Short OS: Words Unspoken

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@.Anjum.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Wow 😊 nice 1 tiana👍🏼

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TiaMaaaaa

@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha
First of all thanx for the pm and Yes ur OS is wonderfully written as always...Thanx for writing it yaar It really was a weekend Treat...and do update ur FF soon...
Love u sweetie...

Now what about a return gift 😆 ? I gave you your weekend treat na???

Jokes apart... Thank you for making me write and appreciating me even when I feel it's not that good... Love you too, Nisha 🤗

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@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: darrish

I loved it! I always felt this was missing and you made my day by writing this. I wanted Ajay to ask her why she called the police. thank you so much for this.😊

Yes... Even I felt that a confrontation between AjNa would have been nice... 😊 Thank you so much for reading and commenting 😊

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@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: smileee

What made me to feel this as special is i expected same kind of conversations & thought process in AjNa, its of more realistic.. though Cv's disappointed me, u made it happen in your OS.. thats why

Yes... It was as if they completely forgot each others sacrifice... And continued with their regular lives... Even I wanted them to discuss about the incident...

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@TianaWrites

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Aayushi15
Amazing. You are a brilliant writer. I so loved it. The thought process of ajay and sanjana is depicted so nicely. I loved that you maintained the innocence of AjNa throughout. The way they care for each other so much but still always hide it by fighting. Beautiful os...

Thank you so much... Your comments are very valuable to me... Thank you 😊