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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Wow Pragya..

Finally I got to read all the three updates together..

It's simply fresh and new concept.

And all the four of them are different..

Loving it.


Thank you so much Rekha.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hinjewadi Office


Everyone is busy welcoming Anupriya taking over as Chief Technology Officer except Pallavi who is busy gossiping. "Pata hai jab iski shaadi mere pati ke bhai se hui thi aur ye nayi dulhan bankar ghar aayi thi to ekdam ganwar thi. Aankhon par mota chashma, tel lage huye baal, ekdam third grade kapde. Naa bolne ka saleeka na baithne uthne ka. Bhai sahab to ek hafte baad hi ek modern smart ladki se shaadi karke ghar chorkar chale gaye. Magar ye aau saheb aur Rao sahab se hamesha chipki rahi. Aaj dekho ham sabki boss banke kya raub dikha rahi h?"


"Agar aapka important discussion poora ho gaya h, to can we get back to our quarterly goals and targets," Jab Anupriya ne teekhi nazron se Pallavi ko dekhte huye kaha, to Pallavi ne sakpakate huye kaha, "K...kuch nahi ma'am. You please continue. Ham to bas aise hi?"


"Ye Kalyani h?" Malhar ki tez aawaz meeting hall me goonji.


"Mr. Malhar..."


"Sorry ma'am" Malhar ne Anupriya se kehne k baad phusphusate huye apne dost se bola, "Are you sure Yahi Kalyani Deshmukh hai?"


"Haan...haan...yahi h voh. Mera to ispar bahut tagda vala crush h," Malhar ka dost blush karte huye bola.


Malhar ne uske joote par zor se apna pair rakha aur bola, "Kalyani tera crush hai? Apne dost ko dhokha dete huye sharm nahi aati tujhe?"


"Abe vo teri girlfriend thodi na h jo mera uspar crush nahi ho sakta."


Malhar ne apne dost ka pair aur zor se dabaya.


"Accha Sorry. Ab kabhi Kalyani par crush nahin karoonga. Ab to pair hata le."


"Good. Kalyani, tumhe to main nahin choroonga."


Kalyani Cafe ke andar YouTube par live thi, "Main hoon Kalyani Deshmukh aur..."


"Ji ye hain Kalyani Deshmukh aur inka kaam hai logon ko bhadkakar unki shaadi todna, kisi acche bhale seedhe saade insaan ka jeena mushkil kar dena, teddy ke liye zinda insaan ka road accident kar dena..."


"Kya badtameezi h ye?"


"Nahi Kalyani abhi to main bahut tameez se baat kar raha hoon. Mera bas chale to tumhe high security jail me ninyanve taale lagar band kar doon jisse mere jaise kisi bande ki life me tum aag na laga sako."


"Are kya bigada h maine tumhara?"


Aur phir Malhar ne poori kahaani sunayi kaise uski shaadi ek matrimonial site ke through Sampada se fix huyi thi. Kaise usne apne future ke sapne sajaaye the ki jab uski aur Sampada ki shaadi hogi to vo honeymoon me usko Delhi ke puratatva vibhaag ke museum le jayega, kaise usne Sampada ko uske birthday par HC Verma ki Introduction to Physics gift kari thi.


"Ye kya h?" Sampada ne chillate huye poocha tha.


"Janti ho Sampada, jab Maa baba ki accident me death huyi thi aur mujhe unki yaad ati thi, to HC Verma ki book ke concepts padhte padhte meri raat guzar jati thi. Tab se aaj tak ye meri comfort book h."


Aur kaise usne socha tha har raat ko vo Sampada ko Science Reporter ke articles padhkar sunayega aur jab Sampada so jayegi, to usko raat bhar dekhta rahega.


Akhirkar Kalyani ki itni der se ruki hansi choot hi gayi aur vo boli, "Please keh do ki tum koi prank kar rahe ho mere sath. Ye sach nahi ho sakta. Raat ko apni wife ko Science Reporter ke articles sunaoonga...tum kahin kisi pagalkhane se to nahin aaye?"


"Just because tumhe science ki kadr nahin h, it doesn't mean har koi tumhare jaisi h."


"Kisi ladki se pyaar karne ke liye social intelligence ki zaroorat bhi hoti h, Mr...."


"Malhar Rane naam h mera."


"To Malhar Ji. Actually aapke naam se ji wali hi feeling aati h. To I promise you is ek mahine main apko is layak bana doongi ki fir koi ladki apko kabhi chorrkar nahin jayegi."


"To kya Sampada vaapas aa jayegi?" Malhar's expressions softened.


"Aapko apka true love mil jayega, that much I promise." Aur Kalyani ne Malhar ka chashmaa nikalkar use door fenk diya.


Guys please let me know what you feel about the story? Is KalMa relationship going too fast?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Wonderful Pragya..

Loving this Confident career woman Anu.. 👏

Malhar aur uske boring gift ideas🤣

He wanted to read out science stories to his wife.. 🤣

Bechari Kalyani would have been having stomach ache laughing about this.. 🤣


It's going in good pace.. Interesting. 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

It’s awesome Pragya..


This Ff is so refreshing and I’m loving it

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Wonderful Pragya..

Loving this Confident career woman Anu.. 👏

Malhar aur uske boring gift ideas🤣

He wanted to read out science stories to his wife.. 🤣

Bechari Kalyani would have been having stomach ache laughing about this.. 🤣


It's going in good pace.. Interesting. 👍🏼


Thank you Rekha ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s awesome Pragya..


This Ff is so refreshing and I’m loving it


Thank you Priya 💕

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey pragya this is awesome 😎😎

I am liking how you shaping the story 😊😊

It's so refreshing to read these types of stories

No saas bahu drama and all


Thank you for writing this story

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

Hey pragya this is awesome 😎😎

I am liking how you shaping the story 😊😊

It's so refreshing to read these types of stories

No saas bahu drama and all


Thank you for writing this story


Thank you so much Vanshika.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Chapter-5


"Ye sab kya h?" Kalyani ko apni aankhon par yakeen nahi ho raha tha.


"Tumne kaha tha tum mujhe dikhaogi main Sampada ko impress kaise karoon. To saare steps ko note to karna hoga na?"


"Aur ye kya? Apke glasses to maine phenk diye the na? Aap fir specs lagakar aa gaye?"


"Myopia ka naam suna h Kalyani tumne?"


"Contact lenses ka naam suna hai apne Malharji?" Kalyani chillayi.


"Kya museebat hai..." Malhar ne khud se kaha.


"Kal Sunday hai na?"


"Haan...aur kar mujhe agle week me office ke liye action plan banana h."


"Kal ham shopping mall chalenge..."


"Magar Kalyani...suno to...ye ladki sunti kyon nahi h?"


Aur agle din...


"Pagal ho kya tum Kalyani? Main ye pehnoonga? Dekho ye vali kitni acchi shirt hai?"


"Interview par nahin jaa rahe hain aap? Apko Sampada se shaadi karni hai ya nahi?"


Malhar ne chupchaap haa me sar hilaya.


"Ye lijiye aur jakar change karke aaiye."


Inside Hinjewadi office


Anupriya ke cabin me Pallavi aati hai. Anupriya use chair par baithne ka ishara karti h.


"Vo Vahini..."


"Vahini nahi Ma'am. Apni boss se baat karne ke manners bhi ab mujhe tumhe sikhane honge kya? Aur vaise bhi atharah saal pehle mujhe, aau saheb aur Rao saheb ko unke pushtaini ghar se nikaalte vaqt bhi tumne yahi kaha tha ki tumhara mujhse koi rishta nahin h? Khair...I just wanted to talk about your performance here. Testing team ko tumhare code me itne bugs mile hain ki mujhe samajh nahi aa raha h ki code kisi 20 year experienced developer ne likha h ya kisi first standard ke bacche ne. This is my last warning. Agar iske baad bhi tumhari performance me koi improvement nahin aata h to jab pink slip mile to yahaan roti hui mat aa jana."


"Ab yahaan khadi kyon ho? Get back to work."


"Ho Vahini...mera matlab yes ma'am."


Pallavi to herself: "Mujhe naukri se nikalegi Anupriya tu? Dekh main tere saath kya karti hoon?"


On the other hand, inside the shopping mall


Kalyani looking at her watch: "Are itni der kyon lag rahi h inhe? Malhar Ji, so gaye kya aap?"


Tabhi changing room ka darwaja khulta hai: Malhar comes out wearing a dark blue shirt with a black leather jacket with touseled hair and without glasses.


"Malhar Ji...aap" Kalyani ka muh khula ka khula reh jata h.


"Ab tum mera mazaak mat banana...Joker lag raha hoon pata h mujhe..."


Kalyani Malhar ki taraf aati h lekin floor par kuch samaan hone ki vajah se uska balance bigad jata h and just in Nick of time, Malhar use sambhal leta hai with background song playing: https://youtu.be/NUm4Ht8mZ1s

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Superb Pragya…


Thanks for another awesome update…

I really like when you give song link in your updates 😍😍😍😍

Edited by Priyapriyu - 4 years ago

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