SuKor OS: The Fortune Teller

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So this is very very different from everything I've written. May not be everyone's cup of tea. This is just me experimenting with a fic genre I've grown to love. More on that after the fic, along with some other tidbits, so as not to give away spoilers 😆
A very major pre-leap reference lies ahead, so I'm hoping y'all are acquainted with this particular track.

Shout out to my sistaahs Sanya (SanyaEterna) for her love and encouragement and to Nimmi (Banjaaran.) for making a lovely post which made me think a lot into an AU from hell referenced here.

Like and comment if you enjoyed the read!

Also, for the two people who are able to pick up the most references made in the fic, I have a tiny OS in mind revolving around a certain black dress that has been the talk of the forum for the past couple of days 😉 Just for you!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So this is the "soulmates" fic genre- wherein two people are born with each others' names/the first sentence they say to each other etc on their bodies. I'm hoping I did justice to it. 😆
Again, lots of ambiguity in this one. I'm hoping you lovely, intelligent people will get it!

If the identity of the fortune teller still remains a mystery to you, let me point you in the direction of the eps in which Chakor pretends to be a boy to save her life while KNR brings in a street smart impostor from Delhi, who looks just like Chakor in order to hand over Chakor's inheritance (which KNR's mom wanted to leave for her) to him.

This character was named Ch--ni and ended up being Chakor's t--n. Hope that helps 😆
Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res.
Unres.

First part ka toh I've already told you!

So, next part:
It was amazing! A little confusing at some points, but then it was all happening in an imagination (Chakor's detailed dream about the scar and then Suraj meeting the souls) so it was ok😆

I was getting ajeeb si feelings when we were having the horrendous playing of the Im-----Raj and Vi--------Kor lives.🤢 Thank God Suraj did the right thing at the right time!

But then the next part of the dream was awesome! Twins!❤️

I was so scared when Chakor said that they die in each others arms, but then I remembered that the vision of Chunni's soul said to Suraj that everything will be okay😭 *phew*

Now I get it, it was Chunni's soul and Imli's dead son's. That's why she looked like Chakor and he like Imli😆

S and C, beautiful! Mil jaate hai dil jo bane, ek duje ke vaaste ❤️

Ps. I love this genre! Ispe aur likh! Kind of spooky and mysterious and thrilling but so full of premonition, warnings and symbolism! I want more!😆

PPs. I wanna write more about what he was shown, why was it shown, what it indicated etc. but ab kal😆

-Sanu

EDITED

So, let me tell you why I thought Chunni's soul showed Suraj what she showed. (MY POV)

She told him it's time. Told him that he has to be brave, for himself and for Chakor. That meant that his father was going to be successful soon, in trapping and enslaving him. So she told him to be ready to face it.

Then she proceeded to show him the alternate universe. Where the bride swap hadn't happened. Where everything had gone haywire.

He with Imli, Chakor with Vivaan. NO!

He happy with Imli, Chakor unhappy with Vivaan, as she had to give up on her dreams. NO, NO!

Chakor pregnant with someone else's baby. NO, NO, NO!

A nightmare. Which will, thankfully, never come true, because he did the right thing at the right time.

Then everything changed. Like magic. No Imli, no Vivaan. Only Suraj and Chakor. Together forever. Safe and sound. Happy and content. Lovers and parents.

A dream. Which will come true, if he is brave and remains that.

So Chunni tells him, getting trapped or enslaved is not going to be his life's worst nightmare. His true nightmare, which could have happened, has passed. A world with Imli? No! A world without Chakor? God please no, I beg you!

So relax. It's all going to be okay.

A chunni floating in the air. Chunni. Chakor's twin. Twins.

They say twins run in families. If you are one of twins, you are more likely to have twin babies yourself!

Two little girls. His and her's. Theirs.

A dream. Again. It can come true, if you want. But for that, you have to be brave. The worst which could have happened has passed. You getting enslaved will not be the end of the world.

Be brave so you can come out of it and live your dream.

You are who makes your story. Let the world make them die in each other's arms. We will be the ones to give them a happy ending. A perfect beginning. ❤️

**

I went off track I guess. I get all sentimental jab aisa kuch analysis type likhti hun. 😆

-Sanu


Edited by SanyaEterna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb OS!
Can read it again & again!
Different type of story : lovely Sukor, their initiales, fortune teller Chunni, and the last line ❤️!

Hope the 2nd part will Come true in one of ur FFs!

Thank u for this beautifully written mysterious OS!😊
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant Aradhna. I love this genre. It was a bit eerie but I loved it. It made total sense to me. You did good when everything was explained at the end. I got it right away and I loved it.
Good job! 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice and well written. I haven't watched the show since the beginning but I've more or less caught up. I could,therefore, connect the dots.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Res.

Unres.

First part ka toh I've already told you!

So, next part:
It was amazing! A little confusing at some points, but then it was all happening in an imagination (Chakor's detailed dream about the scar and then Suraj meeting the souls) so it was ok😆

I was getting ajeeb si feelings when we were having the horrendous playing of the Im-----Raj and Vi--------Kor lives.🤢 Thank God Suraj did the right thing at the right time!

But then the next part of the dream was awesome! Twins!❤️

I was so scared when Chakor said that they die in each others arms, but then I remembered that the vision of Chunni's soul said to Suraj that everything will be okay😭 *phew*

Now I get it, it was Chunni's soul and Imli's dead son's. That's why she looked like Chakor and he like Imli😆

S and C, beautiful! Mil jaate hai dil jo bane, ek duje ke vaaste ❤️

Ps. I love this genre! Ispe aur likh! Kind of spooky and mysterious and thrilling but so full of premonition, warnings and symbolism! I want more!😆

PPs. I wanna write more about what he was shown, why was it shown, what it indicated etc. but ab kal😆

-Sanu

EDITED

So, let me tell you why I thought Chunni's soul showed Suraj what she showed. (MY POV)

She told him it's time. Told him that he has to be brave, for himself and for Chakor. That meant that his father was going to be successful soon, in trapping and enslaving him. So she told him to be ready to face it.

Then she proceeded to show him the alternate universe. Where the bride swap hadn't happened. Where everything had gone haywire.

He with Imli, Chakor with Vivaan. NO!

He happy with Imli, Chakor unhappy with Vivaan, as she had to give up on her dreams. NO, NO!

Chakor pregnant with someone else's baby. NO, NO, NO!

A nightmare. Which will, thankfully, never come true, because he did the right thing at the right time.

Then everything changed. Like magic. No Imli, no Vivaan. Only Suraj and Chakor. Together forever. Safe and sound. Happy and content. Lovers and parents.

A dream. Which will come true, if he is brave and remains that.

So Chunni tells him, getting trapped or enslaved is not going to be his life's worst nightmare. His true nightmare, which could have happened, has passed. A world with Imli? No! A world without Chakor? God please no, I beg you!

So relax. It's all going to be okay.

A chunni floating in the air. Chunni. Chakor's twin. Twins.

They say twins run in families. If you are one of twins, you are more likely to have twin babies yourself!

Two little girls. His and her's. Theirs.

A dream. Again. It can come true, if you want. But for that, you have to be brave. The worst which could have happened has passed. You getting enslaved will not be the end of the world.

Be brave so you can come out of it and live your dream.

You are who makes your story. Let the world make them die in each other's arms. We will be the ones to give them a happy ending. A perfect beginning. ❤️

**

I went off track I guess. I get all sentimental jab aisa kuch analysis type likhti hun. 😆

-Sanu



Saaanu 🤗

Bang on about the visions...couldn't have explained it better myself 😃 I was going to put in a little bit about little Chakor seeing something similar- life had she never become a bandhua, a simple one with her family and then her actual future, but it somehow didn't fit in.

The twin stuff is a medical fact actually. It does run in families 😆

Also I wanted to leave the ending ambiguous. Was it really a dream, though? The floating chunni and their scars indicate otherwise.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Aru, I read your story twice..first time was very quick and on my phone ..Honestly, I didnt get all of it then..especially the dream and reality
I read it again last night after putting my daughter to bed..AND WOW!! I am more than impressed..So beautiful and haunting...Absolutely beautiful..👏
I am so greedy .. I really hope you continue to write more..
Thanks for this beautiful story
Edited by nycgal - 8 years ago
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@Aru
The part of Chakor having the same imagination, never becoming a bandhua etc is a really interesting idea. Maybe she'll love it but seeing that future.2 doesn't contain Suraj in it, will accept her present? That'll be such a punch to her. A direct, no questions confession, no? Just thinking...

I know about that fact, I'm from a family of twins as well, but personally I am not a twin😆

I know it wasn't a dream in the end. Chunni gave him the C scar right?

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