My TD story: the trio is back

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Dk remembers the times when he and vedanth all used to be friends, (flashback)

Vedanth and dk are both having a great time. Scene switches to a girl dressed in black top and jeans, we can only see her back.

Hey guys, having good time without me.

The two bros look around and are surprised but both have a very happy look on their faces

DK: (thinks) Simran…. Everything would be soo much easier if you were here.

DK has another flashback he is extremely unhappy thinking about this:

Scene where after vedanth suprises dk with pori

Vedanth: How could you DK and I thought u were my brother, how could you!!!!

DK: (helpless): Listen V, u got it all wrong……

We see dk chatting to Simran now, she is very pretty and she has a slightly familiar look….

Simran: DK what happened, did something happen to vedanth??

Dk: no, well yes, oh sim, this is all such a mess

Simran: What happened?

Dk tells her the whole pori story. Simran thinks o vedanth how could u believe that girl and not even your own brother!!

Sim: K he's refuse to talk to you right now, ill try and make him see sense

Dk: thanx simran , but this is not a gd idea, he won't like it if he sees that you're taking side

Sim: I have to talk to him

Simran goes on her motorcycle, and she speeds past, we see vedanth packing his bags, she arrives just on time. Vedanth is out about to enter a taxi

Simran: Vedanth u can't go

V: I can't stay here any longer, I can't

Sim: I know what happened, dk told me

V: he has has he?, well my my my , my last so called friend u 2 aslo taking his side

Sim: Listen ok, I have a lot of respect for dk for everything he's done for me, and after all that I can't believe that you cannot believe him

V: I saw them to

Sim: But sometimes things are not always as they see

V. not listening

Simran: Vedanth, vedanth…..

Sim comes back and tell dk that he left for the States ( V did not tell her but she found out).

I am going there soon as well, formy first uni year, i see if I can make him see sense…

(flashback ends).

Dk is angry…. She could have lost a chance of a lifetime at Harvard for you, vedanth. I know that you may have been angry with me, but id never have forgiven you if something happened to simran because of you.

DK looks at Disha and Vedanth wedding card, he's about to rip it, until an idea came into his mind….

Dk: Vedanth brother, you won't be the only one bringing your best friend around for your wedding…

After this DK, reaches the phone and dials a number

Hey guys, this is my first attempt to right a storyline for TD,s o hopefully u guys liked it, plz comment…..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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sorry i posted this topic twice by accident

plz comment on it

Thanx

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey ladyD

nice job

make it sizzzzling!!!!😉!!!!!!!lol!!!😆

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😛thanx kp, i was starting to think that my story was very rubbish caus no one was posting anything....😭

I am going to put up the next part soon....😉

Cheers

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Posted: 20 years ago
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The doorbell rings at the Kanaka house and sumitra opens the door:

Simran: Hello aunty!!!!!!!

Sumi: Simran !!!! Oh my God what a surprise, you have grown soo much. Does dk know ur coming , why didn't he tell me!!!

Simran: Oh, I told him not to, I wanted to surprise you, I am early, is he here now?

Sumi: Yes, in the study, he has been quite restless, with the wedding coming up

Wedding????? Simran thinks, what the hell??????

Simr: I am sure that he is very excited… Ill go and see what he is doing, he is going to have some surprise.

Simran goes to the study, and thinks along the way

" Nothing has changed, dushyant's style, the study is still the study, everything is still the same. I wonder if dk is still the same., married by dkbaby married, hah ha. The guy who said will never settle down. He has a hell lot of explaining to do!!!!"

With that she reaches the study. Dk has his back on her and did not notice she came in. She slowly walk up to him and:

"BOOOOO!!!!!!!!"

Dk turns around shocked, sees her and smiles

"still quite a daydreamer I see"

dk: Hey sim, when did you come??? Why didn't you phone, I'd have come to pick you up!!

Simran: enough with the fussy, still as fussy as ever. Now let's get down to business… I was called here in the middle of an important court case because…….

Dk: No, we'll talk about that later, for now I want you to tell me, how's life in America?

Sim: Don't try to change the subject. But it's gd, a bit lonely, lots of work to make up for it. I love my job, I could never thank you enough for it..

Dk: what I never done anything…

Sim: except from helping me pass high school, supporting me through college, pushing me like hell to be able to go Harvard like I always dreamed of

Dk: maybe, but I did what any brother and best mate would do, and you passed Harvard with your brains, and got in with scholarship to, Now here is summin I had nothing to do with

Simran: maybe, maybe but you still pay for the tickets, my stay at the hotel for the interview and sooo much more

Dk: well stop thanking me, caus that's what friends are for

Simran: well, which is the reason why I am here… But before dat I heard from auntijy dat u were getting married. Who's the lucky girl

Dk: it's pori

Simran: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!

Dk: and vedanth is getting married as well

Hearing his name, simran suddenly goes silent, not understanding the sudden heartache.

Dk: he's getting married to disha

Still silent simran listens, thinking " I only left for a few years, and all of this happened"

Dk tells simran the whole story with why he had to lie and stuff

Simran: well I see the problem, but I don't see how I can help you with this.

Dk: dats why I called you always were the one with the gd ideas.

Simran: let me recap, ur still married legally to Disha, and in front of gd as well. But autiji think you're married to that ******* pori, and the wedding is gonna happen soon. V apparently really cares for disha and so she hates you, and does not seem to mind marrying him. I can't work miracle !!!!

Dk: sorry for me thinking that you would help

Simran: noo, nutting like dat, just telling you how desperate the situation is/ Well you know what they say, desperate situations call for desperate measures.

Dk: now dats my girl, what are you thinking of doing?

Simran: welll I have summin in mind and believe me it's gonna really be dramatic…..

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Posted: 20 years ago
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well hey guys , dats the next part of my story, hope you guys like it, i have summin really dramatic in mind😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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oh plz do post the next scene these scenes are getting dramatic wow got to say u are supectacular😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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DRAMATIC CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT IT IS!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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waiting for Dramatic scene.maybe the writer can get some inspiration from you into of repeating the ghisa-pita PKG storyline.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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GREAT STORY LOL HOPE SIMRAN HELPS SOLVE PROBLEM SHE SOUNDS A BIT LIKE KAREENA IN WHAT'S UR PROBLEM!

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