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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkrr

@Aradhana - even though I have not watched Udaan fully pre-leap - I had peripheral awareness of the overall plot and had caught the Chunni track in particular ... while surfing channels. I remember the scene with Chakor and other kids locked in the room. I may have continued to watch then...but i did not like the whole impersonating act with cap etc. Also - I don't like to do anything half measure - so I've attempted to piece the story together by watching Voot while in India and reading some synopsis(s). I did not know about the opposite side mole.

Did it burn first time during the almost kiss? My sense of timeline is terrible...was his hand just hurt then?

I saw you mention that you had recently re-read - And then there were none - 10 little indians...hence the mention.


The track put me off the show too. Ever since I read Diane Setterfield's "The Thirteenth Tale" I've realised the potential of writing a creepy story about twins. Plus I was tired of the usual mushy couple has twin babies and lives happily ever after fic trope that every fandom has beaten to death.

Nope, Priya, give me a little credit 😆 There's always elements that are canon that I incorporate into these. It's the Karva Chauth scene!

And yeah, I checked out the mini series (Aidan Turner plays Philip Lombard, OMG!!!!!). And you read a fic of mine called "Cat Among the Pigeons", BTW. Does this ring any bells? 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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have not read thirteenth tale...but kili...wow...wil; check it out.
love jr tolkien...esp the quotes..frodo one about dangerous world..being swept away and those who wander are not lost..
actually love cs lewis even better...currently listenng to screwtape letters...one of my fav books

should have figured karva chauth...thot too much!

will re-read cat among the pigeons and get back.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ipkrr

have not read thirteenth tale...but kili...wow...wil; check it out.

love jr tolkien...esp the quotes..frodo one about dangerous world..being swept away and those who wander are not lost..
actually love cs lewis even better...currently listenng to screwtape letters...one of my fav books

should have figured karva chauth...thot too much!

will re-read cat among the pigeons and get back.


No no, I just meant the title! It's a Poirot novel. Don't go re-read it, it's not worth it 😆

Oh I haven't heard of that one, Narnia I've read, though.

Not a huge fan of LOTR, don't kill me 😆 And let's just continue this over PMs or on the CC. What say?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Aradhana,

I saw somewhere ki you have holidays :D does this mean more written word from you?

Please tell me this isn't an OS please.. this needs to continued. Actually this can be a gr8 series of OS's ... Linked with your other 3 shots... give it a thought

Suraj and Chakor here are in the lovely space of best friends and more... with the more not defined, really like how Suraj has his attention focused on Chakor. When she realizes ki he isn't paying attention she totally pulls him. She wants to share this moment with him...

Burning wrist... Nice one. Even she has her mark on her wrist! Hehehe suraj calling these star crossed lovers idiots. Only suraj would deny he doesn't like romance but can melt chakor's heart with such antics!

"Did you get this because of my father? Is it burning because he's nearby?"

For a moment I thought of Chakor as Harry Potter and KN as Voldemort 🤣

Suraj is so into her... he wants her attention and wants to know little things about her adventures.

This is gold... if I write something I am soo borrowing this from you😆😆

"Not until you say the magic words."

"Jagat maata ki jai ho!"

Heheh like that Suraj is Suraj-y without being a jerk, he is a flirt with real concern for his Jagat

He could see the resemblance and the difference between Chunni and Chakor!

Brilliant how Suraj reluctantly agrees to being kind because Chakor would listen to her fortune teller...

Love how Imli's son was referenced with the canon vagueness of his father.

LOLOL when he said this he wanted his wife!!!! But chunni isn't wrong... he has a lot of women in his life... Chakor, Teju, Chakor, Ranjana, Ragini, Chakor, Imli, Chakor

Chunni's description of a mirror image is spooky! 😕

Oh my god she is like the ghost of Christmas past present and future... isn't she.

It's horrifying to think of Chakor's future with Vivaan is so blank and it's possible she could do that, because that is her nature.

He meets her twin, Imli's dead son and little chakor too ...

Is he moving in time or is he dreaming... but little chakor's meeting him comes true as she remembers it later in the present...

When he tells her, she in turn gives voice to her twins' prediction of her getting twin ...

Hehehe love that it's a niggling thought in his mind... he puts it away when Chakor reassures him...

How did you come up with so many Easter eggs!! Should I call you bunny from now :P :P

Edited by SukiDakanya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aradh_27


No no, I just meant the title! It's a Poirot novel. Don't go re-read it, it's not worth it 😆

Oh I haven't heard of that one, Narnia I've read, though.

Not a huge fan of LOTR, don't kill me 😆 And let's just continue this over PMs or on the CC. What say?



NOOO dil broken :(
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So those feels were intentional... good job with them...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey I am new here. I read many sukor ft but yours was really different one. Loved the imagination of twins.😛 It was really awesome. Loved it. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS...just loved it to the core ❤️
The worst has passed for Suraj, becoz indeed he took the right decision at the right time. Maybe out of selfish reasons in the show, but now it's proven that he took the right decision
And I am sure that Suraj will definitely live the second half of his dream...2 beautiful kids...wow !!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Aradhana,
It's a beautiful story.As paranormal romance is my most favourite genre. Beautifully written. Initially I did not catch it,but the word twin caught my attention and it clicked Coz I never actually saw the chunni track.
How wonderfully woven!!

And please do not let anyone dishearten you. Very few people have the ability to write such beautiful stories. You have a gift. If you do not want to post it here in the forum,we definitely respect your wish. But never stop writing and do pm me if possible and if you do not mind.
Geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: geetkumar

Hey Aradhana,

It's a beautiful story.As paranormal romance is my most favourite genre. Beautifully written. Initially I did not catch it,but the word twin caught my attention and it clicked Coz I never actually saw the chunni track.
How wonderfully woven!!

And please do not let anyone dishearten you. Very few people have the ability to write such beautiful stories. You have a gift. If you do not want to post it here in the forum,we definitely respect your wish. But never stop writing and do pm me if possible and if you do not mind.
Geet


Thank you Geet! That little tantrum was months ago and I've posted more fics on the forum since then 😆 far too lazy to send PMs and even if I did, I'm sure a friend (*cough*Nimmi*cough*) would have a thing or two to say about me not posting on the forum. So I will share what I write, but I highly doubt I'll be able to write much considering I'll be an intern next week (and medical interns in India are nowhere nearly as jobless as Dill Mill Gayye would have you believe).

And thank you Esha and Saniya for your lovely comments 😊

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