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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant as usual, blue.👏 I could feel the emotions running thru both of them when I was reading.
Would it be too much to ask from u to continue 😉
Pretty please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Star_Wonder

Brilliant as usual, blue.👏 I could feel the emotions running thru both of them when I was reading.

Would it be too much to ask from u to continue😉
Pretty please



Hey there Star.
I am glad you liked it.
But my apologies for it's a one scene only. It's isn't too much to ask, but still somethings are better left unsaid. The beauty sometimes lies in pain n suffering. -- that's me being took dark today 😆

But I have posted another OS to make up for this one. Do give it a read. 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Apologies for bringing it back up - but recently when Uma threw the anklets it reminded me of this OS ,... anklets were supposed to keep them in chains, together 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames


Apologies for bringing it back up - but recently when Uma threw the anklets it reminded me of this OS ,... anklets were supposed to keep them in chains, together 😳

no need to apologise I got a chance to read this. Pretty good. Enjoyed it thanks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TSMSPfan

no need to apologise I got a chance to read this. Pretty good. Enjoyed it thanks.



Hey there
Glad you could read it and enjoyed it.
Thank you for reading 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Really beautiful blue flames! But I just wanted to make sure I understand clearly this part you wrote,


"Ghar Jane ki bht jaldi hai tmhe" he stated coming and standing in front of her, she looked up her anger resolved not to let him win anymore, "last time we were at Uma Shankars (Gods) marriage, you married me Forcefully " she let out the verbal blow. "You had to bring that up, after all this time", he replied with a force quietly. "All this time?? What time? When you left me at the doorstep? When you vowed never to see my face again?? When you threatened to burn everything down, when you almost did burn me... time stopped there... she left her sentence incomplete. She turned away from him.
This is coming from where Uma was pushing kanak out of the house in the drama. That's where this story is coming from. And not to destroy the mood but I suppose kanak is still married to Uma. Right?
Sorry for being so dense

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Really beautiful blue flames! But I just wanted to make sure I understand clearly this part you wrote,



"Ghar Jane ki bht jaldi hai tmhe" he stated coming and standing in front of her, she looked up her anger resolved not to let him win anymore, "last time we were at Uma Shankars (Gods) marriage, you married me Forcefully " she let out the verbal blow. "You had to bring that up, after all this time", he replied with a force quietly. "All this time?? What time? When you left me at the doorstep? When you vowed never to see my face again?? When you threatened to burn everything down, when you almost did burn me... time stopped there... she left her sentence incomplete. She turned away from him.
This is coming from where Uma was pushing kanak out of the house in the drama. That's where this story is coming from. And not to destroy the mood but I suppose kanak is still married to Uma. Right?
Sorry for being so dense



Hey there Ice
Thank you for reading and asking things you didn't understand - that's not being dense, that's actually good that you ask what you didn't understand rather than letting it go.

Well this story was written a long time back, it was inspired by when Uma had set fire to his bed and Kanak during rambha task - in this story KanUm had been separated for 2 years, for Kanak hadn't revealed who she really was and where she belonged to, they never met again as he had thrown her out at that night after their showdown... Uma didn't know who she really was, so the divorce also didn't happen but he had made it clear that she wasn't his wife as per dharm etc etc... and she went away and never came back.

They meet after two years at a wedding. But seeing her dressed up he thought that she had remarried and he couldn't resist taunting. She had loved him for a long time that even after he threw her out, cut all ties and vowed never to see her again...she was still his wife.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hey there Ice
Thank you for reading and asking things you didn't understand - that's not being dense, that's actually good that you ask what you didn't understand rather than letting it go.

Well this story was written a long time back, it was inspired by when Uma had set fire to his bed and Kanak during rambha task - in this story KanUm had been separated for 2 years, for Kanak hadn't revealed who she really was and where she belonged to, they never met again as he had thrown her out at that night after their showdown... Uma didn't know who she really was, so the divorce also didn't happen but he had made it clear that she wasn't his wife as per dharm etc etc... and she went away and never came back.

They meet after two years at a wedding. But seeing her dressed up he thought that she had remarried and he couldn't resist taunting. She had loved him for a long time that even after he threw her out, cut all ties and vowed never to see her again...she was still his wife.

Thank you for explaining blueflames! I appreciate you taking the time to come back to me.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Keep reviving old stuff because after a while the thread gets locked to any further comment.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for bringing it up dear.

I fully enjoyed this lovely story from you.

I really loved the ankles realisation.

Your Uma quite possessive along with little bit grumpy.

What do you say?

Are they going to have SR now that they reunited.

Waiting for part 2 dear

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