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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SalmaMaan

You are amazing. waiting for nxt update thank you dear

Hai salmaMaan,
Thank u dear.
I am happy to hear that.
Thanks for reading dear.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
By this night, i will update the next part dear
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

It's very ineteresting and beautiful update dear Geetha.

Waiting eagerly for the next update.

😊

Hai manasa
Thank u dear.
Thanks for reading dear
I am glad, u like the update,
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
I will update the next part, by this night dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Geethu
Mindblowing imagination. Wah what a beautiful story. Kanak weird reactions 😆Keep rocking dear. Update it soon. Its really Astonishing to read 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part - 14

Chandrajyoti fans kanak, uma was waiting for her to wake up.
Chandrajyoti: dhadhusa, y she faints often.
Uma: because, she is under shock.
Chandrajyoti: maasa was in kitchen, i don't know, when this girl is going to open her eyes.
Suddenly kanak wakes up and sits, chandrajyoti gets frightened. Uma was surprised.
Kanak: did i came back.
Kanak looks around, she sees chandrajyoti sitting next to her.
Kanak: oh my god, i am still here. I think, this dream won't come to end atall.
Uma comes near to kanak, he feels hesitate but his inner heart says, no need to get shy around her, because she is his. Chandrajyoti gets surprised by uma's action, but she is happy for her dhadhusa, because all of his 30 years, he stayed alone.
Uma sits in the bed, he feels somewhat uncomfortable. Kanak looks at him. Her looks has so many questions to ask. Yet, she remain silence, her pure look was captured by uma.
Uma clears his throat,
Uma: you...you...
Kanak looks at him carefully, waits for him to complete the sentence.
Uma: you... You still haven't told us your name
Kanak looks, her looks doesn't look normal,
Kanak lightly opens her lips, uma watched her each moment, his eyes eagerly waiting to capture her name, what he is going to hear. Chandrajyoti also eagerly looks at kanak.
Kanak in her sweet voice and utters, " kanak"
Uma smiles automatically on hearing her name,
Uma says to himself kanak...kanak.
Chandrajyoti: ur name is beautifull like u.
Kanak: i have seen you ealier.
Uma looks, and smiles aside.
Uma: where have you seen me?
Kanak thinks,
Kanak: i saw u in my dreams, but its clear, but it like it is not dream.
Suddenly, kanak's stomach sounds,
Uma looks.
Kanak: i am sorry, i can't control it. I'm hungry.
Uma: its ok,
Uma looks at chandrajyoti, she nods her. Then she goes to the kitchen.
Kanak looks at uma.
Kanak: what is ur name?
Uma: uma shankar
Kanak: uma shankar, nice name.
Uma looks, kanak blinks
Kanak says to herself, kanak, what u r doing, it is not fair to call an elder person by their name.
Kanak joins her hands and says sorry.
Uma: its ok.
Kanak: ur family members.
Uma: me, maasa and chandrajyoti.
Kanak: hmmm.
Kanak: ur wife.
Uma stares at her.
Kanak says to herself, kanak, u won't keep quite atall.
Uma: i am a bachelor
Kanak nods her head
Kanak: but, i heard people at this era, got married early.
Chandrajyoti: my dhadhusa is waiting for his soulmate
Chandrajyoti brings fruits for kanak. Then she place the fruits on the bed. Kanak started to eat. Chandrajyoti helps her to peel the fruits. Kanak eats. Uma looks at her with a smiling face.
Uma says to himself, i was waiting for u.
Kanak uses her both the hands to eat
Uma: u eat like a kid.
Kanak gave a baby smile to him. Uma smiles again
Maasa enters into the room.
Maasa smiles at kanak,
Maasa: beti,
Maasa looks at chandrajyoti, then she nods her head.
Chandrajyoti prepares another bed in the room. Uma was surprised,
Maasa: uma, i know, what u r going to ask.
Uma: but maasa,
Maasa looks at kanak
Maasa: beti, today u have to stay in this room.
Kanak nods her head.
Maasa: uma, u too will staying here
Kanak and uma were shocked
Kanak: what!!!
Maasa: i know beti, but believe me. I cannot let others to see u like this. It is not good atall.
Kanak: but anutyji, how can i, stay with him.
Uma: maasa,
Maasa: tomorrow only, she can come out, because if others comes to know that she is form other world, she will not be safe. So that only, i am saying. Tomorrow i can announce her as my relative. Uma try to understand the situation. Tomorrow onwards she will stay in the guest room.
Maasa: i am trying to protect her, the servants may gossip about her. Then it won't be safe for her.
Maasa: don't worry beti.
Chandrajyoti looks at kanak, and says i will make arrangements.

Kanak looks at uma...


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Divyaamurali

Hey Geethu

Mindblowing imagination. Wah what a beautiful story. Kanak weird reactions 😆Keep rocking dear. Update it soon. Its really Astonishing to read 👏

Hai divya
Thank u so much dear
I am glad u like it.
Thanks for reading.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments
I have updated the next part, i hope u like it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice twist Geetha
So KanUm are going to spend night together.

Interesting update.

Waiting excitedly for next one..😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: manasa.123

Nice twist Geetha

So KanUm are going to spend night together.

Interesting update.

Waiting excitedly for next one..😊

Hai manasa.
Thank u dear
Yes, they r going to spend their night together, uma will know about interest things about kanak.
Soon, i will the next part dear, i hope u will like it.
And there will be a shock too in the next update.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments

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Posted: 7 years ago
beautiful Interesting update. Waiting for the next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Amazing Geetha You Rock. I loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: allasal

beautiful Interesting update. Waiting for the next

Hai allasal
Thank u dear
Thanks for reading
I am glad, u liked the update.
Soon, i will update the next part with some interesting twist, i hope u will like that.
Thank u so much for the lovely comments

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