of her daughter,before kasturi could speak chakor hugged her,it was indeed a bone crushing hug,kasturi sensed her daughters pain!
Kasturi : chakoriya!!
Chakor looked up to her ,she uttered the word "Maai" and burst out into cry...kasturi eyes were also filled with tears seeing chakor like this and she started consoling her .kasturi thought to ask chakor later about her sudden break down as she is not in a good state now!she made chakor lie on her lap and started singing lullaby!

Mean while Suraj have Reached aazadhganch and is heading towards chakor's house to tell her his feeling ,but suddenly something strike his mind He stopped the jeep in a hush;

Suraj : "Ohh manhh!!what if she Rejects me!!" He said while biting his nails."Does she feel the same as I feel for her"."I wish It was like that " he said crossing his finger and moving to & fro in tension. "If its not ,then what will I do! "He said with a sad face..
Suraj : What will I do now...
Now his phone rings and the name "devil" is flashing on his mobile.
Suraj : urghhh !! Why this devil is calling me now?? Saying this he picked the call
Suraj : Hello devil
Ragini : What??
Suraj bite his tongue and said hello my devi
Ragini smiled a bit and suraj was cursing himself!
Ragini : Where were you last night. I have called you a hundred times.
Suraj hearing the word last night he started thinking about his time with chakor and was lost in thoughts
Ragini : Is the work done?did chakor signed the papers?
But suraj was in another world with chakor ,he was not listening to her!
Ragini finding no response from suraj yelled
Ragini : SURAJ!!Are you there?
Suraj came back to sense and replied uninterestely "yaa"
Ragini : Come home quickly,she said in an angry tone .
Suraj said yes in an irritated tone.
Suraj : offoo ... I will go to see whom first, I will go to my angel or to that devil...stupid me asking stupid question...definetly to my wild cat!
Suraj who is now standing in front of chakor's house started thinking ,how to go inside and what to say...suddenly he saw the window and suraj smiled proudly!
Suraj : Everything is fair in love & war!.
He peeped into the window and his eyes were struck to chakor who was sleeping peacefully on her mothers lap like a baby ,he is relieved to see chakor who reached home safely and thought to reveal his feelings to her soon!
Suraj has gone crazy or Crazy in love! He is fresh and alive and full of energy! The pain that was imprinted in his soul from his childhood started healing slowly! He now have a ray of hope in his life and that's his love chakor
He drove back home...playing music and humming to its tune!he is very much happy!
At haveli:
Ragini ,Rajana & vivvan are sitting on dinning table for lunch! Imli is serving vivaan & Tejaswini is serving Ragini & Rajana!
As usual drama was going on full swing in dinning table! Ranjana is simultaneously gulping the food and bad mouthing tejaswinis cooking!
Ranjana : Such a hard parthasits very difficult to chew them
Vivaan : ohh that's why you ate five parathas in one go ,right mom and smriked at her!
Ranjana gave him a angry look and resumed her eating process.

After sometime , Ranjana whose mouth was filled with parathas were wide opened in shock ! Vivaan was laughing holding his stomach seeing Ranjana face ...imli ,Tejaswini & ragini tried hard to stop laughing!
Tejaswini : Hey eating machine! Shut your mouth now otherwise mosquito will come and sit .
Ranjana glared at her and pointed towards the entrance of haveli ,all of them were shocked and their mouth was wide opened, seeing this Ranjana shot.
Ranjana : now all of you shut your mouth otherwise mosquito will come and sit
They all looked at Ranjana then at the entrance in shock!
Sometime before :
Suraj reached haveli ...he is having ear phone and is listening to music,he is moving forward happily ,jumping and humming to the melodious tunes when he step into haveli at the hall,the song changes to tukur tukur from dilwale, now suraj started moving his leg dancing to the tunes...he was seeing chakor by his side and started dancing around her,moving his hip and giving some hot girlish move to make her laugh and yes she was smiling at him...and he smiled back at her like an idiot ,seeing her angelic laugh ... suddenly he didn't find chakor there but he is hearing the sound of laughing ...when turned aside he saw ranjana & ragini holding hand in hand and laughing...vivaan was in floors...imlis eyes were filled with tears because of laughing too much!Suraj was totally embarassed! But there was one person whose eyes were filled with tears of happiness ,its Tejaswini...she saw her child laughing and dancing whole heartedly after long time!
Suraj hurriedly went to upstairs to avoid further embarrassment.
Suraj after bath was getting ready,he was combing his hair singing the Song pyaar hua hai ikkraar hua hai pyaar se phir kyoon darts hei dil!!!
Then suddenly he saw Vimli walking to his room .He gave a warm smile to them.
Imli : Soo?? Imli said raising eyebrows
Suraj : what ? Suraj said confused
Vivaan : Soo What ?? Vivaan also said raising his eyebrows!
Suraj looked at them confused!
Breaking the ice imli said
Imli : So what is Cooking in your mind?
Suraj : I don't know cooking he said cutely
Vivaan : Bad joke dude
Imli placed her hand on vivaan and said : Something - Something is happening!
Vivaan also in a teasing look said " yaa something -something is happening to suraj "
Suraj cutely but with little blushing : what something something
Then both vimli looked at each other and started singing " pyaar hua hei ikrar hua hei pyaar sephir kyoon darts hei di" and vivaan was dancing the same step that suraj did when he came!
Both vimli started laughing and suraj turned red due to blushing!
Vivaan : So tell me ,where were you last night?didn't see you at home !saying this he winked at imli
Imli also joined him
Imli : you know vivaan ,Maai told me that didi was also not there at home last night!
Vivaan : Ohh chakor was also not there at home ?where would have she gone? Do you know suraj he asked while smriking at him
Suraj : How would I know ! He said avoiding eye contact

Imli hold his ears and said " you don't know naa you naughty boy"
Suraj wincing in pain said Nooo
"But we know" vimli said in union
Suraj looked at them helplessly and vimli was standing in front of them crossing their hands waiting for his reply!
Vivaan : will you speak or not
Imli : so tell us yaar...common dude
Suraj gave them a full fledged smile ,which said everything vivaan engulfed him in a hug
Imli : what about me she complained while pouting
Suraj : hey drama queen are you coming or not !
Imli also joined them and trio share a group hug!
Vivaan : your eyes speaked what's in your heart ,now I wanna hear it from your mouth !
Imli : Metoo...!
Suraj : So then listen it from my mouth then, when I am closing my eyes I could see her,when I am taking my breath I could feel her and my heart my soul and my mind is only thinking about her ...I am restless in her absence ,I am feeling incomplete without her ...my heart only beats for her...she is the only person in my life whom I feel I have full right on too whom I could say YOU ARE MINE ...and she is CHAKOR my WILD CAT my LOVE!
Imli was teary eyed ,tears of happiness were falling down her cheek! Vivaan came and side hugged her ...
Vivaan : I am happy for you my brother,still can't believe ,it's a history dude ...finally TOM & JERRY fallen in LOVE
Imli : I am the happiest,I know suraj you love my dii very much I could see it your eyes!
Suraj : if your emotional drama is over ,can I ask you something
Vimli : What??
Suraj : Actually...I mean actually who is Jerry ..me or her?
Vimli : what??
Imli : you won't change duffer!
Vivaan : yeah ,chakor kept him right name idiot
Suraj pouted cutely and said " I know I am jerry"
Vimli shouted Nooo
And trio started laughing
Vivaan : Soo did you tell her your feelings?
Suraj nodes in no
Imli : what ,you didn't propose her till now! ...you had good chance yesterday!
Suraj : how can I propose her yesterday when I realize my feelings for her today?
Vimli looked at each other confused and then suraj narrated them the whole incident .
Vivaan : Soo you wanna know Chakor's feeling?
Suraj : Right !
Imli : what if she ...
Suraj : doesn't like me right !
Imli nodes Suraj sadly said " I don't know what I will do then!"
Vivaan : don't loose hope yaar ! We two are with you! If she doesn't love you then we will make her fall for you!
Hearing this imli & suraj's face light up!
Imli : Finally you spoke something sensible !
Vivaan : What do you mean ,I am always sensible !
Imli : hahaa stop telling joke !
Vivaan : May be after staying with you I became like this ! Poor mee he said cutely !
Imli : What did you say ? Saying this she started chasing him and started hitting with pillow and vivaan also took a pillow both started pillow fight in bed ! Suraj sat in sofa and was enjoying the scene ...and started adding fuel to their fight !
Suraj : you know imli ,vivaan was complaining to me that you took 3 hours to get ready and smriked to himself!
Imli hitting him hard with pillow says" I only took 20 minutes to get ready and your saying I took 3 hr you idiot,I won't spare you"
Vimli : you take more than 3hr to get ready and I get bored waiting! and started hitting her back
Suraj started laughing seeing their cute nokh-jhok.
Suraj : Arehh vivaan you know imli was saying you spoke more sweeter to your P.A than her
Vivaan : ohho you are saying I spoke more sweeter to my p.A ... and started hitting her with pillow and feathers from pillow was lying in air
Imli : you spoke to that crazy girl more sweetly,than to me okk ...

But suddenly they realized the cupid in their fight and turn towards suraj who was laughing holding his stomach,
Vimli : SURAJ
Suraj : I am dead now
Vivaan : we are trying to set your love story!!
Imli : and you are making us fight you duffer!
Vimli : you are gone dude! Vimli smriked at suraj
Suraj : guyss
Before he could say anything vivaan throwed pillow feathers own him and imli poured the jug of water by her side
Suraj was numb ! He was looking like a wet cock ! Vimli give HiFi to each other and laughed at suraj!
Suraj : I won't leave you two monsters and he started chasing them they get out of room and suraj bumped into Ranjana who got scared seeing suraj and started her drama!
Ranjana : save me ! Help me someone ! Ghoost! Ghoost !
Vimli and suraj laughed at her!
Suraj : you guys made me wet cock he said while pouting!
Vivaan : hahaa you are a lol,so get ready to go behind Chakor
Imli : soo mission chakor and forwarded
Vivaan & suraj kept their hand over her and trio started boiling their heads whole night for Sukor love story to happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#7
Part-7
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-7/

This epi will contain #suvimli njokh-jhok & Sukor Milan#

(Suvimli decided first suraj should meet chakor.He should find out why she left him without informing as chakor is very responsible and kasturi has informed imli that after she came back her mood is off.)

Next day

The sun is shining bright and so do our suraj, he is not less than sun. He is also glowing ...he is smiling after ages...his happiness is visible in his eyes...he is getting ready to meet his lady love...so he is confusion what to wear?? Should look handsome naa
He tried about 15 shirts and is not happy with any of these and sit with a sad face!
Vivaan : how much more time will you take!
Imli : we are leaving you come by yourself!
Saying this imli dragged vivaan and was about to go when suraj opened the door wearing white shirt and blue jeans looking handsome as always.
Imli : wow jiju ...your looking hot
Vivaan : what about me ?
Imli showed like vomiting and suraj giggled at her act...and poor vivaan showed a puppy face
Suraj : if your drama is over let's go
Vimli : look who is saying! You made us wait 3 hour...both of them shouted at suraj,but he didn't give them a heed ,he dragged both of them to jeep and ragini was watching all this,far away
Vivaan : Somebody is in a hurry and winked at suraj ...imli laughed a bit.
Suraj glared him through the front mirror.Vimli was sitting at back side and suraj was driving!

Suraj heart beats started raising... Only his moments with chakor was coming to his mind...a special anxiety and excitement was filled in him,as if he was going to meet her after ages!
Finally ,finally they reached !
Suraj step out from the jeep ,so do vimli! Vimli was standing in the left and right of suraj! Suraj took a deep breath and vimli showed their support by placing their hands on his shoulder!
Suraj then went to window side and peeped in through the window...imli's mouth was wide open seeing this...
Suraj : I think kasturi and bhuvan left for work ...he said to them while peeping into window.
Then he turned to see imli,who was about to gulp him and his idiot brother who is laughing at his state.
Vimli : really?you duffer ,you were taking this much starting trouble to look through this window! You are unbelievable suraj and started laughing!

Imli : both brothers are same! Shameless she said dramatically
Suraj and vivaan give her a idiotic smile and imli nodes her head in disbelief.

To change the topic ,vivaan started his teasing process "maai & baapu are not here,hmmm..."and smiled naughtily at suraj "that means she must be alone" and winked at suraj who is blushing hard.
Suraj : vivaan ...I will see you later.
Imli : will we stand like this ,whole day??let's go inside
Vimli then started moving to the door.
Suraj : Excuse me...where are you both going?
Vimli with a confused look..pointed to house.

Suraj : I mean ,is it necessary for you guys to come...he said while scratching his head!
Imli holdes his ears and vivaan gives him death glares...
Imli : yesterday you were begging to us for coming .you flooded the house with your crocodile tearsdramebaaz
Vivaan : today when you came to know that Maai baapu is not at home ,you changed the plate...cheater cock
Suraj gave them a cute smile( awww soo cute)
Vimli was annoyed suraj hold his ears ohh my monsters sorry guys...sorry ...sorry...plzz ...plzzz
Vimli smiled at his cute antics
Imli : so jiju ,don't waste your time...knock the door ...we will hide their.
Vivaan give him a smrik
Suraj : guys what if I enter the house without her knowledge and give her surprise.
Vivaan : Not bad bro! Never thought your brain will also work he said dramatically
Suraj : will you stop joking and start thinking! I mean How can I enter the house without her knowledge?door should be opened by her naa?
Vivaan : point
Imli : when imli is here not to fear. Kitchen's will not be locked! So you can go through there...
Suraj : your are the best imli...vivaan learn something from your wife and winked at him.
Vivaan : now you go and enjoy bro and smriked at him.
Suraj : till I come you to enjoy bro and smriked back at him.
Both vimli was embarrassed...suraj then rush to kitchen...

Chakor came out from the bathroom wiping her head with towel she was wearing a white salvar and was looking like an angel...she suddenly remembered an incident with suraj...on the Day after their wedding ,at morning suraj coming out of washroom...wearing a towel and he started flirting with her then they started their njok-jhok and tashan and then she temembered when she was about fall how he holded her...everything was flashing to her mind!...a small smile occupied her pinky lips...but suddenly it faded when reality struck her! When she came from her dream world suddenly she saw suraj in front of her,he was coming closer to her and she was in shock & moving her steps backward ...she then hitted to the wall and suraj came more closer to her,she closed her eyes in fear after sometimes she opened the eyes and find suraj no were! A tear drop occupied her eyes ...she was missing him badly...she is feeling emptiness all around...she is only thinking about him. ...and is now living in his memories.
She then came towards her shabby mirror which is little broken just like her,to wear her earing .just then her eyes glued to the mangalsutra which she kept on the table before going for bath!
Mean suraj is seen entering the house through kitchen!...
Back to chakor who is looking at mangalsutra:

Chakor's POV:
What is the meaning of wearing this mangalsutra as there is no meaning for our relationship! Its just name sake,suraj don't even care if I wear it or not and this sindhoor on whose name should I put ...he wanna kick me out of his life...not this mangalsutra but my life became meaningless...
Clearing all her thoughts she was about to wear her earing ,Suddenly she saw an image of a person in the mirror...she looked once again and her heart beat started raising,she was numb and is not moving from that position ...suraj was standing behind her and was mesmerised seeing her...many emotions were jugling through them... ( the song mohabbat barsa dena tuu saavan aaya hei plays in B.g)

Their eyes reflected the affection,love and care for each other and most importantly the longing for each other ...he started moving closer to her...she could feel his presence,his gaze on her ...both of them are not taking their eyes from the mirror...he was just behind her...he gently holded her hand which has earing he took it from her and moved towards her ear...and looking at her through the mirror he made her wear the earing...her body was shivering feeling his touch! Her nervous system stops responding,she is enjoying this moment with him. Then his eyes catch hold of the mangalsutra and sindhoor placed at the table...he took the mangalsutra she looked at him through mirror ...he made her wear the mangalsutra...she closed her eyes and a tear drop escaped from her eyes...suraj now made her face him and gently wiped her tears...both were looking at each other lovingly...he then took the sindhoor and filled her forehead...then suddenly chakor hugged him it was indeed a bone crushing hug,suraj was at shock first then he too hugged her...she was crying hardly...bursting out all her feelings.. All her pain...suraj was feeling her pain and tears started flowing down from his eyes too...they never uttered a word...it was complete silence...

PRECAP : 1.Sukor njok-jhok.
2. Chakor remembering about
Divorce papers.
3.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Part -8
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-8/


" relations are complicated, if love completes a relation then pain binds the relations"

The scene begins with chakor breaking the hug and looking at suraj full confused, am i dreaming him again?? is it really him,she then pressed the mangalsutra on her neck tightly to check wheather its reality or not..so its him only. mean while suraj is lost in her deep brown eyes...he missed his wild cat sooo much that he don't wanna take his eyes off from her.
Breaking her thought suraj shooked her up and she gived him a irritated look.both started their njok-jhok ,chakor forgetting her bitterness and suraj unaware of the upcoming hurdels.
Suraj : where were you lost?...hmm I know you were lost on me right! He said while smriking naughtily and chakor's mouth was wide open .she was lost in his charm.
Suraj :its not your problem chakor! I am soo hot and dashing that every girl dream about me.
Chakor :ohhh ...helloo.Don't dream soo high, me and that too lost on you impossible you idiot. Have you seen your face ,if not let me tell you it's a combo of dog and buffalo's face .
Hearing this suraj was in shock ,he imagined himself as monkey sitting on tree and scratching all over his body then he imagined him as a buffalo playing in mud in paddy field and crying...chakor was laughing seeing suraj's expression while he was thinking.
Suraj : look who is saying ...you know what your face is a combo of dog and hippopotamous ...doghippoo...he yelled at her then started his imagination process and started lauging holding his stomach.
Seeing him chakor was boiling in anger.
Chakor : stop it you idiot!
Suraj: aww looks like my doghippoo is angry on me
Chakor: stop calling me that
Suraj : what ?
Chakor : that
Suraj :"I don't know what your saying doghippoo"he said while stressing the word doghippoo
Chakor after thinking something said naughtily :aww my buffmonkey don't know what I am saying.let me give you some bananas then you will know buffmonkey ...she said while stressing the word buffmonkey.
Suraj : hey don't call me that
Chakor : "what " And smirked at him.
Suraj :urghh your impossible.
Chakor : now stop your drama and get lost...wait a second how did you get In to the house she said suspiciously
Suraj give her a idiotic smile of thousand watt
Chakor took a pillow from bed and threw at him" you theif"
Suraj : what ? I came to my sasural what's the big deal
Chakor :sasural?? Seriously haahaaa are you my wife or what .
Suraj bited his tongue
Suraj : my house is your sasural so your house is mine..he said to coverup the embaraasement...
Chakor: okk then you stay here its your sasural right
Suraj : why not!
Chakor : and I will stay in haveli
Suraj : why ?
Chakor: its my sasural
Suraj gave her death glare and she started laughing ...
Chakor :okk then tell me why you came here and that too like a theif? She said raising her eyebrow
Suraj : we met after 24 hours and your asking me how I came ? why I came rather than asking how I am?he said while pouting..
Chakor : I know you will be happy without me and would be enjoying...thats what you wanted right? She said while turning her face ,coming out from her happy phase and remembering her painful reality,now her eyes are wet,tears started oozing out from her eyes.suraj was now facing her back so he did'nt notice her tears.
Suraj was first taken aback hearing her words then he thought she is still in irritating mode and said it on a flow..so he continued irritating

Chakor POV

Why does he affect me soo much ,he could make me smile even in worst condition just like now, he could even make me forget my pain,like now...why did I even speak to him ? how can I forgot what he is doing to me .even after knowing his true face why can't I hate him and why can't I stop myself from doing silly fights with him...why can't I stop lov...i..n..g...before completing the sentence she started crying silently
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suraj was super happy because a while ago she was hugging and crying him now she is back full of life. suraj came to her and put his hands over her shoulder,before he could see her tears she wiped them hurriedly and thought how much more will he stoop low and how much more will he act!
Suraj: yup ,you are right I was super happy in the past two days...and he thought his return from gavi ,how he realized his love for her and everything a small smile occupied his lips and he is looking at chakor.
mean while chakor rememberd today morning incident which she forgot for a moment
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[ FLASHBACK :
chakor thought to take a morning walk she was far away from home ,suddenly her eyes caught three familiar figures it was kamal narayan,ragini and ranjana.
ragini : i will broke that chakor into million pieces that it will take ages to join her together.she failed my every plan but this time my plan is intresting as its a game of love and if it works out chakor is gone.she only have her mental strength left we will break that soon.
kamal narayan : once chakor is clean bowled we can easily take control over village people.
ranjana: i must say ragini what an excellent planning you did...first you patched up kamal jii and suraj .
hearing this chakor shocked then realized that suraj is only acting in front of ragini.
ranjana : then you planned the kiddnaping drama...you kidnapped sukor and vimli
hearing this chakor's jaw drop because suraj & imli planned to act infront of kn after kiddnapping drama.
kn : that drama was really fun
ragini : yes suraj was able to gain their trust from that single kidnapping drama. that made our work more easy, and for executing our plan swiftly only i asked suraj to make imli and him act like being our side so that we could communicate and they won't have any doubt.
ranjana : till now everything is going per plan and now waiting for the impact of our game of love.
kn: i hope suraj will make her fall for him... i asked him to give her love for a lifetime that when he leave her she should only think about death...hahhaaa...but it won't be soo easy as he think ,i have tried numerous time to break her in childhood,all went vain,her heart its made of strong hopes,dreams and love...we can only shatter her by love.
ragini :but suraj is doing a great job!my bhai really is a romantic hero...i wish she has no doubt because bhai told me that she left without informing him when they went to gavi.
kn : i don't want this plan to fail!
ragini : today bhai is going to meet her,we will soon know wheather our plan fails or not.don't worry papa i promise you that the girl who made you suffer in jail will suffer like hell this is my promise to you.
chakor was shocked hearing all this ,they know each and every moment of her,suraj was acting like being with them but was actualy on ragini's side...her world turn upside down once again ,now she could read everything clearly ,the sink of divorce paper and why he did not tell her about divorce paper and why he is acting sweet infront of her
she ran to her room and locked her self inside and started crying vigoursily...the song khoo ghaya dil khoo...chunariya from badlapur plays in b.g
she was keeping on thinking about suraj and their lovely moments,she is missing him badly ,he was the ray of hope in her shattered life and her maai came in and saw chakor face which is pale and her eyes which are swollen ,kasturi asked her to get freshen up and told her that they are leaving for work.she went to take bath.
FLASH BACK ENDS
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mean time AT haveli
ragini : give me information about each and everything happening their
ragini roared to her men through phone,he was stalking vimli and sukor and sending their pictures to ragini.
kn : calm down ragini ,we have ignited fire in chakors mind ,i am sure it will spread soon.
ragini : instead of that idiot it would have been better if you went to stalk them she said while pointing to ranjana
ranjana : what you mean? why will i do his work she said while muching popcorn.
ragini : you are expert in stalking,if you was not their how will we came to know what was cooking between four.
flash back shows ranjana hearing what suvimli was saying as she was passing by the way...she heard everything including the gavi trip that sukor went ,his love confession,their talk on how chakor went without informing suraj and their planning to meet chakor tomorrow...as she was standing in front of door when suraj came out with pillow feather all over him she got scared.
kn : yaa it would have been better if we sent her!
ranjna : are you both praising me or making fun of me .
ragini : both. but now lets concentrate on this. i wanna break their union and one by one need to finish them all.
ranjana : excluding my son!
ragini: whatever...don't know whats happening ,i hope our plan works and sukor split apart.

At chakor's house :
chakor came out of the flash back ,the words of kn and ragini are haunting her...their laughs are echoing in her ears...when she close her eyes she could see only the divorce papers...she have forgotten about this mess for a moment but now its haunting her and she is unable to hold on and she is at the peak of frustation,anger...she feel cheated but at the same time from the corner of her heart she feels suraj is innocent his eyes only shows his love for her, beacuse whenever she seems his eyes he forget the world and will be completly lost in them,because her heart still beats for him,his presence make her forget the rest but her mind keep on saying " he does'nt love you " " he does'nt love you " ...its hard to digest for her but she is trying hard to store it on her head...so as always mind wins over heart...logic wins over feelings...she concluded and inscribed her love ,the love of her life ...whom is her world does'nt love her and is cheating on her.
suraj was still looking at her ,she came out of her thought and moves towards him his heart beat started raising due to her proximity ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Part -9
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mine-sukor-part-9/

suraj was still looking at her ,she came out of her thought and moves towards him his heart beat started raising due to her proximity ...

chakor :" you did'nt answer me suraj! "she said in a cold voice "why did you came here".
suraj : to see you...he said cutely.
chakor : why? who am i to you Mr. Rajvanshi...she said angrily
suraj was boggled by her sudden change in reaction...
chakor :" who am i to you Mr.Rajvanshi ?" she yelled at the top of her voice "your wife? your friend or...your enemy?"...she said with a burning heart and teary eye.
suraj : chakor are you okay? is everything alright?why are you behaving so wierdly...A minute ago you were hugging me and crying then you fought with me and was smiling happily and now you are angry at me...i am not able to understand you?
chakor : Thank God that i was able to understand your true colour...
suraj : what are you saying? hey you are playing some prank right?

chakor : stop it suraj , i should have thought earlier that you are unchangable, Like father like son...you were the shadow of your father and will always remain like that..you are a cheater...she said while tears were flowing down her eyes unstoppably.
chakor: what did you thought uhh you will play with my feeling and i won't know about it ...i thought you changed and became a good person but i was wrong in knowing you...you are the same old ruthless guy,you can never ever change...

suraj : CHAKOR! its enough...stop this bullshit! what are you blaberring? what have i done that you feel i am a cheater? tell me?what have i done that you think i am still like my father ?what did i do that you are giving me soo much pain?
chakor : don't act innocent suraj! you know pretty well what i am saying? and i must say what an actor you are she said while clapping her hands ...you have succeded ,you have broken me,you have destroyed me are you happy now ?are you happy seeing you your enemy in this state.
suraj : i cannot even think of hurting you, i can do anything for your smile...i think there is some misunderstanding? you are getting me wrong?
chakor: i was getting you wrong till yesterday but now i can see everything clearly? she said remembering the divorce paper then what ragini is saying...leave mr.rajvanshi from my house and from my life.

suraj was stunned by her words
suraj composing himself said" on what basis are you taking this decision ,to make me out of your life"
chakor : on the basis of the truth.
suraj holds her by her shoulder and pinned her to the wall both are having a painful eyelock.
suraj: then let me tell you something chakor ,this is not the truth ...this is not the truth..he shouted at her in full range.
chakor : it is the truth and she pushed and moved away from his grip.
suraj : you are wrong chakor ,you are wrong ... i don't know what is the reason for which you are punishing me like this,but i know one thing its not the truth...you are wrong for the first time,get one thing in to your head you may not be always right...and he was walking to the door.

chakor : you will get the divorce paper soon...which you wish for?
suraj became lifeless hearing this it was like someone took away his soul from him...suraj turned and give her a fake smile
suraj: "i wish for or you wish for?" he said looking at her "there was a time when i wished for it and you did'nt fullfill my wish...this time you are wishing for it and yaa i will fullfill your wish unlike you."
chakor was silently hearing his words,now again her heart and mind are batteling each other,mean while suraj is trying to walk,his eyes are filled with tears,his heart has become heavy,he remembered all their beautiful moments together now everything will remain as a memory itself...his dreams his hopes everything is shattered...now he turned back and looked at her once again

suraj : chakor trust me for once ,i really don't know why are you behaving like this , i have no idea about what your speaking...you should atleast give me a chance to prove myself...tell me atleast whats
he was cutted by chakor
chakor : leave suraj ! just get lost from my sight! i don't wanna see you...I HATE YOU.
suraj was was hell angry at her
suraj : Have you lost it chakor? what have i done that you are doing this much drama huh... i don't even wanna know what your telling...what is point of knowing the reason unless you trust me?. Is our relation so weak that you won't even give me a chance to make you understand ...NO how will the great chakor believe me ...for you what you think and what you believe is the truth...you cannot be wrong ,right...you are always true...keep on thinking like that ,now i don't even care because now i realized that...there was nothing between us as per you...you did'nt even consider me as a friend...you have hurted me badly chakor...what did you say i have broken you and destroyed you...nope you have broken me and destroyed me completly...i hate my self for lov...suraj think about how he realized his love for chakor his eyes got wet then he remembered her words "your were the shadow of your father and will always remain like that" "you are a cheater"...these words are piercing his heart...he looked at her in full rage,anger and pain and said...it was you who created the goodness in me , the sweetness in nor it came from myself nor i was acting and now you only killed it...its good to be a bad boy...no pain,no vain...good bye
after suraj left ,chakor started crying thinking about her fate..

vimli was waiting for suraj for a longtime now,they were ready to tease him up and was very much excited to know what had happened.suddenly they saw suraj walking in full rage to the jeep,vimli who approached him find something fishy...they were about to ask something when suraj asked them to get in...he was drive in fullspeed to the haveli...imli started praying bhajaan ...vivaan is shouting at suraj to lower the speed but suraj was hearing only chakors words,it was echoing in his head...he was getting mad...his eyes turn red in anger,they some how reached haveli ...without uttering a word suraj went inside...vimli looked at him and then looked at eachother .

[ the stalker had send some pictures of sukor and suraj coming out of the house to ragini...from suraj's face expression itself they could make out what had happened...]
ranjana : they have came...hehee
ragini : so lets begin the show,are you ready papa?
kn : hahaha...yes beta
suraj was about to climb the stairs when kn stopped him. suraj was much irritated but he still went to him.
suraj : yes papa
kn : you were so busy that you did'nt even notice when i returned
suraj : nothing like that ...
kn : okay, is my work done?
suraj : what work?

ragini : you good for nothing creature you forgot what papa told you
before ragini could speak further she felt a muscular hand on her cheek and the next minute she was on the ground...everyone looked at shocked ...suraj was burning in anger ,his eyes were blood red...even kn got scared seeing him...ragini was holding her cheek and was looking at suraj...suddenly ragin's men was about to hit him and ragini was smiling seeing it ...suraj took his gun ,without thinking twice he shoot at him and the bullet pierced his shoulder and the man was crying in pain...vimli who saw the scene from the entrance got shocked...
suraj pulled ragini by her hair and made her stand and held her hair more tightly,she was wincing in pain but her anger was visible in her eyes...he held the gun in her forehead...kn and ranjana got scared.ranjana fled from the scene
vivaan : suraj are you gone mad ? leave her!
kn : suraj beta...she is your little sister ,leave her
suraj to ragini : don't even dare to raise your voice next time otherwise i won't even think before pulling the trigger he pushed her to the floor and he made his way to his room.

imli : suraj babu
vivan : what ?
imli : suraj babu and looked at vivaan
vivaan understood what she meant
vivan : what happened between sukor that our duffer is behaving like before
imli : we gotta findout
meanwhile ragini was screaming
ragini : how dare he slap me...i will kill him!!
vimli did'nt give her much heed and left to their room to discuss about sukor.
kn : stop this drama ragini ,you spoiled everything ...you deserve it
ragini : papa!! shouted ragini
kn : i was handiling him well why did you pop your head in it?
ragini : you are thinking about the plan rather than my insult.
kn : we can make up for your insult...we will pay back with double intrest but now its not the right time.we cannot loose this chance did you get what am i saying?
ranjana from behind : no
ragini to ranjana : for that you need brain.
ranjana : ok.
ragini : i got it papa ,i am sorry!
ranjan to ragini : what you mean by that , i am brainless
ragini : ya you are a brainless bimbo
kn : stop it both of you.we have to concentrate on suraj now ,he is a wounded lion much stronger and more than that he is very dangerous ...but people stop thinking in anger,we should make use of that.
ragini : what you mean?
kn : you got angry on suraj ,instead of controlling yourself and work according to our plan ,you bursted out at him without thinking,same way we will manipulate him,i don't think we should put much effort...hahhaa
ragini & ranjana : your awesome.
vimli decided to meet suraj after he cools down while kn,ragini and ranjana went to him
suraj was sitting on the bed ,he was totally broken...he remember his childhood how he used to crave for love from his parents and how they ignore him and get themselves busy in their crimes and greed...then he remember his life which was nothing but a waste... from childhood itself he found happiness in alcohol which was only his true friend,who stays by his side always unlike others ...then he remember the entry of chakor in his life ,then he remember how she took over the place of alcohol...she became his addiction she became his medicine...now everything back to square 1,he is left behind with his same old friend alcohol...he was about to take a sip of wine when kn stopped him.

kn : what are you doing ? you had stopped drinking right? now you started again?
suraj was hell irritated by his nonsense so make him leave soon he patiently listened to his crap.
suraj : come to the point papa,i know you don't care wheather i drink or not so stop this drama!
kn : nothing like that suraj, actually i came to tell you sorry on behalf of ragini ,forgive her suraj she is still kid and yaa i am also angry at you for forgetting my work you have promised me you will do it
suraj : which work are you talking about?
kn : about your and chakor's divorce...did you get it signed? if not go and get it signed soon.
suraj: divorce paper??

then suraj slowly try to recollect that day yaa, everything started due to this divorce paper,he went to chakor, to take her sign on the paper but ended up going out with her,then what ever happend flashed as mini movie in his head...suraj expression changes to that of a wild animal who is completly wounded...her words are stabbing him to and fro again and again...he could hear them clearly " you will get the divorce paper soon"...he got angry remembering that more that it pained him to hell...kn was carefully examining suraj...ragini & ranjana was watching everythig hiding behind the door.
suraj : yaa i remember now...he said angrily.
kn : so have you get it signed?
suraj : no
kn got angry hearing this but he supressed his emotion as he rembered ragini's state.
kn : go and get it signed!

suraj : no
kn ,ragini & ranjana was shocked hearing this they thought their plan had flopped.
kn : why? don't you want divorce from her?
suraj : why should i go and get signature from a bandhuva? she should come here and get it signed ...she is only a mere slave ,why will i go to her...
kn : now your speaking like a rajvanshi
suraj : yaa i am a rajanvashi and remembers chakors word you are the shadow of your father and will remain like that...he shouted at the top of his voice i am a rajvanshiii...i am your son...i am your shadow!!...
kn was shocked by his statement meanwhile ragini was getting jealous and ranjana was enjoying the scene...
kn : ragini !!!called out kn
ragini : haa papa ...
kn : bring that girl here...we have to make her sign the papers
suraj : i lost the papers...get a new one.
ragini was about to say something when kn signalled her to not
ragini : ok ,i will call the lawyer and ask him to bring the papers ...and also i will get that girl...she said angrily and left the place...

NEXT DAY MORNING:
chakor is pulled by ragin's men to haveli they were followed by bhuvan and kasturi whom are hell worried and trying to free their chakoriya from ragini's men
chakor : leave me ,i said leave my hand raskels!
kn,ragini and ranjana were sitting in the hall waiting for her arrival...meanwhile vimli cameout from their room and tejaswini from kitchen hearing her voice ...then suraj is seen coming down with full swag looking total bad a*s...first thing he notice is ragini's men holding chakor's hand ...his blood starts boiling...he came down and signled the men to leave ...and he came sat in middle of ragini and kn...vimli & tejaswini were standing and watching everything.
chakor : what the heck? why you brought me here
kn : to get my son freedom from you ...
ragini : let me clear the confusion, for your divorce...
chakor and suraj looked each other and shared a brief eyelock...
chakor : i am ready to give him divorce ,i don't wanna be in a relation with a cheater...so why this drama?
vimli and tejaswini was shocked hearing chakor's statement and kn,ragini and ranjana were all smiling...suraj got angry
suraj : don't shout ...don't forget you are a bandhuvaa so stay in your limits...
chakor : i am not anyones slave
sukor was about to fight when lawyer entered the scene.
ragini was super happy and asked the lawyer to start the procedure...sukor who was fighting a second ago stop fighting...and looked at eachother helplessly...they don't wanna this to happen but their ego was stopping each other...
kn to suraj : go and sign.

bhuvan to chakor: chakoriya go and sign ,go get free from this relation...
suraj and chakor were moving to the lawyer from opposite direction...they are looking eachother with lots of pain,hatred and hidden love..they stopped when they are infront of him...their eyelock was breaked by lawyer with his shocking statement " This divorce can't happen"
sukor were super shocked and looked at lawyer with full confusion.
kn,ranjana and ragini together : what ?
lawyer : actually its not even 3 months since they married and only after 6 months they could apply for divorce?
ragini : you idiot why did you say it before
lawyer : sorry mam i only checked the marriage date yesterday...

ragini : you useless...ragini was cut by kn as always
kn : so what can we do now?
lawyer : suraj and chakor should stay together for 3 more months and then only they could apply for divorce, for easy legal procedure and to avoid further legal problems they should stay together...saying this lawyer left the haveli as there is no use of him staying...
it took a second for sukor to understand what is happening ? and what will be happening next? after their tubelight glowed ,they shouted together "NOOO" and turned their faces...
kn was having heart attack,ragini wa feeling dizzy and popcorn was stuck in ranjana's throat... this song from singham returns plays in B.G, Mera solah ka dola ,chialish ki chaathi
seedhi baat bolun ,baatein ghumaani nahi aati
Aata majhi satakli

behind five of them there were three people who are smriking at them and giving hifi to each other ,they are vimli and tejaswini and vivaan is singing the song mera solah ka dola,chialish ki chaathi...imli and tejaswini are trying hard to control his excitement!!
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PRECAP: 1. Chakor staying in haveli
2. sukor full on tashan

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vimli and tejaswini are superb happy... flash back is shown how they get to know about kn-rag-jan plan

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FLASH BACK :
tejaswini came to ragini's room to call her for dinner,ragini was busy in call with their family lawyer and did'nt notice tejaswini,ragini also called some men and told them to bring chakor tomorrow to haveli after hearing this teju rushed to vimlis room and explained everything,they were shocked to know that sukor are planning to divorce...vivaan promised teju that they will unite sukor any how...vimli went to the lawyer as the lawyer was loyal to kn with no option left imli came to him in her hitler avatar ,they blackmailed the lawyer and found out a way to stop divorce and bring them together
FLASH BACK ENDS
]

suraj : i don't want to stay with this girl!
chakor : i am also not intrested to stay with a jerk like you
suraj : i told you before bandhuva cat,don't race your voice its my house
chakor : i also told you that i am not anyones bandhuva...
suraj : ohh really,you can hide this mark with the scaf but you can't hide the truth... the truth is you were ,you are and you will be a bandhuvaa...
tears are flowing down from chakor eye but more than her suraj is hurt,he wants to hurt her but by doing this he himself is getting hurt

vimli was shocked hearing all this they have no idea that what happened suddenly which turned everything upside down...kasturi was crying seeing chakor's state and bhuvan was consoling her...kn-rag was in trauma wheather they would make chakor stay ! after seeing they fighting like mad they thought there won't be any problem if chakor stay here and they can add more fuel to their fight and can have fun...
kn : suraj ,you stay with this girl for 3 months...
suraj: but i don't wan't to ...he shouted at him,everyone got scared
kn : only 3 months then you will be free from this girl,think suraj its for your own good!
suraj thought ,its really a good oppurtunity to make her life worse than hell, i will give her such pain that she will never ever forget in her entire life...its payback time ,you have hurted me badly chakor now its your turn,welcome to lions den,you will be hunt slowly but badly ...he thought while smriking
suraj : yaa papa you are right.
kn,ragini and ranjana smiled
chakor shouted: but i am not ready to stay with you
suraj : who asked you your permission ?don't you know bandhuvas don't have right to take decision they can only obey ...only obey
kn,ragini and ranjana were laughing hearing this...
chakor was about to leave haveli ,when suraj hold her hand ...she turned and they have an eyelock..."you are leaving huh got scared or what? he said while holding her hand tightly and she is wincing in pain " you only wished for divorce right, allow me to fullfill your wish " he said looking at her .
chakor : i just don't wanna be with you

Suraj : i am also not dieing to be with you...i am stuck with you...i thought you got scared? or i guess you have started having feelings for me that you are backing off from divorce...
chakor : neither i am scared of you nor i have any feelings for you
suraj : then proove it ...stay here
chakor looked at bhuvan and kasturi ,they also noded in +ve so chakor said: okay...
suraj pointed towards the room...chakor with full on attitude walked to the staircase followed by suraj ,now they ar walking together giving death glare to each other
sukor are having their telepathy ,i mean they are talking through mind after reading what each other is thinking
suraj in mind : welcome to my hell wifey! i will make your life hell
chakor in mind : we will see who makes whose life hell dear hubby!
suraj in mind : i will break your guts
chakor in mind : i will break your nuts
suraj in mind : let's see
chakor in mind : you just wait and watch what i do
they reach their room and suraj was about to step into the room when chakor pushed him aside entered the room with full swag while suraj stumbles and holds on to the door...chakor then turned back and looked at him
chakor in mind : how was my first dose and smriked at him
suraj in mind : Now its my turn and glared at her

suraj entered the room and closed the door with a THUD and smriked at her leaving her confused...he then started to unbutton his shirt and smiled naughtily, with half unbutton shirt he started approaching her...chakor got really scared and started moving backward...both of them are having eyecontact...he was enjoying looking at her scared eyes...he could also find the shyness in her which she is trying hard to pull off from her face...their heart beat started raising as they came closer...chakor now hitted on the bed...but still she could find suraj coming closer to her...she sat on the bed and started moving backward while their eyes are still meeting suraj was also now on the bed and is moving towards her... chakor stopped at the end of the bed ,before she could move off he blocked her...both were looking at each other suraj was already closer to her...he thought to clear the left out distance too...chakor closed her ...he is still coming closer...with his muscular hand he moved aside the hair strands on her face ...and slowly he took his hand and pulled her hair tightly making her wince in pain...she opened her eyes in shock and pain when suraj smriked at her

suraj : its just the beginning bandhuvaa cat...you know what, with this divorce i will get free from you...what about you? you won't get free from me ...you know why because you are my bandhuva...you are mine!
chakor glared him angrily and shouted leave me you idiot ...leave me
suraj hold her hair more tightly : is it paining chakor? i am hurting you ...aww so sorry...this pain which your feeling is nothing compared to mine
chakor : what pain did you have? you gifted me with pain from childhood...but now no more...leave me or else you will regret
suraj : what will you do ? and he smriked at her
chakor who got angry said " you are gone idiot " and then she started pulling his hair ,making him wince in pain...and she said " tit for tat Mr.Rajvanshi" and smriked at him
Both of them are pulling each others hair like monkeys
suraj : leave my hair you monkey girl!
chakor : you are the one who pulled my hair first...so you are monkey, duffer monkey man! first you leave my hair.
suraj : No first you leave.
chakor : No,you
suraj : No ,you leave...

both are giving death glares to each and are pulling eachother's hair ...chakor is pulling suraj to her side while suraj is pulling her to his side and both are blabbering something...chakor smiled devilishly...suraj found it to be wierd...chakor then pulled suraj's hair with one hand and started tickiling him with her other hand,suraj leaves her hair and started laughing ...hahaahaaa...heheehee...he is also laughing and giving death glares to her helplessly ...
chakor : told you naa you will regret and she gave a victorious smile...and tickeled him more...suraj is moving and shaking and laughing...seeing him chakor is also laughing...
suraj : haaa ...leave me you wild cat haaa hhaaa...he said while laughing
chakor : What will you do? and smriked at him...aww you are stuck honey!!she then showed her tongue and started making wierd cute faces making him angry but what could he do other than laughing...hahhaa ...heeheee
suraj : i won't leave you...hahaaa hhaaa
chakor : "i won't also leave you my cute hubby"...and started tickling more..."okk i will leave you say sorry to me"...

suraj : haaa ...i will die...haaa ...but won't say sorry to you wild cat...haaa..hehehe...
chakor : Then get ready to die of laughing...
suraj :haaa... you are heartless...haaa
chakor : you are ruthless...
after so much tickling and teasing chakor leave him...suraj was taking a sigh of relief...and chakor was leaving the bed but stumbles and fall on top suraj...suraj felt like a truck had fallen on top him...
suraj : Mummy...ahhh
chakor : Hey you cry baby shut your mouth
suraj : Hey you elephant ge off me, Are you planning to kill me?
chakor : How dare you call me elephant! and glared at him
suraj : stop staring my beautiful face moti,you are soo heavy...get off before i die out off oxygen..
chakor got up and glared at him
suraj : Thank god i am alive!

chakor's mouth was wide open hearing ,she hitted him with pillow
chakor : you go for gymming and have six packs...but its off utter waste ,you can't even hold my weight
suraj : Hello in gymm we excercise using weight plates not using elephants...
chakor : how dare you call me elephant you buffmonkey
suraj : stop barking you doghipoo he said holding her shoulder both are having a eyelock...They could see their journey together in eachothers eyes,from enemies to friends then back to enemies,life has always changed the equation between them...from their silly arguments till yesterdays fight...life has helped them to know each other,their diffrenet layers of characters but both of them did'nt utilize it completly...their eyes are moist...pain,anger and aggression have also occupied along with them...
sukor composed themselves without uttering a word suraj left the room and chakor sit their crying...

At kn Room
Ragini : Whats next ?
Ranjan : I am working on my brain!...she said while eating frymes
Ragini: go and make pickle using your brain
Ranjan : Why? Is it tastey?
Kn: will you shut up ranjana and work on your food.
Ranjan : Thats better...
Ragini : uff...what will i do with this bimbo? papa you tell what will we do next?
Kn : we should keep those two away and make sure that the misunderstanding that we have created is not cleared...if they talk and sort out thing then its over for us
ragini : ya you are right we will do something to keep them away...and not only that we should keep an eye on them
kn : yes!

AT Kitchen:
Imli was cutting vegetables when vivaan came an back hugged her
imli in shock : You shamless creature leave me!
vivaan : why should i feel shame to romance with my wife...he said naughtiley turning her facing him and holding her by waist
imli : what if someone sees go from here she said by leaving from his grip
vivan : NO...he said cutely
imli : Vivaan ...she said while blushing
vivaan : Give me my morning kiss
imli s mouth was wide opened : What? i already gave you right?
vivaan : So what ? I want one more...he said like a baby
imli : No way vivaan..you go
Vivaan : Before i go from here you should give me, otherwise i won't talk to you...he said turning his face in fake anger

Before imli could say anything tejaswini entered kitchen
tejaswini : vivaan beta,did you have break fast, you gotta go to mill right?
vivaan : yaa ,i had break fast
tejaswini : did you both talk to suraj and chakor?
Vivan : no...he said looking at imli showing fake anger
imli : no.. she said looking at him
tejaswini : don't know what happened between those two! she said worriedly
Vivaan : gotta find out soon, whatever it may be it is pretty serious otherwise they won't fight like this...
imli : we should talk to them seperately..
tejaswi : ya imli is right
vivaan: i will talk to suraj
imli : i will talk to chakor
tejaswini : hope everything sort out betweeen them and they stay happily like you two ,she said keeping her hands on their head and blessing them
vivaan : don't worry badi maa everything will be fine, and yaa i am leaving he said while looking at imli and smiling inside seeing her innocent tensed face...
tejaswini said okk beta and turned to drink water, suddenly imli give a peck on vivaans cheek and begin to cut vegetables as if nothing happened...and vivaan was standing numb holding his cheek...tejaswini after drinking water looked at vivaan who was standing holding his hand on his face
tejaswini : What happend to your face ?
imli acting concerned : Vivaan what happend ?...and smriked at him without tejaswini noticing it
vivaan : A mosquito has bitten me...he said looking at imli
imli glared at him and thought to teach him lesson when he come back and resumed her work without looking at vivaan...vivaan left the kitchen smiling ...

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PRECAP : Vimli talking to sukor trying to findout the reason for their bitterness.

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