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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: MaroGirl

Amazing Geetha You Rock. I loved it

Hai MaroGirl
Thank u dear
Thanks for reading
I am so happy to hear that, u liked the update
I hope u will like the next part, soon i will update that.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.

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Posted: 7 years ago
Ohh wow beautiful Geetha ,your ,story is really beautiful 👏👏
Thanks a lot and update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Ohh wow beautiful Geetha ,your ,story is really beautiful 👏👏

Thanks a lot and update soon

Hai mansi
Thank u dear
Thanksfor reading
I am glad, u liked it.
Soon, i will update the next with new interesting twist, i hope, u will like it.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments, dear.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Dear Geetha
Beautiful update dear..

Please waiting for next update.

Hopefully we will get an update soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
My apology for not updating. Sorry guys.
I am sorry guys

Part - 15


Kanak looks at uma.
Maasa: i can understand ur state, but it is neccessary that u have to stay with him for only this night.
Chandrajyoti: yes, because the servants can gossip ur presence.

Kanak's- p o v
God, what shall i do, why it is all happening in my life, suddenly i was dragged to the past. And landed into a traditional family, but i have to thankful for that. Because, these people were really nice and good towards me. Everything is ok. But spending a night with a stranger is... Look different.

Maasa: what r u thinking beti.
Kanak : ahhh... I. I... I... never been alone with a man, in my whole life time.
Maasa looks at her.
Kanak says to herself kanak... What r u telling her.
Kanak looks at maasa and says
Kanak: i feel weird to spend a night with a man.

Uma slightly smiles at kanak's words, and he hides it from everyone. He was happy to hear that words

Kanak: ok auntyji, i know u r worried about me, so i will manage. Don't worry...kanak hardly brings smile on her face... Relax auntyji.

Maasa nods her head and says tommorrow we shall have a proper welcoming.

Kanak's pov
What is meant by proper welcoming!!!! May be they must have their own style.

Maasa goes to uma and talks to him. Meanwhile kanak tours the room.
Kanak's pov
Wow, this is amazing, this room filled with antics. Nice...

Kanak looks at uma amd maasa,
Maasa ends her conversation smiles at kanak and left.
Kanak sits in the bed and swings her legs in theair.

Uma closes the door. And sits in another bed which was prepared by chandrajyoti,

Uma: u must be tired, take rest.

Kanak nods her head. Suddenly she looks at the window,
Uma: what happened?
Kanak: but it is still evening, usually i don't sleep at evening,
Uma: evening!!!!
Kanak : yeah it is evening
Kanak looks at the time, in her watch.
See it is still 7.00 by showing her watch.

Uma was clueless,
Kanak looks at watch and says wow it still working, great.
Uma looks at kanak.
Uma: who u r talking,
Without realising kanak says, to my "watch"
Uma looks around and says but we are alone in the room.

Kanak looks at uma, i am sorry, i meant to say that my watch, she shows her hand watch..
Uma: what is that!!!!
Kanak: well... This is called hand watch, where u can see the time.
Uma: time
Kanak: yes, time
Kanak nods her head
Kanak can clearly see uma's doutful face.
Kanak: listen, in this era people usually calculate the time by seeing sun or sand clock. Right...
Kanak seeks for uma's answer, finally he nods his head.
Kanak says thank god to herself, then she looks at uma and says good! but in our world we use this clock. Understamd.
Kanak nods her head twice to make uma understand.

Kanak's pov
Great kanak, hats off now ur tutoring him. Not bad.

Kanak: by the way, what is ur name.
Uma rolls his eye.
Uma : uma shankar.
Kanak: o uma shankar. Nice. And u know my name right.
Uma nods his head.

Kanak wet her lips and rub her eye.
Uma: r u feeling sleep.
Kanak exhales.
Kanak shakes her head by saying no. I just miss my family.
Uma: ur family!!!!!
Kanak gave a shock look.
Kanak: u think that i don't have a family.
Uma: no...no.. Not like that.
Kanak: leave it... I understand ur doubt. Like everyone i too have family. I don't have parents, they died when i was months old, i live with my grandparents, i have two twins brothers, and chacha chachi, golu bhaiya...
Uma looks at kanak.

Uma's pov
She narrates her whole family members like a child. I never felt this much of happiness. My world was totally changed because of her. And most importantly she is with me.

Uma: they don't know that u came here.
Kanak: no...
Uma: by now they will be searching for u.
Kanak: may be.
Uma: may be ...
Kanak exhales because i live in hostel.
Uma: u mean... What,,, u don't live with ur family.
Kanak nods her head.
Kanak: i am staying in college hostel. Because of my education.
Uma: education...


Kanak's pov
Kanak make him understand. He don't know about college.

Kanak: like university, students usually go and get education... Kanak searches for word... Finallly... Yes...
Gurukula...
Uma: gurukula,, so ur staying in gurukula
Kanak nods her head and says yes.
Uma: in ur world girls go to gurukula for education.
Kanak: yes, i know in this era, they don't allow girls...
Uma: mmm
Kanak: but it will all change.
Uma: so ur telling that u came from furture.
Kanak: well, i think so.
Uma: how many years we are... Uma turns his head... And says we are apart... Uma waits for kanak's answer.
Kanak counts the years in the air.
Kanak: may be thousand... Uma was shocked to hear that, he cuts her sentence.
Uma: i may be look too old to u.
After hearing that kanak keeps on laughing... Even her eye also releases tears.

Uma'pov
I am really too old for her. Will she accept me.

Kanak: don't get that idea, even we are apart from two worlds like thousand years, but that is not meant that ur too old. In my eye ur little bit older than me. How old are you.
Uma: i am 30
Kanak: good, i am 17.
Kanak smiles
Kanak: see, ur 13 years older than me not thousand years.
Uma: mmm
Kanak: our age difference r only numbers.

Uma's pov
She tries to convice me, but i don't have courage. Any way she doesn't bother about the age difference, so i am happy with that.

Kanak looks at room once again.
Uma: do u like the place.
Kanak turns and says, yes i love this place, and it look like walt disney world.
Uma was clueless.
Uma: what?
Kanak: walt disney land means... If i have to tell u... But it is a long story... It will take time to explain u.
Uma: i will listen to u. Even it is a long story.

Kanak smiles and pov
Kanak, u got a fan, not bad, and he is willingly to listen to ur story, well done kanak. It is really a happy news.and it is a great chance, don't miss this.
Kanak smiles
Kanak: wait, i will tell u what it is. Before that let me make myself comfortable. Kanak lays on the bed and facing uma, and keeps a pillow and places her chin, her chest dashes the soft bed.
Kanak: wow, finally i am settled. She looks at uma who is still sitting, kanak says make urself comfortable. Come on.
Uma feels...
Kanak: feel free.
Uma moves himself and adjust himeslf and listens to kanak.

Uma's pov
I never know that my world will be filled with this much of colours, this girl made my life with decorating colours. God gave me a reason to live my rest of life with her.my heart says she is mine, she is only mine.

Flames:
Love is the only thing that will bring change in us, but love never change it is constant.



Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Dear Geetha

Beautiful update dear..

Please waiting for next update.

Hopefully we will get an update soon..

Hai manasa
Sorry dear
I am really sorry for not updating the story.
I have updated the next part, i hope u will like it.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
Sorry dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thank you Geetha for wonderful update.

KanUm conversation is very interesting and funny.

Maasa's Welcoming party to Kanak sounds intriguing.

Waiting for more...
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Thank you Geetha for wonderful update.

KanUm conversation is very interesting and funny.

Maasa's Welcoming party to Kanak sounds intriguing.

Waiting for more...

Hai manasa
Thank u dear
Thanks for reading
I am glad u liked the update.
Yes, welcoming will be different, i hope u will like that.
And many interesting things r going to happen.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wonderful update with interesting convo of kanum and they becoming comfortble with each other..
Thank u Geetha..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DAPSG

Wonderful update with interesting convo of kanum and they becoming comfortble with each other..
Thank u Geetha..😊

Hai pavani
Thank u dear
Sorry for my late reply
Thanks for reading dear
Yes, kanak and uma will be comfortable with each other, there is more interesting things will happen.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments dear
Soon, i will update the next part dear

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