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Posted: 8 years ago
Ah...finallt sukor got married
now it will be more interesting to watch sukor
nice upt
waiting for next
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved both the parts Jassy! In chap 21, loved the blindfold dance by Sukor. A very new idea. Havent seen or read of it before but it was amazing.
So they got married.I feel Teju is behind the swap. Anyways will wait 4 the next update.
Bear with chotu Aps sahas ka chotu comment this time too. 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Jasmine ❤️ waiting for the next part yaar...tum teek ho na yaar? Aur busy ho???
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vinlora

Jasmine ❤️ waiting for the next part yaar...tum teek ho na yaar? Aur busy ho???

Hi vinny..

I'm absolutely fine yaar...thanks for the concern ❤️
Its just that my lptop's battery is damaged and I don't want a new battery I want a new laptop so waiting for it...And I'm almost half way done writing the next chapter its getting late because I have to steal my dad's laptop whenever i get chance and I just write hiding under a table for 5 mins or more...so I'm not getting enough time to write...Hope you'll understand...Sorry for the delay sweetheart..I'm feeling terrible to make you all wait for the update 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww...sweetheart...again circus for us...so sweet of you yaar...no problem. ..we will wait ...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm terribily sorry for the late update...My laptop's batter was damaged permanently and I'm waiting to buy a new one...I wrote this chapter in bits...because I had
to steal papa's laptop and write for 5 mintues and then reutrn the laptop..I hope you guys understand and forgive me for the delay...



Aafato'n ke parindey "IshaqZaade" chapter 23

Recap: Chakor remembers her childhood...Tina escapes and imli gets dressed as a bride...Tejaswani swaps the brides and chakor gets married to suraj...

Suraj was in his room angrily removing all the decoration that were done for his suhaagRaat ...He breaks the flower threads that were hanging arounf the bed and shouted
Chakor...Teri himma kaisey hui tina ko bhagane ki...Au tu humari naukarni ki shaadi karwana chahti thi humse...he kicks the flower vase ...tejaswani was witnessing all
this..and she finally breaks her silence..

Tejaswani : Bilkul thik kaha aap ne..Woh bandhua larki aapki shaadi apki uss naukrani se karwana chahti thi magar hum ne aisa nahi hone diya...
suraj looks at her shocked and asks did she knew that tina has run away ?

Tejaswani : Haan humein pata tha...

*FLASH BACK*

Pandit asks the groom to sit suraj sits down but vivaan was no where to be seen..ranjhana goes to find him and tejaswani was just standing there when she gets as call
she picks it but there was so much noise so she goes to a side and sees vivaan talking on phone and asking tina if she's safely managed to escape ...Tejaswani was
shocked to listen this ...she was still holding her phone near her ear she came back to her senses when she heard saying this someone on phone ...

"Tejaswani ji iss se pehle k bohat dair ho jaye hum tohka bta dete hain k jiss larki se tohre bete suraj ka vivah hoga woh Tina nahi imli hogi...abb apne bete ki
zindagi tohre haatho'n main hai..k Tohka kia karna hai...yaa toh sabko tina k bare me btai k apni badnaami karwa lo yaa phir Chakor ka paasa uhi pe palat do"

call ends and she thinks for a minute and then leaves fom there...vivaan comes and sits in mandap and tejaswani goes to bring the bride along with ranjhana and she
very cleverly sees chakor's reflection in a small mirror and takes her..

*FLASH BACK ENDS*

Tejaswani : Beta hum nahi chahte they k humari badnaami ho isliye humne uss chakor ko apkey sath mandap main bhijwa diya..abb agy jo karna hai woh aapki marzi..aap
iss shaadi ko nahi bhi mante toh bhi hume koi masla nahi..Badnami toh uss bandhua larki ki hi hogi..

suraj thinks of something and then turns to go somewehere...but before going he asks tejaswani...

Suraj : Humara kamra phirse sajwa dijiye mummy...
tejaswani : par aap kaha'n jaa rhaye hain aur kia socha hai aap ne..
suraj : Humne jo socha hai woh hum apko baad main btayenge pehle aap apni bahu k grah pravesh ki tayyariya'n kijiye or humara kamra tayyar karwaiye phirse..

Suraj leaves...

At chakor's house both chakor and imli were still in their bridal dresses bhuvan and kasturi were miffed with chakor but chakor managed to calm them down...

Imli : Deedee Humar shaadi vivaan babu se hui gai hai...or tohri suraj se..
chakor: Nahi imlii naam matt le uss insaan ka..mere nazar main yeh shaadi koi maaney nahi rakhti...

Suddenly the door opens with a thudd and suraj was standing their holding the doors..and says..

Suraj : Par humari nazar main yeh shaadi bohat maaney rakhti hai...

chakor : tum..tumhari himmat kaisey hui mere ghar aane ki..niklo yaha'n se...

suraj : Haqq se aye hain hum yaha'n...apna haq lene...

chakor : Konsa haq ?

suraj points at chakor and says "tum"

this shocked chakor,imli,bhuvan and kasturi..

kasturi : ee kaa kahat ho chote maalik..humar bitiya ( suraj interupts her )

suraj : Apki bitiya abb humari dharam patni hai...aur iss par poora haq banta hai humara...chalo humare sath..

chakor : Khuli aankho'n sapna dekhna band kar do suraj...main na toh iss shaadi ko maanti hun aur na hi tumhare jaisey insaan ko apna pati manti hun...

Suraj did not said anything he just came forward and picked chakor on his shoulders ...kasturi bhuvan tried to stop him chakor was also trying but in vain..he took
her and made her sit in the car ( Not jeep this time ) and started to drive..

Chakor : Kia batmeezi hai suraj ? Main iss shad ko nahi manti...Main tumhare stah nahi rahungi...gaarhi roko..warna main..

suraj : warna kiaa ??

chakor : main chalti gaari se kood jaungi...

suraj stopped the car because he knew that chakor can do anything if she decided...he unbuckled his seat belt and moved closer to chakor...chakor was about to open the
car door when he holds her dupatta ( which was her veil few hours ago ) and takes it off...

chakor was scared about what he's doing ...

chakor : yeh kia ...kia kar rahye ho..dupatta do mera wapas...

suraj did't said anything he just held chakor's hands and tied them with her dupatta...chakor was asking him to leave her but in vain...after tying her hands he came
little more closer to buckle her seat belt...their faces were mee inches away...they both looked at each other but this time only anger could be seen in their eyes..

chakor : tum thik nahi kar rahye surja..
suraj : kyo'n seat belt lagana kanooni kaidaa hai...aur seat belt aisey hi lagate hain..
chakor : main seat belt ki baat nahi kar rahi...yeh jo tum kar rahey ho yeh galat hai...( she said angrily )
suraj : Jo karna hai hum ghar jaa kar karenge tab tak tum apna muh band rakho or chup chaap bethi rho...
chakor : Par mainn..( she opened her mouth to say something when suddenly suraj stuffed hid handkerchief in her mouth t make her quite )

Suraj stopped the car when they reached at haveli...chakor was still tryine to open her hands but it was useless...suraj comes out of the car and opens the door for chakor too
But she refuses to get down..

Suraj : Lagta hai tumhey humari baaho'n main baar baar aana bohat passand hai...
chakor was confused at what he sad but her confusion was clearded once he picked her in his arms...somehow chakor managed to throw the hankerchief that was in her mouth..

Chakor : suraj kia kar rahey ho neechey utaro mujhe...maine kaha niche utara mujhe...

suraj did not listen to her and was standing at the enternace gate where tejaswani was already present with rice kalash and red aalta for chakor's grah pravesh...

suraj : Iski zaroorat nahi hai mummy...Humari dharam patni ko agar humne niche utara toh yeh light ki speed se bhaag jayegi...hataiye yeh sab..

he takes chakor to his room directly and throws her on the bed which was decorated again by now ...chakor looked at the room confused and angry she got up from bed
and asked suraj to open her hands...and suraj did the same...he then goes toward the door and locks it..chakor's heart batw as getting faster now...she looked
at the decorated bed and then at the door...and the saw suraj coming toward her with a smirk...he was getting closer and she was moving back..and finally a wall
blocked her way...he places his arms around her on the wall and comes more closer...

suraj: Tumhe kia laga tha ? ke tum meri shaadi apni behan imli se karwa dogi humari naukrani se ?
chakor: Haan main chahti thi tumhari shaadi imli se ho ta k imli or uskey bache ko unka haqq mil jaye..
suraj: kiss haq ki baat kar rahi hai tu ? aur tujhe yeh haq kisney diya k tu humari shaadi karwaye woh bhi aisy lrki se jise hum muh tak nahi lagate..
chakor: Bass suraj ( she shouted ) main apni behan k khilaaf ek lafz nahi sunungi ...mein toh yeh hargziz nahi chahti thi k meri behan ko tum jaisa ghatiya insaan
miley magar uskey bache ko uska haq dilana zaroori tha isliye maine tina ko bhagaya...
suraj : Haan tune tina ko bhagaya aur uski jagah apni behan ki shaadi karwana chahti thi magar afsos...afsos aisa ho na saka...aur tum phass gai iss rishtey main...

chakor did't know what to say she was thinking about something when suddenly she realized something and said..

Chakor : Main jaanti hun k sab ne jo mujh pat ilzaam lagaya hai k mainey imli or apni adla badli ki hai woh ghalat hai isliye main iss shaadi ko nahi manti...magar tum
tum mujhe yaha'n laane k liye mere ghar tak chale aye...tum itni asaani se mujhe apni patni sweekaar kaisey kar saktey ho ? Yeh tab hi mumkin hai agar...
adla badli TUM ne ki ho...( she looked at him )
suraj : (smirked) Waisey issbata main hume koi shaqq nahi k tu hai bohat hoshiyaar...samajhdaar magar aaj apni hi game main maat khaa gai ...
chakor: toh adla badli tumne ki thi ? ( she asked angriyl )
suraj : nahi...humne nahi ki thi magar jisne bhi ki hai usne bohat shubh kaam kiya hai..
chakor: kia matlab ?
suraj ; matlab yeh k tum ek national marathon runner ho...tumhari wajah se jail jaa kar humari jitni badnaami hui thi hum woh sab wasool karenge abb tumse...
chakor: aur tumhe aisa q lagta hai k mein ek katputli ki tarha'n tumhare isharo'n par naachu'ngi ?
suraj : thik hai matt maan humari baat...tu hume chorh de...or vivaan imli ko chorh dega...phi pata hai kia hoga ( he said while moving away ) hum btate hain...
Imli ki badnaami hogi...teri maa-baap gaao'n main apna muh dikhane layak nahi rahenge...or tu marathon ace runner 501 tera career yu chutkiyo'n main barbaad ho jayega..
toh agar abb tu chahti hai k aisa kuch na ho toh tu humare sath ahi patni ki tarha reh or baaki vivaan ko imli ko apnane ki zimmedaari humari...waadah karte hain hum..

Chakor was confused about what to do..she decided not to react in anger or hurry because her entire family's respect is at stake now...She reacted calmly and said..

Chakor : Mujhe sochne k liye waqt chahiye...
suraj smirked and said : thik hai jitna waqt lena hai le lo...( in his mind : kyo'n k hum bohat achi taha'n jante hain k tum apni ek khushi ki khatir itney logo'n ki zindagi
daav par nahi lagaogi )

chakor looked at him and h was already looking at her ...she realized that its his room and now she has to stay here...he understood wha she's thinking and said..
Aaj raat tumhe oschne ka waqt de rahey hain...hum guest room main jaa kar so rahey hain...jab subha fasila le lo toh bta dena...waisye umeed hai tum humesha ki tarha
apni mahaanta dikhao or sabke hitt ( favor ) main faisla karo...

he leaves from there closing the door and chaor stood there really confused...she goes near bed but did not wanted to sleep on it so she sat on ground placing her hand on
bed ...took off her jewellry and threw it on bed...and she fell asleep sometime later..

The end

Pre-ap : Suraj comes to his room in morning and sees chakor sleeping on floor...Vivaan comes to talk to chakor but sees her and shirtless suraj on bed...

I'm really sorry if this chapter was not intersting ...As i mentioned I had problem writing this chapter so therefore it was inconsistent...If you feel the story is
getting boring please feel free to tell ...I will try my best to make it more interesting...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally, Chakor sasural aa gayi!
Update soon, can't wait to see Vivaan's reactions!
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Posted: 8 years ago
chashmish, I owe you 5 comments yaar 😆
But tbh, I've read till chapter 22 😆, just haven't commented yet
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Posted: 8 years ago
Jasmine❤️Finally ...wait is over...beautifully written. .loved it...thank u so so much dear.
Ab aage sukor yi sukor honge na????


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Posted: 8 years ago
Good update Jaz. Loved how your Suraj is different yet a bit same from the show. Eagerly waiting to find out about the baby. I'm sure you won't disappoint us.

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