Sukor Diwali special os.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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As you all know that KN has planned to kill Suraj this diwali. So here's an os based on the situation.

Tejaswini was very tensed regarding the stubborn decision of Suraj's not to leave Azadganj. She knew that her son was in a grave danger and she knew that only one person could save his life, Chakor. She therefore decided to take her help in any way possible.
That night she visited Vimli's room.
T-Beta hum andar aye?
V- Are Badi Maa aap inti raat ko yaha? Aiye na.
T- Beta tum logo se hume ek bohot zaruri baat karni thi. Beta Suraj ki jaan khatre mein hain. Hume bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hain. Kamal ji use nahi chodenge.
I- Are aap chinta maat kijiye humara plan full proof hain.
T- Nahi beta tum Kamal ji ko nahi jante. Unhe gaddari se sakt nafrat hain. Unhone Suraj ko inti asani se maaf kaise kiya? Kuch toh gadbad hain. Please mere bte ko bachalo. Hum kaise jiyenge agar use kuch ho gaya toh. Please beta hum pair padte hain tum dono Ke.
V-Are yeah aap kya kar rahi hain? Suraj humara bhai hain. Hum use kuch nahi hone denge aap nischint rahiye.
I-Haan hum didi she baat karenge. Woh kuch na kuch zaroor karegi.
T- Beta aapni is Maa ko dilasa Dene ka shukriya. Hum chahenge ki Jo bhi tumlog kar rahe ho woh safal ho.
She leaves.
V- Suraj ko sachme savdhan rehna hoga. Sher ki gufa main ja chuka hain woh. Humari baat toh nahi manega shayad Chakor ki man le.
Next day Vivaan meets Chakor and tells her about the possible danger.
C- Shaak toh hume bhi ho raha hain . Us KN ne kaise Suraj ko inti jaldi maaf kiya? Hum baat karenge usse. Agar uski jaan ko sach mein khatra hain toh hume uski taraf nazar rakhni chahiye. Samne diwali hain aur hum nahi chahte ki Tejaswini ji Ke life main bhi andhera chha Jaye. Imli she kehna ki haveli aur uske bahar bhi Suraj ko woh akela na chode. Baki hum dekhte hain.

Here Suraj is unable to find their divorce papers.
S- Are jeep main hi toh the. Kaha Gaye yeh papers? Agar nehi mile toh Chakor hume kaccha chaba jayegi. Hain bhagwan uske haatho she Marne se accha hum KN ke haatho mar Jaye. At least Maut asan hogi. Suraj laughed at his own thoughts. Wah beta Jo Aaj tak aapne baap se nahi Dara woh ek ladki Se dar gaya? Sach kehte hain. Shadi Ke baad aadmi insaan nahi biwi ka gulam ban jata hain.
Suraj did not even realise how he had started accepting the changes in his life regarding Chakor.
Suddenly his phone rang. The Caller Id showed Chakor's name.
S- Shaitan ka naam liya nahi ki call agaya uska. Chal beta maar kha hi le.
Haan Chakor bolo.
C- Humse abhi Milo gaon Ke bahar wale talab Ke pas. Jaldi ana aur khyal rakhna ki noi dekh na le. Akele ana.
S- Are wah ek din mein itna progress? Usdin toh bol rhi thi Ke hum tumhare kuch nahi lagte aur Aaj chup chup kar...Suraj teased.
C- Aapni bakwas aapne pass rakho aur jaldi ao zaruri baat hain.

Suraj reached the lake in 15 mins. Seeing his jeep Chakor turned around and signalled him to come fast. She was wearing a light blue anarkali and her hair was open as always. She was in her regular simple attire and yet Suraj felt that someone had knocked his breath out.
S- Khoobsurat toh hain...Suraj murmured and the next moment widened his eyes hearing his own words. Aaj tu pakka pitega Suraj he whispered to himself. He ran down to Chakor.
S- Boliye Madamji hume kyu yaad kiya? Ghode ki tarha daudte daute aye hain. Bas aap Ke darshaan Ke liye. Chakor glared at him.
C- Phir she bakwaas? Suraj baat bohot zaruri hain. Tumahari jaan ko khatra hain Suraj. Dhyaan rakkho aapna. Kuch aisa maat khana ya peena Jo gadbad lage. KN bohot shaatir hain. Usne tumhe aise hi maaf nahi kiya woh zaroor kuch karega. Imli she humne kaha hain ki tumhara saath na chode. Par tum zyaada Khatro ki Khiladi maat ban Jana. Baat mano meri...
S- Are are bas kaan pak jayenge humare. Hume pata hain ki kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hain. Par humbhi Suraj Rajvansi hain. Kayaro ki tarha bhagenge nehi.
C- Hum bhagne Ke liye nahi bol rahe hain...bas keh rahe hain ki dhyaan rakkho apna.Jab tum akele hoge tab agar attack huya toh? Meri baat ko samjho agar tumhe kuch ho gaya toh...
S- Toh kya Chakor? Duniya she ek bojh toh halka hoga.
C- Suraj tum badal chuke ho. Hume tumhari utni hi zaroorat hain jitni ki Vivaan aur Imli ki. Hum ek team hain aur tumhare bina yeh team adhoori hain.
Suraj was overwhelmed. The girl he had tormented for years was supporting him, worrying for him. How could anyone be so selfless? He stared at Chakor with a warm smile.
C- Muskura kyu rahe ho?
Suraj snapped out of his thoughts Shit Shit Shit!!
S-Wo..woh...tum kabse khayal rakhne lagi humara woh bhi mummy she zyada? Suraj covered his smile with a teasing smirk. Perfect biwi!
C- Hu...hum kyu fikar kare woh toh hum nahi chahte ki Tejaswini ji ko dukh pohche bas isiliye.
S-Accchaa? Chalo man liya! Ab meri chinta main bhook hartal par mat beht Jana. Khana nahi khaogi toh sukhi lakdi ki taraf koi mudh utha Ke bhi nahi dekhega. Aur tum humari chinta na Karo hum savdhaan rahenge. Suraj smiled and left.
C- Sanki hain yeh ladka. Chakor smiled and shook her head.

Diwali time.
Kamal Narayan had ordered Suraj and Imli to celebrate Diwali in the basti to which they had obliged. It was actually his plan. He had arranged for some bombs and placed them in a box of crackers. He had mentioned his men to give that box only to Suraj so that as soon as he lit those it would blast. No one would suspect him and he could easily put the blame on the quality of the crackers. Later that night.
The basti was adorned with handmade diyas dolled up like a bride. Vivaan Imli Suraj were outside waiting for the crackers they had bought for the basti to arrive. The arrangement was specially done by Suraj and had vowed Imli Chakor and Vivaan to keep it a secret lest KN suspects something.
Vivaan had worn a light green Sherwani and Imli had worn a beautiful pink saree. Suraj had dressed up in a dark blue Sherwani looking as handsome as always. The whole basti was outside but Suraj's eyes strained the crowd to catch a glimpse of Chakor. And when she came out wearing a blood red saree Suraj felt that his heart has skipped a beat. Chakor had not put on any makeup except her regular kajal. Her ears were adorned with small jhumkas and her hairs were open as usual.
Woww was all Suraj could utter as she approached them with a huge smile on her face.
I- Didi humne kaha tha na ki tu yeh saree main pataka lagegi.
V- Haan Chakor sachme kamal ki lag rahi ho.
Suraj could pass no comment. He was just staring at her like a love struck teenager.
C- Tum hume aise kyu dekh rahe ho?,Pata tha hume is saree main hum bikul acche nahi lag rahe. Chakor frowned.
S- Are inti sundar bandariya aaj pehli baae dekhi toh...
Chakor did not know whether to take that as a compliment or insult.
C- Hum change karke aate hain. She said glaring at Suraj who immedeatly realised the blunder he had caused.
Areee didi sun toh Imli shouted but she was already gone.

Huh sundar bandariya! Aisa koi bolta hain kya? Compliment bhi thik se dena nahi aata! Sadu! Chakor muttered angrily. She failed to understand why Suraj's compliment meant so much to her. Mujhe kya? Sadta rahe woh gadha.
As she was trying to walk in her saree preventing a fall she heard some noises behind a hut. Two people were talking there in hushed tones
P1- Are yeah packet ko guma maat Dena. Bade Malik ne kaha hain yeh anar sirf Suraj babu Ke haath mein hi Dena hoga.
P2-Kyu?
P1- kyu ki yeah anar nahi bomb hain...special Lucknow she aya hain. Chalo Chalo jaldi isse pehle ki koi dekhe.
Chakor's heart froze. Tejaswini ji was right, Suraj's life was in grave danger. She had to save him. After all he was their teammate. How would she face Tejaswini ji if something happened to him. He thought of Suraj dying made her feel sick. He might have been a jerk initially but he had transformed. No one deserved to die especially when fighting for her sake.
She tried to run back to Suraj but was held back by her pallu which was caught in a bush.
C- Ab isko bhi abhi atakna tha? Chakor cursed her fate.
She tugged her pallu but it did not come out
C- Daak baba please Suraj ko bacha lijiye. Woh yeh deserve nahi karta please. Chakor cried. She gave one last pull tearing her pallu into two halves. She thanked her stars and ran like a mad woman. Here KN's people had convinced Suraj to light the anar. They had moved away the other people of the basti to a distance saying that the anar was a special one and would burst with a lot of light and smoke. People had happily obliged not knowing what a dangerous thing that cracker was.
Suraj had just brought the match stick to the anar when he saw Chakor running towards him like she ran in her marathons furiously shaking her head forbidding him to light the cracker. But she was late. The cracker had already caught fire. Chakor had just come at the nick of time to push Suraj away but both could not escape the blast.
The bomb blasted creating a lot of chaos as the basti people ran for their lives. Vivaan and Imli called for their respective siblings making their way through smoke and fire.

Chakor coughed as she woke up getting suffocated by the smoke.
C-Su...Suraj! She weakly cried out her eyes searching frantically for her so called husband.
She saw Suraj lying unconscious at a distance. She tried to get up and run towards him only to find that she could not move an inch. She looked at her leg only to find it pretty badly burnt.
Mai!! She cried out in pain as she dragged her tired body towards Suraj. On reaching him she saw that his forehead was already bleeding and he had multiple burns on his hands and chest.
Suraj! Suraj utho! She tapped his cheeks with her slightly charred palms.
Dekho hume nikal na hain yaha sein. So kyu rahe ho? Humesha mazak accha nahi hota hain. Mujhe gussa mat dillao she weakly glared at his calm senseless face. Tears Pooled up her orbs. Suraj dekho tumne wada kiya tha ki tum apna khayal rakhoge. Please apna wada maat todo. Hum Tejaswiniji ko kya muh dikhayenge Suraj?,Accha accha dekho tumhe dosti karni thi na humse? Chalo Aaj she hum dost thik hain? She took his palms in hers and softly rubbed it. Aapni dost ki baat mano please. Dekho zyada natak mat Karo thik hain? Darao mat hume. Utho naa. She shook his limp body. She pulled his head on her lap. Accha tum jeet gaye . Main darr gayi dekho. Ab aankhe kholo please??? She pleaded. Her head was already heavy from crying. The smoke was suffocating her. She could feel that she was losing her senses. She saw a silhouette coming towards them.
Suraj ko bachalo please. This was all she could utter before collapsing on Suraj's chest and losing herself in the world of darkness.

Chakor could see Suraj moving away from her.
Kaha ja rahe ho?
Tumne mujhe mar dala Chakor. Mar dala.
Khooni ho tum she saw Tejaswini ji 's tear stained face.
Na..nahi humne nahi Mara kisiko. She shrieked.
Bye Chakor.. she saw Suraj moving back.
Na..nahi Suraj mat jao chodke mat jao mujhe yaha...Suraj!
Chakor woke up with a jerk.
Chakor, Chakor thik ho na tum? She felt a hand soothing her back.
She hugged the person tightly. Hu..humne nahi Mara kisiko. Suraj ko humne nahi Mara she cried.
Ssshh Sshh Chakor! The voice called out. Chakor looked up at the person dazed.
Suraj tum zi..zinda ho? Her voice quivered.
Aree inti jaldi is afat se chutkara thodi na milega. Suraj laughed.
His laughter made a wave of relief rush through Chakor's body. She hugged him again.
Phir aisa kabhi mat Karna..pata hain hume laga ki humne tumhe kho diya. She wept uncontrollably ducking her face on his chest. She felt safe just like in her Mai's lap.
Suraj's eyes widened at her confession. A part of his heart fluttered with joy.
Are shhhshh Chakoriya! Humein kuch nahi huya. Aur humse zyada chot toh tumhe ai hain. Haath pair jala dale aapne. Kya zaroorat thi us bomb Ke samne kudne ki? Badi ai Azandganj ki Rani... Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh? Suraj scolded her soflty still cradling her in his arms.
Hum aise kaise Marne dete humare dost ko? Chakor reasoned her actions between her tears.
Dost?
Aur nahi toh kya? She offered him a weak smile.
Dost. He whispered in affirmation and returned her a smile. A genuine one.
Pagal ho tum puri ki puri her said as he ran his hand through he tangled mane.
Tumse zyada nahi. She grinned back at him laying on the hospital bed still holding his hand like her life depended on it.
Waise ek baat kahu? Marogi toh nahi? Suraj asked. Chakor nodded in a no.
Us red saree main woh anar wale bomb se bhi zyada pataka lag rahi thi. He winked at her.
Chakor gasped as a crimson blush rose up her cheeks.
She slapped his forearm with the free hand.
Ahhh! Sanki aurat. He cried out and then they both broke into peals of laughter.
That Diwali had welcomed a new light to their relationship. Both had welcomed a lot of changes they were still unaware of.

The End.

Thanks for enduring one more os.
Criticism is always welcomed.😃
Edited by madhurasen - 8 years ago

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