#Kalyani is growing up - Idea thread - Page 5

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Accha ami likchi .

Kalyani reaction jaroor likhna about song meaning.....

In this way they will have some romantic conversation

It’s midnight and kalyani is not able to sleep.... she is remembering her dream... then she get up from her bed..... goes to malhar who is sleeping....

she looks at him.... an say meri neend udha kitne chain se so rhe hai.... kitne cute lag rhe hai and some self talking like apne husband par lattu hui jaa rhi hu..... then she try to kiss sleeping malharji....

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

It’s midnight and kalyani is not able to sleep.... she is remembering her dream... then she get up from her bed..... goes to malhar who is sleeping....

she looks at him.... an say meri neend udha kitne chain se so rhe hai.... kitne cute lag rhe hai and some self talking like apne husband par lattu hui jaa rhi hu..... then she try to kiss sleeping malharji....

Rekha has posted twò very bold scenes . They are amazing . But i think before i merge the scene . Some scenes are needed to b incorporated in the middle.

1. Malhar's desire as a man-

Malhar doing kumbhak ( A yoga that is done by saint to control their sexual urge) . Taking cold shower or oozing out by watching blue film . Most men did this things and its quite natural but the problem is no one discusses it in India openly .

2. Arts of Seduction goes wrong - Kalyani being naive can try to use Arts of seduction from any book and it turns wrong .A funny scene .

3. Malhar and Chrstian Grey - Kalyani gets scared to read BDSM and Masochiaism . Malhar explains her all men are not like Christian Grey and all relations are not based on Physical abuse .

4. Kalyani irked being tagged as naive - Different other characters can call her naive and it can irk her to the point that she takes such steps

5. Women too have needs and its not wrong - Sumona explaining Kalyani that if a man has need then a women too can have it . There is no sin or wrong in it. If a girl takes the first initiative there is no wrong in it .

6. Chandana and Bhagya- Both have given two brilliant ideas . Licking ice cream and Pottery .

I hope guyz u have no problem with this ideas Tell me what u think .

I was thinking... all this exploring the sexual desire and tension between and from both sides eventually should lead,before the issue is solved, to them openly discussing why he's been avoiding it altogether (age difference, partly some guilt related to how he forced her into marriage at barely 18, and most importantly the promise given to Atul about not getting physical with her until she became something in her life... I actually don't remember any such scene happening on screen btw Atul and Malhar... Atharva did promise that to Atul but we know how much his promises are worth and that he never intended to marry or take the responsibility of Kalyani's studies anyways,it was all a ploy to make Malhar go out of his mind so that he'd marry Kalyani and loose Pillus custody) and Kalyani telling him that they can't put their life and desired at hold for someone who's no more and that her dad would most of all want her happy,even if said happiness is in doing something he disagrees with.

Malhar could also be reluctant to get intimate because he just risked losing her due to the ivf procedure and wouldn't want any unexpected/unplanned pregnancy to put him in that position again... but of course,being Malhar, he will just initially hide behind the Atul mama's promise thing until she unmasks his true feelings and makes him confess his fears.

Idea section check.kar .Hum deviation from.the original plot kar sakte hai. But agar tu kahe .toh mein yeh chiz scns mein layaungi. These are scenes . Later i will merge as a strong story .

Two more characters for the growth of the story

Avishek Banerjee - Malhar' s Classmate .A very good friend .Meet after 5 years in College Reunion .He is a writer and mostly wrote Romantic novels . His stories are best seller

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Rohini Banerjee - Wife of Avishek Banerjee. A teacher in a music school.

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They in their own way will help Malhar and Kalyani to understand their relation better.

**Rohini and Avishek are newly married . They have just returned from Honeymoon. They are quite explicit in their manuever. They do PDA and are quite bold and vocal totally opposite from Kalma who loves to keep things private . They will lead us and the leads to understand har couple ka ek alag tarika hota hai pyar ka ..

Their is no rule book it comes from.within

Feedback needed .

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Two more characters for the growth of the story

Avishek Banerjee - Malhar' s Classmate .A very good friend .Meet after 5 years in College Reunion .He is a writer and mostly wrote Romantic novels . His stories are best seller

Positive

Rohini Banerjee - Wife of Avishek Banerjee. A teacher in a music school.

Positive

They in their own way will help Malhar and Kalyani to understand their relation better.

**Rohini and Avishek are newly married . They have just returned from Honeymoon. They are quite explicit in their manuever. They do PDA and are quite bold and vocal totally opposite from Kalma who loves to keep things private . They will lead us and the leads to understand har couple ka ek alag tarika hota hai pyar ka ..

Their is no rule book it comes from.within

Feedback needed .

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

someone like this is required in story....

Keep going guys

I am not able to come daily

But I am reading

All writers are doing a great job

And one more thing as per thr real series the promise malhar made was he will not let the marraige of theirs be a reason to destroy kalaynis future.

He just said he will stand by her and let her achieve whatever she wants in his life

There was no clause of physical abstinence

It was athrava who made such a promise as far as I remember

Most of woman achieve in india after marraige we are a society where most girls are married during or after graduation or post graduation.

To support wife doesn't mean that na

And also during second sr he said we will start normal life once kallu realization happens about a marraige and love .

He said such realation starts due to love and she hasn't felt that yet and he will wait . He just asked her not to brood much over the concept of love and now concentrate on her studies. Such things will come naturally

Na dilog aur was there ever a clasue that they will not start a proper life until she fully completed her education and start a career