I should have guessed it from the title though
Sahas was right, I am crying while i am typing this 😭
Okay... the story was emotional, yes, but i don't know why it brought me a sense of emptiness and longing. I literally felt like I am right there, beside Suraj, listening his talk with his beloved wife.
And THAT proves, how beautifully you have written it with all your heart 👏
Yes, as you said, I did guess about Chakor's death from when I read Imli calls him sometimes.
The pain and agony of Suraj felt so heartbreaking that I didn't realize from where exactly I started crying.
To be honest usually I avoid reading these types of stories since it fills me with a certain kind of sadness, but it was YOU who wrote it and I couldn't bring myself to ignore it and I am glad I did read it because I loved loved loved the story
P.S: See I kept my record of commenting the last
❤️ 😆
P.P.S: I love you 🤗 ❤️