Ek Udaan- Dosti aur umeedon ki (ChaTya FF) Updated pg 5 - Page 2

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

its too gud sneha

u perfectly caught the language,i luved chakor's 1st lesson on udaan

plz update the nxt part soon,waiting fr adi

ps;tum par andae,tamatar nahi phoollonki baarish hogi😆

ha agar update jaldi nahi kii toh tab zaroor tamatar padengae,main andae nahi khaathi

Originally posted by: creationschhavi

I just love it sneha
u described everything too beautifully
👏
Chakor udaan her dream everything very beautiful
Chakor aditya characterization was awesome
U described it very well
These too totally opposites still bff
Adi chakor-u thought the same dear which i have in my mind that something will happen in future where these two bff have to stand against each other
Will choose dream
concept is amazing
Waiting eagerly for adi entry 😊

ha chavi am a girl...:D

Sneha humra vivaan bhi hain,woh bhi vuskeliye kuch spcl bhi...:)
Plz yaar "humra" vivaan koh plz thodi acha naughty r happywala scenes de dho,show mein toh bahuth dard mein bechara;(

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

Wow chhavi we think so similar. Hi five just like our chatya.😃

I m glad that u liked it. Thank u so much swthrt.

Yaa dear we think so similar
hifive
Like chatya
we too besties naa
mention not dear 😊 😉

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

ha chavi am a girl...:D

Sneha humra vivaan bhi hain,woh bhi vuskeliye kuch spcl bhi...:)
Plz yaar "humra" vivaan koh plz thodi acha naughty r happywala scenes de dho,show mein toh bahuth dard mein bechara;(

Hi rev
I like vivaan too he is friend of chakor and chakor vivaan good together too
Dear i have made destiny ff on chatvaan including imli too in it
I have given so many vikor scenes too
Their story love triangle is complicated and vikor will also be soon back as friends in my ff soon
in new ff of crazy si life of chatya
Read it vivaan will enter in next part of it ...
Vikor dance too in my destiny ff
Read it fully based on friendship story of chatvaan
I will try to add more vivaan scenes and vikor scenes for u dear

oh dats so sweet of u chavi..i will definitely read,i luv chatvaan bond so much...

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

oh dats so sweet of u chavi..i will definitely read,i luv chatvaan bond so much...

Me too love it too much dear
Thx
and vivaan is not negative at all
But yaa story is diff so vikor chatya also
Vivaan has lot of shades but he is not bad in my ffs atleast
I like him from his childhood
His character also very well portrayed 😊
hope u will enjoy my ffs dear
On page 1 of udaan forum u will find both the ffs by me
I am using 34daya56 my friend username to make new posts
Hope u will enjoy vikor chatya chatvaan there

Originally posted by: creationschhavi

Yaa dear we think so similar
hifive
Like chatya
we too besties naa
mention not dear 😊 😉

Yes we too besties. 🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: abhiya_12

ha chavi am a girl...:D

Sneha humra vivaan bhi hain,woh bhi vuskeliye kuch spcl bhi...:)
Plz yaar "humra" vivaan koh plz thodi acha naughty r happywala scenes de dho,show mein toh bahuth dard mein bechara;(

He he. Rev will try to full fill your expectations but naughty vivaan hmm seems lil difficult 😆
Bt yes he will be totally different from the show.

sneha bus vivaan ho ff mein...mujhe kuch bhi chalega naughty,innocent,cute ha bt vusko zyaada math rulaana hehe