Chakor & Aditya Fanfiction

Fan fiction story of Chatya...
For all Udaan fans...

@Tamanna

BF v/s GF

He was standing a little far way from a beautiful lake. His hands were crossed across his chest. It's seemed he was enjoying the view. But in reality he was lost in his thoughts. An 21 years old baddy boy, totally nonsense and idiot according to his best friend obviously was standing there and thinking something, it's really very rare.

He bent down and picked up some stones. He threw them into the lake one after one.

"Hey! Tum mujhe dunia ke kisi bhi jagah akela nahi chorne wala na?" someone asked him from behind.

He didn't turn. He knew her. He could recognize her voice from anywhere of this earth.

"Sunai nahi deta aapko? Main kuch keh rahi hu" she shouted while coming down from the road as the lake was a little bit downwards from the rocky road.

He threw another stone into the lake.

"Excuse me, sir.. aap...Ouch!" she shouted " Adiii help"

He turned and saw her losing balance but before he could help her, she succeeded to manage herself in time.

He again turned away and threw another stone.

She reached over him.

"Sunai nahi deta tumhe? Kab se bola rahi hu." She was angry.

"tum mujhe thore der ke liye hi sahi par akele chor diya karo"

"Hello! Ye mera line tha. Maine thore der pehle yahi kaha tumse. Sunai nahi deta tumhe? Apna kan check karwalo" she cleaned her dress which was covered with dust.

"Behave yourself. Dur jake apna dress saff karo."

"Oi, keh toh aisey raha hain ki dust allergy mujhe nahi tumhe hain."

"baat allergy ka nahi, manner ka hain. Koi insaan tmhari samne khara hain, or tum..."

"insaaan! Kaha hain" she looked around.

He didn't answer and threw another stone.

She laughed.

"Kya hua? Aisey devdas ban ke ku khara hain yaha?" she picked up some stones from the ground.

"Tumhari tarah bina waja hasne ki adat nahi hain na mujhe" he answered rudely.

"Acha ji, abhi yaha koi tumhe dek lega aisey toh sochega, ketna sarif bacha hain. Par unhe kya pata hoga, ki ye bacha sirf abhi abhi sarif bana hain" she forgot to throw the stones inside the lake.

'tum apna bakbak band karegi thore der ke liye?"

"ok kar leti hu band apna mu ...THORE DER KE LIYE" she smiled.

For sometimes, both of them enjoyed each others presence silently. For them throwing stones into that lake is a game which they enjoy the most than rest of the games from the early days of their childhood.

"mera stone tumse jayada dur gaya" Adi exclaimed as he threw a stone.

"Cheat! Mere wala jayada dur gaya."

"Ok fine, yakin nahi hota toh, ye wala dekho ketna dur jata hain" he threw another one "deka? East or west Adi is the best"

"acha!" she threw the stones on him one by one.

"Hey! Arey! Stupid lag raha hain mujhe" he tried to save himself.

'Acha! Toh or lo na" she threw another one.

"Ouch!" he covered his forehead.

"Damn. Lagi kya jor se" she reached over him "dekha" she held his hands.

"haan, bohot jor se lagi hain. Tum hato yaha se"

'arey, maine toh etne jor se pheke hi nahi pathar tumhe. Toh lagi keisey? Show me na"

"Ok, see" he showed her his forehead.

"Kaha kuch hua hain?" she was confused.

"Hua kuch bhi nahi darling." He lifted her by holding her waist. "feku tumhe lake mie. Huh, bolo?"

"Adi, please, please. Niche utaro mujhe." She struggled.

"Say sorry."

"Dosti mei no sorry no thanks na!" she said innocently.

"acha! Feku?"

"SORRY. SORRY... dobara nahi karungi aisa. Ab choro."

"good. Yaad rakhna" he left her.

"haan, yaad rakhungi." She again picked up some stones and began throwing stones at him.

"You! I am warning you. Isbar agar tumhe pakra lia na toh chorne wala nahi hu."

"Ok, ok" she laughed.

"ufff" he took a deep breath " 501 Keisa gaya exam tumhari?"

"Hey don't you dare to call me 501." She warned him.

"501"

"Adi I am warning you. Bohot pitega tum mujhse"

"OK OK ... abb tho bata do.. "

"She too took some deep breaths before speaking.

"Great. Mera exam kabhi kharap jata hain kya?"

"Ha ha, yaha kya kar rahi ho?"

"Wahi jo tum kar raha ho."

" Main!" he smiled ruefully. "thand bohot hain na?"

"Haan, bohot jayada. Meri kulfi ban jaigi thori der mei." She rubbed her hands.

"Be careful, kahi tumhe koi kha na jai sach mei kulfi samajh ke"

"mujhe kon khaiga! Mujhe koi afford hi nahi kar paiga."

"oh really?"

"YES" she said proudly

"Kya hua? Tum yaha wo bhi iswaqt." He asked.

"Ye toh main bhi puch sakti hu na tumse."

"Haan, par pehle maine pucha na... toh you should answer first."

"Kuch nahi re, Mai Bapu ki bich phirse jhagra ho gaya. Kabhi kabhi lagta hain bache main nahi wo hain."

"Jhagre sehi payar barta hain." He answerd.

She shot him an angry glance.

"arey maine aisa suna hain. Sach mei"

"acha! Wo payar se lartey hain ya nafrat se ye mujhe jeisey samajh mei ata hi nahi"

"Acha baba, ab baksh do mujhe. Galti ho gain"

"Tum yaha kya kar raha hain?"

"Papa ko bohot miss kar raha tha. You know what, tumhari pass toh Mummy Papa dono hain, phir bhi tum upset rehti hain kabhi kabhi. Par mere pass Papa bhi nahi hain or mummy bhi door rehti hai mujhe."

"acha toh according to you jinke pass Mai Bapu hotey hain unhe kabhi upset nahi hona chahiye? Kya tum bhi yaar."

"haan hona toh aisahi chahiye, par in case of you... you know.."

"You.. apna mu band rakho. Aisa kuch nahi hain. Khush rehna na rehna ye khud pe depend karta hain. Acha etna pata hain toh tum upset rehti hi ku hain? Batao batao?"

"wo... Main.. main kaha upset rehti hu. Tum hain na, tum mujhe upset rehna detahi kaha hain."

"Wo maska with malai"

"Tarif karo toh bhi tujhe hazam nahi hota hain na."

He smiled.

"Tumhe pata hain tum mei maturity tere age ke hisab se jayada hain" she said.

"Aisa ku kaha? Mujhe toh aisa kuch nahi lagta"

"Hmm, wo isliye, dekh hum dono almost same age ke hain. Right?"

"Right."

"par tumhe ristey natey, feelings, emotions ke bare mei jayada pata hain."

"Mujhe toh aisa kabhi laga nahi. Or agar aisa hoga bhi toh reason hain, jo chiz hamare pass nahi hota hain uski ehmiat hame pata hota hain."

"Wo jo bhi ho. Par tumh mei maturity jayada hain...Iss liya he tho tum always meri bijli ka dabba ho"

"Haan, bakio ka toh pata nahi, par tumhse jayada hain ye keh sakta hu.'

"main apni hi bat kar rahi thi. Etna bhaw khane ki jarurat nahi hain."

"Btw, madam, ap kahi indirectly ye toh kena nahi chahti na ki larkio mei maturity jaldi a jati hain larko se." Adi asked his friend.

"Kehna chah rahi hu matlab? Main aisa keh rahi hu dear.'

"You! Apni apko bohot mahan samjahti hain na?"

"of course. Mahan toh samjhungi hi na, larki jo hu."

"He ha ho.. good joke. You girls are good for nothing."

"Acha! Tu jab 10 sal ka tha tab se Abha mausi tumhe ekla samal rahi hain na. ajtak kisi chiz ka kami hone diya hain unhone tumhe. Or tu keh raha hain girls are good for nothing."

"Oh c'mon. jab girls and boys ek dusre ke bare mei bura boltey hain tab unke mom and dad include nahi hotey hain. You know this."

"Ya ya, pata hain. Par girls ke bare mei koi galat bat bolta hain toh mera khoon khol jata hain. Or tu hain ki hamesha...'

"Ok shona, nahi kehta. Wo toh bus larne ke liye bolta hu. Orna ye toh hum inkar kar hi nahi saktey ki is duniya mei hum atehi nahi hamre maa ke elaba."

"Exactly. Chalo etna akal hain tum mei."

"Tum bohot upset hain kya?" she asked him.

"Nahi toh. Thora sa tha. Tum hain na ab, I am ok now."

"nahi, I mean, tum etne suljha hua bat tabhi karta ho jab tum bohot jayada upset rehta ho."

"arey nahi. Dekho main ketna khush hu." He smiled sarcastically.

"Oh shut up" she hit him "btw, tum manta ho na, larkio mei maturity jaldi ati hain larko se"

"Nahi, aisi koi baat nahi hain. Jayada feko mat."

"I can proof it."

"Acha! Toh proof it"

"Dekho, larkio ki shadi ki age 18 or larko ki 21 ku hota hain?'

"Wo toh physical maturity ki baat kar rahi thi abtak."

"Nahi" she hit him again "stupid. Main mental maturity ki hi baat kar rahi thi. Physical and mental dono maturity hi jaldi ati hain"

"Ye bakwas hain. Kuch bhi mat bolo. Science maine para hain. Aisa kuch nahi likha tha."

"arey ye biology ka topic thori hain? Ye toh psychology ki topic hain. Aur haan baat baat par Scince ko beech mein lena ka adat abb chore do"

"Nahi Chodonge ...Tumse matlab...wo, toh tumhe ajkal psychology mei interest a gaya. Great yaar. Pagalo ka Dr banna hain tujhe?"

"pagalo ka Dr.! weisey idea etna bhi bura nahi hain. Tmhari ilaz free mei kar dungi." She looked at him from the corner of his eyes with an evil grin on her face.

"ho gaya kallyan pagalo ka. Ache insanoo ko bhi tu pagal banake rakh degi." He murmured.

"Tum kehna kya chahta ho. Aisey bhige billi jeisey ku bol raha hain? Himmat hain toh mu pe bolo na."

"Eeey main kisi se nahi darta. Or tumse toh dare meri juti" he pointed his finger towards her.

"Han, darpok kahi ka" she crossed her arms across her chest.

"You .. tu aise nahi maegi na. pani mei feku tumhe?" he took a step towards her.

"Nahiii... main toh majak kar rahi thi. Tum mera dost hain na. mera best friend" she squeezed his cheeks.

"Tumhe pata hai na, koi mera gaal chuye mujhe bilkul pasand nahi. Or tu ..."

"arey koi or .. or mujh mei fark hain na. or weisey bhi... hey wait mere pass kuch hain tere liye" she took out a chocolate from her jacket's pocket and gave him.

"Oh wow, meri favourite chocolate."

"Hey, meri bhi haan. Par ye tumhari liye hain."

"Thank ... hey ye kharoch ke nishan keisey tumhara hat mei" he held her hand as he was about to take away the chocolate.

"wo ye, us Vivaan ke sath larne ke waqt lag gaya."

"Lar ku rahi thi tum usse" he unwrapped the chocolate.

"iss choco ke liye yaar. Usne apna wala kha liye, n then mera wala lene wala tha."

"What!"he was about to eat the chocolate but denied as he heard her.

"Haan. Us Vivaan ke bache ne nak pe dam kar ke rakha hain."

"Is chocolate ke liye tu apne dost se lari? Or phir mujhe de rahi hain. Etna payar ku lutaya ja raha hain mujh pe, puch sakta hu?" he had a bite of that chocolate.

"arey wo dost hain. Tum world best dost ho."

"Vivvan se bare dost!"

"No re duffer. Dekho Vivaan ka rista jo hain na usmei hameshai kuch na kuch kami tha . So chalta hain. Or ..."

"tum rehne do, in short, jo chiz best friend ke sath nahi chalta wo kesi aur ke sath chalta hain. Right?"

"Haan, exactly. Wahi kehne wali thi main."

"Or jo chiz girl friend ke sath nahi chalta wo dost ke sath chalta hain. You know, difference between best friend and girl friend."

"ya ya, I know. Ketne GF hain tumhara?"

"Tumhari waja se koi nahi banti meri GF"

"Main kya .. maine kya kia?" she was confused.

"Jeisehi settings hone wali hoti hain na pata nhi unhe keisey pata chal jata hain ki tum meri dost ho"

"toh?" she inquired.

"toh... toh hota ye hain madam, ki wo kehtey hain, ki pagalo ke dost pagal hotey hain, or pagalo se wo dosti nahi rakhtey."

"Ohh, toh iska matlab ye hain... tumhe jindagi bhar bus mera hi sath hain. Mere elaba tumhe koi or milne wali nahi hain" she laughed.

"weisey.. mujhe jarurat bhi nahi hain."

"wahi toh. A BF is better than BF"

"matalb?" he asked.

"Matlab a best friend is better than a boy friend"

"Huh! Abhi keh rahi hain, jab koi mil jaiga na toh mujhe chorke no do egyara ho jaigi"

"Hey, Meri bijli ka dabba agar maine aisa kabhi kia na, toh chahe toh jaan se mar dena mujhe"

"sshh, pagal... abhi toh sikhaya na tune difference between BF and BF. Wo jo bhi kamina ho ga na, uske sath tu khush rehna,... tu khush toh main bhi khush."

"Pagal. Chahe wo jo bhi kamina ho... tusse bara kamina nahi ho sakta" they hugged each other.

"hey I am getting late yaar. Jana hain mujhe." Adi said after separating himself from the hug.

"Kaha jana hain"

"Coffee shop. Reporter ho kar v Coffee shop par kam karna par raha hai .OFFF !!! ." He walked away.

" Investigation ke liya kuch v tho karnai parta hai...Hey...listen... WAITER." She laughed.

"Chakor!!" he turned.

"arey difference between best friend and girl friend. Girl friend tumse teas karne ke liye waiter bolegi, par maine, toh majak mei kaha. Sachi."

"Ya ya, I know, tu ketna sach bolti hain."

"Btw, waiter.. kal Sunday hain. Kal movie chale.?"

"Ji madam, agar is waiter ko kam se chutti miley toh jarur challenge." He smiled sarcastically and turned.

"Ok waiter... weisey main majak nahi, tane mar rahi thi. Tumhe.. WAITER. Bye take care. Kal miltey hain." She shouted.

Phew after a long time read a chatya ff. Beautifully written tamanna. Loved it.

nyc attempt thamanna,plz do cntinue

aur mera vivaan kabsae itna bada foodie ban gaya apna wala khakae,chakor bhi cheenlii..gud gng vivaan,lage raho

its amazing...beautiful ff dear ⭐️😊

Sometime jealousy is not bad

10:30 P.M,

ADITYA'S HOUSE

It was a long and tiring day...it was not just the work, it was his also his mind. It kept playing back his conversation with Chakor & Vivaan in the camp...she didn't even blush at his compliments properly!...Chakor never say him sorry or Thank you..But today she thanks Vivaan
He was so lost in his thoughts that he didn't hear his maid calling him.

Maid, very loud: kya hua Aditya baba ?

Adi: kya hua? kyu chilla rhi ho?

Maid: Tum sun hi nahi rahen the...

Adi, embarrassed: haan theek hai theek hai...apka kaam hogaya?

Maid: Tumhara khane mein kya lenge ?

Adi: Aaj bhuk nahi hai...aap coffee bana ke flask mein rakh dena...mein pee lunga. Abhi mein sone jaa raha hu...Aap coffee bana ke chali jaana.

Maid: lekin tum bhuke so jayonge toh Abha memsahab hum kea bolo. Won hone tho tho tumhara khayal rhakne ko bola...

Adi: Kaki apko jo kaha gaya hai...wo karea Please !

Maid: kya baat hai Aditya baba...tum pareshan lag rahe hao? Chakor se jhagda ho gaya kya?

Adi: a-a-aapko aisa kisne bola hain? aisa k-kuch nahi hai.

He went to his room with this, leaving a smile on the maid's face. She made coffee for him all the while humming a love song keeping Adi and Chakor in mind. She was about to leave when someone rang the doorbell.

Maid: Arey Chakor tum ?

Chakor : Arey kaki tum abhi tak gayi nahi?

Maid : bas nikal rahi thi ...waise ek baat puchu?

Chakor : haan pucho.

Maid: Kya tum aur Aditya baba ka jhagda hua hai?

Chakor, blushing a bit: n-nahi toh

"dono ek jaise hain," the maid thought, "kitna pyaar kartein ye dono ek dusre se!...Akheer kyu nahi bachpan ka pyaar jo hai...Sirf 7 saal ka the Chakor jab Aditya baba pehli baar wosoko iss ghar par lekar aaiea tha Woski baad kitna kuch badal gea ... Aur inn dono ke ristey bhi...Pehla sirf dost tha ...abb dosti mein pyaar hai.. Inn dono ko dekh kar sahab aur memsahab ka pyaar bara ristey yeaad aa jata hai. ..."

Chakor : Kaki kaha kho gea ho...

Maid : Kuch nahi...

Chakor : Kaki humhe pata hai tum kea soch rahi ho... Yeahi soch rahi hop na yeh ladki se iss ghar ko chotkara kab milega...

Maid : Yeh tho jab pehli baar iss ghar par aaiea the tab socha . Lekin abb tho ... Abb bate band karo aur wosko shamhalo...

Chakor: kyu kya hua...uska mood kharab tha kya?

Maid nodded in response.

Chakor : khana bhi nahi khaya hoga?

Maid: nahi khaya...bas coffee banake ghar jane ko bola...aur bola ki wo sone jaa rahein hain.

Chakor : ye Adi bhi na...apna khayal toh jaise isko hai hi nahi...bacha samjhta hai khud ko - theek hai tum jao...mein usse dekhti hu.

The maid left with a smirk while Chakor went to Adi's room, blushing.

The lights were still on and Adi was half asleep on his bed...he was still wearing the same clothes. He had not even removed his coat. His shoes were also lying next to the bed. Chakor smiled at his sleeping form and kept his shoes at their proper place. Then she sat beside him on the bed.

CHAKOR'S POV:

Adi tum bhi na...Tumhe bhi pata hai ki mere aur vivaan ke beech mein kuch nahi...phir bhi tum itna pareshan ho jaate ho usse dekh kar...lekin itna pareshan hone ki kya zaroorat thi? Aaj mein tumse theek se baat bhi nahi kar paayi camp mein...shayad isliye. Phir bhi Adi...tumko pata hona chahiye ke Vivaav aur meri dunea alag hai ... Aur aab tho tum he meri duniea ho...ab mein aa gayi hu na...ab sab theek ho jayega.

She then caressed his hair making him open his eyes. Seeing Chakor he sat up on his bed.

Adi: Arey Chakor...tum iss waqt yahan?

Adi: haan...wo...actually aaj tumse baat nahi kar payi na camp mein...toh man kiya ki tumse mil lu.

Like a small kid, Adi forgot everything about Vivaan and his face lit up like a million stars.

Adi, moving close to her: Aapka man kiya?...(in flirty tone) mein bhi milu...(normal tone)aapse?

His question was to ask her if she was ready for his moves. Taking her smile as a yes, he smiled.

Chakor's pink cheeks turned crimson as he moved closer to her and her heart beat was faster than ever.

"Arye maiea re...iska ye slow motion waala romance," she thought, "kiss karna hai toh jaldi kare na...aise slow motion mein karega toh mere dil ka kya hoga? Uss din camp mein bhi...na jaane ye mere dil ki dhadkano ko itni tez kaise kar deta hai."

A shiver ran down her spine when she could feel his breath on her neck. She couldn't take it anymore...he made her so nervous that she felt that would faint. On the other hand Adi was enjoying all of this.

He placed a small kiss behind her ear and whispered "uss din camp mein reh gaya tha..Vivaan sahab jo aa gaye the."

Chakor, still blushing: waise aapne khaana khaya?

Adi: haan wo...wo mein...

Chakor, a little angry: nahi khaya na...kitni baar kaha hai ki tumhe khayal rakha karo?

Adi, smiling: Tum ho na.

Chakor, teasing: Aur agar mein nahi rahi toh?

The smile on Adi's face was replaced by a dead serious look at this.

Adi, keeping his eyes locked in hers: Chakor aisa kabhi mat bolna. Jab tak meri sanse chalengi...tab tak mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga...samjhi?

All this concern and love took her to cloud nine...and he proved once again that those 3 words which everyone considered necessary for a relationship was not so in disposable after all. She only smiled in response for no word could describe what she felt.

Chakor, still smiling: acha chalo...tum change karlo. mein khana banati hu tab tak.

Adi into casuals and found Chakor in kitchen...she had already changed into casuals and the food was almost ready too. Man this girl was fast.

Soon they had a pleasant time during dinner. After that Chakor went to her room (the room she always used on childhood when she visited Lhaknow). Wishing her a good night, Adi turned around to go to his own room when his mind stopped him.

He wondered if Chakor visited Vivaan...like she visited him. He knew this was insane yet the very idea was killing him. He had to ask her!
So he turned around again to face her.

And as though she had read his mind, her face had that "What stupid thing do you want to ask me this time?" look. This look was also accompanied by subtle smile for she knew that it was his incessant love that drove him to think like that.

Adi, ignoring the look on her face: V-vaise Chakor...Tum aise Vivan ke ghar pe bhi?

Chakor, a little shocked: Adiii!

Adi, not satisfied with the answer: m-mera matlab hai...ki wo bhi toh tumhari dost - dost hai na?...Aur bachpan mein v tho ek shat thi.

Chakor, soft tone: Tumhar bhi toh aur dost hain...kya wo sab tumhara ghar pe rukte hain? Aur bachpan mein muja woha rhukna pada ...Kuy yeh tum V jante ho... Aise V iss ghar par rhukne ka haq hai mera... Kunki yeh mera v ghar hai..."

Before he could answer, she threw herself into his arms. She then kissed him on one of his temples.

Chakor, noticing that he had softened at this: Aur aisa kyu tum bhi apne sawalon ka jawab jaante ho.

Adi smiled at her and left for his room. "Mein bhi na," he told himself before drifting into sleep, "pata nahi mujhe kya ho jaata hai".

On the other hand Chakor did not go to sleep immediately. Half an hour after he left for his room, she followed him to take a second glance at his peaceful face. She caressed his hair, this time carefully, so that she wouldn't wake him up.

"Good night Adi," she whispered before retiring to her room.

Originally posted by: creationschhavi

its amazing...beautiful ff dear ⭐️😊

totally love chatya nokjhok 😆😳

u portray everthing in it amazingly 👏😳

Thank you dear .😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

Wow tammana awesome yaar..😳

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

Wow tammana awesome yaar..😳

It was really very sweet, cute and romantic. Plz update soon.

Thank you Sneha😊