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Posted: 8 years ago
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Akhi 😡 Since three days I am Crying atleast 50 times a day(reason i will tell you later in group) and now you gave me another reason to cry 😭
I should have guessed it from the title though
Sahas was right, I am crying while i am typing this 😭

Okay... the story was emotional, yes, but i don't know why it brought me a sense of emptiness and longing. I literally felt like I am right there, beside Suraj, listening his talk with his beloved wife.
And THAT proves, how beautifully you have written it with all your heart 👏
Yes, as you said, I did guess about Chakor's death from when I read Imli calls him sometimes.
The pain and agony of Suraj felt so heartbreaking that I didn't realize from where exactly I started crying.

To be honest usually I avoid reading these types of stories since it fills me with a certain kind of sadness, but it was YOU who wrote it and I couldn't bring myself to ignore it and I am glad I did read it because I loved loved loved the story

P.S: See I kept my record of commenting the last
❤️ 😆
P.P.S: I love you 🤗 ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BreakingBlue



Tu bhi na!🤣
Pari ke liye I should Res on both stories now!😆


❤️ 😆 🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: paridhi9797

Akhi 😡 Since three days I am Crying atleast 50 times a day(reason i will tell you later in group) and now you gave me another reason to cry 😭
I should have guessed it from the title though
Sahas was right, I am crying while i am typing this 😭

Okay... the story was emotional, yes, but i don't know why it brought me a sense of emptiness and longing. I literally felt like I am right there, beside Suraj, listening his talk with his beloved wife.
And THAT proves, how beautifully you have written it with all your heart 👏
Yes, as you said, I did guess about Chakor's death from when I read Imli calls him sometimes.
The pain and agony of Suraj felt so heartbreaking that I didn't realize from where exactly I started crying.

To be honest usually I avoid reading these types of stories since it fills me with a certain kind of sadness, but it was YOU who wrote it and I couldn't bring myself to ignore it and I am glad I did read it because I loved loved loved the story

P.S: See I kept my record of commenting the last
❤️ 😆
P.P.S: I love you 🤗 ❤️


Pari kaha gayab ho gayi tum? Sahas and me were so worried! 😭 Yes, please do tell us soon!
And please don't cry so much. Very worried right now.

RES for the last part of my comment. Pehle you tell what happened cause I really can't think straight.
And, UNRES. 😆

This was first time writing in second person for me.But somehow, though this is quite a sad piece, it's already one of my favorites!
And thank you so much for those huge compliments! Means a lot! 🤗

Hehe. Complete opposite there. Cause I love dark fics. 😈 And I'm glad you didn't ignore this one! 😳

Love you too! ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg... Like literally there are tears in my eyes..! Poor suraj i jst hate KN. like always it's an ironic os the way u described each and everything it was incredible n so emotional. which literally brought tears in my eyes. Great work.

P.s sometimes i wish i could write like u and connect with everyone through writing.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: revuvarun

Beautiful story dear...really beautiful...


Thank you so much! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya10

Omg... Like literally there are tears in my eyes..! Poor suraj i jst hate KN. like always it's an ironic os the way u described each and everything it was incredible n so emotional. which literally brought tears in my eyes. Great work.

P.s sometimes i wish i could write like u and connect with everyone through writing.


Aww! Thank you so much Sumi! ❤️
And that's a huge compliment for me right there! 🤗
Thanks a lot for that! 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's too heartbreaking.💔 But it was beautiful in it's own way!😭

My heart is in thousands of pieces. I don't know how you make yourself go through this pain while writing it! Amazing. Hats off to you!👏

Is love, indeed, this powerful?

-Sanu
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

It's too heartbreaking.💔 But it was beautiful in it's own way!😭

My heart is in thousands of pieces. I don't know how you make yourself go through this pain while writing it! Amazing. Hats off to you!👏

Is love, indeed, this powerful?

-Sanu


Aww Sanu! *hugs* 🤗
Well, since you're a writer as well, you'd definitely know what it takes to start a piece and take it through to the end. 😳
I really don't know what made me start writing this. But when I did read it after it was done, I found myself unable to swallow the lump when I read the part where Chakor dies. 😭

But I guess that's what made this piece beautiful for me. For the first time even I felt some thing reading my own work. ❤️ Happiness redefined.

Coming back, Thank you for your compliment! 🤗

And I can only imagine love, as of now. But I would surely love the answer to be Yes. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Extremely emotional,but simply beautiful.Thoroughly enjoyed the read!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

Extremely emotional,but simply beautiful.Thoroughly enjoyed the read!


Thank you so much! 😳

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