AjNa OS: I Can't Get Her Out of my Head - Page 2

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha

Yup I agree Even I would like you to add a second part to it...

How does the writer feel about this request

Originally posted by: mehak9

Woww... It's awesome ...
Superb dear... Don't stop writing...
Waiting for d next os 😉


Yeh padke mujhe Rona aayi 😭

Originally posted by: Ajay_Sanjana

emotional & heart touching... superb keep it dear..u r good writer.thnx for sharing dis wid us.

Originally posted by: smileee

Awesome update.. loved it, thanks a lot for attempting, i badly wanted scenes where ajay misses sanjana, this OS completed my wish.. Many Thanks for it Shakthi.

Loved each & every line :

He looked around the room and took in another breath. Everything in the room reminded him of her. The bed reminded him of their sleeping arrangements and of how he pulled her off the bed. His drawers were now empty, they once held Sanjana's beloved items. His desk that used to be scattered in her make up and jewelry was now cleaned off. His chair that always had her sarees on it now only held his jacket. His chair, the same chair he dragged her up from only to notice that her saree had come undone. Smiling softly he remembered that moment. Shaking his head he looked into the mirror and froze, he had to stop thinking about her.

No matter how hard he tried he couldn't forget her tear-stricken face as she drove away in the taxi. He couldn't forget the tingles he felt when she grabbed his hand, silently pleading for him to say something. He couldn't forget the pain he felt as his heart dropped watching her go away. He couldn't forget-he couldn't forget her.

Originally posted by: NAVI55

I love this OS😃

BUT...

I am so greedy that I really want you to add maybe a second part to it

Then it can become a TS😉😆

Beautifully written and very emotional...I felt the strings in my heart give a mighty tug and my eyes were beginning to tear😳

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha

Awww Shakti thanx a lot for writing this...It actually brought tears in my eyes can u just Imagine it???????

You are an amazing writter Shakti I loved how Ajay was feeling desperate for Sanjana and Yes his cousins and Nani supporting him was something that I cant define In Words...Poor Ajay Missing his Mom really...Mamiji;s convo wid everyone was really sad...I want to see something like this in the Show too...Ur writting is always the best piece so never underestimate ur Piece of Work or else Achcha nai hoga Ok😛

I so want see Atleast His cousins understanding Ajay's Condition.

Originally posted by: sreenaveena

wow .. Awesome yaar :)

Beautifully written :)

Thanks for sharing with us :)

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Shakti🤗 So glad you wrote😃 This was beautiful and sad😊 I loved Ajay longing for Sanjana👍🏼

Everything in the room reminded him of her.

So true... I want the cvs to show Ajay missing her...

"Stop Ajay, you promised mamaji, no more thinking about Sanjana."

Bhagwan, I am trying so hard to forget-please, please help me forget

His fight with himself to forget Sanjana❤️

Nani, Mishri, Ayyush, Utpal and Avni are all sweethearts😳... And so is Mamiji

"I just want my son back,"

Love this😊

Every time he closed his eyes, he saw her face, he saw her tears, he felt her grip on his hand

So sad

Lovely OS... If you can... then please do continue this and make AjNa meet again😊

Originally posted by: darrish

It was a lovely os, something I wish could actually see on the show. Cant wait for the next one.😛👏