My story - Page 5

amazing nice one keep up the good work plz post the next part

😛

in morning

someone calls it's the kids principal the school has ended so the kids vaction start

disha: isn' there vacation soppose to start a month after

principal: yyes but we made changes

disha: ok thanks bye

disha: kids no school for three months

kids yayy

write some more later

plz do continue once again nice one

nice story. plz can u post next part. thanks lot.

~sweta~

disha: kids happy

dk: what happend what's this noise

disha: oh it's the kids

dk: kids 😡😡

disha: this is soppose to be my line

dk and disha laugh

kids : can we go play

disha: oh sure

kids: yayayy


write more later

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plz continue and thanks lot.

~sweta~

Hi

i do think some elements of * ^ Princess ** story should be for over 18's, if you read the story now a great deal has been changed, and i believe it's been changed for the best.

I am not hurt by anyones comments, I was expressing my views. I also thought that * ^ Princess ** would take this as constructive critism, as she always asks for feedback.

If * ^ Princess ** decides to stop writing then it's upto her, I DID NOT TELL HER TO STOP, her stories fine - if you read it now, it sounds ok.

I do not think * ^ Princess ** is nasty at all. i think she should continue writing if she wishes to do so,i was only voicing my opinion - there's nothing wrong with that is there?

BY THE WAY I DID FORGET TO SAY THE REASON WHY I COMMENTED ON * ^ Princess ** STORY, IT'S ONLY THAT I FOUND MY 15 YEAR SISTER READING IT, SHE WAS SHOCKED BY WHAT EVER SHE READ, AND I SIMPLY THOUGHT THAT IT WAS UNACCEPTABLE.

* ^ Princess ** DO NOT MEAN TO UPSET YOU WHAT SO EVER!!!