Sochta hoon ki vo kitne maasoom the - Page 14

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Thank you Vanshu 💖💖💖💖💖 Sab tere idea ka kamaal h. Agle episode se pakka Malhar ke trademark one liners. Btw, I'm thinking dheere dheere Malhar starts feeling something fishy then to make Agni admit she's Kalyani, to uske vahi mast dialogues fir dono ke beech full tashan. Bata kaisa rahega? Agni to make Malhar realize his mistakes and Malhar to make Agni realize how much he loves her.

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

It was awesome Pragya..

Moksh and Anu's Bonding...

Aasawari and Aao Saheb are fit to be thrown under a train for talking nonsense to a child.

Agni and Pillu's conversation... "Rone ka nahi Rulane ka..." was just 👌👌👌👌

Aur Moksh ne bataya neeli saadi ke baare me.. And about his dad's tears..

Ohh.. The office scene..

Agni faint ho gayi due to lack of proper slerp and Malhar was there to help her..

He was shocked to see her scars... When he knows the truth, he might not be able to handle it...

But she gave him a check for his services to show him his place.. 😢😢

Him remembering Kalyani 😭

Aur phir Moksh repeated the dialogue to Malhar over the phone which was Kalyani’s trademark...

Ab Malhar babu thoda investigate karenge toh acha hoga..

Would be nice to read..

Malhar realising what his moments of doubt did to Kalyani

And Agni realising Malhar's love for Kalyani...

Revenge donon milke len baaki paapiyon se..

Thanks for the update

Thank you so much Rekha. You are right. Now is the perfect time for Malhar Babu to investigate. Thoda dono me angst bhi aayega aise. Abhi tak to inhone us direction me socha bhi nahi tha.

Chapter 14

After getting ready for office, Malhar woke up Moksh, "Moksh utho. School nahi jaana kya?"

"Baba bas ek minute," Moksh's eyes were still closed.

"Aadhe ghante se Baba bas ek minute yahi keh rahe ho tum," Malhar said, "Theek hai. Mat utho. Vaise Aaj main tumhe school ke baad Agni ma'am se milaane le jaane waala tha kyonki aaj mujhe late night tak kaam karna hai aur Aai Baba Nisha Tai ke saakharpore me Amravati gaye hain to fir Ghar me koi nahi hoga tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye. Magar theek hai. Tumhe to school hi nahi jaana fir tumhare mere office jaane ka plan bhi cancel. Tumhe main Pawar ke ghar chhor aata hoon."

"Aap mujhe Agni aunty ke paas le chaloge?" Moksh got up with a jerk, "Sacchi?"

"Main kabhi jhooth bolta hoon kya," Malhar said, "Chalo jaldi se brush kar aao."

After sending Moksh to brush his teeth, Malhar was preparing corn flakes for Moksh. Suddenly door bell rang.

"Is vaqt kaun aaya hai?" Malhar thought to himself. Earlier he'd think it were Saarthak Kaka but he had become a different man now. It appeared to Malhar that everyone around him had changed and became a different person leaving Malhar alone stuck in past.

Malhar opened the door.

"Moksh beta!" Sampada barged in calling for Moksh in a sing song manner.

Sampada hugged Moksh tightly but Moksh clearly was not liking her forced embrace. Malhar was fed up of Sampada but even after everything, he couldn't change the fact that she gave birth to his son. How much he hated Sampada, it was morally not right for Malhar to separate a child from his mother. But yet he couldn't bring himself to trust Sampada.

"Moksh, ye cornflakes chhoro," Sampada took the bowl of cornflakes and dumped its contents in dustbin, "Dekho main tumhare liye kya laai hoon."

Sampada produced a box of pastry. Moksh loved pastry but he didn't like how Sampada threw the food his Baba had made for him.

"Main nahi khaunga!" Moksh said and ran away.

"Malhar. Kucch bolo ise," Sampada said.

Malhar was angry how Sampada threw the cornflakes but time was running out. The milk he bought was finished in his morning tea and cornflakes. And he didn't have the time to cook food for him now as Moksh's school bus would come in 15 minutes. With no option left, Malhar took the pastry box from Sampada and called Moksh, "Moksh Beta. Le apne Baba ke haath se to khaayega na."

Moksh couldn't refuse Malhar.

Sampada said, "Malhar main tumhare liye bhi boondi ke laddoo layi hoon. Zara taste to karna."

Making Moksh eat the pastry, Malhar took a laddoo.

Sampada took her phone out and silently clicked pics.

"Bewakoof Malhar! Khud apne hi haathon se apne bete ko maarne ka intezaam kar raha hai. Laddoo me mile chemical se Malhar ka mental balance bigdega aur Moksh ki custody mujhe mil jayegi. is pastry se Moksh ke brain clot aur bada hota jayega. Fir Moksh gaya apni Kalyani Aai ke paas, aur mere diye gaye saboot saabit kar denge ki Moksh ko Malhar ne hi ye chemical diya h. Fir Rane khaandan ki saari daulat mere aur Atharv ke naam kyonki ab to vo Ahir bhi paralyzed hai."

"Malharji," Malhar saw Kalyani in his hallucination, "Sampada ke baar baar aapko dhokha Dene ke baad bhi aap use Pillu ki Aai ki jagah de sakte hain. Aur mujhe apne bete ko dekhne bhi nahi de sakte?"

"Kalyani!" Malhar staggered getting up.

"Baba," Moksh held Malhar's shirt.

"Kalyani! Tum laut aayi?" Malhar said walking towards Sampada.

Sampada made a disgusting expression and got aside leaving Malhar to fall down on floor.

"Sam aunty! Kucch kariye na please?" Moksh held Sampada's hand.

"Tere baap ko paagalpan ke daure aa rahe hain to main kya karoon?" Sampada jerked her hand away and left the house smiling to herself and thinking her plan was finally working.

When Malhar got up after one hour, he found himself on a mat on floor with a blanket over him and Moksh standing with a glass of water.

"Moksh," his throat was feeling dry, "tumhari school bus abhi tak nahi aayi?"

As he tried to get up, Moksh supported him.

Malhar looked at his watch, "Kya nau baj gaye?"

"Baba aap gir gaye the," Moksh was still scared, "Pata hai main kitna dar gaya tha?"

Holding his head in his hands, Malhar couldn't help but wonder for the umpteenth time if living with him was having a huge toll on Moksh's psychological well being. He looked at Moksh's innocent face, scared like a deer caught in headlights. He couldn't entrust Maai with Moksh because Aau Saheb wouldn't leave any stone unturned in killing Moksh as he was a Rane and Anupriya had already failed her in the case of Swara. Kaka was living a vagabond style, never settling in one place, partying and all. He had no other option left: He would have to leave Moksh with Sampada and Atharv, sooner or later. But....

"Baba...main itna dar gaya tha ki main Agni aunty ko phone karne vala tha magar mujhe unka phone no. hi nahi pata," Moksh was saying.

Malhar didn't know if it was a sign by God or not, but something clicked in Malhar's mind. If there were even teeny tiny chances that Agni was Kalyani, he wouldn't have to worry about Moksh but for that first he had to find out the truth...

Malhar phoned Pawar and told him something.

When Malhar and Moksh reached office, Moksh exclaimed, "Wow! Baba itna bada office! Kitna sundar hai."

As soon as Malhar took Moksh towards his cubicle, Moksh began jumping up and down, "Baba! Main Agni Aunty se milne jau?"

"Ruk jaa beta," Malhar said, looking towards the office gate. Ab tak to Pawar ko aa jana chahiye tha? Pawar entered with some people carrying food packets. Taking a food packet with him, Malhar held Moksh's little hand in his and said, "Chalo beta! Chalte hain tumhari Agni aunty se milne."

Malhar knocked the door.

"Come in," Agni said without looking away from the laptop she was working on. She was wearing a black shirt with purple blazer and trousers.

"Ma'am," Malhar said, "Aaj meri baiko Mera matlab Moksh ki aai ka birthday h to main office me sabhi ke liye kucch laya hoon."

"Aaj Moksh ki aai ka birthday hai," Agni said, Moksh meanwhile had left Malhar's side and was clinging to Agni, "Hmm...I see." Agni fully knew today was neither Kalyani's birthday nor Sampada's. She couldn't understand what was cooking in Malhar's mind and why he was blatantly lying without any reason. Malhar never lied.

Agni got on her knees and pulled Moksh's cheeks, "Kaisa hai mera baccha?"

"Full badhiya," Moksh said.

"Madam zara taste karke bataiye to kaisa hai?" Malhar said.

Agni looked at it and said, "Misal Paav?"

Malhar smiled enigmatically. Kalyani hated Misal Paaw. And eating any spicy food would make her cough and with tears streaming down her face, she would be running to eat a chocolate.

Agni sauntered towards her chair and breaking a piece of Paaw, she dipped it in misal and ate it relishly.

"It's quite tasty, Mr. Rane," Agni said appreciatively. Malhar had asked Pawar to add as much spices as he could to Agni's misal paav. He was sure that she wouldn't be able to eat it. But Agni was quite enjoying it. Maybe he was wrong? She was just Agni and had nothing to do with Kalyani.

And Agni by now had fully understood Malhar's plan. It was a cool plan she had to admit but she wouldn't fall for it.

Moksh was running across Kalyani's cabin touching various things when he suddenly fainted and fell down, bringing down the glass figurines on the floor.

"Pillu," Agni screamed, but due to the sound of glass smashing, Malhar could hear only P and he wasn't sure even about that.

https://youtu.be/LZ_YUOr-tYw

Please give your honest feedback about this one. Kahin zyada drag to nahi ho raha? Is it feeling too Over the top? Are the characters feeling too bland? Bilkul Ekta Kapoor serial jaisa to nahi jaa raha? What do you want to see more of/ less off in this FF?

The blue saree thing literally made me cry. Hope the misunderstanding gets clear and kalma get a passionate union❤❤

Originally posted by: Jara567

The blue saree thing literally made me cry. Hope the misunderstanding gets clear and kalma get a passionate union❤❤

Thanks a lot Jara. Are you liking the way this FF is going?

It's too great praggu... I am loving the way youa re exploring each and every scenes in it..... Perfectly jaa rhi hai teri ff .....

Malhar moksh ke banters🥰🥰❤❤❤... Perfect son-duo

Sampada..... Ye chudail kbhi nhi insaan ban skti... Literally 😒😒😒

Moksh scared🥺🥺🥺.... And malhar is also worred seeing his family getting broked.... He has no one... Na maai na kaka..... Asawari Or madhav to kbhi the hi nhi😶😶😶

Par baad m acha idea nikala malhar ne.... 🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍

Moksh excited to meet agni once more❤❤

Misal paav scene😍😍😍😂😂😂....

Par agni bhi to samjhdaar hai.... Knows his tricks😅😅😂😂

Finally kuch glimpse mili mj ko about his kalyani❤❤❤

Ab to journey Or bhi achi lag rhi hai..... And no ye EK ka show bilkul nhi lag rha hai.... Totally loving it

Its awesome pragyu pata hai main update dekhte hi kitna khush hui ...love you for this one baby 😘😘 😘 🍫🍫🍫🧁🍧🍧🍨🍧🍩 ye le dher saari sweets aaj sab tu khaa ..main itni khush hoona ye update padhkein ..🤗

Malhar and moksh he still have that bitter thing In mind that all got settled in their lives or rather trying too but he left there only five year back where kalyani left him ..this is somewhere heartbreaking to read 🥺🥺

Sampada that evil lady hate her , from what thing she is made up of how can she hurt her own child and she even want to kill him ..or make Malhar mentally ill 😡😡

Agni pls kill that sampada I hate her 😭

Aww that father son bonding I love them they are so pyaara malhar thinking that due to his state he has to shift moksh to someone and the safest place for him is his kalyani or agni ..😳

Kalyani or agni smartness or Malhar also trying to smart ..but alas he could not find anything 😒

Pillu faints and kalyani care hope they get together soon ...pls now Malhar has to find out about her pregnancy also how she suffered and how he lost his child and how he is verge on loosing moksh and agni also..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Its awesome pragyu pata hai main update dekhte hi kitna khush hui ...love you for this one baby 😘😘 😘 🍫🍫🍫🧁🍧🍧🍨🍧🍩 ye le dher saari sweets aaj sab tu khaa ..main itni khush hoona ye update padhkein ..🤗

Malhar and moksh he still have that bitter thing In mind that all got settled in their lives or rather trying too but he left there only five year back where kalyani left him ..this is somewhere heartbreaking to read 🥺🥺

Sampada that evil lady hate her , from what thing she is made up of how can she hurt her own child and she even want to kill him ..or make Malhar mentally ill 😡😡

Agni pls kill that sampada I hate her 😭

Aww that father son bonding I love them they are so pyaara malhar thinking that due to his state he has to shift moksh to someone and the safest place for him is his kalyani or agni ..😳

Kalyani or agni smartness or Malhar also trying to smart ..but alas he could not find anything 😒

Pillu faints and kalyani care hope they get together soon ...pls now Malhar has to find out about her pregnancy also how she suffered and how he lost his child and how he is verge on loosing moksh and agni also..👍🏼

Thanks a lot Vanshu for these yummy mithaai... I'm so glad tujhe ye pasand aaya. Mallu ko bhi ab aage wale chapters me pata chalne wala hai ki Kalyani ke saath jo hua tha it was not an accident and that she had not betrayed him.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

It's too great praggu... I am loving the way youa re exploring each and every scenes in it..... Perfectly jaa rhi hai teri ff .....

Malhar moksh ke banters🥰🥰❤❤❤... Perfect son-duo

Sampada..... Ye chudail kbhi nhi insaan ban skti... Literally 😒😒😒

Moksh scared🥺🥺🥺.... And malhar is also worred seeing his family getting broked.... He has no one... Na maai na kaka..... Asawari Or madhav to kbhi the hi nhi😶😶😶

Par baad m acha idea nikala malhar ne.... 🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍

Moksh excited to meet agni once more❤❤

Misal paav scene😍😍😍😂😂😂....

Par agni bhi to samjhdaar hai.... Knows his tricks😅😅😂😂

Finally kuch glimpse mili mj ko about his kalyani❤❤❤

Ab to journey Or bhi achi lag rhi hai..... And no ye EK ka show bilkul nhi lag rha hai.... Totally loving it

Thank you so much Praku , 💖💖💖💖

Sorry for coming late yaar

Aaj hi padne ka fursat mila toh ek saath pad li

Agni 😍😍😍😍 and malhar kya baath he

And mela pillu is so cute

Poor thing he can't sleep because of that idiot asha and as

Kya hi kare

Hope jaldi usse aayi baba dono ek saath mila jaaye

Please continue yaar

It is so cute