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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi its 😉 mad 😉 ,
i wasnt going to continue writing but know i have the urge to thanx to all the ppl who appreciated it and i didnt think it was that gud i just got bored know ill continue writing!!
😃 Luv Mad 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hi guys its me Mad again,

Okay im starting off from where I left but not really (Okay lol, that didn't sound right) there is nothing in my head im starting from scratch so tell me how u think im doing plz!!! I don't know whether to post this but oohh well hope u enjoy!!!!

Okay Disha is doing some shopping with Rano in the mall!!! Rano wants to go in the shoe shop but then Vedant comes

Vedant: Hey Dish hey Rano

Disha: Arre Vedant tum yahan kaise!!

Vedant: Ittefaq, anyway Disha mujhe tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai badi mom ke bare mein

Rano: Par Di mujhe jhoote dekhne hai

Disha: Accha Rano tum jao mein aur Vedant bus yahin hain theeq hai

Rano: haan Di, theeq hai

Vedant tells Disha something about Badi mom and then after that they just generally chatting, but they didn't know that while they are walking through the mall they are being spied on (I know that know all of you must be saying in ur mind DK, no Gargi no it has to be Pori! but NOOOO!!). Vedant has this business rival who Vedant really insulted and is wanting revenge. They show a slight clip of a gun in the rival's jacket!!!! Here is some of Vedant and Disha's conversation:

Vedant: Dish brother ka kya haal hai

Disha: (She blushes remembering the baby thing she said) Haan, who theeq hai!!

Vedant: Dish, mein janta hoon tum kuch chuparahi ho, batao na

Disha: Actually Vedant baat yeh hai ke DK aur mere beech halaat ab thodi theeq ho gaye hain, woh ab pehle jaise DK nahin raha woh badal chukha hai, aur kal DK ki presentation Poona mein hai is liya hum Hotel Gemini mein rahenge, hum kal jayenge aur ab DK ka mood hai woh kab wapas aana chahata hai!!!

The rival hears the wrong part of the conversation he hears the part where Disha says "hum hotel Gemini mein rahenge, hum kal jayenge" this makes him think that Vedant and Disha are husband and wife because she has the manglasutra on and also sindoor. The rival says in his mind if an attack them know it will be too suspicious I shall do it when I have the best opportunity!!

Next Scene

Disha has know arrived home, they show DK in a hurry and he's also on the phone he's trying to find something, putting his shirt button's on and asking Disha repeatedly:

DK: Disha, tum tayaar ho gaya
Then Disha repeatedly saying

Disha: Haan, almost!

DK: (still on the phone saying "haan hum abhi nikhal rahein hai") Disha, jaldi karo, phir jake tayari bhi karni ha)

Disha: (looking very beautiful indeed in a bright orange kind of saffron sari, putting her bangles on) Mein tayaar hoon

DK does not respond, so she decides to go where he is, she see's he is wandering in and out of every room in the house looking for everything, she see's he is holding his tie in one hand and his jacket in the other, she goes behind him and in her hand there is his wallet, his briefcase and 2 files. He looks relieved still on the phone and kisses her on her cheek and then goes, Disha has a small grin on her face and nods lightly she follows him and is was so romantic, she made him face her in their room, as she saw he was having some difficulty doing his buttons and tie. She turned him around and smiled and done his buttons, then as soon as she came a little came to him he said to the person on the phone "mein ek minute mein phone karta hoon" completely mesmerized by Disha he is looking at her grinning and she is also smiling but at the same time doing his buttons. She finishes the buttons and says, "Tie do" he passes her the tie and he takes complete advantage of the moment and comes really close to her, he then just grasps her in his muscular arms and hugs her, she says:

Disha: Arre DK, kya kar rahe ho chod do na, dekho tum hi toh kef rahe the keh dher ho rahi hai, ab kya!!

DK: Maine yeh toh nahin kaha he is baat ki dher ho rahi

Disha: Mujhe samaj mein nahin ah raha hai ke mein tumse kya kahoon, ab chod do baad mein gale laga le na pehle mein tumhari tie karloon.

DK lets go but is still sooo close to her he its amazing!!! Disha is doing his tie once she finished she knew she had to hug DK but she then she looked at him and he was looking at her as well. She said okay you can hug me know as soon as he was going to she kept moving backwards and backwards, then eventually ran off.

That's it for know guys but I will promise to not finish there and maybe later on today I will post the rest!!! Plz post ur comments on what u thought, I would luv 2 know, I just hav 2 say that the story aint even properly started yet so stay tuned in!!!!

Luv Mad

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Posted: 20 years ago
#13

hi

cool waiting for the next one

samy😃

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Heya mad😃

That was real good!! aww lady d doing dk tie and all ..hehhe....😉..that was really good ..you got me anxious to read the next bit now...well done....👏....

Love Asian princess/DK ki deewani😉

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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey mad

its kp

love ur story

please continu

cant wait

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Yup Mad it is really good keep it up!!!!👍🏼⭐️👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yup Mad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is too good!!! you should really keep going with this!!!!

can't wait for more!!!

*khushi*

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Posted: 20 years ago
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gosh can't wait to see what coming up next😛
Edited by lucky-moon - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Okay here goes the next scene

There is a skip know DK and Disha are on the way to go to the hotel by car. Okay I'm going to fast forward it know they have reached the hotel know and also checked in they are approaching their room know. Once they get in they are pretty impressed by the room and everything. By the looks of it DK wants to have a good night sleep before his 3-hour presentation tomorrow. Okay so here is DK and Disha's conversation:

Disha: Mein abhi fresh hoke aati hoon

DK: Mein bhi chalon, tumhare saath

Disha: Kyun!!!

DK: Akele bore ho jaogi aur waise bhi mujhe koi problem nahin hai, mein bilkul free hoon (cheeky thing)!!!
Disha: Par mujhe problem hai!!

She laughs and runs in the shower (Imagine that guys that's a proper dream DK fighting to go in the shower with Disha, but what an episode that would be!!!) Ok guys so know DK and Disha are asleep and its so sweet cuz DK's arm is around Disha and they both have faint grins on their face's and ahhh bless!!! Also Disha's head is on DK's shoulder.

Okay its MORNING!!!

Just in case any of u have forgot let me remind you of the business rival okay well apparently he has approached the hotel and he goes to the reception and says:

Rival: Kya mein jaan sakta hoon ke Mr and Mrs Sehgal kaun se kamre mein there hain

Receptionist: Just hold a minute sir, room no 203

Rival: Thanks

Okay back at room no 203 where the 2 D's are, they have woke up and DK looks so cool and sexy and fit and lots of other things in a hot black suit!!!!! Disha also looks very elegant, beautiful ravishing and lots of other things in a pretty pink and yellow sari!!! To give it that extra look she also had wet hair, which was WOOW!!! DK was looking pretty confident sorting out his files and documents. Disha who came from the back and scared him, gently hugged him and said:

Disha: Kya kar rahe ho

DK: (DK takes her back to front and looks at her in her eyes so cutely!!!) Tumhe dekh raha hoon

They then very sweetly hug each other ahh bless it was so sweet!!!

Disha: Arre, mein toh bhool gayi

DK: Kya hua Disha kya bhool gayi tum

Disha: Ek minute, (she goes to her handbag and has a small box she opens it she takes out a piece of thread) Yeh lo, DK!!

DK: Yeh kya hai

Disha: Yeh Aai ne mujhe diye hain unhone kisi bade baba se liye hain, dekho mere kalhai pe bhi hai

She shows him her wrist, he smiles and says:

DK: Theeq hai Disha ab mein neeche presentation hall mein jata hoon 3 ghante se pehle mein ah jaonga

Disha: Bye, Good Luck, par ab mein 3 ghanton mein kya karongi
DK: Thodi dher so jao, novel parlo aur sab se zaroori mujhe yaad karna

Disha: Woh kaise karlon

DK: Kyun tum mujhe yaad nahin kar sakthi

Disha: Nahin, kyunke yaad unhe karte hain jise bhool jate hain, aur mein tumhe kabhie nahin bhoolti

DK kisses her on the cheek and goes!!!

Later on in the day!!!

Disha was reading a novel on her and then she fell asleep!!

At that time the rival was on his was up in the lift we could again see the gun in his jacket he said:

Rival: Vedant, is goli par tumhara naam likha hai

The rival enters the room and starts to look in the bathroom and everywhere for Vedant but he cannot find him. He then spots his eyes on Disha sleeping, he notices her beauty and goes near her and stroke her hair, Disha thought it was DK and she said:

Disha: Arre, DK tum ah gaye

She turned around and saw an ugly man with a dirty mind she woke up in shock and the man was leaning on top of her………………..

Sorry guys I haven't got time to write the rest, but I will do later on today or even tomorrow, till then seeya!!! Plz tell me how u like it!!!

Luv mad






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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏

loving it loving it

rang😉

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