hey guys, I am new & I had some ideas of how this show could have been better. So, I wrote my own script which is more pleasant than what is happening in the show currently.
It starts off with where disha has just been released from jail and she is going about to commit suicide since she finds out dk is no more.
so disha is walking about aimlessly and theres that song going on by reshma "lal choodiyan" in the back. and she doesn't realize it but she has come to the end of a dirt road which ends at the edge of a cliff. her mind is in a complete haze and she realizes she has nothing left in her life without dk. so she decides to end her life. slowly she starts walking towards the end of the cliff. finally shes about two inches away. she looks down at the rushing water deep down and then up at the sky. she thinks in her mind "I'm coming dk". just as she is about to step forward, she hears her name being called. she turns around. three cars drive up and one by one the camera zooms in on gargi, ved, and pori. they walk up together.
gargi - don't you want to know how your dk died before you go to meet up with him?
disha - what do you mean (anxious to know)
pori - we killed him. gargi aunty, ved and me
ved - but poor bro died thinking that his beloved dish killed him
disha - what do you mean?
pori - the thing is, I managed to find a mask that has your face, and so I dressed up like you and dk thought it was you
gargi - poor dk he was so heart - broken to find out that his own disha betrayed him
disha - you three will never get away with this. I will not spare you and neither will He (upar wala)
gargi - well see about Him when we get there, and about you... well you'll only cause us trouble if you stay alive to do so
all three laugh hideously and gargi points a revolver towards disha.
gargi - you're finished mrs. disha dk sehgal
all of a sudden a gun shot goes off knocking the gun out of gargi's hand. the three evils look around and see inspector kanchan with dk (bandage on head and sling around arm but no limping leg).
kanchan- hands up. she goes and points her gun at gargi's temple and says "you're the ones who are finished"
disha is in a state of mixed anger and relief
kanchan takes the three "bad peeps" away and dk and dish are left alone on the mountain's edge.
dish can't seem to find any words besides "dk"
she runs into open arms and cries in the joy of her world. she then looks up and says "but what is all this that I was told you were no more etc"
dk explains how he was saved by kanchan and that he was extremely hurt by the fact that dish tried to kill him but he just couldn't believe it. so he asked kanchan for help and they made this plan in which they followed dish cause they knew the others would follow. dish is overjoyed. she hugs dk tighter, and he the same.
dish - I love u and don;t ever leave me again otherwise I will not be albe to live.
all of a sudden it starts to rain softly but the two are lost in their own paradise
this is the first part. I will write later when I have time
hope u guys like it!😊
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