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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

Alright guys bahot mushkil ho gaya hai yeh weekend bitaana...............Isliye socha I start this new topic...............its not exactle a Fan Fiction..................Lekin in this section I'll be posting each weekend some sequence on the events that happen in the show that week.................

Hope u all like the first sequence..................first part...............

Tell me kaisa laga?.................and if I should send in the next part....................

Here's the Part 1.......................

There is activity at full swing since its almost time for the moon to come out?????..Yug is roaming about the house with Sharad in search of Vrinda as he wanted to make sure she completes her vrat and was following her since morning😳????but abb she was no where to be seen?????.Yug was worried????.

He reaches upstairs to find?????once again that she was with her mother????..who somehow came to know Vrinda was fasting?????.and was mad at her????.telling all the stuff she usually said to her?????..and Vrinda just stands there listening quietly????..and shedding tears?????.

Yug seems to have had enough of it?????..and this time determined to interrupt Vrinda's mom👏👏 he steps into the room saying-- Arre app Vrinda par itna naraaz kyun ho rahi hain?....................😊😊

She stares at Yug while Vrinda who was all tears looks at Yug pleadingly?????asking him to leave and let it be??????But Yug won't leave?????.he just could not????..👏😳

He says-- Abb poora din toh beet hii gaya hai?????Chaand bhi nikalne waala hai????..toh phir aap Vrinda ko usska vrat poora karne dijiye????.kya fark padhta hai?..................😊

Vrinda's mom snaps back angrily-- Fark padhta hai?????.aggar gaanv mein kuch bhi ulta seedha hua toh sab isse dosh deinge????.tab mujhe fark padhta hai!................Jab isse bura bhalaa kaheinge?????Tab mujhe far padhta hai!...............Isski kismet ko dosh denge????..tab mujhe fark padhta hai????..Samjhe!?

Yug is about to reply when she speaks up again-- Aur main apni beti se baat kar rahi hoon????.tumhe koi hak nahiin hai beech mein bolne kaa??????.(Yug looks hurt and stares at Vrinda)?????Aur main dekhti hoon yeh vrat kaise rakhti hai?...............Chal mere saath (she says holding Vrinda by her hand and taking her out of the room)?????.main khud tera yeh vrat todtii hoon??????😡

Yug is taken aback?????😲

He doesn't know what to do?

How should he stop her?................No?????👏Yug thinks????..I can't let this happen?????..lekin kaise?😕.................An idea strikes Yug??????..😊

Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

No replies?...............Kaisa laga?😭

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sallu_lover

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Posted: 16 years ago

areee yaar it is soo long for me to read can u explain in short hahahaha

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sallu_lover

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Posted: 16 years ago

dont get confused yaar

i just finished reading it(usually i dont read stuff coz i hate reading)

i love it yaar its awesome u should continue

i wish that could happen in the show too u know

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

Oh I see...............

Glad u liked it dear.............

Baaki log bhi toh batao..............Kaisa laga?

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx khansk..............Glad u liked it dear...............

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

Sure I'll send in the next part sometime tomorrow..............Usske baad toh it will be Monday...............

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanx danharryiel..............Glad u liked it dear..............

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Posted: 16 years ago

continue soon it was reli good

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Sheeba

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Posted: 16 years ago

#10

Yug is taken aback……………

He doesn't know what to do?

How should he stop her?................No……………Yug thinks…………..I can't let this happen……………..lekin kaise?.................An idea strikes Yug………………..

Next u see Sharad running to the kitchen where Vrinda's mom is just about to feed her with an apple and he almost screams-- Yug gir gaya………..usse bahot chot aayi hai………….jaldi se doc ko bulao……………

Vrinda is shocked and so is her mom as the two make way where Yug lay on the floor of is room……………his head hurt and bleeding badly…………..

Dadabeer and Radhika chachi r busy attending to Yug………….while Kushal chahchu and Teji go to get the doc of the village……………

Yug looks at Vrinda innocently……………the look on her face was evident………….her eyes said it all……………Yug thinks to himself-- Tumhe fark padhta ha Vrinda…………..main jaanta tha………….tumhe…………..fark paadhtaa hai…………..and he falls back unconscious……………..

After sometime u see the doc attending to Yug…………who has a bandaid tied to his head and is still unconscious…………..the doc tells dadabeer that there was nothing to worry and that what he needs is a little rest and these medicines……………and he would be fine soon……………

The doc leaves and just then a kid comes in and announces kii chaand nikal aaya hai……………listening to which all the gharwaalas leave for going to the chatt for the pooja…………reluctantly……………as all of them were attached to Yug already……………..and wanted to make sure he was fine…………….

Everyone is gone…………..only Vrinda stays back…………….aas her mom asks her to doso…………..as she didn't want her to take part in the festival with rest of the village people…………….well…………….pehli baar she did the right thing…………..Kyun bhai sahi kaha naa?.................Anyways………….

Just then Yug's phone rings……………..

Vrinda doesnot know what to do……………..she couldn't attend the call…………..atleast that she was sure of…………..

Yug meanwhile stirs……………Vrinda looks at him worriedly……………Yug slowly regains consciousness…………..