FF discussion thread - Page 5

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Di aap jabhi likho yaa koi aur ..

Next chapter main Malhar umar Gao pooch jata hai aur vahan par usskein liye ek samman ceremony hoti hai to vahan par uska swagat kalyani karti hai...

Aur unn dono ki pehli mulaqat thodi khatti mithi rakhana jo bhi likhega

Aur atul aur Malhar ek gundein ko pakadne vale hote hai jo vahan illegal dhandha karta hai at last malhar caught him but that gunda before running snatch the revolver from officer hand

And tries to shoot Malhar but atul save him by taking bullet on his chest

It's totally depend on you whether you all want kalma scenes more before marriage so just make it long or of you want to keep this mission part short jo just finish it in one or two chapters

Ok Vanshu..

Mujhe Jab time mile I will write next chapter.

If anyone else is writing just drop a note here and continue.