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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai manasa.
Actually i am in a trip with my family, i will update the next part by this evening. Sorry dear


Enjoy ur trip to the fullest.

Update it when you get time.

Thank u for quick reply.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123


Enjoy ur trip to the fullest.

Update it when you get time.

Thank u for quick reply.

Hai manasa
Thank u dear.
I will return by evening dear.
Yes, I am enjoying lot here.
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

sorry guys for the late update

part - 12


kanak is still unconscious, uma and his family waiting for kanak to wake up. chandrajyoti unwraps the blanket, and kanak's legs is visible to everyone.
chandrajyoti: thank god, she is having legs. that means she is not a ghost.
maasa stares at chandrajyoti. chandrajyoti gave a escaping smile to her. then she wraps the blanket to kanak.
chandrajyoti says to herself, but I heard angels have wings. and y she didn't cover her legs. may be angels wear only short skirt.
maasa sits near to kanak, she touches kanak's face. immediately, a smile rises in her face.
maasa: this girl's face is so soft like a young mango leaf, so soft and so pure. i don't know whose daughter she is. but her mother will be happy to have such a beautiful daughter
maas touches her hair,
maasa: u look same us. but don't know y? we are so different.
maasa: chandrajyoti...
chandrajyoti:ji maasa..
maasa: bring some drink
chandrajyoti nods her head. she goes near to the door. maasa looks carefully at kanak. she widens her eyes. she stops chandrajyoti,
maasa: chandrajyoti...
chandrajyoti stops, maasa goes near to her, she holds her shoulder.
maasa: listen to me carefully, don't let anyone know about her.
uma was clueless about maasa's words. maasa looks at uma
maasa: it won't be good for her.
chandrajyoti nods her head. and she gohead to the door steps, but she was holded by maasa,
maasa: u stay here, let me go
maasa goes to the kitchen. chandrajyoti goes near to kanak, and sits near to her and looks carefully.
chandrajyoti: dhadhusa, how did u find her!
before uma could answer, kanak slightly shakes her head.
chandrajyoti: dhadhusa, i think she is getting conscious.
kanak's fingers slightly moves. kanak's closed-eye, moves this side and that sides, her eye balls under her closed-eyes moves according to her conscious. her thick eyelids tangled and tries to free them. after the great struggle, kanak's eyes flutter open. then again she closes her eyes. then again she opens,
chandrajyoti: dhadhusa,
kanak's eyes looks at the bed side, she saw uma is standing near to her.
kanak: u...
chandrajyoti: thank god, she is k
maasa enters with medicine, chandrajyoti gets the medicine from her hand,maasa sits near to kanak.
maasa: how r u dear
kanak looks at maasa. she is clueless. maasa tries to help her to get up.
maasa: slowly dear
kanak obeys her.
maasa looks at her young face. kanak is confused. maasa turns and signals chandrajyoti. then she passes the medicine to her.
maasa feeds the medicine to kanak
maasa: bear it a little dear.
kanak struggles to drink the medicine.
maasa touches kanak's hair. kanak smiles at her. then she looks at uma, then her eyes widen.









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Posted: 7 years ago
Geetu super update nxt part soon dr waiting for it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

Geetu super update nxt part soon dr waiting for it

Hai divya
Thank u dear
Thanks for reading
I am glad, u liked it
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome Dear Friend! Keep Shinning⭐️ the next part please
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: FoFA

Awesome Dear Friend! Keep Shinning⭐️ the next part please

Hai FoFA
Thank u dear
Thanks for reading
I am glad, u liked the story.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Soon, i will update the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
A very nice update.

Thank you for the update Geetha
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

A very nice update.

Thank you for the update Geetha

Hai manasa
Thank u dear.
I am glad, u liked it.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
Soon, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago


Part - 13

Kanak looks at uma, her eyes widen.
Kanak: u. ..
Kanak unwraps her branklet, places her legs on the floor, her legs touches the ground, her anklet makes beautiful noise. She gets up.
Maasa: careful beti.
Kanak looks at her, but kanak lost her balance, her feet didn't support her, when kanak about to fall. Immediately uma holds her by his arm. Kanak slowly opens her eyes, she saw uma was so close to her, their eyes met. The fragrance of her roams around uma.
Finally kanak excuse herself. Chandrajyoti helps her to sit on the bed.
Chandrajyoti: what happened
Kanak: i get cramps
Chandrajyoti: i will bring some hot water for u.
Chandrajyoti brings hot water and towel for kanak.
Chandrajyoti: let me help u.
Kanak feels awkward,
Kanak: please, i will do it.
Chandrajyoti tries to convices her. Then She makes kanak to place her legs on the vessel, contains of hot water. Kanak feels ok.
Maasa: how do feel beti.
Kanak looks at maasa
Kanak: much better Auntyji
Maasa was surprised to hear that.
Maasa: what did u say!
Kanak: much better.
Maasa: but i heard somethingelse apart from that.
Kanak was worried, she mistakely used any wrong content.
Kanak: sorry auntyji, if i used any wrong content.
Uma, maasa, and chandrajyoti looks surprised.
Chandrajyoti: ur using a different language.
Kanak: yes, it is english
Chandrajyoti tries to pronouns, but she couldn't.kanak looks at uma,
Kanak: u r one from yesterday...
Kanak notices their dress, she looks at chandrajyoti,
Kanak: y, u dressed in an acient style.
Chandrajyoti look herself
Chandrajyoti: i think, i should ask this question to u.
Kanak looks at the room, the room filled with ancient stuff.
Kanak: ur house is so beautiful.
Maasa smiles
Kanak: i think, i have to go now. But how did i land up here.
Uma: i brought u here.
Kanak remembers the things,
Kanak: thank u so much.
Suddenly, they hears the sound from outside, chandrajyoti looks out through the window. Kanak follows her. Kanak was shocked to see costumes of the people ,
Kanak: y, they were all dress like ancient people.
Maasa: what happened beti!
Kanak says to herself, y i feel something weird here, and these people's language also sounds like ancient.
Chandrajyoti: i thought, asking u, y ur dress is so different, i never saw a dress this in my whole life.
Kanak thinks, y she is asking a question like this, may be she didn't step out of the house or joking
Kanak: this dress is very common.
Kanak feels difficult to understand their language.
Kanak: is this a movie shooting going on i feel like that
Uma: movie!
Kanak: yes, i feel like i landed into movie shooting.
Maasa and uma looks at each other.
Kanak: but y i don't see any equiments, may be i am over thinking.
I don't see any modern things, the air was so pure. And no electric things also. This looks so weird. It doesn't look normal atall.
Again she looks at window, the people uses the ancient language and ancient stuff.
Kanak: oh no...
Uma:!what happened? R u alright.
Kanak widens her eye.
Kanak: don't tell that i was dragged to the past.
Uma, maasa and chandrajyoti don't understand anything.
Kanak: no, i might be dreaming.
Kanak lays on the bed and closes her eyes. Uma don't understand what she is doing, they don't know what to do. Kanak tries to sleep. But she couldn't.
Kanak: how did i land here
Maasa comes near to kanak
Maasa: tell me beti, what happened
Kanak fears to them, about her identity.
Kanak: auntyji, please believe me, i don't belong to this world.
Uma was shocked. Maasa turns towards uma, chandrajyoti comes near to kanak
Chandrajyoti: maasa, i already told u, she don't look like us.
Chandrajyoti cups kanak's face
Chandrajyoti: widen your eyes.
Kanak: what?
Chandrajoti: do it
Kanak obeys her
Chandrajyoti looks at her eye carefully,
Chandrajyoti: there is reflections in your eyes.
Kanak: reflections in my eyes? What does that mean?
Chandrajyoti: yes, reflections
Kanak: i have eyeballs too.
Chandrajyoti: i didn't meant that.
Kanak: then.
Chandrajyoti: human has reflections in the eyes, other spirits don't have eye reflection.
Kanak: spirits!!!! ( Kanak was shocked) i am not a spirit.
Chandrajyoti: r u an angel
Kanak was confused,
Kanak : i am a human not an angel or not a spirit
Maasa: chandrajyoti... Stop it
Maasa: tell me dear, where r u from.
Kanak looks at uma, uma was waiting for her answer.
Kanak: i will tell u. But i don't know, how much u can able to understand it. Because, it is hard to understand.
Kanak closes her eye. And says
Kanak: i don't belong to this world. I think i come from furture.
Uma: what?
Maasa: how did u come here?
Kanak: i don't know.
Kanak: i saw this person ( looks at uma) in my dreams. But i don't understand, how i came here.
Maasa was confused.
Kanak: i know, i sounds like crazy, but it is true. I would like you to live in my age so you would understand the things easily.
Uma: ur saying, ur come from another world.
Kanak: no...no
Kanak scratch her head.
Kanak: how can i make u understand. i don't know about albert einstein theory or time travel theory, because my major is not physics.
Kanak looks at their confused faces.
Kanak: can u please tell me the king's name who is ruling right now.
Kanak: i may be poor in history, but i think, i can may u clear.
Uma says the king's name.
Kanak started to calculate, she was shocked in between the counting. Then she fainted on the bed.
Uma, maasa and chandrajyoti were shocked.











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