how it should have been - Page 2

Good Job DC 👏 & welcome on board 😊 do continue with your story 😳

that was good desi chic......do continue when u have time 😊

that was gr8 desi chic i reli njoyed that only if the storyline was reli like this then we wudnt hav had 2 c DK and Disha seperate 4 so long!! Carry on wen u get da time 😛

Luv Mad 😉

hey guys! wow I've been gone so long! thanks so much for the great response. sorry I haven't been able to write, I live in CAN and the school year just began so I've been busy. I'm in first year so. also, I don't know about u guys but sometimes I have problems logging in. it says that I have an unsuccessful login. and that's happened almost everytime in the past like three weeks.

its raining and the couple are lost in their own world. then dk looks up, and turns disha around with him. and he walks her towards his vehicle with her enclosed in his arms. you see, disha is kind of "blondish" so to speak, no offense. so she still hasn't noticed that dk is walking normally. so they reach home, the servent welcomes them, and he brings out the oil and arti. dk actually smiles and they both take the servent's ashriwaad as he is elder to them. dk tells dish to go upstairs and change while he does the same. dish starts walking up, but her foot fails to reach the third step and she starts falling back. dk yells "disha"! and the lady lands in her prince charming's arms. dk is like all worried and bombards dish with questions.
dk- are u ok, what happend? etc
disha has a mixed look on her face. she just keeps looking at dk's face
dk -what are u looking at?
dish- your leg, you ran towards me (the light bulb clicks)
dk- he looks down and then at her again and smiles. "its all the influence of your love. we'll talk later, go change."
dish comes out drying her hair calling dk. she can't find him. she goes out to her balcony. looks at the moon and thinks of where he could be (she's still drying her hair). she is wearing one of her famous transparent sarees. lets say a lilac colour. all of a sudden her eyes land on dk standing outside on the u know those gazibo type things like its roofed and its like a veranda, but separate from the house. anyways, he's starring at her with a naughty, admiring expression. she calls out to him, but he just keeps staring and again the rain starts to trickle (nothing like a little rain to brin out the romantic mood eh) and she keeps calling but he seems unaware. now its raining hard and shes worried about his health. she thinks to go and get him and thats what shes going to do in the next part...
sorry guys thats it for now. I'll try not to take so long next time. and the next part will be another treat!
cheers,
desi chic

hey guyz...
dk is still looking at the balcony where disha was (she went inside). meanwhile dish looks for an umbrella. she finds one and just when she is about to walk out, a wave of wind hits her and her hair blows backand she looks to the side with squinting eyes cause its raining hard. she calls out dk's name several times and finally he notices.
dish - dk come inside or you will get sick
dk - just wait awhile
dish - you'll get sick
dk - just a few more minutes. u know this kind of rain only comes not so often
dish (stubborn and worried sick for his health) - you're not going to listen to me this way. I'm coming! she goes towards him, but again a really strong blow of wind hits her and she stumbles back, in btw she is holding the umbrella in the air cause she can't see. dk sees this and again comes to her rescue. he catches her just in time.disha's saree is all wet and so is she and dk. they stare into each other's eyes for a few seconds. a flash of lightning catches them unexpectantly and dish holds dk's colar tight and moves close to him (head on his chest). dk is hesitant but slowly moves his arms so they enclose dish. she looks up into his eyes, only to feel the sensation of love grow between them. he walks her to the roofed thingy. dish releases herself and starts fixing her sari. dk looks at her for a sec and then turns to the rain. dish looks too.
dish - the rain is so beautiful eh?
dk - with u by my side, anything is beautiful.
she looks at him and he her.
dish - don't ever leave me again
dk - I can't give myself that kind of punishment again either
dish hugs him and she says that its getting dark and they should go in, and they slowly walk in.dish tells dk to shower before he gets sick. he kisses her on the forehead and goes upstairs. dish goes again to shower but is done before dk. she comes out in a deep blue transparent saree. she goes to dk's room and sets out a kurta for him. she is about to leave when she feels a pull on her pallu. she turns and dk is holding it. he is in his bathrobe. dish turns and grabs the towel on the bed and starts drying his hair. all the while dk is holding onto her waist area (she is standing he is sitting).
dish - I'll go get some coffee
dk - leave it, I just want to look at you
dish rubs his hair and says I am not going anywhere. and now we will have our whole lives together.she pulls away. meanwhile dk pulls out the earing that got caught in his shirt. and thinks back. dk thinks - I love u dish and I want to marry u. he thinks to propose and gets an idea. and what that idea is, u'll have to wait for. hope u like it!
cheers,
dc

hi dc
love your storyline.....this is indeed how it should have been 😊 good job 👏

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where are you????????

👏 👏 that was gr8 please continue

wow. I've been away so long!! sorry guys, stuck with exams and stuff. anyways, I do plan on continuing. and thanks so much for your patience! promise I won't take as long as I did before. and the forum thingy didn't allow me to sign in so many times and I finally figured it out. uhh! anyways, thoda sa aur intezaar. later
dc