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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
nice upt
waiting for next part
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sukiya123

Like the concept... do keep posting... looking forward to it 👏


Thank you so much 😊


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Posted: 8 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Naya, very interesting. Loved how different this story is.


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: nycgal

Great progress, Naya... Just read your update!

Will be waiting for your future write ups.


Thank you! I won't make u wait for long 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: srividhya68

nice upt
waiting for next part
cont soon


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Absolutely really sorry for the late update guys
Chapter 3 is updated
Hey guys it's Naya I'm absolutely really sorry for the late update thanx for all the comments and support, it's really appreciated

Brand new day ...
Suraj is sleeping in his room and wakes to find imli next to him standing with tea.

Suraj: "what are you doing here early in the morning"?
Imli: " I came to see your face obviously and it's afternoon not morning"
Suraj looks at the time and sees its 14:00pm and immediately gets up and says to imli "stop your nonsense and get lost"

Imli: Suraj babu , do you know where chakor is, she didn't come home last night"
Suraj says " how would I know"
Imli tells him that " you went last night to find her"
Suraj: "oh haan she said she will be staying at Alisha's house"
Imli:" I hate Alisha , every time we met she always scolds me just because she's older"
Suraj:"so what I don't care now get out"
Imli leaves to go to vivaans room
Suraj thinks that he should go to check on chakor , Suraj goes to Alisha's house an climbs through the window that he sees open and he sees chakor sleeping peacefully, he goes to check her temperature and she is surprisingly okay , chakor slowly wakes up and sees Suraj and is about to scream when he covers her mouth with his hand and they have an eye lock Chakor looks at Suraj and they have an eyelock, until Alisha knocks on chakors bedroom door and calls her "Chakor didi wake up"
Alisha and chakor have a special relationship with each other and Alisha looks up to chakor as an elder sister chakor and Suraj are now in awkward position, Suraj still has chakors mouth covered with his hand and chakor is staring into his eyes, the eyelock is broken, Alisha tells Chakor to wake up and goes , know chakor has to get Suraj out of the room without being seen but first chakor goes to fresh up and Suraj sits on the bed and thinks about all the Moments he spent with chakor and says "I'm literally in love with chakor, god knows when it happened but I really love her she's way better than her sister imli who is pretending to be in love with me god knows what she wants but chakor is really gorgeous and understandable"
chakor comes out of the bathroom and Suraj stares at her smiling and chakor looks at him and for the first time they feel a connection at the same time chakor looks away and so does Suraj , chakor says "erm.. you need to leave from here before Alisha comes in" Suraj says "Alisha isn't good at all imli told me so"
"what are you saying Suraj, Alisha is a really good girl and she takes me as a big sister, unlike imli"
Suraj feels sad for chakor and says "I should leave now and please go home you parents are worried"
Chakor says " your a Buddhu , my so called parents don't care about me it's just all an act and plus I'm going to a party later so I won't go home, take care bye" and chakor leaves the room and Suraj goes back home to find vivaan and imli together in vivaans bedroom ...
Vivaan and imli were next to each other on vivaans bed and the door was slightly open and Suraj saw and heard them, imli says to vivaan "how long do I need to continue my act being in love with Suraj babu, baby it's getting too much"

Vivaan says "we will be together very soon , just as soon as I trap Superstar Chakor and you trap Suraj , then we can take whatever belongs to them and run away, I hate Suraj so much that sometimes I want to kill him". "Vivaan baby, don't stress and I know how you feel , sometimes I want to kill chakor but I can't so let's just wait and see what happens" Vivaan rolls over imli and places her hands by her head and says to her "let's see what happens right now" and they start with their revolting romance ( Lol guys I didn't have any interest to write detail for them obviously my story is sukor not Vimli)

Suraj felt disgusted and left from their , on his way he thought to go and see shiku but while making his way to the hideout he spotted a girl in a blue dress (I will post picture) between some goons and he goes to save the girl and he is shocked to see that it's chakor, he pulls her towards him and says "chakor , what are you doing here, are you alright" she looks at him and says "suwaj, these goons are harassing me, and I don't like it" a goon tries to grab chakor and drag her away only to be stopped by Suraj who breaks his neck and beats up the rest of the goons he goes to chakor and gives his jacket as she was wearing a dress, "Chakor, I thought you were going to be at a party , then what are you doing here and why are you drunk" Chakor says to Suraj "I left from the party and started walking home and lost my way also I think the waiter served me alcohol rather than coke" Suraj was angry a bit but kept calm and said "From now on please tell me where your going to be because I'm worried for you, I care for you and your the most important in my life so please be careful and if something ever happened to you then I would die" Chakor covers his mouth and says "don't talk about death, I care for you as well and need to tell you something"
Suraj asks "what",
Chakor says "i"
Suraj: "i"
Chakor: "i ...heard vivaan say that he wants to kill you
Suraj is shocked and thinks how did she know
Chakor says " I came to the haveli to return your bracelet and overheard vivaans conversation with imli and don't worry I also know that my sister wants to kill me as well" Chakor starts crying and Suraj feels really sad for her and they look at each other and hug for ages and ages... Chakor falls asleep on his shoulder and Suraj carries her to the haveli without anyone seeing, Suraj slowly puts Chakor on his bed and takes her high heels off and puts a blanket on her as he was about to go Chakor holds his hand and he sees that she was wearing his bracelet, he smiles at her and sits by her she opens her eyes and says" Suraj, you won't leave me and go will you, like my mom and dad did" Suraj feels like someone stabbed his heart he thinks Chakor has been in so much pain and has literally had no one by her side, he says to her "I promise I'm not going to leave you" and Chakor falls asleep, Suraj kisses her forehead and sleeps by her side.

Precap: Chakor wakes up , sukor are in each other arms Chakor finds herself wearing surajs shirt, few days leap and imli is pregnant blames Suraj and receives a slap from Chakor

Edited by Thahaanfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
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Hey everyone, I'm back with chapter 4, Merry Christmas to you all and I hope you enjoy this, and thank you so much for the amazing comments.

Precap: Chakor wakes up , sukor are in each other arms Chakor finds herself wearing surajs shirt, few days leap and imli is pregnant blames Suraj and receives a slap from Chakor

Chakor and Suraj are asleep hugging each other , chakor wakes up due to the sunlight and sees Suraj sleeping peacefully, she slowly moves and Suraj holds her waist tighter and chakor lies back down, and closes her eyes and soon after ,Suraj wakes up and looks at chakor recalling all their moments together , chakor opens her eyes and looks at Suraj they have an eyelock and come close to each other, Suraj goes close to chakor and she doesn't resist and they are inches away from each other and it's disturbed by imli who walks into Suraj's room and doesn't bother knocking , when she walks in she is shocked and burning with jealousy Imli shouts "Suraj babu , how dare you" Sukor look at each other and realize their state , Suraj gets up and covers Chakor properly with the blanket, he then goes to imli and drags her out of the room and says "wait here" Suraj takes Chakor clothes out of his cupboard and gives them to her, chakor realises that these were her favourite jeans, blue jacket and polo top, "imli gave them to me for whatever reason I don't know" Chakor nods and Suraj goes out the room and Chakor goes to get changed , Suraj shouts at imli for entering his room without knocking he takes her down to the hall , imli says" stop it Suraj babu, you can't behave like this with you unborn child's mother" EVERYONE GETS SHOCKED, Suraj asks "what" imli says "yes your child is in my womb" just then Chakor comes from outside into the haveli...
Flashback
Chakor is about to go out of surajs room but thinks that everyone will be present so she decided to climb out from the window and down the pipe.
End of flashback

Chakor is shocked to here this , Kiran and lalit are also present there too, imli goes to kamal Narayan, tejaswani and ranjana she says to them to believe her that she is carrying surajs child and they don't believe her, vivaan says to her "I believe you imli" and they slowly smile at each other , Suraj is completely broken and thinks to himself that "i can't do this not even in my dreams" imli goes to Kiran and lalit who obviously start to bad mouth Suraj, Chakor get angry and has a glass of water in her hand (offered by bijli who gave it to her) Chakor unknowingly breaks it and Suraj is the first to see he immediately runs up to Chakor and slowly takes her hand into his and starts doing aid to it , Chakor slowly removes his hand from hers but looks up at him and winks and slowly smiles , Suraj says" Chakor you have to believe me that I have done nothing with imli, please believe me" Chakor moves to imli and says "so are you pregnant with Surajs child", Imli says "yes" Chakor says "ok, in that case we need to get your check up done then" Chakor calls the doctor in the haveli and forces imli to have all the checks done, the doctor says " I'm sorry but I think there has been a misunderstanding she is not pregnant" Everyone is shocked, the doctor leaves and Chakor gets angry at imli , kn and tejaswani ask imli "how can you put such a horrible blame on Suraj" Imli says "but it's the truth, chakor please believe me" (imli was lying and all this was planned by vivaan and her) SLAP and imli's hand landed on her own cheek imli says "Chakor you slapped me" SLAP and another landed on imli's other cheek, Suraj was happy but sad at the same time kn and tejaswani were with him, Chakor says to imli "I'm so glad that we are not real sisters , because I can't have a sister who wants to kill me and is a two faced b***h , I can't believe that you blamed Suraj for this fake news, anyways after today don't ever call me as your sister again because you have proved that your not my sister" Chakor was in tears and in a bit of a bad state, she said her last words and ran out of the haveli as fast as she could, Suraj saw this and ran after her, imli was left alone in the haveli and vivaan was with her , he took her to his room and comforted her, actually no he didn't comfort her he brain washed her against Chakor.

Suraj ran after Chakor and stopped her from running further , he took her to someplace quiet and there was nobody around, he calmed her down and said to her "thank you so much for proving me innocent Chakor". Chakor says to him "when there is a fake blame on someone then I can't stand it and by the way I kinda feel better after giving imli 2 slaps" they both burst out laughing and Suraj hugged Chakor and says to her "show me your hand, you broke the glass remember" he took her hand and carefully wrapped a bandage around it from his pocket they have an eye lock and Suraj says to Chakor "look Chakor, I wouldn't never get any girl pregnant with whom I don't share a relation with and imli was..." Chakor covered his mouth with her hand and said to him "you don't need to explain yourself Suraj, I knew you were innocent and I know that you can't and won't do anything that's wrong" they hugged each other's and Suraj confesses his love to Chakor for her, " Chakor , when I saw you for the first time after 10 years , I thought you were stunning and you will always be , I feel a connection between us when I'm with you, I like it when you share you problems with me and I find that you understand me so well..." Chakor says "Suraj , tum kuch zyaada Bol rahe ho, what do you want to say" Suraj shouts "CHAKOR I LOVE YOU" Chakor smiles at him and the way he confessed to her he picks her up and spins around, he slowly put her back down to the ground he says "Chakor I really really love you, please will you accept me too" Chakor " yes Suraj , but..." "Chakor please don't think about anyone else or anything right now, just be with me" Chakor and Suraj hug and Suraj says to Chakor "now say the 3 magic words that I want to here"

Chakor looks at Suraj and starts to go, Suraj catches her wrist and pulls her into his chest and slowly wraps his arms around her stomach and rests his chin on her shoulder, Chakor is shocked at first but slowly plays along with him, Chakor starts shouting saying that she has a stomach pain Suraj immediately lets go of her and says "what happened" Chakor says "I have a stomach ache and it looks like I can't even say 3 magic words to you" Suraj says "accha, so this is the problem" Chakor slowly smiles at Suraj who starts walking towards Chakor , she walks back aswell and then starts to run and now Suraj is running after Chakor "hey Chakor, wait for me" "Suraj if you catch me then I'll say your 3 magic words" Suraj now started running even faster after Chakor, she turned back to look to see where he was but to her surprise he wasn't there and she got worried all of a sudden some shouted "BOO" from behind and Chakor got scared and hugged the person and said "Suraj have you gone mad please don't do this again, I love you and if something had happened to you then I wouldn't be able to live without you" Chakor said it all in one go and Suraj said" so your stomach ache vanished" she looked up at him and hugged him tighter he was happy that Chakor loved him too and he said to her "I promise that I won't ever leave you again" Chakor smiles at him and kissed his cheek he gets shocked and teases her by saying "are you that desperate" and they laugh Chakor hits Suraj , Suraj says" Chakor where are you going to sleep today" Chakor says "i don't know" he said "do you want to come back to mine" chakors says "okay, but first tell me why was I wearing your shirt this morning?" Suraj says "why , did you like it" he said between laughing and she punched his arm, " actually you were shivering in your dress and I promise I didn't look , I did close my eyes, you were cold and I did t want you to get ill" chakor felt dizzy and was about to fall but Suraj held her and said "it looks like you need rest" and he picked her up in his arms and took her home , he slowly put her down on the bed, and gave her time to change into her pjamas, she was lying down on the bed thinking about what happened today and Suraj came in and said to her not to worry as he is with her now for every step and Suraj kissed Chakor on her cheek and they hugged each other and slept...

Undecided precap

So another update, comment on it please...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
update it yaar it has been months that iwas waiting 4 ur update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Update plz...its been so long waiting for your update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
Update plzzz...it's been so long waiting for your update...plz update soon...

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