Originally posted by: nikita_88
Reserved!
*unreserved* 😉 THANKYOU 😃
Finally I have time to comment, I decided to stop doing my chores and comment 😆😆
aww so sweet, u put off ur chores just to coment
OK firstly loved the way you described Yug's range of emotions from seeing his Dadu, to they way he hugged Bindiya to the way he was eviling Neel (OMG I can't believe I was going to put Ashish down😲) which reminds me he should not be added into this FF or I will have a huge problem! The emotional blackmail it always comes down to that but I am still hoping Yug stays mad at his Dadu, but I ma gald he is going back for his mom! 😃 Like the sweetheart he is 😳
im glad u liked yugs emotions.i wanted to show that no matter how strong yug is, he melts agsint the women he loves in his life (theres only 2, bindiya and vrinda !)
and yes were theres VA or DB there will allways be emotional blackimailing i guess.
as for ur question, no i will not including ashish in this FF. although he is doing great in the actual drama, and i want him to cause more ahvoc, only sdo dat yuvi can break wid der parteners, i have never been able to accept him as part of the crew.
Ok back to my point very well written with the emotions and all loved it. Then his anger at Bharti lets keep it that way but then I had other things going through my mind after which I shall not state I am scarred enough thinking it. One the point of Bharti can I ask which Bharti you want us to picture Khushboo or the girl before cause I always see the girl before and not Khushboo???
if u remember hun, over a month ago i was complaining that i find it hard to write because i cant imagine the new bharti with yug. but i dont know when it happened, and now when i write about bharti, all i can imagine is khusboo singh. the other bharti has totally left my mind. she was too jittery and chatty and high pitched. this one seems more discreet and devious and serious. just the way i need her to be. so its khushboo alongside yug im afraid, but its upto u i guess who you want to imagine.
The Mandir scene and car journey amazing and beautiful! I was so engrossed I never wanted YuVi to move out of each other's arms, it was amazing the way he saved her and then their feelings for each other, the way they wanted each other happiness and the pain they went through I was like Shabs the next part must be up 2mo! 😆😆 So this does mean persistant bugging 😛 (and I do mean it so beware!😉)
LOl, i better prepare myself den. originally i was gonna make the mandir scene longer, but then i realised dat i didnt wnat yuvi to have a lot of verbal comunication with each other. well not yet anyway. so thats why VA had to come.
Yug talking to Radha and Krishna was amazing his anger wow for once God will listen to him HAHA when he tried the opposite method cause that's what his heart truely wants deep down. And he will listen to Bharti as well which reminds me you should include a RB and Bharti affair in this FF as I think this is the only one with them in it. 😆😆 Just joking do as u please but it would be awesome hehe!
LOL, i thot i wanted rb and bharti to have an affair, but you surpassed me. but i only want that in the drama. in this story, i just cant imagine dem doing dat. they are both too GREEDILY in love with their partners to have an affair with each other. and i need them to be like that for certain future circumstances.
and yes, GOD will finally listen. everytime yug has asked or pleaded to god, his wishes were wasted. and now that he asked for all the things that he doesnt really mean- such as vrinda and rb having problems, and vrinda suffereing, now finally his prayers will be answered. its really ironic, but i guess he had to become this desperate to get heard. the thing is tho, will yug regret what he asked for, or will it pay off ???
Ok I didn't really like the way the enemity ended I was hoping you had done something different but oh well I shall deal with it, I shall have it all set in my mind the way I wanted it to end the enemity anyways. HAHA loved the way Bharti's plan back fired with Vrinda and Yug families being family friends LOL but come on you should have made it more dramatic with Vri running over across the border to Yug or something, jogging RB's memory slighty?
hahaha, oh gosh, well i really appreciate ur honesty hun. it makes me happy. im sorry for letting ya down on dat part. but personally in my head, the enemity does end like dat wid yug being kidnapped , and rb saving him. i think the only way these buddhay cud have got over their differences if something happened to their grandchildrean. so the creatives actually came up with a clever idea, but i HATE the way it was all rushed and shot. when i imagine it, it is done way more tastefully, and with much more emotion, espetially from VA and vrinda. and yes in my head she does cross the border, and she ciries A LOTT MORE than she did in the show.
i have gone back and edited a bit of it about vrinda at the mandir while yug is presumed dead. (soz i forgot that in rush), thnx for reminding me.
honestly tho, ending the enemeity is just something dat needed to be done just so i can move on. anyway, i was lazy and really couldnt be bothered writing out something that had already been shown in the drama (regardless of how lame it was). so for that i offer my sincierest appologies.
i would love to know how you have it set in ur mind tho, that would be really interesting.
and i contemplated having rb spot yuvi stealing glances at each other in the mandir, but then i decided not to, because its not really something to get that suspicios about for him. rb needs to see something suspicious, for him to have doubts, and maybe that might jogg his memeory.
Oh yeah also wondering is there going to be a frieda entry in your FF or she already here? I am a bit confused and I can't remember!
nope no freida ! i dont wanna get this story overcrowded with loads of charachters. if you have noticed, i am not even focusing on some of the other main charachters, such as MGC, kushal, teji, parmider. the reason being, this FF only revolves around yuvi. yes other charchters come in and make appearances, but im not rewriting out the whole show. i only want show yuvi' story ! the focus is on dem.
Overall I loved it!
I can't wait to see what happens next so u need to update ASAP!
Love you 😉
Cont soon! (I do mean now 😆😆)
Sorry I just feel your FF is hitting its climax and really can't wait to see it!
thnx hun, i will try mu best, i want to start typing up the next part right now, but im way too tired. so i will do it as soon as i can i promise.
yes i am trying to build up to a climax. i have something planned, that may well be the ending of this FF , have still not decided yet.
so a few more updates, and its the BIG ONE !!!!
