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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: pritib0

Hii vartika dear,kaisi ho? bahut achcha ud tha, mujhe behad pasand aaya, i just loved it dear, hats of to u for such a beautiful ud, keep on writing like this, and this is for u πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘.

with love

priti.

Mai theek hoon darling.Thanks for liking it.

Thanks for such apprecitaion.
 
Love u too.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: riyaa_1985

Absolutely great update.πŸ‘
Carry on the good work dear.
waiting for the next update.
take care.

Thanks dear if u liked this part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!

Thanks if u liked itπŸ™‚πŸ™‚

Kajal is very strong and responsible!!! 😊
Haan vo to hogi hi baap chala gaya to kya vo to hai hi apni mom aur Anchal k liye.😜😜😜

I loved the casting for Kajal's mom!!! 😊
Thanks for liking again n Kajal's mom in Shewta Tiwari.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚ 

Kajal ke baap ne bahut bura kiya!!! 😑
Vo to kiya hi hai us aadmi ne.AngryAngry
 
By the way Kajal ke dad role ke liye how about Cezzane Khan or maybe Hiten Tejwani?? Par kisi aur ke saath chala gaya toh probably Caezzane Khan will be suitable!!!
Haan maine bhi yahi socha hai ki Cezzane will b better for this role.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

By the way Aanchal ke role mein junior Sanyogita hai yaa senior Sanyogita of Prthviraj?? πŸ˜•
Junior Sanyogita dear.I like her too much.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

I loved Vardhan!!! 😊 😊 😊 He is so sweet!!! 😳
Vo to humesha hi sweet hai.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

I loved Aditya and Vaishnavi as well and their casting!!! 😊
Thanks again darling.πŸ™‚πŸ™‚

Vashnavi aur Vardhan ke beech ki understanding was very nice!!! 😊
Haan bhai tabhi to apne bete k saame accha ideal rakhenge na.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Mugdha was very sweet!!! 😊
Haan vo to hai hi.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

But is Durga(Jijyasa) looking as she looks in Kasamh Se?? Or is she looking more like Misha of K .Street Pali Hill with her normal short hair??
Misha ki tarah hai not like Jigyasa.yaar ek suceesful bussiness women k role me mujhe lagta hai ki us se better aur koi nahi ho sakta. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

By the way I think its ok but I am still not sure about Ashwini Kalsekar and Jatin Seal as Mugdha's parents!!! πŸ˜•
Theek hai koi baat nahi par mujhe Jatin Seal kaafi acche lagte hain so i chose him.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

But Mugdha ko Delhi kyun bhej rahi ho??Isse kya faida?? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• Shalaab aur Vardhan and Kajal are in Mumbai toh usse bhi wahi bhejo naa!!!!
Pagal ladki tune shayad fisrt update dhyaan se nahi padha hai Shalabh abhi Delhi me hi hai.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Pehle vo us se hi milegi baad ki baad me dekhenge.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Aur yeh Sunny aur Shaalab ka kya kisaa hai ki Shalaab aise behave kar raha hai?? πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Vo aage pata chal jaayega jaldi hi.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: rlrl

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Hi how r u?πŸ™‚πŸ™‚
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Kyoun sorry bol rai hai?ConfusedConfused
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Thank u deary .😜😜😜😜
TUM KITNA ACHHA LIKHTI HO YAR...
Thanks again so sweet of u.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
ME MASKA NAHIN MAR RAHI HOOπŸ˜•
LOVED IT..BAS MERE PASS WORDS NAHIN HAI
Accha maine kab kaha ki tu muska maar rahi hai.Words ki dictinoary on rakha kar.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
YAR...JALDI NEXT PART UPDATE KARO DEAR..
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I HV REALLY NO WORDS..YAR..PLZZZZ JALDI UPDATE
Haan bus ab karne jaa rahi hoon jaldi hi ek bahut lamba sa update.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
KARDO......πŸ˜•πŸ˜­KARDO NA,,,πŸ˜†I
LOTSSSSSSSS OF LOVE...KHAS KARKE..SHALAB AUR
SAMEER KE CONVO BAHAT ACHHE THE..πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Haan aakhir dono itne acche dost yu hi thode hain.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
AUR YE KYA ..ANU KO CHOD KAR JANA HOGA. MUGDHA KO
HOW SAD YAR...AISA KYUN HUA..PAR LAGTA HAI ANU KE PASS KOI IDEA HAI..πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Haan Anu nahi Anu k ghar waalon k paas hai kamaal ka idea.πŸ™‚πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
AUR YE KYA SHALAB APNE
MOM DAD KA ANIVERSERY BHUL GAYAπŸ˜•THANK GOD..
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Aakhir dost hote hi kis liye hain.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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KAJAL AUR VARDAN KAHAN GAYAB HOGAYE THE YAR
Aaayenge jaldi hi dono fir se.πŸ™‚πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
UNKO MILAO NA JALDI..KAB MILENGE WO YAR..πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Milenge jaldi hi abhi to bahut kuch hona baaki hai na.πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°
KHAIR I KNOW TUMNE KUCH MINDBLOWING SOCHA HOGA
UN DONO KI PEHLI MULAQAT K LIYEπŸ˜‰  πŸ˜‰  πŸ˜‰  πŸ˜‰ 
Haan aisa hi kuch socha hai ab ye dekhna hai ki tum logon ko kaisa lagega.ConfusedConfusedConfusedConfused
THANKSSSSS ALOTTTTT FOR UR...GREAT UPDATE YAR..
THANKS MERA DIL KHUSH KARNE K LIYE,,....πŸ˜›  πŸ˜› πŸ˜›  πŸ˜›
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UPDATE SOOONNNN...AS SOON AS POSSIBLE....πŸ˜›
Haan bus aa raha hai ud.
 
LOTS OF LOVEπŸ˜›
Riti😊
Love u too.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here's this part:-

 

Vardaan reached his home in half and hour . When he entered he saw his dad was talking to Mr. Kapoor.

 

"Are ye lijiye Vardaan bhi aa gaya."his mom said.

 

Mr. Arora introduced Vardaan to Mr. Kapoor. He greeted Mr.Kapoor. and Mrs. Kapoor .

 

"Mom mai thoda thak gaya hoon fresh ho kar aata hoon" he excused himself n left.

 

"Kaafi handsome hai aap ka beta." Mr. Kapoor said .He was impressed with his attitude n charming personality.

 

"Akhir beta kis ka hai.Itne handsome baap ka beta bhi to handsome hi hoga na." Mr. Arora said.

 

"Haan haan aur mai to kuch nahi hoon na sab aap ki qualities aayi hain na us me". Vardaan's mom said making an innocent face.

 

"Nahi baba aisa nahi hai kuch bhi tum to ho hi perfect vaisa hi tumhara beta bhi hai Mr. Perfectionist." Mr. Arora said smiling.

 

"Ye comment tha ki appreciation?" she asked.

 

"Yaar har baat ko na positive way me liya karo to sahi lagegi samjhi wify." Mr. Arora said smiling broadly.

 

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"Accha meri Raj Kumari maan jaa na" Mrs. Anvita Agawal (Kajal's mom) mom said .

 

"Nahi aap mujh se bilkul bhi pyaar nahi karti hain.Hamesha mujhe datati rehti hain." Anchal said sobbing.

 

"Aisa kuch nahi hai beta bus der ho gayi thi na tum dono ko to mujhe dar lag raha tha isiliye gussa aa gaya." Anvita said in an explaining way.

 

"To aap di ko nahi daat sakti thi kya bus mujhe daatati rehti hain." She said sobbing bitterly.

 

"Haan maa mujhe datiye na is ko kyoun datati hain." Kajal said winking.

 

"Accha baba kaan pakad k sorry ab chalein khana kha lete hain. Fir tum log dresses bhi dikhana jo le kar aayi ho." She said.

 

Anchal ko bahut der tak manane k baad vo maani. Baap re aaj kal ki ladkiyan gussa to jaise naak par hi rakha rehta hai.

 

Finally she wiped her tears n they all three went to take their dinner. After the dinner the gals show her mother all the dresses they bought. It was already 11:00'o clock so they all went to sleep.

 

In Shalabh's house:-

 

"Kahan tha tu abhi tak hum log kitni der se tera wait kar rahe hain pat bhi hai." Mrs. Malhotra asked.

 

"Mom kuch kaam tha jaroori vahin busy ho gaya tha isiliye aap logon ko inform nahi kiya." He told.

 

"Accha koi baat nahi." (In her mind kya vakai me ye bhool gaya?).

 

"Kya hua mom aap kuch soch rahi hai kya?" he asked smiling whereas he knew the reason for that.

 

"Beta tujhe yaad hai aaj kya hai?" his mom asked in a way ki shayad un k bete ko yaad aa jaye.

 

"Haan mom yaad aaya aaj mere friend k mom n dad ki wedding anniversary hai ,aap logon ko bhi bulaya hai so be ready for that .Both of u." he said n went straight to his room.

 

"Kya hua Sheela tum kuch pareshaan lag rahi ho?" Mr. Malhotra asked looking his wife tensed.

 

"Nahi kuch nahi bus aise hi. Accha ready ho jaaye aap ko aur mujhe Shalabh k frnd k mom n dad ki anniversary party me jaana hai." She informed.

 

"Kya???????????? Is ka matalab hai Shalabh sach me bhool gaya." Mr. Malhotra said in disappointment.

 

"Accha jaane dijiye koi baat nahi . Chaliye raedy hote hain varna us k dil toot jaayega.Vaise bhi aap ki ladali beti Ishika bhi to bhool gayi.Aaj subah se mai wait kar rahi hoon par us ka phone nahi aaya." She said.

 

Mr. Malhotra gave his wife a disapponted look n they both left for their room. Shalabh was listening both of them n a naughty smile appeared at his face but soon it vanished when he thought about the party guests.

 

He went to take a shower but he was unable to forget that incident. Kisi tarah vo ready hua aur neeche gaya.

 

"Kya baat hai bete tu pareshaan lag raha hai aaj ." His father asked.

 

Par shayad kuch baatein aise hoti hain jin ko hum apne parents k saath share nahi kar paate hain bus aise hi Shalabh nahi kar paa raha tha.

 

"Kuch nahi dad bus aise hi. Chale?" he asked.

 

They nodded n reached to the Hotel Blue Moon n Shalabh informs them that the party is in basement so aap log cahliye mai bus aa raha hoon.

 

 

"Haan bata na kya keh rahi hai tu?" Mugdha asked.

 

"Beta tere liye ek good news hai tu jaanti hai hum log tujhe aur is ko (Anu ko) alag nahi kara sakte hain na.To humne decide kiya ki kyoun na kuch aisa kare ki tum dono ek hi city aur ek hi college me padho taki tum dono roj ek doosre se mil bhi sako………." Mugdha didn't let her complete.

 

"To aap ne is ka bhi admission Delhi me kara diya kya aunty. Par aap ko to pata nahi tha ki hum logon ka transfer Delhi ho raha hai." She said with suspicion.

 

"Poori baat to suna kar na." Durga said.

 

"Aunty jaldi bataiye na." she was too impatient to listen it.

 

"So the good news is that Anu( Shalini Singhal) is getting married next month in Delhi." She said.

 

Her statement left a mixed reaction on all of three faces. Slight happy or slight worried.

 

"Par is ki abhi umar hi kya hai?" Mrs. Durga said this time. She was not in favor of this early marriage.

 

"Oye nahi ji actually Mrs. Khanna bachpan se jaanti thi hum ko aur pasand bhi karti thi is ko to hum log is ko le kar vahi gaye the." Mrs. Pooja Khurana (mother of Anu).

 

"Phir bhi Mrs. Khurana abhi to ye bas 23yrs. ki hi hai." Mr. Mehra said with smirk.

 

"Oye ji aap log tension mat lo ye wahan reh kar bhi apni padhai kar sakti hai na.Un logon ne kaha hai ki ye wahan se padhegi kyounki Arjun shaddi k ek hafte k baad USA chala jaayega apni padhai poori karne." Mrs. Khurana said.

 

"Abhi to M.B.A. start kiya hai in dono ne……….Khair aap maa baap hai kuch accha hi socha hoga aap logon ne." Mrs. Mehra said.

 

Now finally Mugdha said, "Excuse me all members can v both go in my room?"

 

"Haan haan jaa jitni chahe utni baatein kar." Mrs. Khurana said smiling.

 

They both left the place n went upstairs. Anu n Mugdha went in Mugdha's room. Mugdha closed the door n said , " Mai tujh se naraj hoon tune mujhe bataya kyoun nahi?"

 

"Sorry yaar par really mujhe bhi nahi pata tha ki mom aur dad mujhe kahan le kar jaa rahe hain.In logon ne bus ye batya mujhe ki hum Delhi jaa rahe hain. Vahan pauchen par jab maine Arjun ko wahan dekha to bhi mai samajh nahi paayi;vo to baad me jab mujhe saza sawaar k le jaaya gaya un logon k saamne to mujhe samajh aaya ki ho kya raha hai yahan." Anu said in assuring tone.

 

"Ok chal maaf kiya par aage se dhyan rakhna samjhi. Aur ye bata humare hone waale jeeja ji kaise hain? Means dekhne me baatein karne me ,choone me vagairah vagarih………….." Mugdha asked it in a teasing manner.

 

"Tu bhi na hut chal yahan se." Anu was blushing really hard.

 

"Jis tarah se tu sharma rahi hai vo ye baat to clear kar raha hai ki kuch kiya jaroor hai humare jeejaa je ne kyoun?" Mugdha said winking.

 

Becahri Anu itni buri tarah se sharma rahi thi ki us k gaalon ka gora rung bikul gulabi aur gualbi se laal hota jaa raha tha. Tabhi Anu ka fone ring hua par is k pehle ki Anu phone uthati phone Mugdha ne cheen liya.

 

"Hello, kaun?" Mugdha said without viewing the number.

 

"To aap hain humari hone waali saali Mugdha kyoun?" udhar se awaaz aayi.

 

"Aur aap hain mere hone waale jeejaa ji kyoun?" she said smiling.

 

"Waah aap to badi jaldi pehchaan gayi." Arjun said (Ankur Nayaar) said.

 

Mai fir aa gayi aap sab ki reading ko disturb karne well guys ye hai aaj ka update. Next update bhi jaldi hi hoga.

 

Bye take care all of u sweet people.

 

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
hi dear
update bahot accha tha ...the teasing part was really  good....and tat jeeja saali convo was the...enjoyed it a lot...
plz continue soon
love ashu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
hey
i read it..It was all so real n that jiju saali conversation was too gud..Even i teased my friend a lot when she got married.Just too gud Mahak
Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Hii vartika dear, bahut achcha part tha,especially the teasing part was awesome dear, i loved the ud, all the scenes were really-really good, hats of to u for creating this wonderful ff, and this is for u Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star Star. with love priti.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
fabulous part.............teasing part  was too good
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
wow!!great updateπŸ‘πŸ».
very beautifully executedπŸ™‚
continue soon dear
too good
take care