Kalmash FF - I'm growing up too... Part 29 (last part) updated - Page 7

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Posted: 5 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sanjanareddy670

why cant u write a story on kalyani and moksh ki rabbta when moksh becomes big abd know the actual truth of their parents

how he became a good son,cop like his father,still a fav pillu to kalyani ,a good brother who balance the relationship same like kalyani and all

what say dear

it is my idea just it

Moksh ka role toh Sehbanji se hi karwana padega !!
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Posted: 5 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: sanjanareddy670

why cant u write a story on kalyani and moksh ki rabbta when moksh becomes big abd know the actual truth of their parents

how he became a good son,cop like his father,still a fav pillu to kalyani ,a good brother who balance the relationship same like kalyani and all

what say dear

it is my idea just it

That is indeed a very nice idea..

Will surely try

Thank you ❤️

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Episode 7

The next day Malhar as usual left for work early in the morning. Kalyani and Moksh stayed back at home.

Moksh was cranky in the morning as he had also not slept well at night and Kalyani had just no energy to attend any classes. She would fall asleep again and be bullied by her friends. She just messaged her friend that she wouldn't make it to college and asked her to share notes.

Though she wanted to finish her work, she was fast asleep along with Moksh.

At the police station, Malhar was searching for some papers and couldn't find them. He searched for his thumb drive from which he could take another print out but he couldn't find that too. "Probably I left them at home", he thought to himself.

"Pawar, mujhe ghar jaana hoga, main papers laana bhool gaya. Mera thumb drive bhi reh gaya, Main jaldi le aata hun."

He reached home and opened the door himself as he was not expecting Kalyani to be at home. To his surprise, both Kalyani and Moksh were at home.

He saw that Kalyani was fast asleep while Moksh was sitting beside her with a pen in his hand and vigorously scribbling on something.

Malhar was worried and touched Kalyani's forehead to check if she had a fever. Thank god she seemed ok.

Feeling his touch, she woke up. "Malharji, aap kab aaye? Raat ho gayi kya? Oh god, maine koi kaam nahi kiya, Pillu ko khana nahi diya." she was panicking.

"Calm down Kalyani, raat nahi hua hai, Main apna papers aur thumb drive bhool gaya, isliye wapas aana pada."

Moksh was happy to see his father and waved the paper in front of him. Both Malhar and Kalyani saw that the papers Moksh had been scribbling were Malhar's official papers. She had tears in her eyes.

"I'm sorry Malharji, Maine dhyan nahi diya, Pillu tune kya kiya, Baba ke papers hi mile kya tujhe."

Malhar put his arms around her and her tears wet his uniform. He rubbed her back comfortingly, "Chup ho jao Kalyani. Rona bandh karo. Mere thumb drive mai hai, main dusra printout le lunga.

Ek aur baat, aaj tum koi kaam nahi karogi. Main tum donon ke liye lunch order kar doonga, Bai ko phone karke use jaldi aane keliye bol deta hun, woh ghar saaf karegi. Mujhe ab jaana hoga.

Please aaj meri baat maan lo."

He kissed her forehead and went back to work. He understood that she was very tired and felt really guilty that he hadn't been able to help her out these past 10 days. He would have helped her follow that stupid timetable if he had not been tense himself.

He had noticed that Kalyani was pushing herself too hard trying to fulfil everything that she had written down in her planner but he had neither been able to stop her nor help her out. He had refrained from replying to her angry remarks and avoided arguments.

Yes, he was no saint and was feeling deprived of their intimacy and spending some quality time with her but he did not blame her. He knew she was trying her best.

The delay in the progress of the case was nagging at the back of his head. As a result, he couldn't think about anything else. Hopefully they would get a breakthrough soon and he could take matters in his hand to sort out Kalyani's troubles.

On the other hand, Kalyani felt that she had slacked and she now had to find some more methods and add them to her daily planner.

Sarthak who was a guest lecturer was in the college for his class that day. He noted that Kalyani was not in college. He also heard from Kalyani's professor what had happened in the past 3 days.

Concerned about it, he called his wife, "Anupriya, aaj Kalyani college main nahi hai. "

"Acha? kyun? Kya hua hai use? Aapko kuch patha hai?"

Sarthak told her whatever he had heard from Kalyani's professor.

"Teekh hai Sarthak, main use phone karthi hun."

Anupriya called her daughter, "Kalyani, kaisi ho tum? Moksh aur Malhar kaise hai? Tumne phone hi nahi kiya itne dinon se."

"Aai hum sab theek hain, main tumhe baad me call karti hun. Abhi mera aur Moksh ka study time hai."

"Are Lekin woh 10 minute mujhse baat karne ke baad bhi kar sakthi hai na?"

"Nahi Aai, mere paas bilkul time nahi hai mere timetable main aur bhi cheezein hai jo mujhe complete karne hain?

"Theekh hai phir main aur Sarthak aate hain tumse milne."

"Nahin Aai, aaj nahin. Main plan karke aap logon ko bathathi hun. Bye." Kalyani cut the call.

Anupriya was stumped. Kalyani had never before cut her calls so briefly. She dialled Malhar's number.

"Aai! Aap Aur Kaka kaise hai? "

"Hum dono teekh hai, par kya tum sab teekh ho? Kalyani ne mujhse baat bhi nahi ki teekh se. Sab teekh hai na?"

"Aai, sab teekh hai, Bas Kalyani thodi tired hai."

"Haan, wahi, Sarthak ne kaha ki Kalyani aaj college bhi nahi gayi, pichle 3 dinon se college me sogayi aur Professor usse naraaz hai."

"Yeh toh hoga na. Aai, mai aapse milne aata hun kaam ke baad. Abhi mujhe phone rakhna hoga. Bye."

Malhar and his team had gotten a significant clue and were glad that the case was making some development.

He finished his duty around 9 pm and went to meet his Kaka and Aai. He explained to them how Kalyani was pushing herself too hard.

"Mai uske ideas ke khilaf nahi hun par agar usne itna stress liya toh woh bimar ho jayegi aur uski padhai suffer hogi."

"Tum sahi keh rahe ho Malhar, main usse baat karti hun."

"Koi fayda nahi hoga Aai. Mere pass iss situation ko deal karne ka ek idea hai, lekin aap donon ki madad chahiye."

After listening to him, they agreed and Malhar took them home with him to see Kalyani.

Kalyani was surprised to see all three of them. She had been feeding dinner to Moksh who was now interested in the three other people who had entered the house. He ran around them like a cute puppy showing his pleasure.

Sarthak picked up his grandson and swirled him, making him giggle with delight.

"Aai… Malharji...aap sab saath mein? " Kalyani asked.

"Haan Kalyani, yeh mere mehman hai, mujhe patha hai tumhare timetable main in sab ke liye time nahin hai toh tum apna follow karlo, Main dekh lunga inkeliye jo chahiye." Malhar teased her.

Her eyes flashed anger at him but she smiled at Aai and Kaka. "Aap log baitiye, main kuch karti hun."

Sarthak stopped her, "Kalyani, humne dinner kar liya hai, kya tumne khaya?"

She shook her head. He made her sit down with them and Malhar went in to get her dinner plate. As she ate her dinner, they were all chatting and Moksh was also happy running around them, sitting on their laps and getting all attention.

Kalyani couldn't eat any more, she was feeling left out. She went to the kitchen and threw away the remaining food. Her tears were threatening to fall. She was so exhausted and she wished Aai would go away. She didn't want to talk to anyone.

As Sarthak and Anupriya took leave, Malhar thanked them for agreeing to his request. He picked Moksh in his arms and went into their bedroom. She was laying on the bed, her back towards him.

He knew she was pretending to sleep but he didn't say anything. He left moksh on the bed, freshened and changed. He switched off the lights, put Moksh to sleep and closed his eyes. His mind was occupied with his work front and also hoping that his idea would work and she would stop exerting herself.

Edited by rekha1975 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago
#64

Malhar ji is so good❤️

he understood Kalyani is stressing herself and also her efforts👍🏼

AnuSar❤️

Malhar ji ne mast idea nikali

Moksh as always cute❤️

thanks for update

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Posted: 5 years ago
#65

Aww so cute Malhar ji

He understands his wife efforts n trying to help her out

Bichari kalyani

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Very cute

Thanks for update

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Posted: 5 years ago
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It’s nice diii...

Hope malharji’s idea works

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Hi. Sorry to keep you waiting. Will update shortly.

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Episode 8 (a)

Kalma's home (events until late morning)

Kalyani could not sleep, she still had to go through the notes of the 4 days which her friend had shared with her. She got up from the bed and tiptoed out of the room careful not to disturb Malhar or Pillu.

She sat down at her study desk in the other room and opened the laptop trying to go through the notes which she had received by email from her friend.

After 20 minutes all the letters began to swim in front of her eyes, she couldn't concentrate and she banged the table, threw her stationary which went flying to all parts of the room. She put her head down on the table, tears leaking from her eyes and fell asleep there.

Unknown to her, Malhar had witnessed whatever happened. After she had slept, he took away her mobile and switched off all the alarms she had set to take a look at Moksh or take him to the washroom. He switched off the Wi-Fi of her phone and put it on silent. He scooped her in his arms and took her to the bed.

Once he had laid her comfortably, he touched her sleeping face tenderly and brushed away the hair which was falling on her forehead. "So jao Kalyani, kya zaroorat hai tumhe itna sab karne ki. Aaram karo, sab teekh ho jayega." he placed a soft kiss on her knuckles and drew the blanket on her.

Malhar got up early next morning though it was a Saturday. He was happy to see that she was comfortably sleeping. He freshened up and packed a small bag with all essentials for Moksh.

He saw that Moksh was slowly stirring from his sleep and he quickly picked up the child from bed so that Kalyani would not be disturbed. He closed the bedroom door behind him so that any noises that he or Moksh made would not disturb her.

He brushed Moksh's little teeth with the soft brush that Kalyani used for it and gave him a nice bath. He fed the freshly dressed cutiepie his milk and then picked up the bag he had packed.

Malhar arrived at Sarthak's home with Moksh and gave him to Aai. "Moksh, aaj tu apne Nani Aur aazoba ke saath rehna, teekh hai, mai sham ko aake tujhe ghar le jaonga. Nani ko pareshan mat karna mera baby." kissing the child he told Anupriya, "Aai, agar koi bhi pareshani ho toh mujhe call kijiye."

"Haan main karungi, tum jao aur apni biwi aur meri beti ka khayal rakho. Moksh ki chinta mat karo."

When Malhar reached back home, Kalyani had still not woken up so he set about making breakfast for them. He made the batter for pancakes as Kalyani liked pancakes with chocolate syrup.

Kalyani woke up lazily stretching her arms out. She felt fresh and nice after such a good sleep. She sat up and saw the other side of the bed was empty. Where were Malharji and Pillu? She went to the washroom and freshened up. As she stepped out of the room, she heard sounds from the kitchen and saw that Malhar was whipping the batter for pancakes.

"Malharji…aap ye sab kyun kar rahe hain? Mujhe utaya kyun nahi. Pillu kahan hai?"

"Good morning Kalyani.. apne pati ko ek sweet sa goodmorning toh bolo. Usse pehle itne sare sawaal?"

He handed her a steaming cup of coffee, lifted her by the waist and made her sit on the kitchen counter. She sipped the coffee and savored the taste. God it seemed like a long while since she had relished a coffee.

"Malharji, Pillu kahan hai? "

"Kalyani, Moksh apne nani aur aazoba ke ghar gaya hai."

"Kyun? Wahan kyun chod aaye aap use? Aapko pata hai na hamara routine? Mujhe puchna toh zaroori nahi lagta aapko."

"Haan patha hai, ek din tum us routine se break le sakthi ho Kalyani. Apni halat dekhi tumne?"

"Mai bilkul teekh hun.. Aap Pillu ko wapas le aaiye. Mujhe uske saath time spend karna hai. Use bohot kuch sikhana hai."

"Acha? Tum bilkul theek ho? Toh Kal ghar mein kya kar rahi thi? College kyun nahi gayi? Aur pichle teen din college me so kyun gayi? Tumhe lagta hai agar tum mujhe nahi bataogi toh mujhe kuch patha nahi chalega?" he said softly.

Kalyani retorted, "Haan so gayi, toh kya? Kyun bataon main aapko? Aap ke paas time hai mere liye? Actually aapko mera timetable follow nahi karna hai, mere ideas pasand nahi hai, aur aapko romance nahi mila, isliye aap itne dinon se ghar der se aarahe hain. Tab aapko samaj nahi aaya ki main struggle kar rahi hun?"

"Kalyani, aisi baat nahi hai, mujhe sach mein bohot kaam tha."

"Toh jayiye na aaj bhi, maine roka toh nai. Main apna aur Pillu ka dekh lungi."

She looked at the fridge and saw that her planner was missing. "Kahan hai mera planner?"

"Maine use hata diya… "

"Oh! Aapko lagta hai mere ideas kachre ke tarah hain, worthless, Isliye aapne use phek diya hai na." she shouted without allowing him to finish.

"Kalyani chodo ye sab, main tumhare liye pancakes bana raha hun, pehle woh khalo, phir hum baat karenge. Tumhe jo bhi puchna hai khane ke baad puch lo."

He poured the batter on the pan and made fluffy pancakes. He set it on the plate and poured chocolate syrup over it. He handed the plate to her which she refused. So, he used a 🍴 and brought it near her mouth. She was still adamant and did not open her mouth.

"Please kha lo Kalyani." he nudged her.

Her pent up anger poured out. "Mujhe nahi khana… ye sab aap isliye kar rahe hain kyunki aap ko apna pleasure chahiye, jo aapko itne din nahi mila aur us din bhi adhura reh gaya."

"Nahi Kalyani, yeh main Isliye kar raha hun kyunki apni biwi ko main thoda rest dena chahtha hun use thoda pamper karna chahtha hun."

"Really? Toh aap mujhe kyun pamper kar rahe hain, and that too suddenly? Moksh ko kyun aapne Aai ke ghar bheja? Kyunki woh aapko disturb kar raha hai. Mujhe sab samaj aata hai Malharji."

Malhar felt hurt by her words but did not let it show. Malhar put down the plate he was holding. He knew that she was venting out her anger and frustration. His phone rang but he ignored it.

"Kalyani, main kaam ki wajah se late aa raha tha.

Main tumse jhoot nahi kahunga ki mujhe sex nahi chahiye. Par kya maine kabhi zabardasti apni icha puri ki hai?

Uss raat mujhe laga ki tum bhi miss kar rahi ho, warna main shuru hi nahi karta. Mujhe bhi pata hai ki Moksh bohot chota hai aur use hamari zaroorat hai.

Trust me maine aaj ke liye kuch aur plan kiya hai."

Malhar's phone kept ringing non stop and he had to take the call. "Haan Pawar? Acha… kahan se mila information, theek hai aap sab log plain clothes me tayyar rahiye. Apne weapons chupa lijiye. Main jaldi aata hun."

She gave him a sarcastic smile, "Jayiye Jayiye.. Aapne chocolate syrup ke bahane jo bhi plans banaye sab fail ho gaye."

"Sorry Kalyani, mujhe ab jaana hoga, lekin acha hi hua Kalyani. Main yahan nahi rahunga toh tum better feel karogi.

Please meri baat maan lo aur Moksh ko aaj Aai ke paas hi rehne do. Kal subah main use le aata hun. Tum ache se aaram karlo aur ye din apne liye enjoy karo, na mere liye, na Moksh ke liye."

Patha nahin mujhe aane main kitni der hogi."

As he was changing his clothes, he reflected on her angry words and though he understood, it still hurt dammit. He was also human after all.

He had no time to think about this now. While leaving home, his features had hardened matching that of a cop on duty.

The day had not ended yet....


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Episode 8 (b)

Anusar's home (events of the whole day)

Malhar had left Moksh with Aai and Kaka and though he wanted to pick up his son the same evening, Anupriya had convinced him to leave Moksh with them for the whole weekend and asked both of them to relax. He had agreed reluctantly as he felt kalyani would not like the idea.

Later, Anupriya was feeding Moksh his breakfast. He did not sit in one place as he was in a new environment with lots to explore.

Sarthak caught him, "Aaha pakad liya." and picked up Moksh and brought him near his wife to make it easier for her to finish feeding him.

"Moksh bohot naughty ho gaya hai Sarthak isliye Kalyani itna thak gayi. Hume hafte mein at least ek din use hamare paas rakhna chahiye."

"Main bhi wahi soch raha tha, un donon ko apne liye bhi thoda time milega. Lekin mujhe nahi lagta Kalyani maanegi."

"Kyun nahi maanegi? Are hum uske apne hai, zaroor maanegi."

"Anupriya, woh Moksh ko discipline karna, use sab kuch sikhana chahthi hai. College jane ke wajah se woh baaki ke din uspar jyada dhyan nahi de paati, isliye usne weekends ka aisa planning kiya hai. Malhar uska madad karna chahtha hai lekin woh police officer hai Isliye use duty ke liye hamesha tayyar rehna padtha hai."

"Aur Kalyani ko apni padhai pe bhi toh dhyan dena hoga na. Ab sirf cheh mahine baaki hai uske exams ke liye. Moksh ko thodi itni jaldi sab seekhkar exam likhna hai. Hume Kalyani ko samjhana hoga."

"Hmm… hume koshish zaroor karni hogi."

While they were discussing amongst themselves, the little guy had wandered into the kitchen. There was a big bowl there on the floor covered with a cloth. He threw away the cloth and looked into it. There was a big ball light brown in colour. He poked the ball with his fingers and found it was a bit sticky and found that he could pull out little pieces from it. Pulling out a little of it he rolled it between his little hands and the floor and pressed it. It stuck to the floor, flat and oval in shape. So Moksh made small little balls from the big ball and flattened them with his hand and stuck them lining the floor and kitchen cabinets which were in his reach.

Sarthak entered the kitchen to drink water and saw what his grandson had been up to.

"Anupriya…jaldi aao dekho mere bache ne kitni achi rotiyan banayi hai" he called out happily.

She came there and saw the whole dough of atta that she had kneaded to make rotis had taken the shape of minute little rotis on the floor and cabinets. She didn't get angry.

"Hey Deva! Maine atta gundke bowl neeche hi chod diya tha. Aap ise le jayiye Aur saaf karwaiye, main kitchen saaf karthi hun. Chota bacha ghar main hai toh mujhe dhyan rakhna chahiye tha."

"Chal Moksh.. " Sarthak took him to the washroom.

Anupriya had cleaned the kitchen and made rice for lunch instead of rotis. The house seemed silent, the voices of Sarthak and Moksh were not heard. When she went looking for them, she heard the splashing of water.

She saw Sarthak and Moksh playing with the water in the washroom. They were happily splashing water on each other. There was a big glob of frothy soap running down from Sarthak's head.

Anupriya saw how happy they both looked, "Sarthak, woh bacha hai, aap nahin. Donon bahar nikaliye jaldi. Bas bohot khel liya pani me."

"Are hamare andar ke bache ko kabhi kabhi bahar aane ka mauka dena chahiye." Sarthak said, coming out of the bathroom with Moksh.

They both got dressed and all of them had lunch after which Moksh was fast asleep along with his grandpa. They woke up about 4 pm and had tea and milk respectively.

Anupriya had gone to the market to buy groceries, vegetables and other stuff.

Sarthak was watching Animal Planet with Moksh on his lap. He was munching on some peanuts from a bowl, engrossed in a lioness staking out and hunting her prey.

Moksh also picked up one peanut from the bowl and rolled it between his fingers but it fell down from his grip. He was watching the animals and also his aazoba popping peanuts into his mouth. He picked one more and decided to find out how it smelled. He had nearly stuffed it into his nose when Anupriya entered the house and saw it with a horrified look on her face. She dropped all the bags that she was carrying and rushed to move away Moksh's hand just in time.

"Sarthak, aapka dhyan kahan hai, aap baitke TV dekh rahe hain. Abhi Moksh apni naak ke andhar ye moongphali daal deta toh?" she asked angrily.

Sarthak was also guilty about what had happened, "Sorry Anupriya mujhe thoda aur alert hona chahiye tha. Sorry beta."

Anupriya took Moksh from him and said, "Acha hua ki maine dekh liya, warna kya ho jaata. Hum kabhi Kalyani ko muh nahi dikha pathe. Kaise trust karegi woh humpar. Hume aur bohot dhyan rakhna hoga. Aapne aise hi dekhbaal ki jab Malhar chota tha? "

"Tum sahi keh rahi ho, mujhe adat dalna hoga chote bache ke ghar mein hone ka kyun ki Anupriya hamare bache toh hamare shaadi se pehle hi bade ho gaye na."

"Sarthak….." she punched him.

Sarthak continued, "Aur rahi baat Malhar ki, toh woh bilkul bhi shararti nahi tha. Use sambhalna bohot aasan tha. Ye hamara Moksh toh bilkul apni aayi Kalyani pe gaya hai ekdum shararti."

"Chup kijiye, meri beti sabse achi hai."

Moksh was enjoying the argument of his grandparents and clapping his hands in glee.

"Chaliye aap Aur Moksh walk pe Jayiye Aur main apna kaam khatam kar deti hun. Phir mujhe apne pyare Pillu ke saath thoda khelna hai."

"Chal Moksh, hume ab tere Nani ke orders follow karne hai." Sarthak changed into tracks, T-shirt and shoes and made Moksh also wear shoes. They both went to a nearby playground.

Moksh was having the time of his life playing on the slide and becoming a pro at it. From time to time he checked to see if aazoba was near him. After the slide, aazoba made him sit on the swing and pushed it only lightly but it was fun. After the swing he played some more games. He tried to join other kids of his size.

After all the fun, Sarthak and Moksh came back home and went in for another jolly time in the bath as they were both dirty from head to toe. After their shower, they relished the warm dinner. Anupriya left Sarthak to clear the table and kitchen.

She picked up her little grandson and went to the bedroom, making him sit on her lap. Soon, Moksh was engrossed in hearing the story about a king called Rama and his queen Sita and the demon king Ravana, from his Nani. His eyelids were drooping, and he was fast asleep on Nani's lap.

Anupriya carefully placed the little one on the bed and covered him with a soft blanket. Sarthak who had come into the room sat there looking at the two admiringly. All three of them had enjoyed the day.

"Aaj bohot maza aaya Sarthak. Aapko bhi acha laga na?"

"Haan...waise tum teekh keh rahi thi, hume hafte mein ek din toh iss chotu ko apne saath rakh lena chahiye. Hamare liye yeh ek alag feeling hai na…"

"Warna main aapka woh Animal Planet dekh dekhkar chakkar kha jaathi."

"Acha… ? Aur main tumhare us pravachan programme ko sun sunkar beemar ho jaata. Waise aaj playground ne mujhe bhi thode bohot friends mile. Tumhe bhi aana chahiye agle baar."

Their banter continued even after the lights were put off and sleep clouded their eyes.

Moksh, Nani and Aazoba had enjoyed their day. What had happened to his Aai and Baba's day after starting it badly......



***I wrote this epi in 2 parts to show how both sides day had gone and it took me some time to get out of Kalma's head and get into Moksh's and Anusar's head. The Kalma part has not yet ended. It will be continued from where it stopped in the next epi.

Hope you all like it.

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