sukor os fear of losing updated part 3

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Hey guys I am back so basically my os is on the recent emotional meeting of sukor where tomorrow may be suraj will die because shiku helped ragini to catch suraj so here it starts



After kamal nayan takes suraj to haveli chakor also comes to haveli to meet suraj both are restless to see each others pain because tomorrow morning may be suraj will die because bhya ji decide to give suraj punishment in front of whole village so both are feeling heartbroken suraj thinks that may be today is the last night of suraj in this world because tomorrow kamal naryan may be kill suraj in front of whole village he wanted to thank chakor for everything whatever she has done to save suraj many times he also realize that he started to love chakor he also don't know what to do ? Laugh or cry on his destiny that the day he realized he loves chakor is the last night of his life but he decided that before going to this world be will confess to chakor on the other side chakor's condition is also same because she knows that she started to love suraj she don't why god always snatch the persons she loves deeply after vivaan betrayal she thinks that she can't love someone else but after staying with suraj she realizes that she started to love suraj she also feels heartbroken that tomorrow may be kamal naryan will kill suraj so she decided to confess her feelings to suraj other side suraj also tries to talk to chakor


Suraj: I wanted to tell you something important ? Plz listen to me carefully and don't mind anything because may be after hearing my talk you will feel bad or hurt so promise me you will never angry on me?

Chakor: what do you wanted to say suraj? Don't worry I promise I will never feel bad or mind plzzz tell me


Suraj: chakor thanks for everything you did to save me from my evil father and sister you are the only one person in my life who always stood for me in my worst phase of my life I know no body can not do whatever you did for me you are such a great person not only mine but you save my mother whom I love so much saves many times thanks helping a goon like me I know I did too much bad deeds in my past that I deserved whatever is happening with me god punished me for my crimes I hurt you many times in my past sorry for whatever I hurt you but trust me today I realized that I started to love you I know you don't love me and why do you loves a goon?who always hurted you I just wanted to say that may be tomorrow morning I will die may be this night was the last night of my life I just wanted to spend this last night with you so that tomorrow i will die peacefully plz forgive me and forget my crimes I know I did not deserved Anyone's forgiveness but pllz take care of you're self and my mother also because I love her so much like I love you I don't know want to do ? I just don't know what will happened tomorrow?

Suraj started to sob very badly chakor is also crying hugging suraj because she knows that six anythy will happened to suraj she will also die she also feels and bad if any normal situation suraj confesses his feelings she feels so much happiness but today night no happiness will come sin their life she also cries with suraj both cry hugging each other tight both knows that maybe tomorrow they will be separated from each other forever


Pass aye duriyan phir bhi kaam naa hoe
In adhouri see humari kahani rahee
Asmaan ko zameen ye zarori nhi jaa mile
Ishq Sacha wahi jisko milte nhi manzileen
Rang the noir tha jab kreeb to tha ik jannat sa tha ye jahaan
Waqt ke rait paa khuch there naam sa likh ka chor gya tu kahaaan
Humari adhuri kahani
Hamari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Khosboon sa Teri yohin takra gai
Chalte chalte dekhona him kahani a gai
Janaten AGR yahin tu dekhen kyun nhi
Chand suraj San bhi hai yahan
Intizaar tera sadiyon sa kar RHha
Pyaasi behete hai kab sa yahaan
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Pyaas ka ye safar khtam ho jae ga
Khuch adhora sa Jo tha pora ho jae ga
Jhok gyaa asmaan mil gae do jahaan
Had tarf Milan ka hai sammaa
Doliyan hai sajee khushboien har kahi
Barhne aya khuda khud yahaan
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani
Humari adhuri kahani

Both fallen in sleep in each other arms in morning kml naryan takes suraj to village to kill suraj in front of whole village so that in future no body will be able to go against kamal naryan rajvanshi other side chakor also goes behind kamal naryan vivaan and imli calls police commissioner and tells the whole situation and pleads to save suraj other side bhaya ji stand in front of suraj and load his gun and press the string of gun but before bullet will harm suraj chakor comes between to save suraj and chakor gets shoot police comes and arrest bhaya ji and his goon with ragini and ranjana chakor is on on road with full of blood on her body the bullet hits on her arm suraj crying and hugging chakor to take ever hospital where doctos ask the nurses to take chakor in ICU suraj eyes are swollen because of crying endlessly suraj full fills the whole formalities after an one hour operation gets over doctor comes from ICU and tells suraj to pray that chakor will come to senses because if she will not comes to senses she will slip into coma suraj pryas to god save chakor he loves her he cannot live without her if anything will happened to her he will also die he goes to meet chakor where he hugs chakor and says I love you after hearing suraj voice she comes to senses and says

chakor: idiot don't cry what do you think I will leave you so easily not so soon. M.r rajvanshi you have to bear me and live with me forvever because I love you too I will never leave you so don't dreams of without living with me

After hearing chakor's voice and her love confession suraj gets very happy that now they both will live together because she too loves him suraj kiss on her forehead and kiss on her cheeks chakor also blush feeling that suraj kiss her after 3 days staying in hospital finally on chakor's wish doctor gives chakor discharge suraj welcomed her very well he also appointed one nurse for chakor so that she will completely fine soon after 2 weeks finally cahkor becomes again normal like before now she can use her arms and shoulders freely she feels so good suraj also happy for her health

So guyz this is it I had part 2 in my mind which is full of romance if good response will come I will definitely post it soon don't forget to hit the button of like and comments plzzz

Hey guyz I am back again thanks for love and support so the part 2 is mature content so be careful I don't wanted to hurt anyone's feelings so here it goes


Part 2 (16+)
In morning chakor takes bath and comes out from bath she is in just bathrobe which barely covers her hips reveling his creamy legs and also some parts of hips because it was too short suraj wakes up when he saw chakor in too short bathrobe which clearly shows her sexy legs and hips suraj forget to take breath and did not control on himself gets up from bed and starts getting close to chakor chakor also see suraj coming close she also starts to blush suraj comes close now there is no space between the their bodies are making nervous their physical proximity is driving them crazy suraj kisses her passionately on lips cheeks nose face eyes ear lobes neck jawline and cleavages chakor also responded with equal passion and starts shivering now suraj picked chakor in his arms and gently places on bed and leaves her chakor don't know the why suraj is stopped making her go crazy for him so she ask

Chakor: suraj why did you stop ? Don't you want something else ?

Suraj:no chakor actually doctor said that you're arms and shoulders are weak because bullet damages it badly so it's not a write time for this I will wait till doctor said that now you can do any thing from you're shoulders and arms then we will do this I love you not you're body I want you but I also want you to enjoy the pleasure of sex I did not force you for anything by forcing my self on you or by emotionally blackmail you I will wait don't worry I love you chakor suraj rajvanshi

Chakor eyes becomes wet after hearing the confession she hugs suraj kisses on suraj cheeks and runs from the room suraj was shocked that chakor kisses him the feeling of chakor's pink rosy lips on cheeks was overwhelming he just smile and blush

After 1 month both sukor goes for chakor's check up doctors said that now she can give pressure to her arms and shoulders now chakor decided to give suraj surprise so she decorated the whole room with roses petals and candles makes the favourite meal of suraj for their dinner other side suraj also buys diamond necklace with earnings for chakor to gift her and also buys a sari for chakor now suraj comes home and his room the room was dark he thinks may be chakor fallen sleep and turn of the lights so without making noise he locks the door and turn on the light he was shocked to see that chakor in red anarkali frock she is looking extra beautiful and gorgeous suraj forget to blink his eyes his lovely wife decorated the whole room and also herself just for the sake of his he get carzy now both hugs each other and kisses each other many times now suraj gives the shopping bag to chakor chakor opens the gifts one was beautiful sari and one was diamond jewelry now both share deep eye locks

Suraj: chakor do you likes the gifts?actually I never buys anything like saree and jewelry before if you don't like tell me I will buy another for you

Chakor :I love it suraj both gifts are amazing thanks for this gifts but I don't buy anything for you I am so sorry plz forgive me

Suraj: why do you think that you did not have gift for me you do so much me you're my gift chakor you will also gives me returned gift like you did kiss on my cheeks now I want many kisses and hugs from you that is my worlds best gift for me

Chakor: suraj you becomes shameless now a days don't feel shame on asking kisses from me ?

Suraj: why should I feel shame you are my wife I had rights on you and if you did not give me kisses and hugs I will takes it from some others girls you know na how much handsome I am in college life girls drool over on me

Chakor: (feeling jealous )suraj how dare you to think about any other girl if any girl try to comes close to you I swear I will kill that chudail and also you m.r suraj rajvanshi

Suraj: (liking chakor possessive behavior) oh so seems like that mrs rajvanshi is feeling jealous and possessive towards her husband I feel like someone is jealous now I will goes to others girls for Hugs and kisses you can do whatever you want to do

Chakor: if you will go to some other girls I will also flirts with others guys I know I am enough gorgeous and hot to make any guy crazy in my college life in Delhi guyz really admire me a lot infact my classmate also had interest in me I will also gives hugs and kisses to that guy m.r rajvanshi

Anger comes in suraj body his blood starts boiling on thinking about chakor will kisses other guyz he did not bear the fact that any other else guy touches chakor

Suraj: chakor I will kill that guy who even in dreams thinks to touching you so don't you dare to kiss and hugs any other guy in this life you are mine I love you and only mine understand that

Chakor: suraj I am just joking I am only you'res but promise me you will also did not hug or kiss any other except me I will not be able to think about that you are mine also

Suraj: I am also just joking about others girl the only girl in this earth whom I wanted to kiss,whom I wanted to take on bed, whom i wanted to make her mine, whom I wanted to make love is you I am only you'res I promise you

Chakor starts blushing she ask suraj to wait she goes to washroom for change she wears the saree whom suraj gifted her also wears the diamond jewelry opens her hair and comes out from washroom suraj was awestruck to see chakor beauty the red drak colour saree is perfectly looking on chakor' s creamy skin the blouse was sleeveless only one hook on back which reveal her slim belly her cleavages clearly the view of back was also amazing it was back less chakor milky skin of back was also reveal to suraj suraj mouth went dry he just picks chakor In his arms and gently places on bed he started kissing on eyes cheeks nose lips ear neck jawline cleavages chakor in shyness turns to other side now suraj slowly gives wet kisses on her back started to epen the hook of blouse suraj opens the hook and throw blouse on floor now because of shyness chakor covers her Breast with the net pallu suraj turns chakor on his side ask her to open her eyes she finally opens her eyes now he slide away the pallu the view of chakor's upper body is just owsome she is deadly drop hot and smoking her breast and nipples are visual treat for suraj he sucks and kisses on chakor' s niples and breast now on her belly she starts Moaning suraj removes the plates of saree and panty of chakor threw it on floor now he started to kiss on chakor' s legs and sensitive spots he taste each and every part of chakor's body now he slowly ask chakor are you ready? Chakor's gives nods suraj slowly puts his road inside her part she started to feel pains she starts crying suraj gently wipes the tears and calms her down now slowly he enters in her now he increase his speed chakor also felt big road inside her after 10 minutes she feels better pain was gone she also enjoying the pleasure of being completed now making love to each other they both sleep naked in each others arms sleeping peacefully

So guyz this is it if you want part 3 of sukor honeymoon do comments and don't forget to hit the button of likes plzzz don't forget to comments on part 2 I made it specially for All of you I am waiting for you're response if good response will come i will update part 3 which was my final part on this story


He y guyz I am back sorry for updating late so here it goes

Part 3 (16+)

In morning both love birds sukor wakes up in each others naked body both are blushing like tomato suraj pulls chakor toward his body kisses her passionately and wishes her good morning my lovely wife chakor also smile and wishes good morning both gets up from bed takes bath and feed each other break fast with hands after break fast he started to talk with chakor giving her side hugs and wet kisses on body

Suraj: chakor which kind of places you like for traveling tell me?

Chakor: why are you asking me tell me what is the reason ?

Suraj: nothing special just tell me naa?/don't you love me ?if you do then tell me now I am you're husband I should know about each and every thing you like or dislike now tell me

Chakor: I love you m.r rajvanshi you know this very well I love to go peaceful places like farmhouse because there was so much peace calmness are there so I love the places where people are very less I only loves the beauty of nature so I would love to travel any place like that my hubby OK now you get that what I like or dislike m.r rajvanshi

Suraj: I love you too mrs rajvanshi thanks for telling this now I had some important work so I will join you on lunch take care of you're self bye

Suraj hugs he r and kisses on her cheeks chakor started to blush and smile also wishes him the same

Suraj firstly go to shopping mall and buys some western and short clothes for chakor because he wanted to take chakor on honeymoon then he online searches about farmhouses finally visiing many farmhouses he liked one and buy the whole farmhouse for there honeymoon now he also ask some interior decorators to decorate the whole farmhouse like any new bride also ask them to make the mandap so that he will again married to chakor in farmhouse with full traditions he also buys a beautiful red lanhga for chakor with matching jewelry now he done very arrangement but in doing these these things he forget that he have to do lunch with chakor he forget about it completely because in arrangements he forget that clock strikes 7:00 pm he goes haveli to on 80 spped of car so that chakor will not angry on him other side chakor is feeling too much bad that she made the whole suraj favourite meal but he did not come since he left so she decided to teach suraj a good lesson suraj comes and hugs her but she pushes her aWay

Chakor: don't you dare to touch me m.r rajvanshi I am so much angry right now you made fun of me I made the whole meal with so much hardwork for you and you are coming on 7:00 pm don't you feel shame I hate you you hurted me so much don't come near me now I will go to my parents house you live here alone I am going

Suraj: listen cahkor listen to me plz don't go I am sorry really sorry I will never do it again chakor plz I love you na how can I stay without you whole night you know na plz forgive me naa

Chakor: you live without me like you stay all the day without me goodbye I am leaving


Suraj try his level best but chakor goes to her parents house stays whole night there she is missing suraj badly her mother made her understand that suraj is her husband she should also gives her respect and accept his apology after all if tomorrow you will do anything wrong then suraj also did not forgive you chakor understand that in morning she goes to haveli to talk with suraj she comes to there room where suraj is sleeping because whole night suraj did not even close his eyes heia missing chakor badly he is just waiting for morning so that be will goes to Chakor's parents house and and will convinced chakor to come back chakor admires sleeping suraj and sits besides her to waken up suraj wakes up shocked to see that chakor is in front of his eyes before suraj will say anything chakor speaks

Chakor: suraj I am sorry I should not leaves you like like this you have done a small mistake I got so much angry I know you had a on reason of being late but I am very bad I did not give you the chance to speak something forgive me plz

Suraj: don't be sorry it is my mistake you had a full rights on being angry on me I love you don't feel bad I had gone for our honeymoon preparations I am sorry that I did not tell you about anything

Chakor:don't be sorry I love you too you're doing so much for me and I got angry on you how stupid I am plzz forgive me

Both hugs each other and started preparations for honeymoon father 2 days they finally leaves from haveli and reached the farmhouse chakor was shocked to see such amazing farmhouse suraj shows her the farmhouse papers he named the whole farmhouse to chakor tears were rolling down from her cheeks AFter this suraj gives red lehnga to chakor and jewelry chakor comes out wearing the whole things looking beautiful suraj takes her to mandap where he carried chakor in his arms takes 7 pheras fills the sindoor in maang and make her wears the mangalsutar after completing the whole process they eat there dinner after eating dinner he picks her to his arms and takes her to there room where he decorated whole room for you wedding night suraj starts to removes the whole jewelry and opeens the Doris of blouse and throw blouse and lehnga to floor chakor is in just black strip bra and panty suraj gently places her to bed start kissing and suking every part of body like nose cheeks jawline cleavages breast nipples bell legs and sensitive spot's now he finally places his road inside her parts she also feels some big thing inside her both sleep in each others arms I morning cahkor wakes up takes the bath comes out wearing the mini black skirt also with red hot crop top also wears heels do light make up and comes on bed to stated to tease suraj suraj wakes up and shocked to see that cahkor is looking extra hot in mini dress which he gives to chakor He also pulls cahkor on his chest and started making love to her now both knows that there life will go to like this with making love sessions


So this is it how it is do comments on last part don't forget to like
Edited by bb14 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved this so much, you are an amazing writer please continue writing and Im looking forward to a part 2 😊😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome os savira dear..😊 khaash cv' s bhi aisa scene sochengaaa tho bohut achi honge hamariliye par Kya Karen.. u know what dear I always expected this scene but a slight different.. I always imagine that suraj should take the bullet meant for Chakor and Chakor will be the one to save him by praying, crying, motivating etce etc then only she will understand the values of suraj..😉😉 update ur 2nd part soon yaar..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wah, I want to cry... :'(
I LOVE this. It can't b a one-shot nooo! Update! Lol.

:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh that was so emotional! Do part two soon! Waiting eagerly!!
-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderful. ...waiting for the next part soon...when there were rumours started about bandwa track don't know why i had a feeling that at the end of this track KN and party will be arrested but I feel ragini may shoot suraj but nik of time chakor take the bullet. ..then Suraj's breakdown,emotional saga starts.,love realisation. ...
Even I was planning to write an OS on that. ...but you did it...welldone 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing!
Superbly written! Felt too emotional!
Pls cont soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 1 and 2 were great!!
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Part 2 is sooo hawt! 😳
Waiting for part 3!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Suraj doing all these preparation and being a lovely husband makes me to want to see him like this on TV soon!
Hope CVs will do the favor (I know that it will take a looong time for that)!😉


Suggestion : just do a new post in ur topic while u change the title so that v can know that a new part is added! It will help us to know the update!

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