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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: _Namita_
Aradhna, you are an angel. 🤗
You OS's have been helping me deal with my stupid flu. Thanks sweetie. It's absolutely wonderful.

Aww, get well soon, Namita! And I'm glad this is cheering you up 😊 And thank you!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

@GrilledCheese Radhika Vinlora Rajshree

Thank you so much, guys! Really sweet of you to leave me such kind comments 🤗 I'm a little short on time so just replying to everyone here.

And Radhika, it will be a pretty intense scene if I'm able to write it as I see it in my mind!

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Wow amazing update👏.. can't see Suraj like this.. Definitely chakor help him..

Want to see how chakor reacts to Suraj when he tell her about he became banduva for Kn.. I think both will be broken so much from inside.. but definitely they will emerge as strong fighters and win with kn..

Tfs Aradhna.. waiting for nxt one.. update when ur free!!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ipkrr
Aaru - loved loved the writing - could picture clearly Suraj in the tabela with the wall et al...but could not connect to the last line in context...since Chakor's feelings for Suraj have not been developed yet in story or in writing - not sure if i'm making sense to you - but it was my first thought and thought i'd share 😊
keep writing...always enjoy reading your take on things!

Thanks Priya! I always enjoy reading your comments on my fics 😃 About the last line...it isn't supposed to be romantic. And it's in keeping with what we've seen of Chakor on the show, I think. It's obvious she's really concerned about him. And she's always getting miffed when he brings up divorce. So she'd definitely miss him if he were gone. But she'll never admit it. I figured the only thing that would get her to actually say it would be the possibility of him actually being gone for good...hope this makes sense!

Oh and have you read part one of this? I'm hoping you will! And I'm expecting you to get the significance of the childhood flashback because surprisingly no one got it/mentioned it till now!

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Res.

Just came back from college, didn't even read this! Gonna unres. asap.

Unres.

Aww. That was my first reaction as I read the last line.

She was there to give him company, in this nightmare of his. Her vision, her small form, her smile encouraged him. To do what? I guess to live, to just take a breath and relax. And he was happy to be with her.

Then Shikhu came. I must say he is the bff of Suraj. He gave him his clothes so that Suraj could hide the brand of slavery. That's bff goals right there! KN was in jail now, but the brand, the mark was to remain forever.

She had come to save her lad in distress, and save she did. She was thankful that he wasn't marked by the horrible father of his but how wrong she was?

And how will she know where the mark is? Excuse my gutter mind, but I do know a process in which she may discover that her husband has a mark on his chest. It's quite indecent but you said I am the queen of smut so I will use that😆

Do the next part asap!

-Sanu

Edited by SanyaEterna - 8 years ago

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ipkrr

@ipkrr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thanks Priya! I always enjoy reading your comments on my fics 😃 About the last line...it isn't supposed to be romantic. And it's in keeping with what we've seen of Chakor on the show, I think. It's obvious she's really concerned about him. And she's always getting miffed when he brings up divorce. So she'd definitely miss him if he were gone. But she'll never admit it. I figured the only thing that would get her to actually say it would be the possibility of him actually being gone for good...hope this makes sense!
Oh and have you read part one of this? I'm hoping you will! And I'm expecting you to get the significance of the childhood flashback because surprisingly no one got it/mentioned it till now!

Aaru - Will go read and get back - i'm sure i have read it before but not in context with this.

I think the disconnect in the show - is that while Chakor has been shown to save Suraj and constantly think about his safety - they never show Suraj's thoughts - worry, concern etc for Chakor. Yes - they show him dreamily looking at her occasionally - but nothing substantial. I cannot relate to Chakor acknowledging more than concern for a fellow man until he expresses his changing feelings. I guess the upcoming track is for Suraj to show concern for Chakor and if so - this is what I needed to justify Chakor responding to Suraj..not physical saving of her life occasionally - but an emotional connect and a need for her presence.

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Dammit. This is addicting. I almost screamed when it ended.
I. just. cant. wait. for the next one.
Bring on the angst.

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue
Amazing Aaru! ❤️ Wonder what's gonna happen when Chakor realises where KN actually put the Bandhua mohur. 😭
But loved this piece! Waiting eagerly for the next! 😳 I hope your next study break is soon! 😃

Actually, the whole track of making Suraj bandhua in the show is getting me kinda down. It's the biggest twist ever on the show, but to think KN would do something so low, literally lower than every thing he's ever done... Shivers up my spine, I tell you.

Thanks Akhila 😃

When she sees it...if I'm able to deliver it, lots of angst! Haha, nah not for another week or so now. I'm honestly not sure what to put in and what to leave out! I'm going to let the coming eps guide this fic a bit.

Edited by Aradh_27 - 8 years ago

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sriarshi
Wow amazing update👏.. can't see Suraj like this.. Definitely chakor help him..
Want to see how chakor reacts to Suraj when he tell her about he became banduva for Kn.. I think both will be broken so much from inside.. but definitely they will emerge as strong fighters and win with kn..

Tfs Aradhna.. waiting for nxt one.. update when ur free!!

Thank you, Sri! 😊 I don't really intend to write about the battle v/s KNR. Mainly because I don't have the energy or inclination to come up with the OTT cat and mouse games like on the show to make the fic more in keeping with the show. Also KNR is not easy to write! So this is the last you'll see of him in this fic 😆

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
Res.
Just came back from college, didn't even read this! Gonna unres. asap.

Unres.

Aww. That was my first reaction as I read the last line.

She was there to give him company, in this nightmare of his. Her vision, her small form, her smile encouraged him. To do what? I guess to live, to just take a breath and relax. And he was happy to be with her.

Then Shikhu came. I must say he is the bff of Suraj. He gave him his clothes so that Suraj could hide the brand of slavery. That's bff goals right there! KN was in jail now, but the brand, the mark was to remain forever.

She had come to save her lad in distress, and save she did. She was thankful that he wasn't marked by the horrible father of his but how wrong she was?

And how will she know where the mark is? Excuse my gutter mind, but I do know a process in which she may discover that her husband has a mark on his chest. It's quite indecent but you said I am the queen of smut so I will use that😆

Do the next part asap!

-Sanu

Your reaction was Aww?! Damn I did not do a good job with this fic then 😆 It was supposed to be as dark as the prequel but with a more hopeful end. The last line was a mistake then! I was concerned later that it was a little OOC of Chakor to say that, but after what she did in yesterday's ep 😳 I think it's pretty justified 😆

Agreed, Shikhu is the bro of all bros, in every alternate universe! I loved what you said about the dream. I honestly didn't think of it while writing. He saw her writing on the wall and his mind logically moved on to thoughts of what she would've felt when she was locked up there. He finally understood her pain.

I expected no less from you 😆 He just has to take his shirt off for her to see it...what's so dirty about that? 😛

Things will get intense in the next instalment. He may claim a kiss that was rightfully his. IDK I'm very confused so will take me a longer time to write it!

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