FF: Tum Ho To [Page 19; Chap XI]

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Omg Nabila me loved it! It was amazing! I love how you described Vrinda's feelings of being tired and wary and then the pain of this being the last time with Ria. I wonder who her real father is...

Who was at the door? Whoever it was, I kinda feel bad that Vrinda hit him and closed the door on him. I wonder what he did anyway...

Can't wait to read the next one =)

Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago

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Samiya

@samiya.

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Awesome FF!

This part was amazing!

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-mya-

@-mya-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

thankx..another gr8 part...i was so gud..can't wait for the next part.

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Gr8 work yaar cant wait for the next part hope you post it soon😊

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Neetu2825

@Neetu2825

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

lol...she hit him. Aw, poor Yug...always the victim of Vrinda's anger😆

Great update...I loved it.

I'm also looking for that update you promised on the other story...the part where Yug drops her in mud was hilarious in SKUP😛

Keep up the great work!

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Presadhi

@Binky

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Neetu2825
lol...she hit him. Aw, poor Yug...always the victim of Vrinda's anger😆

Great update...I loved it.

I'm also looking for that update you promised on the other story...the part where Yug drops her in mud was hilarious in SKUP😛

Keep up the great work!

Yeah I'm waiting to know what happened in that FF too

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@IrikaLovesKMH

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

great part continue soon

Irika

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Nabila

@Tomiko

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

I can't help it....as soon as I start writing I see a feisty Vrinda who ends up hitting Yug....poor him.😆

I WILL have the next part of SKUP up sometime this week with another cool encounter.😳😆

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Updated my comment =)

And can't wait for SKUP =)

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Suga.Point

@Suga.Point

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

This is such a good FF!!! Pleae update ASAP!!!

Love this new avatar of YuVi!!

Though I absolutley love the innocence of their love, I really like how you have taken it away and gave a modern and kind of mature type of look to them!! It fits them perfectly! Just proves how good Kunal's and Pooja's chemistry is and how versatile they are...(it may sound odd 'cause they aren't acting! LOL!)

And also love the fact about how Yug and Vrinda had a kid and Yug having an affair (is that right?).

Yes, I know, I've been wanting a KANK story revolving around YuVi for a while! LMAO!