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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

^ My reaction was Aww because of the last line ONLY. It was quite unexpected and that too coming out of Chakor's mouth.

The prequel was definitely dark, but this was all hopeful. From the vision he had to when she's actually sitting beside him in the car.

Take off his shirt. What's not dirty about that? I'm talking about SuKor here so...

Kiss...now you're talking business.

Ps. I'm thinking to write a small OS based on this series of OSs. It'll have your mohar on Suraj's chest part. Slightly, just slightly adult. Or maybe not. If you mind? But ONLY after you put the last part. Then I'll think about writing it, if it suits the last part. Kind of a small sequel. What say? I'll PM you about it.

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ipkrr

@ipkrr

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Aradhana - came back and read it after Bandhua...what a difference in perception. I love the Suraj you portray...just love him...the flash backs to Chakor as a kid...I really think the CVs need to capitalize on that. I remember the other OS you had about seeing Chakor as a baby and later...you are good.What are you doing in the medical field with this imagination and ability to write?

I saw your comment on this thread earlier about the Friday episode ... and I know I mentioned on the Bandua OS thread that after Friday's episode ... I should probably recall my last comment about the last line ... but still ... until Suraj lets his guard down and confess to the attraction ... I do not want Chakor giving an inch ... at least not verbally acknowledge her feelings.

Loved Chakor's reaction on not finding the mohar on his hands...and reading both of these OS's really looking forward to the next one...where she finds out where it is...Suraj's angst, uncertainty of emotions, her surge of love, anger, protection... Have big expectations...for that...and do include both of their thoughts if possible.

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

@Sanya Lord, now I'm flattered! I'd love to read what you have in mind. But I'd definitely prefer that you wait until I wrap this up. Which may take a while. I'll drop you a PM when I have more free time to discuss this!

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#24

@Priya

So sweet of you to read and comment here again! What am I doing in the medical field? Hopefully earning my degree to pursue psychiatry so that I can write better stories. And this is the first time anyone's told me that, so thank you sooo much!! I know I have a long long way to go though. For starters, I need to complete at least one story!

And thank you for mentioning those childhood scenes! Children are not easy to write about and I don't know if I'm doing a half-decent job but I just love writing these. Always my favourite bits in everything I've written thus far.

Oh God, now I'm actually nervous about even writing the third part! It isn't too clear in my head even now. As I've said before, I'm going to wait and take a few cues from the show itself. It's basically one long conversation between Suraj and Chakor and I've written so many of those already! The entire Starry Night series and the pregnancy fic. I hope I'm able to do a good job on this one.

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

^ Exactly. I'll wait till you are done, then think about writing that. I mean, if it's an epilogue (kind of) it should match and suit the ending. Right?

Or I may write it as a separate one if it doesnt but with the mohar-on-chest-part intact. Am I sounding desperate to write that? LOL.

Take your time, I'm in no hurry😆

-Sanu

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SukiDakanya

@SukiDakanya

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#26

oh no how heart broken is Chakor going to be that she couldnt save her dude in distress...

#squad goals for shiku n suraj and chakor... besties 4 eva😆

It's heartbreaking to see how suraj finally gets chakor. has walked a mile and more in her shoes...

will he be drinking? I think he drinks alot in the show because he thinks he has no one to share it with...

it's the small things that show their affection for each other... treasured beloved partners ... Im at a loss for describe how you show this darling couple to be...

❤️ Suki

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Aradh_27

@Aradh_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sukiya123
oh no how heart broken is Chakor going to be that she couldnt save her dude in distress...

#squad goals for shiku n suraj and chakor... besties 4 eva😆

It's heartbreaking to see how suraj finally gets chakor. has walked a mile and more in her shoes...

will he be drinking? I think he drinks alot in the show because he thinks he has no one to share it with...

it's the small things that show their affection for each other... treasured beloved partners ... Im at a loss for describe how you show this darling couple to be...

❤️ Suki

"Darling couple to be" just made me giggle cos it sounds so darn cute!! Aww, thanks Suki! And for reminding me about his drinking (IDK how I even forgot it, probably 'cos I really can't take the way it's portrayed on the show seriously). You will see him craving a drink. I'm not too sure whether I'm going to let him get his fix 😆 And I just realised Suraj surprisingly has friends, while Chakor doesn't! A huge contrast to when they were kids. Suraj has Shikhu and those mates from college who showed up at the Diwali party. Not too sure they survived Shootout at Aazadgunj though.

And here's another big thank you for this wonderful comment 🤗

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sriarshi

@sriarshi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Aradh_27

Thank you, Sri! 😊 I don't really intend to write about the battle v/s KNR. Mainly because I don't have the energy or inclination to come up with the OTT cat and mouse games like on the show to make the fic more in keeping with the show. Also KNR is not easy to write! So this is the last you'll see of him in this fic 😆

Ha ok Aradhna don't mind at all if u skip kn part 😆..not interested in his part only matters is Sukor 😆

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