FF: All is Fair in Love. (NEW! Chapter 17!) - Page 33

Originally posted by: BreakingBlue

Thank Goodness I didnt post the original one then. You might have started squealing! 😆

I hope you liked it Maithu! I didn't make it too explicit though.

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

muaah

Maine karlia comment.

I know you must be irritated although you used a LOL emo. Sholly. Hope this big comment will make up for it.

Originally posted by: nycgal

I DEMAND the original one!!😆

Maithu..I love how #GMsisterhood is all the rage🤣🤣🤗

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Reseaaa

Unreswaa

Sorry sorry sorry.

Sorry for leaving with a irritating reswaa for a long time. I got involved in work and had stopped reading the chapter halfway. So I didnt comment earlier. Again a big FAT sorry from my side.

Loved the update. Although you did cheat me.😡 I will tell you why. Baad mein. Pehle let me mention the good things.

Khatarnaak update tha. 😆

Suraj babu couldnt get his hands off Chakor and he missed her so much that just after the shaadi he started being thoda mushy mushy.😳 Loved that particular scene.

Loved the scene when Suraj and Chakor along Yuvi, all were sleeping in the car. Such a cute family they are.

Yuvi ne toh khatarnaak sawal pooch diya tha. I am glad Vishu covered it up immediately. I hope KN Vivaan aur unka bura saaya kabhi humari Yuvi par naa pade. I hope he never gets to know the dark past of his family and Suraj and Chakor are not his real parents. I hope he escapes all evils.

Chakor's feelings were well described. I loved the words you used for her nervousness. Very well written scene.

Pata nahi Ragini aur Rishabh kya karte honge.😆

Finally coming to the bold. Well its good that you made it 17+ . I could take prior permission from you to read the scene as I am turning 17 within 16 days.😆 Enough of my bakwass...🤣

The part was well written. Ok. That was a sukha comment. But I am not in a state to comment on that particular part.☺️

Btw, you chetated me. How? You told it was 17+ par this was whole 18+.😲 Aur 18+ mein kya extra likhte batao mujhe...sab sharam toh idhar ujaad dala.😡🤣🤣

Chalo iske baad toh demons wala part aaraha hai I know. I am just interested for the morning scene in next part.😆

Special thanks for mentioning Suvreen beech beech mein and making me smile.😳

Originally posted by: nycgal

res

unres..

Akhi,my apologies it took so long to get back ...Crazy day today..

Confession: I read every chapter again so I could enjoy the continuity..It was brilliant..You write so beautifully!! 🤗

This chapter was SEXY n HAWT!!! my favourite moment was definitely when Suraj plays with Chakor's mangalsutra/thaali while making love and calls her Chakor Suraj Rajvanshi..That moment is so intimate and deep between a couple and you captured it so beautifully..

Also, the moment when Suraj says he cant wait anymore , it was so raw n primal n hot.. I kept smiling n blushing 😆😉 .When Chakor got n top it reminded me of Nami n her who will drive comments..🤣🤣

I know the time n effort writers put in for FF..Thankyou for that

Originally posted by: _Namita_

Holy mother of god...that was hot!!! Brilliant Akhi!!! Loved it.

Originally posted by: ..chotu..

Original mein aur kya hua hoga?

Just curious

#GMsisterhood🤣

Hey I am back!!
I think I am little bit late *nervously smiles*
But I couldn't break the record of ME commenting the LAST you know 🤣

Okay...THIS was HOT !! 😳 and I am officially into the #GMsisterhood you know 😉 😳
I would like to repeat what @Sahas asked, aur kyaa likhne ke baad ye tumhare liye 18+ hoga may I know?? 😉
And we all are so besharam here that you could freely post the original one because I know all are now wanting to read the original one 😆 😉

Enough Said!
Other than the bold part, the initial parts were sweeettt especially the family scenes
And the hesitation and nervousness of Chakor was well described dear👏
The 17+ part 😆 , as I have already said, was HOT. The desire of Suraj to mark Chakor as HIS was evident 😳

Beautiful and bold chapter Akhi. Write more like this 😳 😉

P.S- Love you ❤️

Originally posted by: paridhi9797

Hey I am back!!
I think I am little bit late *nervously smiles*
But I couldn't break the record of ME commenting the LAST you know 🤣

Okay...THIS was HOT !! 😳 and I am officially into the #GMsisterhood you know 😉 😳
I would like to repeat what @Sahas asked, aur kyaa likhne ke baad ye tumhare liye 18+ hoga may I know?? 😉
And we all are so besharam here that you could freely post the original one because I know all are now wanting to read the original one 😆 😉

Enough Said!
Other than the bold part, the initial parts were sweeettt especially the family scenes
And the hesitation and nervousness of Chakor was well described dear👏
The 17+ part 😆 , as I have already said, was HOT. The desire of Suraj to mark Chakor as HIS was evident 😳

Beautiful and bold chapter Akhi. Write more like this 😳 😉

P.S- Love you ❤️

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Res.

Unres.

I am so sorry for the late unres! Bada reply likhna tha isilye laptop haath main aane ka intezaar tha 😆

I will start from the starting.

Jaise hi Suraj ne Chakor ko pakda, I was like, Suraj Babu, thoda toh apne ghodon ko lagaam do! Tumhaari hi biwi hai, kahin nahin ja rahi!🤣

But then my heart said,paanch saal ka wait tha yaar, let them be! Them calling each other WIFEY and HUBBY was so cute! And saying I love yous! So much cheese but I love it! 😳

He wanted to call her but did not, but she called him! 😳

Thank God they got the marriage registered. These important details are what I adore.😆

Make sure you give us a happy Boss tomorrow! Don't worry Priya, I doubt your Boss will even come to the office tomorrow, I mean, who would want to leave such a gorgeous wife in bed alone? Huh? 🤣

Buying a ring so that Suraj could be removed from the Bachelor's list or so that Suraj breaks the hearts of hundreds of girls? Life is a pain for some!😆

Grehpravesh was lovely! They were hindering the couple's climb up the stairs. Sounds so real! And that foam coming out of the tin instead of confetti🤣 So relatable!

Yuvi is so innocent. Sanya love Yuvi🤗

Everyone is so clever, leaving Chakor and Suraj alone. Suraj will definitely gift Ragini whatever she wants and increase the salaries of others, khushi ke maare🤣

Loved how he was threatening Rishab, bechara! Ab toh Ragini ka haath pakadne se pehle bhi das baar sochega aur Suraj ka chehra uski aankhon ke saamne ghumega, glaring at him 🤣

Chakor feeling like virgin again sounds so much like her. And I loved when Suraj said that he is scared as well! His heartbeat matching hers, beautiful!😳

Then it starts.☢️

Uff. That was f*cking amazing. Each and every line was perfect. I could imagine everything in front of my eyes and boy I felt hot! So beautiful, so intimate. Paanch saal ki kasar ek raat main poori karni thi. 😆

The wait had made them more perfect for each other. Even after so many years, they remembered each others bodies like the back of their hands, remembered what the other liked.

It was so slow. It wasn't Suraj tormenting Chakor, it was you tormenting us! 😡😆

Tiger. Mmm. Sounds super sexy.😳

I loved her shock as she realised how much he had changed. Junior. Haa, more like not-so-much huh?☺️

And as it got bigger in her palm, I felt sweat trickling my back. *phew*☢️

But I really can't wait anymore.

And they were one again. And again.

Oh my someone kill me now.☺️

Thank God someone came to share the smuttiness with me🤗. Although, my smut works sound so plain after this one!

LOVED IT! Waiting for the next part!

-Sanu