FF: A Modern Fairytale THE END PART B@ Pg: 24 - Page 15

Originally posted by: mehak9

Superb dear... 👏 ...
Loved it...
Waiting for ur next update...

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

thanks for the update

Originally posted by: Propinquity.

Hi, great update!

I'm an AjNa shipper, but your Bhushan and Shreya are so angsty and wonderful to read.

They are also the most realistic plot line, and easily the most engaging.

Loving it so far.

Please continue soon.

Sneak-Peek into Chapter 7

"Pari, I am sorry."

"It's not your fault Raj. Oh Raj... why should such things happen to us only?"

She sat down on the ground beside him, covered her face with her arms and began to weep. He slowly stroked her head with his arms and tried to console her. But how could he, when his own heart was broken?

"Pari, maybe if you tell me where you live I can come and meet you."

"It's of no use, Raj. No one will be allowed inside my country."

"Yes, but... Maybe I can come in disguise?"

"You will be caught and put to death. I'd rather be without you for a few days than live without you forever."

"You really care that much?"

"Yes, how do you expect me not to?"

He looked into her eyes that was filled with tears and suddenly felt that the time had come. He pulled her closer to him.

"I have fallen in love, again."

...

Any idea of Khushi's reaction? Is there any way for the lovers to stay united?

Next Chapter

Originally posted by: ...Tiana...

Sneak-Peek into Chapter 7

"Pari, I am sorry."

"It's not your fault Raj. Oh Raj... why should such things happen to us only?"

She sat down on the ground beside him, covered her face with her arms and began to weep. He slowly stroked her head with his arms and tried to console her. But how could he, when his own heart was broken?

"Pari, maybe if you tell me where you live I can come and meet you."

"It's of no use, Raj. No one will be allowed inside my country."

"Yes, but... Maybe I can come in disguise?"

"You will be caught and put to death. I'd rather be without you for a few days than live without you forever."

"You really care that much?"

"Yes, how do you expect me not to?"

He looked into her eyes that was filled with tears and suddenly felt that the time had come. He pulled her closer to him.

"I have fallen in love, again."

...

Any idea of Khushi's reaction? Is there any way for the lovers to stay united?

Originally posted by: sreenaveena

gud :)

Missed Ajna in this SS :'(

Awesome concept sis!!!
such a cute fairytale!!!
I m damn waiting fr ur next update...

pls update soon sis...
eagerly waiting...
ur thinking z juz awesome sis!
keep writing wen u get free time!!!
And the banner,
omggg the banner z also looks
awesome...
gud wrk by Nisha sis.pass this comment to her... the banner z truely
awesome
especially ajna!! they looks damn cute...
And ayyush also looks dashing!
plz update soon sis...

Awesome concept sis!!!
such a cute fairytale!!!
I m damn waiting fr ur next update...
pls update soon sis...
eagerly waiting...
ur thinking z juz awesome sis!
keep writing wen u get free time!!!
And the banner,
omggg the banner z also looks
awesome...
gud wrk by Nisha sis.pass this comment to her... the banner z truely
awesome
especially ajna!! they looks damn cute...
And ayyush also looks dashing!
plz update soon sis...

Uhhh sry fr two posts...