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Calypso05

@Calypso05

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Hi Iceblue😊,
I like the reason which urged you to write a ff👏
Great ff⭐️your story is simple and well structured👍🏼.
Shiva's guilt affects me enormously😭he is soo sweet❤️ The dialogue of Kanak and Saras are good and fair❤️ if i were Kanak or Saras i would react exactely like that.
I like the fluidity of your story, it is a pleasure to read it❤️
"The true sign of intelligence is not knowledge but imagination" from Albert Einstein, super imagination👏⭐️.
Keep writing😃!
Thank you.

Edited by Calypso05 - 7 years ago

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savithp

@savithp

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Hi Iceblue

You have indeed captured our expectations from the serial, thank you, please write Uma redemption track.

Look forward to a great show from you, as i have lost faith in the makers.

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VividDiamond

@VividDiamond

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Hii Ice !! 😊

Awesome reality-based imagination ! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it...awaiting the next update...⭐️

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SooSan

@SooSan

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Hi Ice

Wow is all I can say😊

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Deebz

@Deebz

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Very nice iceblue! Loved how Kanak and Saras shouted at their brothers.

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Abc12345678

@Abc12345678

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Ice blue,,its absolutely needed in our show,every words of kanak towards vansh and those of uma's are true n needed much,very brilliant portrayal of writing👏 Thanks for this writing which gives therapy absolutely.keep writing😊

When you update the next part ,plz put date or part number in main topic,so that we can easily find ,dear.thank you.

Edited by Kanum1 - 7 years ago