FF: All is Fair in Love. (NEW! Chapter 17!)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there! 🤗 I'm back with another FF (Sorry for being so annoying! 😭)
This one isn't like my other snippet stories, nor is it an OS. This is my first time writing a multi chapter story, so please do support me (if you like it!). 😳
That said, here's a sneak peek:

Prologue:

From behind the desk, he eyed his prey. She was nervously typing away on the computer, trying to not take notice of his piercing gaze. He got up from his swivel chair and made his way out of his cabin, and walked straight towards her.
Everyone could sense the tension between the two.

What little courage she had left deflated like an air balloon as she saw HIM making his way towards her from the corner of her eye. She whimpered and fidgeted nervously in her seat, till she finally half jogged, half ran to the Women's Room. That was the only place he couldn't follow her.

Back in the office, he stood at her table, clearly ticked off. She couldn't slip away from him all the time. He glanced to the side and grimaced. His blood boiled and anger rose within him at an alarming speed, but for some confusing reason, he felt some sort of endearment when he looked at the photo. Shaking his head, he made his way back to his cabin.

"When I do catch you, you've Hell to pay for, woman." He muttered under his breath.

*The photo on the table showed the woman with her son, in front of a school, smiling at the camera.*

Index:
Part 1 (and Part 2!) on Page 2
Part 3 on Page 5
Part 4 on Page 6
Part 5 on Page 9
Part 6 on Page 11
Part 7 on Page 14
Part 8 on Page 15
Part 9 on Page 19
Part 10 on Page 21
Part 11 on Page 24
Part 12 on Page 29
Part 13 on Page 33
Part 14 (a) on Page 35
Part 14 (b) on Page 38
Part 15 on Page 40
Part 16 on Page 43
Part 17 on Page 45
Edited by BreakingBlue - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow great👏 The prologue is intriguing. Pls continue. Looking forward ⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Inturrrestinggg😆
Waiting eagerlyy!
I'm loving this sudden boom of FFs and OSs on the forum btw!

-Sanu
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Niceee. I love it. Continue and please pm me
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Originally posted by: ahista

Wow great👏 The prologue is intriguing. Pls continue. Looking forward ⭐️


Thank you! 😊 Keep tuned in for the updates! 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanyaEterna

Inturrrestinggg😆

Waiting eagerlyy!
I'm loving this sudden boom of FFs and OSs on the forum btw!

-Sanu


Hehe! 😃 Let's hope it's nice! First time writing a long story so! 😳

PS:In love with your new OS. ❤️ I commented there too, but I mentioned it here as well since you spoke about the sudden boom in FFs. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SofiaIshVeer

Wow great

please continue


Thank you, will try to update soon! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hooked already! beautiful n mysterious..
Cant wait for the story
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting plot with little suspense👏.. ur an awesome writer.. keep writing 👍🏼
Is it about Sukor? suraj is angry young man type?? love to read next part

Please update long parts...not these short one😆

Waiting for nxt part...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow wow
im so curious now.. update soon 😳😳😛

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