Sukor FF emotions chapter 3 and 4 updated

Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Awesome ff, I like your story very much, sounds interesting... I'm waiting for next chapter 😊

Originally posted by: Thahaanfan

A sukor ff - emotions

Chakor is still the marathon winner in this ff but also a boxer she can fight and will be putting fighting skills into action later on.

Chapter 1 - After 10 years

Chakor is dressed in jeans, polo t-shirt , trainers and a jacket her hair is tied up in a ponytail. Chakor is on the bus on her way to azadgunj , when all of a sudden her bus stops and some goons come onto the bus and one goon drags chakor off the bus,

Chakor- "hey what the hell" , "who do you think you are"

Chakor is about to punch the goon when someone places a gun on her head, this person is no other than Imli.

Chakor turns and sees imli and she is shocked ( imli is wearing what she wore when she kidnaps Chakor in the serial) , chakor is about to hug imli but imli stops her and pushes her on the floor , chakor grazes her arm and it starts to bleed,

Imli- "stay away from me"

Chakor- "imlu! Why are you behaving like this? You hate me so much that today you pushed me on the floor, what happened to the imli who wouldn't let a single scratch form on my body"...

Chakor is cut off by imli who tells her..

Imli- "Shut up CHAKOR"

Chakor- "oh wow! Now you're using my name, what happened to the imli who used to call me deedee"

Imli- "STOP, STOP Stop your nonsense" imli tells the goon to put the cloth over chakors head but chakor punches the goon and is about to run when imli hits her with her gun on the head. Imli and her goons take chakor to Suraj who is in his hide out having his legs massaged by shiku.

The doors to the hideout are flung open by imli she walks in and Suraj stands up in style and he walks up to her,

Imli- "I've brought chakor Suraj babu"

Suraj- "I can see that! BUT I said to you that she shouldn't get hurt in the process and now she has a scratch on her arm and is unconscious"

Suraj gets angry and grabs imli's hair and continues to shout at her

"Stupid girl! When I say nothing should happen then I mean it , now put her down on the mattress and get out before I ...

Imli- "Suraj babu , don't get angry , I'll do whatever for your forgiveness please don't be angry"

Suraj with a smirk says "be ready for this evening if she wants forgiveness"

Saying this he walks up to the goon who is carrying chakor and takes from him , trying carefully not to hurt her,

"Imli get out of here"

Imli- "okay Suraj babu" with that imli leaves with her goons

Suraj took the cloth of chakors head and was stunned as he saw her after ages, and she was beautiful he thought and said she looks nothing like her parents Kiran and lalit.

Suraj - "shiku go and get a warm towel and juice along with medicine, chakor has got a fever"

Shiku was shocked as he had never seen this caring side of Suraj before

Suraj- "shiku go , hurry up"

Shiku - I'll go right away"

Chakor starts to move her fingers slowly, Suraj sees this and thinks she will wake up but Chakor is having a nightmare, Suraj realises and holds her hand and strokes her hair to try and calm her, surprisingly chakor is calmed and continues to sleep, shiku enters with the towel, juice and medicine , Suraj puts the towel on chakors forehead and waits for her to wake...

Precap: chakor is awake , she and Suraj have a conversation chakor will tell Suraj about her nightmare , in the evening Suraj tells imli to dance for his friends if she wants forgiveness.

You are welcome to give chocolates or flowers or pics of cats and kittens

So here is chapter 1 - I'm really nervous for the comments hope you guys like it and please comment any improvements or give some ideas of what you want to to happen.

Love ya all 👍🏼

Naya